RiShbala OS 'BeaStly LoVe' ;) ||Alternate End@13|| (07/12)

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Beastly Love

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Darkness is something which consumes everything which comes in its space.
"Rk its unethical" a lady spoke gravely standing gracefully holding a sword.
"unethical changes to ethical when it crosses RK's way" a handsome hunk smirk as he raise his eyelashes, challenging the darkness of night. His eyes shining in darkness, his lips curved into a smirk.
"Not so soon RK" another man covered with blood pushed rk back pointing a sword at him. Rk tilt his head & gave him a deadly smirk.
"Live ur last breath before u lost in darkness, brother" rk said huskily stretching the word brother.
"Cant believe u are the same person, whom is considered to be my lil brother" the man, sultan who is smeared with blood spoke painfully.
"tsk.. Tsk.. Tsk.. So sad.. Sultan" rk mocked him sympathicaly & the lady Dipali gave a sly smile.
"i doubt u Rk, to be the son of our father" sultan said gaining his energy.
"Too bad ! U are going to say good bye to the world taking ur doubt with urself" rk sympathise.
"Rk.. I hate u" sultan said fiercely & rk looks on holding a smirk getting entertained.
"From childhood u are stubborn, negative, monstrous.. But we thought u love ur family atleast.. U'll change with time" sultan said.
"am changed sultan" Rk said opening his arms wide "am changed..now i know how to channelize my powers. Now i know how to rule this world.. But.." Rk looks at sultan with hatred.
"But u happens to come in my way.. In rk's way" rk took a step toward sultan & walks in circle around him.
"U know what ur mistake us ?" Rk asked sultan facing him as sultan stares at his monstrous brother.
"U are elder to me. U born before me. U are the first prince of this kingdom. And according to rule, our king, our father is so keen to make u the next king & not me." Rk said jabbing his fingers at sultan's chest.
"And just to get the power, to become next king, u came here in my chamber, in the darkness of night, secretly with this Dipali to kill Me" sultan said hurt, to which Dipali smiled.
"This kingdom, these treasure, these powers..everything is mine" rk answered.
"And i dont desired to kill u, our father made me to kill u. Only if he agreed to make me king & is not so adamant to make u king" Rk said venomously.
"Thats because u misuse ur powers Rk. Since childhood u are always a rebel. U never understand love, responsibility, emotions.. U are cold hearted.. No.. U are heartless" sultan spat back.
"How nice big brother.. U understand me so well" rk smirk as he trace his fingers down dipali's arms sensuously & stops on the sword that she is holding. He trace his finger on the sharp edges of sword & he took the sword from dipali.
"I am heartless" rk said faking a hurtful expression keeping his hand on his chest.
"Then give me ur heart brother.. Yes.. I want ur heart sultan" he said dangerously, his eyes showing fire & he advanced to hit sultan. Sultan defended himself from Rk's first attack.
"u cant save urself sultan from the mighty Rk's attack" dipali smirk as she watches the show.
"Am bored brother.. Please die fast" rk said winking at sultan as he stab a knife right in sultan's heart.
"Rk.." Sultan breathed hard falling on ground.
"What i said.. Yeah.. Ur goody good heart" rk whispered as he cut the skin of sultan's chest mercilessly with a sharp razor making sultan beg for death.
"U will die each day in ur entire existence Rk.." that was the sultan's last words to rk as he took a sharp breath, his soul retiring from his body. Rk kept stabbing sultan's heart for numerous time & smell sultan's blood with closed eyes with a smile on his lips.
"Rk" dipali keep her hand on rk's shoulder & rk opens his eyes.
"He is dead. Ur biggest obstacle to the king's throne is dead" dipali said thoughtfully & rk stands facing her.
"but am afraid rk" rk looks up at dipali with confused looks.
"As i said earlier.. Its unethical. In this kingdom one cannot become the king At the cost of someone's blood. Its against the law. King mohan, ur father.. When he'll get to know this, he may punish u" dipali stated.
"How i wish to kill my father" Rk said through his clenched teeth.
"But i cant cause he got the blessing of immortality.. So do i.. But sultan preferred to be mortal, hence he had to die" rk drop the blood filled razor from his hold.
"But now king mohan..my immortal father has no other way out. There is no future king for this kingdom except me. He have to make me, The Rk, the future king" Rk said as his eyes shone with the hunger of power.
"I wish what u are saying comes true but i really doubt king mohan. Dont underestimate him Rk.. What if he reproduced a new heir ?"
"Nahh.. Thats not gonna happen" rk said confidently "cause my father is still in so much love with my dead mother. He wont ever touch another woman and hence the moral is I am the only heir of this kingdom. And now enough of discussions dipali" rk yank dipali's hair & jerk her close to himself.
"Am tired dipali.. Please me" rk ordered huskily.
"Sure..my king" dipali gives him a sensual smile & they walked out of sultan's chamber leaving him dead.

