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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: elsanna
Awesome viji di...
Something is burning very badly here I guess🤣 sanky n deepu...🥺

Tani

Tani my dear 🤗🤗

Hope you're doing well dear...long time no see. Yup, Swara is certainly burning and fuming in jealousy. She is literally combusting out of possessiveness. 😉😆

Sanky and Deepu . ...😆 They're just friends yaar. But good to have someone who can make Swara feel scorched with pangs of envy and jealousy, no? 😉😳

Lots of Love

Viji

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Tani my dear 🤗🤗

Hope you're doing well dear...long time no see. Yup, Swara is certainly burning and fuming in jealousy. She is literally combusting out of possessiveness. 😉😆

Sanky and Deepu . ...😆 They're just friends yaar. But good to have someone who can make Swara feel scorched with pangs of envy and jealousy, no? 😉😳

Lots of Love

Viji

Aisa kyu bol rahe ho di...😭 I have read black and commented also as far as I remember...😕 I was having viral for a week earlier...now I am fine😳

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Beautiful viji dear
loved it very much u know what we don't get in the serial we get it in stories in the forum writer like u. you all fullfill our desire by ur stories.
very much loved jealous swara what we carving for long time I mean we know sanskar emotion but not swara she always behave like koi farak nehi parta type attitude but u show it proper way.
I like that she accepted her mistake & trying to mend it.
loved their moment in the room her outburst her determination to not back down this time that she want to talk.sanskar also give positive signal.
But i want in the show she first realise & accepted she did wrong & then sanskar forgive her. she piss off me Big this time.
But u portrait it beautifully so thank u.
write more beautiful stories dear waiting for ur next.
Take care
Bye 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: elsanna

Aisa kyu bol rahe ho di...😭 I have read black and commented also as far as I remember...😕 I was having viral for a week earlier...now I am fine😳

Oh no, I didn't mean that yaar... 😕😭 Of course I remember you commented on "The Color Black"...among the first few comments in fact.

I read somewhere in one of your comments that you were not feeling well, hence asked how you are.

Hope you have fully recovered from viral fever. Take enough rest and drink lots of fluids. 🤗 And keep on doing inhalation and gargling. 😉I had a terrible bout of flu few months back, so I remember all the difficult things I had to do. 😆

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: showrav24
sorry double post

Hey Showrav 🤗🤗

Will reply to your lovely comment in detail, in just a bit.

Lots of Love

Viji

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Oh no, I didn't mean that yaar... 😕😭 Of course I remember you commented on "The Color Black"...among the first few comments in fact.

I read somewhere in one of your comments that you were not feeling well, hence asked how you are.

Hope you have fully recovered from viral fever. Take enough rest and drink lots of fluids. 🤗 And keep on doing inhalation and gargling. 😉I had a terrible bout of flu few months back, so I remember all the difficult things I had to do. 😆

Lots of Love

Viji

Yes viji di...😳 I am great now😳 may u also stay healthy...😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: elsanna

Yes viji di...😳 I am great now😳 may u also stay healthy...😳

I am doing quite fine now, dear 🤗 (*touch wood*)

Lots of Love

Viji

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Hey Viji dearest,🤗

If I had to res again it will take eons to unres. so I would like to tell you how much I love this Os in the time I have in hand. I wrote this entire comment once and lost it all to one of my mobile's whims. This is the second try.

As soon as I read the title Green I knew the Green Monster would be making an appearance. It was so fUn to read just how affected Swara was. I could totally picture her face going purple and jets of steam issuing from her ears while swords, daggers and bombs exploded in her thought bubble ( You know those bubbles in comics where they depict the character is thinking censored thoughts with utmost anger...) 😆

Meanwhile the depth of the same emotion was captured so well hidden within the generous layer of humor. personally I think jealousy is the most draining of all emotions both mentally and physically. It takes all your strength to keep the obvious expressions from gracing your features and on the same time repeat the same memory in your mind until you're left with a pounding headache. that came through in full force throughout the narration.😳

I seriously find your way of playing with words absolutely amazing.❤️ The Trust and Faith, Loving and Adoring, simple yet the deepest core of truth in their relationship was bared in a matter of few words. ...you're a genius you know?

As for the golden line. ..Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn...should have been SR's tag line to begin with. 😎on that tone...gone with the wind does bare a certain similarity to SwaSan in concern of Swara and her taken for granted misadventures right?

Enjoyed the slowly clearing up skies. Although sun would take a while to rise and shine at least there are no more stormy clouds lingering about...did Uttara just plan this whole thing?...Bless her!

You know it was 1.30 last night when I read this...planning to read again after exams to see if I've missed anything. It surely gave me the sweetest of dreams.

Loads of love,

Saku

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

My Dearest, Dearest Kid Sis Saku 🤗🤗

I am simply so very touched by your warm words, dear. 😳 I shall take time to re read the comment, soak it all in to my heart's content, and then reply. ☺️

Love you Loads ❤️ 🤗

---Viji