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@Shanaya does this TS make any sense now?  πŸ˜³ Fir bhi ye lo jaisa bhi hai padhna to padega hi. 
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A room not the best or the most beautiful in the world, but had a unique charm of its own being nurtured by the colossal love and trust of two people unreservedly, hopelessly, per fervidly and irrevocably in love with each other, had been as calm and serene as it would be usually at this time of night. All conventional as well as non conventional source of light were turned off, The curtains were down to keep out all the trammels of a sound sleep, yet a dash of moonlight managed to invade through the cracks of curtains, but all it did was give a golden divine like aura to the room , matching perfectly with its tranquility. Breaking the norm a little further there was a faint white light coming from Zaroon's mobile phone for he'd been staring at its screen for like five or ten minutes with bated breath. 11:58...11:59 And finally the numbers it read bring out a massive smile around his face for that was what he had been waiting for eagerly. He immediately but gently turned to his right side and there she was; the owner of the eyes that ruled over his stress and tension, the possessor of the smile that ruled over his anger, the cuteness that ruled over his senses, the women who ruled every little bit of his heart for aye, to be precise. Lying in thrall to him, as a matter of fact, he'd been in thrall to her since the very first day he saw her. One hand rested on the pillow while the other around her belly, long hair scattered like flexible climbers about the pillow, dark long eyelashes lying on her cheeks like curtains. She looked so pure and divine as always. What is this strange tingling sensation Zaroon felt in every cell of his body, every time he looked at her sleeping face? He needed to figure it out still. 

"Happy Birthday my love. Khuda mere nasib ki bhi sari khusiya tumhe de de." he whispered before he placed a gentle kiss on Abeer's forehead, keeping his breathing inaudible, careful not to wake her up or else their mission would have ended before it really started. Yes, Mission Mamma's secret birthday party this is what his little partner sleeping peacefully in the other room would call it.

Zaroon and Abeer were in the midst of a wondrous life with no obstruction, no hassle in particular, just some tidbits of everyday life responsibilities and challenges on which they always got a grip and eventually walked over, ascribable to their unbeatable understanding and trust. And to top it off, they had their most powerful weapon against every tension that ever came in their way- the cutest smile of the cutest kid ever- Papa ki jaan, Mumma ki princess, Dadu ki Muffin, Dadi ki Barbie aur Bua ki Khargosh. These all were Junaid family's personal names for Zaroon and Abeer's 4 years old daughter Huma, who had given them all another reason to live and thanks Allah, with her birth. 

When they'd already been bestowed with immense happiness by their gods, stars and destiny all working together in coordination; when there was no void in their lives joined together as one, Huma's arrival was like a bonus that perked it up even. As it was already decided that once they would be parents they would not live apart even for a day. So Abeer settled in Islamabad with Zaroon And when Huma became a kindergartner, she restarted her work over there, with the assistance of Zaroon by her side always.

It seemed Huma had got the best of her parents. She had a glowing, healthy complexion like Zaroon, long supple hair she got from Abeer, her eyes were brown with shades of green, rosy lips, chubby cheeks, and she was so beautiful, so lovely and fresh like the first flower in spring. If talk about her habits and nature- that mischievousness, that care freeness, make a mess of the whole house she'd certainly inherited these traits from Zaroon. "Uff Allah! Zaroon, mere liye to apki hi kharab aadtein nakabile bardaash thi, aur ab ye apki beti bhi aap jasi hi saaf safai ki dushman saabit hui!" Abeer had said it when one day she returned home from work totally exhausted and tired, only to say hello to the sight that magnified it. There was nothing in its proper place, not even the furniture's. Not that those non living things had suddenly started moving on their own, it was actually that father-daughter pair who'd decided to play Tom and Jerry indoor. When Abeer glared at them, they played their coup de maitre- looked at her apologetically with puppy eyes, and Abeer could swear that it was damn cute. Two pair of brown eyes, equally deep and beautiful looking at her trying or rather pretending to be apologetic, but all Abeer could see in them were twinkling stars with their ever mischievous glint. She tried to hold onto her smile, but felt it being tugged down. Not wanting to be caught or give up so easily, she went straight to her room, not before bidding them to get her clean and organised house back. Lekin, Shero ne bhi kabhi safai ki hai? Because in next 10 minutes they'd flumped onto sofa, in front of tv and watching kung fu panda 4. 