---~---

"U are a disgrace to our royal family Rk" king mohan roared as he slapped rk on his cheek in front of whole assembly who is mourning over price sultan's death. But rk stands there affected, beside sultan's dead body, bored of the drama going on. Dipali stands with curled fist at the farthest end of the hall with her Witch mother Ria.
"u sure Rk wont take ur name as his partner in crime ?" Dipali's mother Ria quitely whispered in dipali's ears.
"relax mom.. Rk is man of words.. He gave me his words. He wont take my name" dipali whispered back & ria nodded.
"I so wanted to kill u rk, with my own hands" king mohan said with clenched jaws.
"But u cant & u wont !'' Rk replied back shamelessly. Mohan flash his eyes back to rk from sultan's corpse.
"U are not even mourning Ur brother's death" king mohan said "From childhood u are wild.. But i never knew the wildness of my one son will cost my another son's life." Rk stares back at king mohan coldly remaining unaffected by the things happening around him.
"when are u going to declare me the next king ?" Rk asked coming to point making the hurt father, king mohan boil up with vegenance.
"u killed ur brother sultan for power, Rk" king mohan spoke gravely as he walks up to Rk.
"U are power hungry.. Now am talking back all ur power which made u lose ur humanity" king said sharply as he keeps his right hand on Rk's chest making him wither in pain. Rk screamed out a shrilling cry as he sink down on the floor with the electric waves passing from his body to king mohan's body.
The whole assembly gasped at the happening. After few minutes king mohan withdraw his hand from rk and rk took ragged breath falling down on floor.
"I cant even say i hate u Rishab.." King mohan said painfully looking at Rk "and hence i cant kill u too"
Rk looks up at king with lifeless drained eyes & king mohan strolled back to his throne.
"I cant hate the person whom my wife loved with all her life" king look at rk "Ur mother loved u too much Rk.. A way too much. She said u are precious & hence i never raise my hands on u for all ur misconduct which results in sultan's death today''
"I love her & she loved u & so i cant hate u, neither can i kill u cause u are the part of my love, my wife.. But" king stands in his feet & he walks towards rk who is still kneeling on floor.
"Its ur punishment. I took all ur powers. U'll be immortal but powerless. U'll be here in the palace but just like any other object kept in the hall. I disowns u. U are not my son anymore" rk looks at himself as he felt powerless & king walked past him.
"The day u will realise ur mistake, ur misdoing, will be the day i'll take u back" king spoke coldly as he walked out of the assembly with the minister following him Leaving rk alone shattered.

---~---

"This is not what we had planned" ria said restlessly.
"From childhood i have guided rk with my black magic. I made him what he is today, the dark, the cold hearted prince Rk"
Ria is a witch & was assistance of Queen Radha. Since rk was born in the name of taking care of rk she was changing rk from his individuality.
"i made him dark, i gave him immense power, i gave him immortality. Since his childhood king & queen were surprised by his weird behaviour but they never got to know that i was changing him every second. But now its all seems worthless. King mohan disowned him. Rk cant be the king" ria said angrily.
"I know mom" dipali said coming face to face with ria.
"But i wont let ur dream break. I'll make rk the king & myself will become the queen" Dipali spoke with fire in voice "i am ur daughter, a witch. I served rk for all these years. Mom, u wanted to be the queen of king mohan but he loved radha. But rk dont understand the word love. He only knows to lust."
"Dipali its not that easy. Rk is not in our control. He never was. He is the king of his own mind & now he dont posses any power too" ria said to dipali.
"mom.. Rk'll become king & for that he needs to regain his powers. We are witch mom, we'll definitely find a way out" dipali said determined.

---~---

*After a week*

" "Argh ! My father is a monster" rk angrily throws a flower vase against a wall.
"He made me lifeless. Am nothing with powers" rk aggressively breaks every single things present in his chamber.
"Rk stop it" dipali stepped in his chamber swinging her body.
"OUT !" Rk roared as he throws a bowl at dipali which breaks right in front of her feet.
"Rk behave urself" dipali chided him but what she forget is Rk is untamed beast & she & her mom Ria is the reason for the creation of this beastly Rk.
"I. SAID. OUT" RK fiercely advance towards her making dipali staggered back.
"Rk i got a way to get ur power back" dipali said in one breath with closed eyes. Rk halts in his tracks hearing her.
"U are lying. Only my father can give me my powers back.. But he wont" Rk banged his fist against a wall.
"no..there is another way. My mom found it" dipali smiled at rk.

