MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31)

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Prologue

" Nandini...plz...I m sorry...I know mujhse galti hua hain...par itna badha saja maat do..." manik plead to her cryingly...

Nandini: Galti...bilkul v nahi...intensionally kia gaya bhul kabhi v galti nahi hoti manik...kabhi v nahi...woh gunha hota hain...tumhe andaja v hain main all that pain I have gone through...all the obstacle..."

Manik stood there silently...he has nothing to say for his deeds...

Nandini: No na...then get lost...I don't wanna see ur face manik...chale jao...

Manik: No...don't this...I promise main sab kuch thik kar dunga...just give me a chance

Nandini: Kya tum past ko thik kar sakte ho...all the pain I had in past kya usse heal kar sakte ho...nahi...bilkul nahi..aab bohat tamasha ho gaya...meherbani karo mujhpar...!!!!

Nandini about to slammed the door but someone called her and listening the person's way of addressing nandini manik became shocked and numb..!!!

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New story...😲😲firse...yeh writer pagal hain kya...😡😡😡paather kidhar hain...pheko ispe...ek to update nahi deta upar se naya leke hazir !!!!🤢🤢

I know u all r thinking like this...trust me I m trying to manage all things...but...😭😭😭anyway yeh wala story main bohat dino se chahati thi koi writer likhe...post musicana scene...and writers ne likha v tha...but continue nahi hua...iss liye maine socha main hi likh leeti hu...🤣

Plz batana kaisa hua...😳

INDEX:

CHAPTER 1

Edited by manancraze - 8 years ago

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manan_eku

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res
Unres. ...
I am the first one again yipeee. ...!!!!
Hehehe. ...kudh ko bura ni bolna chiye kyuki bura bolne ko toh duniya padi h. ...!!!!
And maine toh phale bhi bola h you are an awesome writer ...
Ye concept dekh kar toh interesting lag raha h ...
Hmm u am waiting the 1st part ...
Thank for the pm. ..but I was toh here before you have posted the prologue also ...!!!
Me first !!!:P

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku
Res

Bina padhe hi res...😆😆

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StreamOfHeaven

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Posted: 9 years ago

Manik bola men sab kuch theek kar dungi 😆
Seriously yaar ek ff writer ha Jo kab se update NH
De Rae dil kehta ha usko pathar maarun or kahun
Start kun karte ho jab time se update karna nhn Ata 😡

Nice concept

Edited by LoveyDoveyNeha - 9 years ago

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveyDoveyNeha
Manik bola men sab kuch theek kar dungi 😆
Seriously yaar ek ff writer ha Jo kab se update NH
De Rae dil kehta ha usko pathar maarun or kahun
Start kun karte ho jab time se update karna nhn Ata 😡

Nice concept

Thanks for pointing out...😆😆...aur tension maat lo...main mera 5/10 din ka fanda maintain rakhugi...😳😭

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StreamOfHeaven

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manancraze
Thanks for pointing out...😆😆...aur tension maat lo...main mera 5/10 din ka fanda maintain rakhugi...😳😭

Then I will read 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hahaha .Hmarii writer multi talented bn rhiii h .. kya bat h 😆 Ek saath inni sari stories. .but its gonna be fun to read . okiee prologue is nice.. let's see who is that person.. but story h kis type ki...kuch idea milega.. ;* 😛 Thanks for pm..