"Adat hai biwi itni aasani se kase jaegi?" Zaroon would often say this about his bad habits, smiling that waggish smile of his. "Ye baap beti kabhi mujhe sukun ki ek saans nahi lene dege." This is what Abeer would say about the same, getting irritated. And then, suddenly, one day, something happened; something unusual for not everyday this devilishly adorable Jodi of baap-beti made their minds to provide Abeer with not just ek but dher saari sukun ki saasein. And what could have been a better day for putting their plan into action than Abeer's birthday? The woman who lived only for them, who would see them as her lifeline, however was the reason for their being, the meaning of their existence since always, deserved to feel special once in a while. They knew that she being careless of her own self would forget her birthday this time as well, but this time they were not going to wish or remind her sooner but with a surprise cute birthday party at home. Huma settled on to be his manager, when Zaroon entrusted his unskilled hands with the task of baking Abeer's favourite Choc chip cake and cooking her favourite Chinese. "Abeer bhi kya yaad karegi ki great Zaroon Junaid ne uske liye khana banaya. Tum dekhna beta aisa lazawab khana banauga ki duniya ke bade bade chef bhi mujhse cookery lessons lene aae." Zaroon hadn't done anything yet and started praising himself for no reason.

"Er...but... papa..." Huma raised her brows as there arose a doubt in her mind, "Kya aap sure ho ki aap itta sara khana bana loge? Aapko ye sab ata hai?" she questioned, stretching out Itta', her head thrown back as much as she could that she might meet his eyes. Being all smiles due to a thought that sprang just a moment ago that she looked as cute as Abeer, Zaroon picked her up by her waist and raised her high over his head. "No worries Papa ki jaan, google miya zindabaad!" He spoke up before he twirled her around and got rewarded with her ringing, uncontrollable bouts of laughter, that soon got admixed with his own.

Making his way down Zaroon kissed Abeer's tiny nose, then the corners of her mouth slowly yet savouringly. His eyes then glued to her lips; her pink luscious lips which at the time appeared bright red under faint light. He suddenly felt highly charged with the urge to have the feel of them inside his mouth, uncut. 'You'll be the death of me Mrs. Zaroon Junaid." He thought as he stifled a groan that bubbled up from his chest and was anxious to push through his mouth. Not that he hadn't done it before, hadn't felt all turned on out of the blue in the middle of the night and woke her and made unshackled love to her until dawn, but tonight, considering the work pressure she usually carried on her delicate shoulders these days, he didn't want to disturb her sleep. It wasn't easy beyond doubt. Oh-hell it is so freaking hard man! Zaroon would say this, if one asked him. He could feel his muscles tensing up, his internal control dissolving in the warmth of Abeer's beauty like sugar dissolves in warm water, yet he'd to do it. His one in a million wife who would take care of everybody needed an unrestricted and undisturbed sleep more than anything else at this moment in time. 

As if feeling his warmth and a want to be cocooned even in her sleep, Abeer stirred and cuddled into him, resting her head against his chest and palm just beside. Zaroon smiled taking her into his arms smoothly, as he stuck her more to himself. He could inhale the sweet smell of her apple mint shampoo and his senses swirled into a whirlpool of rapture. In a little while he fell into deep sleep holding her close to his heart, thinking that he would ask her not to stop using this new shampoo she recently started, for he liked it smell.