---~---

"Ria what is the other way ?" Rk asked as soon as he walked inside Ria's chamber with dipali tailing behind him.
"come rk sit" ria patted on the space beside her for rk to sit as he sits with a goblet of fire.
"Dont waste my time. Say what is it ?" rk hissed at her. Dipali signalled ria to speak.
" This is the way u can get ur power back" ria said.
"Which way ?" Rk question.
"love, is the way" ria answered
"what ?" Rk asked confused.
"Rk.. Ur father cant kill u cause he love u & now this love thing can only get ur powers back" dipali makes him understand.
"How ?" Rk asked.
"Prince rk, u need to find a girl, make her fall in love with u. U need to make love to her with her willingness & the very next morning, u have to sacrifice her every drop of blood in this goblet of fire. This will produce an immense energy from the mixture of love, blood, fire & darkness which in return will give u, ur powers back" ria explained wickedly. Rk smirked as he got a way to regain his power.
"I need to find a girl who love me ?" He asked raising his eye brows.
"Yea" ria nodded affirmatively.
"Here she is then'' rk said as he dragged dipali forward making Ria & Dipali's eyes go round.
"Perform the rituals & give me my powers back now" rk ordered.
"No..no... Rk, what are u saying ?" Dipali quickly pull away her wrist from Rk's hold.
"Why ? U dont love me ?" Rk asked her back ready to kill her.
"No..no..prince rk" ria said fetching rk's attention. "Dipali do love u but she is a witch"
"So.." Rk scrunch his brows.
"A witch's blood is dark, it cant give u, ur powers back. U have to find a pure soul, a bright soul who is contrast to ur Dark soul. A girl with a small butterfly mark in her wrist" ria said showing rk the shiny butterfly mark in goblet of fire.
"How'll i get her ?" Rk asked determined.
"Search for her.. She is not so hard to be found.. She is half human & half angel"

---~---

"Dont go my angel" an old man pleaded.
"father.. U took care of me for all these years & now its my turn. I'll get those 3 life saving herbs" a stunningly beautiful lady in her early twenties said softly holding her father's weak hand.
"Madhu..U are putting ur life in danger in ur stubbornness of getting those herbs for me" the old man, shamsher malik spoke.
"without u there is nothing in my life father" madhu said
"U are like ur mother.. So adamant on leaving me" malik gave a painful laugh.
"If i font leave u, u'll leave me" madhu spoke with tears in eyes.
"Ur mother said the same thing madhu, years ago. Leaving u in my arms she went. Cause her fairyland people would kill me & u if she didnt went back with them" malik said.
"And she chose to sacrifice herself & save us" madhu completed.
"Yes.. Cause our love is unethical. I am A human & ur mother an Angel" malik spoke with tears.
"i wish like my mother i got angelic powers then i could bring those 3 herbs to treat ur illness un minutes" madhu said while snapping hrr fingers & the butterfly mark on her wrist spark.
"U are half human & half angel madhu" malik caress madhu's hairs lovingly.
"Right.. But i dont have any power except giving visions to people of the future" madhu said sadly "But.. I was bring those 3 herbs & get u cure"

---~---

*After 1 month*

"I Wont forgive u father to make me go through this" rk gritted his teeth as he roamed from forest to forest riding in his horse in search of that one girl. Ria predicted the girl will be in his kingdom in few days. And for past 3 weeks he's searching. He meet several unknown ladies too but none have butterfly mark on their wrist.
Rk Was riding his horse crossing the imperial forest when he heard soft frightful screams.
"great..! Everyone gets trapped in problem after coming in my kingdom only" rk miffed & went inside the forest following the direction from which the screams appear to come. He stopped seeing a girl in a flowery gown with long wavy curls standing with her back to him, praying.. No.. Pleading for her life to some unknown creatures flying in the air.
"what's going on here?" Rk voice out sitting on his horse looking at the 7 weird creatures with wings. With this interference all become startled as they looks at him. The girl too turn around facing him & Rk's eyes stops on her mesmerizing beauty. Rk looks at her fearful brown orbs & her trembling rosy lips.
"Go away.. They'll hurt u too" the girl spoke breaking Rk's trance & he looks up back at the creatures.
"wish i have powers then I'll burn them in minutes" rk thought to himself.
"Who are u ?" One of the creature asked Irking rk more.
"u sticky scums.. In my kingdom u are asking who am u !" Rk snapped back, & surprising them he draws out his sword & jump down from the horse.
"Attack him too with this girl" one of the creature ordered & they all attacked rk but within minutes Rk finished them off cutting them in halves making the girl's eyes go round.
"hmm.. Guess my father only took my power & not my strength. I am still the mighty Rk" rk realise & he smirked to himself.
"U killed them all" the girl asked stepping forward. Rk took his attention back to her & stares at her with all his interest.
"they have came here following me to take away these herbs" the girl shows him a handful of leaves.
"Why ?" Rk asked.
"I stole it from there garden" the girl replied flushed.
"Hmm.. Stole.. Means u are a thief ?" Rk asked raising his brows.
"No.. I asked permission from them but they asked for 30 gold coins in exchange which i dont have. I really need these herbs for my father" the girl replied.

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"U dont seems to belong from my kingdom" rk stated looking at her from top to bottom.
"Yes.. Am from neighbouring village. I came here to get 3 life saving herbs"
"hmm.. Means u trespass my kingdom. U should be punish then" rk said getting ideas.
"ur kingdom ?" The girl asked.
"Am the only prince to this kingdom" rk replied.
"Prince, u can punish me. But please first let me get these 3 herbs. My father is dying, i need it to save him" the girl pleaded earnestly. Rk never considered mercy, but for some reason he considered this girl.
"what is ur name ?" He asked.
"Madhubala.." She replied softly.
"Madhubala..ahaan !" He repeats stepping closer to her.
"I'll help u in getting these herbs.. In return u have to serve me as my maid" rk made up his mind. He wants to keep her.
"Prince.. I.. I cant do that" madhu stepped back. She is much above these. She is an angel, she cant serve others.
"U have to ! U dont have any choice" rk smirked at her evilly as he drew her closer gripping her waist & trace her neck with the pointed nip of his sword. Madhu gulp as the sword tip touch her soft skin.
"No one dared to say no to me.. To Rk" he whispered huskily in her ears brushing his lips on her ears.
"Prince.. I cant" she uttered through her trembling lips.
"If i can save u, i can kill u too" rk said dangerously & make looks up at him.
"if u dont agree to me.. U.. Urself will be the reason for ur father's death cause u wont be able to get him herbs in time" rk uses his weapon. Madhu lowers her eyes as she realise he is saying right.
"but how will u get me herbs.. To get the other 2 herbs, is like fighting with the death" madhu asked.
"Rk is the death himself. Nothing can be more dangerous than Rk" rk spelled out devouring her beauty.
"U are mine to keep" he said as he scoop her in his arms, setting themselves in his horse he rides back.

---~---

The horse was crossing the winds & madhu was drowned in her dismay, when Rk hug her from back as he rides the horse inside the darkness of the forest.
"Tonight we will stay here" he whispered in madhu's ears breaking her thoughts as he halts the horse. She flinch as she feels him so near her. Rk smirk at her reaction & jump down from the horse. He wrap his arms around her petite waist & pull her down from horse.
"Where was u all these days ? U should be with me from the start" rk looks at her intently while stroking her pinkish cheeks. Madhu looks up at him. He seems dangerous but his touches dont, why ? She wondered.
"This other herb" madhu spoke softly showing him a sample leaf "its in the other side of river guarded by two headed crocodiles"
"I'll get it in morning, now come" rk pulled himself away from her as he set up a small tent like shelter to spend the night in the forest. Madhu entered the small space & looks around as the fire lil up the small tent.
"I fought to save u. Time to return the favour" rk said with a cunning smile opening his tuxedo & lie down on his stomach with his back to madhu as madhu looks away.
"My muscles are paining.. Give me massage" he ordered but madhu stands still not taking a step ahead.
"Its an order" rk said through his clench teeth looking back at madhu. She knows its not an empty order, she is trapped. Madhu took baby steps towards him & kneeled in front of him. As she is going to touch his back he turn around drawing her over him, making her fall over his bare chest.
He smirked at her & raising himself a lil, he trace her earlobe with his tongue forcing her to close her eyes as shiver ran down her spine. She tries to push him to get up when he flip over rolling over her, taking her beneath him. Madhu closes her eyes with the possibilities as her breath hitched. Rk looks at her being submissive, and burying his face on her neck, he starts giving her trails of wet kisses exploring her neck line. He grips her hairs & tilts her head to have better access & bits her lowers lips Not to escape out any moans. Rk leans his head up from her neck & comes to her face. He looks at her with wild fire in his eyes as he leans down her lips & trace her lips with his moist tongue making madhu squirm with the sensation. He went down on her cleavage as he runs his tongue down her valley, along sides his hands running throws her curves, pressing it. Not taking the torment anymore a soft gasp escape her lips. Sensing her moan Rk moves up to her lips & peck at the corner of the mouth, then he withdraw himself off her.
"There are some fruits, go & eat them' rk said pointing at the corner of the tent.
"i'll save u to make u mine in my royal palace" he winked at her.

