RiShbala OS 'BeaStly LoVe' ;) ||Alternate End@13|| (07/12) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Update when you have time๐Ÿ˜ƒ but congratz for new story Aaniya.๐Ÿ‘
Res


Unres..๐Ÿ˜ณ

Wow superb OS ..loved it..๐Ÿ‘
Rk is heartless..
he wants to become a king but he is misguided so he killed Sultan ..
and his father took all the powers of him..

Deepali and Ria are so mean..witches they are after all๐Ÿ˜†

Rk met Madhu and helped her too finding 3 herbs and in return made her his..
their moments๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ

Madhu is so innocent.

But coz of the wrong way he lost Madhu even if he became king..

awesome msg through story and so w'fully written..โญ๏ธ
totally different char,here..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Keep writing..keep shinning.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

thanks for pm dear.๐Ÿค—



Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
RM14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Hamesha main late ho jaati hoon..aaj pahle dekh liya.๐Ÿ˜‰
Keep writing AA.โญ๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RM14

Hamesha main late ho jaati hoon..aaj pahle dekh liya.๐Ÿ˜‰

Keep writing AA.โญ๏ธ

thanks dear..!! Last or first u always resvered a special place..๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.๐Ÿ˜Š
It was So Different and Awesome Os.๐Ÿ˜Š
Rk Character was so Interesting.๐Ÿ˜Š
Madhu Character was so nice.๐Ÿ˜Š
Rishbala Love Moments were so cute.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Madhu was Deadu,it was so sad.๐Ÿ˜ญ
Madhu Conversation with Rk was Heart-Touching.๐Ÿ˜ญ
At the end,Rk Feelings thinking about Madhu,it was so Heart-Touching.๐Ÿ˜ญ
Please Write like this.๐Ÿ˜Š
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: laughingpearls

awesome and unique update

thanks dear !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@PriyaSweety-Anu
thanks dear.. Glad u like it.. U are the first one to tell me to write like this.. Hehhee.. Thanks for reading...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different n dark rk ,evil Deepali n innocent n angelic madhu.Characterization is good n u wrote it beautifully but I can't bear madhu's brutal death by rk.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story.
Since I am sucker of happy ending. I am keeping comments short as these days everyone is updating emotional st ories. Beautifully written but will be waiting for next story with happy ending.
Thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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rk is soo dark. he lost everything even madhu...killed his own brother...never read this type os...gr8 job
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@dharsii
Thanks piu.. I loved ur comment.. To the point.. U point out what is madhu's mistake too.. I like ur prespctive.. Thanks for coming..!!

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