Rishbala One Shot: A Love So Pure

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heerprem123

@heerprem123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

I'm very happy that I found this and I read it...its fabulous...im truely in love with this story...everything is just amazing and I loved every bit of it ...such a great writer u r...i cant stop myself admiring you...its an awesome piece of writing I ever read...its all about what true love is... 👏 👏

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Thank God di !! You didn't close the thread. I thought it might have closed and didn't comment. Just today when I was reading for umpteenth time I realised my folly.

It's so amazing di that whenever I watch varanam ayiram I would be looking out for madhu in the heroine ( divya spandana ). Your story is the best although the theme is same. And madhu experienced grief far more than the female lead in the movie. OK sorry for comparing. Your story is a masterpiece.

The main protagonist is madhu only.She was so selfless and sacrificing making me to think if there is someone like her in my relatives. About RK I don't have much to say. Atleast after nearly ten years he understood madhu and loved her. But madhu's love is unconditional. I respect her and adore her. I envy RK of getting an amazing life partner who gave herself to him.

I just can't get enough of your writing di !! You are a marvelous writer !!

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

This is one of the best of best story written by u...

I love this os so so much & feel like reading again & again... I really lost count on how many times i have read this beautiful piece of writing...

A love so pure... A befitting title for this story...

The part where Rk accuses madhu & then Madhu begging her mother to not destroy the baby cloth as that was the only thing that she has on her baby girl's memory... & then Rk coming to meet her to apologize to her... Wow! Those places were so emotional & every single time i read i tend to cry...

U r just brilliant lazy dear...

Pls do write such emotional stories... Bcos i know even in emotional heart aching stories u will give happy endings... Like this one, hearts aflame & beauty & beast stories...

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: madhurish
This is one of the best of best story written by u...
I love this os so so much & feel like reading again & again... I really lost count on how many times i have read this beautiful piece of writing...
A love so pure... A befitting title for this story...
The part where Rk accuses madhu & then Madhu begging her mother to not destroy the baby cloth as that was the only thing that she has on her baby girl's memory... & then Rk coming to meet her to apologize to her... Wow! Those places were so emotional & every single time i read i tend to cry...
U r just brilliant lazy dear...
Pls do write such emotional stories... Bcos i know even in emotional heart aching stories u will give happy endings... Like this one, hearts aflame & beauty & beast stories...

thanks yaar,... and thanks for reading it again and commenting ... so glad u enjoy reading the story again and again... i actually think of stories with depressing endings nowadays yaar😆😆😆

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

This is always comes in my top 3 fav os. Along with dude and the ordinary girl and the other os which u have dedicated for me for the first time. You know what I read these 3 os in your absence and I will tell you a secret. For my last two year birthday right at 12 o clock I read these os as I want the year to go so happy like how i feel when I read your stories and I will always thank you in my mind for writing these awesome stories. Thanks once again my lazy dear

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: book.worm

thanks yaar,... and thanks for reading it again and commenting ... so glad u enjoy reading the story again and again... i actually think of stories with depressing endings nowadays yaar😆😆😆

My pleasures dear...

I m having my exams... But even now when i get too tensed i dont watch tv... But i just read ur stories to relax... & i even want to comment... But then most of ur story threads r closed... So i feel bad that i couldnt express my views there... Though i have already commented on that stories...

Oh... Stories with depressing ending? Um... How abt writing a depressing story with happy ending? 😆 See u can make us cry through out the story but in the end please try to make us happy... Its so not u to separate or kill rishbala in ur stories...

I love reading rishbala with kids in ur stories... If u get any idea please write stories with cute kid like SASSY... my darling...

Today I was re reading "the Magic of you" thats also my one of the most fav story... Bcos i like doctors... Lol! U have showed my Rk as doctor...aww... He was such a darling in that story... I had tears reading Madhu's letter to Rk... God! How could u write a story so realistic? U put life to ur characters... Well i wanted to comment all this there but the threaf was closed... Well while reading i got one doubt regarding that story... I m asking that here...

Why Rk opted for Birth control pill in that story instead of using Condom?? He knew very well abt his tricky madhubala... So why he went for a pill when she alreqdy takes lots of medicines for her health issue??? He indirectly became responsible for her getting pregnant... Lol! That madhu of urs is so stubborn yaar... She wantedeverything like the way she wished... I felt so sorry for her state.. She really missed a lot to enjoy in her life & when she wanted to enjoy her life it slipped from her hand... So sad!

I dont know why i m loving ur emotional stories more than happy happy stories... Its not like i dont like ur funny crazy stories like crazy series, hook or by crook, elevator, lost & clueless, wings of love, lemon & lemonade... Soulmate... Something wonderful.. Dancing at midnight... Bas haq hai ek mera... Mohabbat ho na jaye... Oh how i missed to mention the most funny story... HIJACK! LOL... I adore that hijack couple... Poor Rk got stuck with a fool... Most of ur madhu's r pranksters & Rk's are such sweet hearts... I love this combination...

I like ur magical story bewitched... Ur supernatural story... Sun & moon...

God! I simply love all ur stories...

I seriously wish to order all ur 80 stories but all the stories will grab the top ten places... Bcos so many of ur stories will get first spot... Bcos i have so many best of best stories of urs which i can place in first place... Like "a love so pure... Its in his kiss... Just a kiss away... Beauty and the beast... Bewitched... Silent love... Arranged marriage... Hijack ...the magic of you... Gentle rogue... Marriage most scandalous... haunted house... Cant take my eyes of u... Every breathe i take..." God! All these stories will grab the first place... Bcos they are so different... So beautiful... They are just wow...

Lol! If i start i can go on & on abt ur stories... So i will stop here... But will be back to comment on someother story thread of urs...😉😆

Love u... & love ur stories so much...

God bless u dear...🤗

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago