Devakshi FF : Jab koi baat bigad jaye . Tum dena sath mera - Page 15

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey it was nice. This story was very beautiful. Wanted atleast one DevAkshi and their children scene in the last chapter. Anyways please do keep writing.

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rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 9 years ago

I will give you that in my other FF "Changes in life" there you will get to see Dev Dixt as a hands on Dad. their i plan to show the stages of parenthood of Mr. and Mrs. Dixit with their kids also.

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

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Posted: 9 years ago

The end hogya
Sad
Anyways koi baat nhi
I am already waiting for continuation of your other story
Usse bhi jaldi jaldi likhna
Oh bhol gyi
Great story
A huge round of plause
It's like imagining the whole story infront of my eyes

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surbharati

@surbharati

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the story...all happy...very sweet story and nicely written...PM if you are starting any other FF or OS or SS

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

I read the entire story in one go...its beautiful ..really short of words to describe how eloquently you have written it...hats off to you !! 👏⭐️

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Last part was just heartworming... Overall A verry very well written FF..

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

It was wonderful
Loved the way you wrote it.
It was beautifully written story with all ups & down of their life & how they fight.
Thanks

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Deepa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Bequtiful..

Read it in a go and loved it totally.

Way to go girl..

All the best

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

Brilliant write up😃
beautiful story
read till 7th chapter...
will read other ch asap😃

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Nishkala74

@Nishkala74

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Posted: 8 years ago

Read all 25 parts in one gooo

One word : AWESOME

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