'THE ONE WHO WAS GIFTED BY GOD' FF - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful chapter Mohini
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is plain amazing! Thank you so much for thinking this out Semadi and Mohinidi!

Chapter 1:The incorporation of the girl into the family was so beautifully, and logically placed! Each of theirs reactions and the steps they took to make themselves (since the girl won't yet understand that) comfy. with her was so sweet and lovely!

Chapter 2: I loved the way Kunti redeemed a part of her old mistake and confided in Bheeshma. I think she was right in her decision to keep the girl's identity (rather unknown identity) from the rest of the family members.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dharam Bhaiya doesn't want to lie to Pitamah 😳 He is the best ❤️
Kunti's flashbacks about Karna were perfect, and were woven beautifully into the plot.
Kunti's remorse and her confession were perfect.
Devdutta ⭐️ What a divine name
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Posted: 8 years ago
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