Next morning, Zaroon descended the marble stairs to ground story of their house, sliding his wrist in and snapped yet another lock to secure the watch on his wrist. He went to the dinning area and kept standing there for a while to take in the sight that despite being usual, had always been captivating. Huma was sitting at the table for breakfast and Abeer coaxing her to drink down a glass of milk placed before her. Zaroon chuckled inwardly wondering when would the day come when she would drink her glass of milk without making faces? And thanks Allah for blessing him with such a beautiful family that he had. He couldn't have ask for more. As he would say it Bas ab aur kya chaiye zindagi mei, being totally unaware that Allah and his khusiyo ka pitara were not done with him yet. There was more to come. Just then Abeer discerned him standing there wearing charcoal grey suit that was tailored to the contours of his body, and a crisp white shirt complementing each other, a silky navy tie was tied around his neck perfectly. His thick black hair was combed neatly; his face was clean shaven today, after having grown out stubbly for a week again. Abeer had kind of developed liking for his heavily stubbled face by now. He looked neat, clean and handsome clean shaven but with beard he wasn't just handsome but way more than that-hot and sexy. Abeer noticed that he looked all formal and handsome. Correspondingly Zaroon noticed her pretty self clad in salmon pink cotton A line kurta and leggings, long ebony hair tied up in a messy bun, and some wispy flyaway hairs frame her face beautifully, which provided her with an apperance of being a fresh, young blooming bud. They shared a fleeting eyelock for it had gradually become a tendency to look into each other's eyes at times, when their lips remained sealed shut and eyes spoke volumes off the cuff. They exchanged a knowing smile and Zaroon walked up to the dinning table. "Good Morning." He said as he unbottoned his coat and took his seat beside Huma, the resonance in his voice was as chirpy as he was in the morning. Both his beloved girls wished him back merrily in unison. Abeer poured some orange juice into an elegant crystal glass and handed it to him. "Mai apka naashta lekar ati hu." She then went to the kitchen,and Huma finally got one chance to have some private conversation with Daddy dear. "Papa, suno jaldi se." she spoke in hushed tone. Zaroon who just took a sip of the juice, immediately paid attention to her voice and looked toward her face questioningly. She moved closer to him and began speaking again, "Hamara mission start ho chuka hai. Sab kuch theek se hona chaiye commaddo!" She spoke in an undertone, more like commanded him.

Zaroon opened his mouth to speak but a quick laugh slipped out instead, "Why she had to be so cute?" "Commaddo nahi Commander." He corrected her.

"Yeah that's what I said Commaddo." She said, her big eyes widening even more.

Zaroon chuckled openly at her naivete and leaned closer, whispering "Aye Aye Captain." to tuck a stray lock of her wet hair behind her ear.

Everything had been going well. As they'd expected Abeer had forgotten her own birthday. A minute later she came back with a tray of toasts and butter. "Huma, jaldi se apna breakfast khatam karo bachche fir school ki liye taiyaar bhi hona hai." She said and set the tray down on the table and herself on the chair opposite to them.

Huma didn't say anything but started chewing a mouthful of omelette. Her ephemeral furrowed brows at the mention of school didn't go unnoticed by Zaroon and he grinned to himself.

Abeer buttered a piece of toast and put on Zaroon's plate. Just when she was about to do one for herself Huma screamed in pain or it would be better to say fake pain. One cry out of her mouth was enough to adhere wheels to Abeer's legs and in a flash she was standing right beside Huma,wile Zaroon chooked on his toast, "And there she starts,"

"Kya hua?" Abeer's voice snowed under with concern and worry.

"Aaah Mumma daat mei dard ho raha hai.." Huma uttered a yelp as she placed her palm flat on her right cheek.

"Daat mei? Achanak kaise? Kaha kis daat mei?"

"Wo... wo ache wale daat mei.." this just slipped out Huma's mouth impromptu and Zaroon really had a hard time controlling his laughter that was fidgeting to push through the boundary of his lips.

"Ache wala daat?" Fresh lines of worry on Abeer's forehead seemed to be getting replaced by a frown. Finding herself being caught out, Huma intensified the pitch of her cries and Abeer got involved in her once again, keeping her ACP Pradyuman ki bhanji wala avtaar aside.