---~---

"Will he come back !" Madhu thought & right then she spot rk with blood dripping from his shoulders coming toward her. Madhu rushed towards him.
"Ur herbs" rk open up his palm to her which contains some herbs.
"U're hurt" madhu said concerned. Rk looks in her concern filled eyes. He is not habituated to see these emotions.
"u killed all those 2 headed crocodiles ?" Madhu asked taking the herbs from him. In early morning itself rk went to get the herbs leaving madhu & he returned back as the dusk drawn.
"I killed my own brother.. These crocodiles are nothing in front of me" rk boosted himself. Madhu looks at him skeptically & then walks upto him. She keeps her palm on his eyes & soon a vision hit rk, where sultan offers the kingdom to Rk as soon as he becomes king. Rk staggered back.
"what u just did ?" Rk asked frowning.
"I just show u the predicted future which u destroyed. Ur brother would give u the throne by himself" madhu stated. Rk looks away from her face & just then he spot a mark on her wrist. He quickly grasp her right wrist & trace his fingers over the butterfly mark.
"Finally my search is over" he whispered.
"what ?" Madhu asked getting nothing. Rk looks at her with hunting gaze like she is some prey & he, the mighty predator.
"u Had a chance to run away when i wasn't here" rk said moving closer to her.
"U gave me words that u'll bring me herbs in exchange of me being ur maid.. And i anyways u would have find me if u ran away & moreover i cant see anyone trapped because of me, what if u got In trouble while getting me herbs" madhu replied while cleaning his wounded shoulder with a dampen cloth.
"ur innocence will turn out to be ur stupidity soon" rk said fixing his gaze on her.

---~---
"Thankyou rk" madhu thanked him as rk walked inside the dense valley, carrying madhu up in his arms to get the 3rd herb.
"why ?" Rk said sarcastically.
"U couod have easily took me to ur place forcibly & can kept me as ur maid. U needn't to get me herbs risking ur life. But u kept ur promise. U're not bad, its just that u are misguided" madhu said earnestly smiling at him. Rk halts in his steps as he looks at her. He lowers her down making her stand on her own feet. He snake his arms around her waist & drew her closer to himself cupping her face.
"will u accept me knowing all my misdoings ?" Rk asked.
"Even if i dont, my heart has already accepted u" madhu breathed out. Making sure she is under his spell he trace her lips with his thumb & slowly closed the gap between them taking her lips in his, tasting her, bonding himself to herself. Madhu went week on her knees as he started nibbling her lower lip & within seconds he started kissing her fiercely claiming her mouth twisting his tongue with her, devouring her. With shortening of breath madhu withdraw pushing him away. Rk licks his lips & leaning on her he quickly picked her up in his arms.
"I cant wait to get to my palace" he said making madhu's cheeks redden.

---~---

"The 3rd herb is here inside this cave. But its death cave. No one came out once they entered" madhu said to rk standing before a cave.
"Am the death.. No one can stop me from getting what i want" rk said thinking about the throne.
"Rk after Getting herbs can we please once visit my father. He'll be saved then i'll do whatever u say" madhu said.
"Ofcourse love.. Wait for me" rk gave her a chaste kiss & went inside the cave.

---~---

"Dipali rk is coming back tonight.. Make the arrangement" ria grinned.
"Means he got that girl. He took pledge that he wont return to the palace until he finds the girl. He's coming back means his search is over & our wait is over" dipali rejoice.

