Greys and Rains- A Devakshi OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautiful...the promo take..

Thank You! 😊

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I shall edit this in a couple of hours! I promise! 😛

I am waiting!

Wow yaar it's so beautiful...reading it I could feel Dev and Sona talking... mind blowing and yeah nenu kuda Telugu ne...kaani nenu movie choodaledu but now I will see it...

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

I am waiting!

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I shall edit this in a couple of hours! I promise! 😛

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Well I am here like promised! (Sorry night shift problems)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">You know what I liked about this OS, the focus went from grey to black to grey again. It was like a journey from normalcy to turbulent storms and back to gentle drizzles again! I actually love the way you have described the cafe, the appeal it had was amazing bcos we always tend to describe such things like rainbows and butterflies! I loved this spin on the cafe and how you used it to draw parallels between the place and Dev! This OS was brilliant and right up my alley, definitely loved the setting and the metaphorical implications peppered throughout the OS!

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love, love, loves it!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I am looking forward to reading more from you babe!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">PS: A great take on the promo that was aired! I truly wish we see something like this, time apart can do wonders to a relationship like portrayed!</font>

Hey, hey!

Thank you SO much, yaar. That change from grey to black and back to grey was totally unintentional! Thanks for pointing out. I didn't know it turned out like that. Thanks for making me discover new things about my own OS! 😆

About the setting, thanks again. I was very sceptical about people's reaction to the setting. Lots of people don't relate rains with gloominess. I do. It is an eerie, dangerously exciting kind of gloominess. Lots of people my not be able to connect with what I wrote. For them rains ar happiness. Atleast lots of my friends think so.

Drawing parallels between Dev and the cafe was totally intentional! Thanks for getting it. People should know why Sonakshi, a usually cheery person, has an attachment with a dingy place.

And finally thanks for commenting! And if there's anything you'd like to suggest me feeel bindaas to do so.

Originally posted by: sounya23

Wow yaar it's so beautiful...reading it I could feel Dev and Sona talking... mind blowing and yeah nenu kuda Telugu ne...kaani nenu movie choodaledu but now I will see it...

Thank you! 😊 Lots of Telugu people unnaru forum lo. Naaku teline telidu.

Movie flop antunnaru kani, I liked it. Pairing chala bagundi iddaridi. You should watch it.

So beautifully written! Wow! Please write more 😊

Originally posted by: ssimmy

So beautifully written! Wow! Please write more 😊

Thank you! 😊 Means a lot to me hearing from a great writer like you.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Beautiful Os.. 😊

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: raji91

Awesome :)

Hey! Thank you so much! 😊