Suddenly her eyes took notice of Zaroon's cool and calm reaction. On any other day he would've caused tremendous uproar in the entire house, seeing Huma in pain. But today he simply sat there like a bump on a log and watched her, the expression around his face read somewhat amazed, much to Abeer's disbelief. Little did she know that the cute devil they'd created together left him astonished by her drama in progress.

"Zaroon?" She called his name on top of her voice, that swung him into action, as a result he sprung up from his chair swiftly, fumbled for what to say for a second and spoke up in a clumsy way, "Haan, papa ki jaan kya hua?" even though he tried to sound worried, as much as he could. 

"Dekhe aap ise, mai dentist ka number lekar aati hu!" Abeer spoke up and hurried to the bottom of the stairs, crept up quickly and hurried down the corridor that lead to her bedroom.

She returned only to find Zaroon gathering Huma up in his arms. Before she could make out the drift of his action, "Tum par wase hi kaam ka bohat bhoj hota hai ajkal, tum jao, isko mai dentist ke pass le jata hu aur fir wapas ghar drop kar duga, wase bhi mera aaj koi important work ya meeting lined up nahi hai" Zaroon sputtered it all on the trot. "Lekin Zaa..." and her words remained in her mouth as him already rushed toward the front door and at the speed of light they both vanished from her sight. Though she wanted to accompany them to his car that was parked outside but couldn't for the reason that she felt faint abruptly, and had to hold on the wall behind to keep from falling. 

"Abeer baji..." just then their maid shabana appeared before her. Abeer could hear she was saying something to her but sounded far away.

"Abeer baji aap theek to hai?!" Shabana asked aghast.

"Wo mai..." Abeer felt the blood rush from her head and she staggered backward, leaning against the wall. 

Shabana strode toward her, "Aap aie mere saath." She led Abeer to the nearest chair, sat her on it, brought her a glass of cold water and opened all the windows around and let fresh air surge in. The cool air revive Abeer and she felt less disoriented and dizzy.

"Mai sahab ko phone karti hu." Shabana said but Abeer stopped her from doing so. Not that she didn't want to disturb him or something like that. She hadn't told this to anyone and had succeeded in keeping from Zaroon so far, but such dizziness, morning sickness had been frequent visitors to her, since about a week. And she being mother of a child, had a good idea of what it could be, but didn't want to jump to a conclusion without having it confirmed by her doctor.

"Allah kare jo mai soch rahi hu wo sach ho!", she felt a gush of warmth spread through her being that effectuated the delicate pink colour to tint her cheeks.

Zaroon and Huma drove off to nearby stationery store for Huma wanted to buy some things she would require to make a gift for Abeer and that was the principal mode of formation of her toothache natak that she might skip school, about which she hadn't clued in Zaroon yet as well.

In the afternoon, Abeer was sitting in doctor's cabin. As soon as she'd entered her shop few hours ago a wave of nausea had engulfed her and she puked her gut out. So she finally took off from her work and there she was waiting for the doctor. Doctor had done all her test and when she came back there was a huge smile on her face that cemented Abeer's hope. 

"Mubarak ho Abeer you're pregnant!" said the Doctor as she took her seat infront of Abeer.

That moment was something whose seed had already germinated in her heart, and doctor's confimation served as food and water, wherefore it shot up to a cross of elation and excitement. How she wished for Zaroon and Huma by her side right now.

"Mumma mujhe ek bhai chaiye." One day very innocently Huma had asked Abeer for a brother, having attended her school friend Zoya's birthday party.

"Bhai? Wo kyun?" Abeer asked, surprised.

"Haan fir mai bhi usse apne sare kaam karwaya karugi jaise Zoya karwati hai apne bhai se aur Sara bua Papa se." Huma spoke up and Abeer broke out at her innocence.

"Thank you... thank you so much Doctor!" Abeer spoke up, a whole hearted smile adorned her face.

"Poore dhai mahine ho chuke hai and since its your second pregnancy, you know very well that you've to be extra careful now." Doctor said and handed Abeer her priscription.Nodding Abeer took it. 