---~---

"Finally we are here..love.." Rk whispered in madhu's ears holding her by her waist as they walk through the dark alley of the palace.
"Rk this place is so dark" madhu tighten her hold on rk's arms.
"U accepted this darkness madhu" Rk reminds her & madhu smiled.
"U left me with no choice rk"
"My chamber" rk said opening the door of his chamber. Madhu looks at the chamber which is decorated with candles around & a lady in black dress standing near Rk's bed with a sly smile.
"Welcome.." She said to both of them. Madhu feels uncomfortable under her gaze.
"Dipali out" rk showed her way out. Dipali gave him a cunning smile before walking out. Rk closes the door & hugs madhu from behind dipping his head on her neck.
"Rk where is king & queen ?" Madhu question as rk draws patterns on her stomach over the fabric.
"Queen dead.. King may be somewhere in the palace.. I dont know" Rk replied while nuzzling her neck. Madhu grips his hands over her stomach with the sensation.
"I have never seen someone like u.. I wish to marry u" rk said.
"Really.. U will ?" Madhu confirms happily.
"hmm.." Rk hummed, tracing her earlobe with his tongue & then sucking on it.
"Rk.." Madhu moaned out "i want to say something"
"What is it ?" Rk asked turning her to face him.
"I love u.. I always feel a captivating pull for u" she said sincerely.
"That's because u are made for me." Rk replied kissing her cheeks.
"Do i have ur consent ?" Rk asked eyeing her lips. Madhu nodded & RK took her lips in his locking their lips, biting her softly to open up. Madhu sucked on him as she let him explore her mouth. While kissing her senselessly rk pulled down the zip of her gown making the thin fabric slide down her body. Rk carry her to the bed, hovering over her he started giving her immense pleasure as his hands worked on her intimate part. With his tongue fondling & teeth kneading her soft flesh of her bosom, he went down on her, fingering her, making her squirm in wetness as soft moans escaped her lips.
Rk lost himself in the intoxicated feeling as he pressed his manhood against her. A gasp escape her lips as he entered her making her his. Rk comes back to her face sucking her tears he thrust in her spending the moan filled night with her.

---~---

madhu woke up feeling a sharp pain crossing her wrist. She tried to move but her hands were tied to the head board. She raise her eyes to find rk sitting beside her on bed holding a malicious smirk.
"Rk" she utter as her eyes caught the sight of blooded knife in his hand. She tries to get up but she find herself tied to the bed & a white sheet covering her naked body. She looks at her tied hand stunned. There were deep cuts on her both wrist with blood slowly draining out from her body & filling the vessels kept below her wrist for blood collection.
"rk..this" madhu breath out feeling her life force being drained out. She raise her eye lashes to see the same lady Dipali collecting her blood & rk staring at madhu with a smirk.
"Sacrifice.. Love" he winked at her.
'Rk was searching for u" Dipali spoke clearing things for madhu "A girl with a butterfly mark on her wrist.. Half human & half angel.. Who can give the lost power back to rk. U gave rk ur consent, ur love, & ur blood"
madhu closes her eyes & sighs, smiling faintly.
"When i said i love u.." madhu spoke feebly holding rk's gaze "I mean it.. As i said u are not bad.. U are misguided.. U are lost. I love that rk who Saved me, i love that rk who kept his promise, i love that rk in whom i saw flicker of love for me even if it meant for few seconds." Madhu sucked in a deep breath as her body gave up. Rk kept looking at her captivated my her words.
"I would have been long dead if u werent there.. U saved my life & now u are taking it away.. Irony of fate" a painful soft laugh escape her lips.
She took ragged breath as he gesture him to come closer by tilting her fingers. Without saying anything rk moves closer to her & madhu lightly pressed her fingers on his forehead. A vision hit rk where rk & madhu sitting happily in king-queen throne & king mohan proudly entering the assembly with a cute lil boy whose face resembles Rk & madhu. Rk hastily moved away from her disturbed with the vision.
"Life & death cant be together.. When death comes life has to go away" madhu said indicating herself as life & rk as death.
"U will get want u want rk.. But at the cost of loosing ur everything.. U had lost everything" madhu smiled faintly looking at rk as life energy leaves her body, her heart stops beating, warmth leaving her body as coldness crept in, light fading away as darkness crept in. Rk looks at her in daze trying to understand the depth of her words.
"Rk.. Dawn would be replaced by sunlight in few minutes..come,we are only one step away from getting ur powers back" Dipali said in rushed tone breaking his daze.
"Yes dipali.. My powers.. Finally i will get what i had lost" rk said picking up the blood filled vessel.

---~---

"Pour these two vessels of blood in the goblet of fire & welcome ur energy back" Ria said & rk pour madhu's blood on fire. Smoke emits & rk feels a sharp pull as he entire self filled up with immense power.
"U did it !" Dipali cheered at the success of the ritual.
"yes.. & now i'll get what is mine. I wont wait anymore" rk said ferociously as he draws out his sword & moves to the assembly. He saw all the ministers present There waiting for king mohan & the throne is empty. He took long strides, reaching the throne he sits on it making everyone gasp.
"welcome ur new king.. Immortal & powerful" rk declared. All stared at him in silence & king mohan entered the assembly.
"see father.. I rightly deserves to be the king, to rule this world. I break free ur spell. I got my powers back without ur help" rk said boost fully.
"If u wanna fight i'll.. But i wont give u back this throne" rk said. King Mohan looks at him with grieving eyes.
"U are lost Rk.. Lost in darkness forever.. U lost everything. If this throne gives u happiness..be with it" those were king's last words, shocking everyone he left the kingdom.

