MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31)

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: riyaparo
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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: tamanna121
Little short but sweet update..
I loved manik & chachi's conversation..
Aliya sent dhruv with 93 flowers for proposing nandini..
She wanted to clear her path with manik..
Interesting precape.. Manan date..
Thanx for pm

Thanks dear...in these u will find a quite similarity with ky2...😳...will update soon.

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: nita24
Oh it was so short update
But loved it
Waiting for manan date
Hope dhruv will not spoil it
Thanks for the pm
Tc

Thanks dear...aur updates will b short due to time...😭

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Hmm... but still yaar... publishing on thread gives hope for more readers and wider audience, I think it's a better motivation.
Rest is up to you.

P.S. can we still send a pm to only 10 persons at a time or has it changed ?

I won't pm...😃

And main to ek sath 35 logo ko v pm kar sakti hu..😕

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr
So chotu update yaar.. :(

Ek sath itni saari stories to update... That's why...😭

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

CHAPTER 5

Manik's car came halt at a isoloted place...
Nandini: Manik...yeh hum kaha aa gaye...itna sannata..
Manik: Miss smarty pant..humara destinaton samne hain...chale...
Manik put forward his hand like a gentleman...smilingly she put her hand into his and went for THEIR destination...

SCENE CHANGE...

Dhruv smilingly came to clz to propose nandini..but seeing the place empty he gets disheartened...suddenly he swa a hair clip on the ground and it takes some moments to realize that this thing belongs to no other but nandini...

Dhruv: Matlab nandini yaha ayi thi..maine letter main bola to tha to wait for me..then..
Sadly he keep the bouqet on groung and walj away...

SCENE CHANGE...

MaNan come to a beautiful lakes which is situated a little far from the city...the site was breath taking...the whole area is covered with light bluish navy blue...and some little touch of moonlit make the little place heaven...the chiling wind softly passed them causing them cling to each other...seems thw whole mother nature conspiracing to unite the love birds...

Nandini: Manikk...this is unbelievable...so magnifying...
Manik: Yes...but not more than u...
Manik's husky voice with a intense look made nandini so valnurable that she claps their hands tightly not to fall...

Nandini: Manik chalo waha chalke beth te hain...
She pointed towards a tree which is placed just at edge of the river...

Manik: Nandini tum baitho...main abhi aati hu..
Nandini: Aare manik..par kaha..bolke to jao..aayappa...ee vyakti aillappudoo tvaritanga(God...iss ladhke ko kitna jaldi hain..)

Nandini keep staring at the water and thinking about her life...how her life took 360 turn again...after her amma appa's death maturity hitted her so badly that she began to think like an adult...when chidren's from her age kept dreaming about their prince charming she was struggling hard to keep his brother's childhood intact unlike her...but now at this very moment she is not thinking about her prince charming who will come riding in a horse for her...rather than she is experiencing it with all her heart...

But right now the scene is that her prince charming is towards her with a box...

Manik: Nandini...aankh band karo aur ghumo piche...
Nandini: Kya..!!!

Manik: Nandini yeh kya...maine aankhein band karne ko bola tha...not to make them big n bulky...
Nandini: Manik tum kya karne wale ho...I thought hum yaha date pe aye...

Manik: Ha baba...par mujhe kuch taiyari karni hain which is supposed to be a surprise..so keep ur eyes close...pllzzz...

Manik requested her with a such puppy face that even saitan will have to think before disagree him...so without saying anything nandini turned around and let him do his surprise...

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If u guys r thinking I m streching things then I m sorry..this ff is not only for MaNan..but also for other character...as this ff's name say it all...BEGINING OF CHANGE...so it will change not only our MaNan but also for other character...coz after climax there will be less MaNan...
So I m doing bharpai of it..
Do hit LIKE and do COMMENTS...

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AKHIAWAL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Nice update.Chota tha par chalta hain.Manik kya surprise dega nandu ko?Jo bhi ho,i think accha hi hoga.Manan scene less?Hmmm...ok chalega.Waiting for next update.Aur haa waja tum ho aur dil chor ka bhi dena jaldi.