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With heavy heart the people of the kingdom accept rk as their new king. Since morning all ceremony took place & rk was given the position of new king officially. Ria & dipali were more than happy as their dream came true.
"Rk..its night.. U need rest" dipali whispered to rk as he is sitting in the throne lost. Rk looks around to see the darkness spreading its cover. He got everything he wanted but there is no peace of mind, he cant enjoy being in throne, he seems disturbed. Without replying dipali, rk walk down the throne & made his way to his chamber.
"why i am feeling void.. I cant feel any happiness.. Its feels like my existence in useless.. Its like this chilling silence is mocking me" he thought distress. He is sad, its feels like every second is killing hum but yet he is alive. He feel an unexplainable pain in his heart. He feels like choking by the silence of night.
Rk entered his room. As he stepped in the memories of madhu hit him like tornado without his control. Every seconds from madhu's entering his life to her death which he has given ger flashed in front of his eyes. His eyes stuck to the bed in which madhu took her last breath. Unknown to him & without his control he felt a lonely tears drop drown his eyes.
"Rk.." Dipali Trails her finger down him arms seductively. Rk took a sharp breath as what he lost hit him hard.
"madhu.." He whispered in quivering voice.
"My madhu.." Rk uttered as he ran out of his chamber & rushed to the burial chamber in the palace. He went inside the burial chamber & his eyes caught the sight of fresh burial. He falls in his knees devastated as he dig out the soil with his hand as fast as he could. He felt his heart sinking as he is digging out the soil.
He pulls out the wooden sheet, beneath it madhu lays there in peace , thin white sheet wrapped around her cold hard body. Her face pale, cold & lifeless. Tears streams down rk's cheeks & a lump formed in his throat as he looks at her wrist with deep red marks.
He pulls her out of the burial & embrace her in his arms tightly with the feeling of remorse, loss, pain, agony, grief, love & Lamenting !!

"Life & death cant be together.. When death comes, life has to go away" madhu's words

"U'll die each day in ur entire existence, rk" sultan's words.


Love never dies a natural death..
It dies because we dont know how to replenish its source. It dies of BLINDNESS & ERRORS & BETRAYALS. It dies of illness & wounds, its dies of WEARINESS, of WITHERING, of TARNISHING, of LATE REALISATION"


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Some of u may want to hit me for this story & ending😆
But i was tired of writing goody good Rk.. So a change😉
Thankyou.. Hope u had enjoyed this os.
Waiting for ur responses.. Please do leave ur reviews.
Aaniya
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Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.
Rk character is totally different.
He is heartless.
Feel sad for sultan.How he was begging for his life.
But merciless RK knifed him in his chest.
Dipali is wrost.She is the main for reason for Sultan death.
Mohan character is nice.
He has lost one son,because of other son.
He doesn't kill RK,because of his wife.
But he has given correct punishment.
But again Ria and Dipali trapped him.
He do anything for his power.
I like fairytail story.
If u have any idea about fairytail story,U will write like that story.This is just request.
Madhu is half angle and half human.
She wants 3 herbs for her father's life.But she doesn't know,she want to give her soul and life for 3 herbs.
Rk Saves her.But he is the reason to her death.
She accepts his wish for her father.
She thinks ,he is good and genue .
But he is not apt her love.
love at first sight is her biggest mistake.
That's why she has lost herself and pure soul.
He collects her blood in bowl.So sad.
She has shown his future.But he lost all the one,because of his power and kingdom.
But finally he feels her love.But she won't come.
Sultan and Madhu 's last words always remain in his mind.
I feel sad.
Nice os with sad ending.
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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AWESOME OS DEAR LOVED IT
Last part was heart breaking

Edited by v.p.joshi - 8 years ago
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Fantastic story... with brilliant concept!!! 👏
kudos to your creativity...

what all i loved the most in this story?? let me list them out...

1. Rk.. obviously... his greed for name and power.. to become the king for his kingdom... he was very ambitious and very cunning at the same time... but can't blame him fully though.. he was fed with venom by mommy Ria and her daughter Dips... good think u made ria mommy witch... and let Dips, my darling to romance with my Rk... Dips and Rk... sexy buddies here... whoa! well, not buddies... becos Rk never treated her like a buddy... but just a sex partner.. just to pleasure him.. okay nw back to Rk... loved Rk's attitude... his devilishness... and of course his "Beastly Love" for Madhu...

2. Madhu - loved her innocent... her purity... her love was so pure and she kept her word to go with Rk... he helped her find those three herbs and in return she did him a huge favour... This is what we call as our madhu.. so sweet and kind and so loving and selfless...

3. Loved all the three traps before finding the herbs... wonderful thinking... aww... Rk fighting with a crocodile and bringing the herb would have been one hell of a scene to watch...

4. i simply loved both the fathers.. they were so good! sad thing both the fathers lost their kids... Malik lost Madhu... Mohan lost Sultan and both were killed by RK... 🤣 Sultan got a "brutal death"... madhu got a "betrayal death"... he took her to be his maid but he slit her wrist and collected her juice.. i mean blood in a bowl... and fulfilled the ritual and got back his power...

well, now i am gonna list out what all i expected in this story... though i am not disappointed or disliked the ending but still expected few things...

1. Obviously... happy ending...

2. i really didn't expect Rk to kill Madhu... i hoped against hope that in the last moment he will change his mind and will not kill her...

3. i wished Madhu to show their happy future to Rk before itself so that he wouldn't have taken this harsh move... he wouldn't have killed her spoiling their happy love life...

4. I knew when that Sultan's last words will come true... but still i expected it shouldn't...

5. i really wanted Rk to punish Ria and dipali for what they did,... i wished some how Rk to find out what they did to him for their selfish motive.. At least if madhu had some more extra power then she could have shown him what all ria and dips did to him in the past...

6. oh i even hoped ... since Madhu was half angel.. she will survive.. LOL!! i seriously wished and prayed she doesn't leave him alone... i wanted them to live as a happy family..

But then... i loved what you have written.. it was so novel...
if you had shown like i said above then if would have been so usual... so predictable..
so i m happy with the way you painted this story.. it was so beautiful!
Thank you so much... and sorry for being damn late in commenting!


Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago
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Again sad ending 😡
different and unique story...
hate ria and depali...
u should also punish them..
only good thing rk do in his life ..to help madhu...
madhu died...u kill madhu
at last he realise his love ..but too late..
thanks for dedicate...
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Beautiful os... 👏
A perfect supernatural story...
RK is a heartless person n madhu is half human and half fairy...
RK used madhu for getting back his powers... madhu sacrificed his life for his love...
RK got hhis power back but he can't get peacr of mind.. and he relized deapth of madhu's love..
Awesome os..
Edited by RijaMalik - 8 years ago
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First of all hats off to you for the amazing work my Evil Angel Aani 👏 You have written it so wonderfully and guess what... I don't even feel bad that Madhu died. I think I too because heart less reading about your new unusually heartless RK 😆

From the start I was waiting for our heroine entry... I hated this Dips being with RK. Your portrayal of RK as a power hungry cruel handsome hunk is brilliant 👏👏 The way he killed Sultan mercilessly, his kindness towards his father shook me up. Haha he pulled Dips to show her love, and sacrifice her for his power 😆 Ria made a smart move by saying that she is a Witch and her blood is nonsense 😆

Mohan is at fault both the times... He loved Radha too much so why he didn't mind RK's behaviour in childhood and as a result he lost his other son. Since he took back his powers RK went a step ahead and sacrificed the only girl he ever loved. Mohan is also the one indirectly involved then. No offence to you dear 😳

Ria reminds me of 'Mantara' from Ramayana..she is the one who manipulated Kaikeyi and is the root cause of the greatest epic ever borne in history.

One thing is right... With or without powers RK is the invincible and his strength cannot be taken back. He bravely fought the crocodiles and the wingless demons in return of making her his maid. True to his word...
Madhu is a beautiful half angel half human. Never heard of it before...thanks to your creativity Aani! She herself could have predicted her future in her visions but still she made herself a prey to his ritual...reminds me of an OS on Rishbala I read long back. Its called the 'lure of the Vampire.' 😊

I loved the message you conveyed...what RK has lost. The disturbing beautiful visions clearly portrayed his lost even though he realized it very late. He lost his brother, his love Madhu and his father too. At the most the devoted subjects and the love of his countrymen...

Amazingly written dear! Thanks for the PM Aani! Do write more such fairy tale stories...! 😃
Edited by vishuv - 8 years ago
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will update tomorrow ananya.. Thankyou..!!
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

will update tomorrow ananya.. Thankyou..!!



No worries, update whenever you get time.

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