She smiled trough the tears glittered in her eyes ready to roll down her cheeks anytime, all the while she walked toward the cab waiting for her in the hospital parking lot. There used to be a period, a long agonizing period when she would think herself an ill fated woman, concerning her miscarriages and a life deprived of love and care. But with Zaroon what she had that time and what she had now seemed poles apart. The minute she hop in the car, she reached into her bag and pulled her cell phone out. She smiled gently as she texted Zaroon.

Zaroon was having a casual discussion on a presentation with Raza in his cabin, when his text message alert tone went off. He punched the ok button just to learn whose, but the name it flashed didn't even took a second to catch his whole attention. Raza observed him getting indulged in something in his phone abruptly. And It wasn't rocket science to understand in what? for he recognized that silly, innocent smile of Zaroon and knew very well with whom it belonged to. 

"Achanak se aapko bohat miss kar rahi hu. Ho sake to sham ko ghar jaldi aa jaega. Aur haan... I love you." Zaroon read the message while his smile grew wider.

"Your wish is my command my love. Bilkul mai ghar jaldi aauga. And I love you too." He typed his reply and hit the send button. When he put his phone on the table before him, he noticed Raza staring at him smiling, his chin rested on his palm, elbow on the table and a smile plastered on face that Zaroon couldn't read.

"Hmmm? Ye tum itne khatarnaak andaaz mei mujhe kyu ghoor rahe ho?" He asked, raising his brows.

"Nahi mai to ye soch raha hu ki shaadi ko itna time ho gaya tumhari lekin asshiqui hai jisme musalsal izafa hue ja raha hai. Dekho Abeer bhabhi ke message par aaj bhi ek teenager ki maakif blush karte ho." Said Raza as he lifted his headonly to sink down in his chair.

"Nahi yaar wo bas," wait a minute, Zaroon paused then spoke again "tumhe ye andaaza kaise hua ki message Abeer ka tha?"

Now Raza gave a loud laugh, "Shakal dekhni chaiye tumhe abhi apni ekdam majnu wali ho rakhi hai, and as far as I know is majnu ki ek hi laila hai." 

Zaroon felt embarrassed "Baat galt bh nhi hai, hu to mai Abeer ka majnu hi." He though then said "Chodo yaar subah se aur koi mila nhi kya tumhe taang khichne ko? Chalo saath me ek ek cup coffee ho jae."

"Coffee mere liye hi mangwana. Mera nhi khayal ab tumhe coffee ki mithas ki jarurat hai." Raza seemed not to put an end to this teasing season. Rather!

Zaroon joined his hands playfully, "Khuda ke liye baksh de mere bhai mujhe." And both shared a friendly laugh.

Too long. Isn't it? Shanaya, I'm so lazy. You can pitofy me with a danda, I won't say a word. πŸ˜³

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"Bake until golden and a cake tester inserted into the centre comes out clean, 30 to 45 minutes." Zaroon read out as he stared at his macbook screen that was placed before him on the black marble countertop, as he had preplanned it, he took half day leave from office, gave Amzad and Shabana the early out and was busy cooking for Abeer now, while Huma was seated on a stool by a kitchen counter munching on some apple slices that Zaroon gave her to eat. 

He trasferred the cake batter from a glass bowl to to the baking pan that he'd already greased with butter and levelled with an offset spatula. He then opened the oven door and slid the pan into the preheated oven. When the door was shut, he set the time for thirty minutes and breathed a sigh of relief. "Lo ji, ye kaam to ho gaya. I hope it will be as good as Abeer's!" He said, while turning around. Huma saw his face and burst into laughter straightway. " some cake batter was spilled on his apron, some was stuck on cheeks, and a little piece of eggshell peeking out from his muddled hair.

Zaroon scratched his head, wondering Apple me laughing gas thi kya? She was laughing, laughing and laughing. He just stood there looking at her; her mind was off somewhere he didn't know where. While trying hard to stop laughing she said "Papa", she paused for some seconds, "Aap to mere sare favourite cartoons se bhi jyada funny lag rahe ho." She spoke out and fell about again. It's only now Zaroon noticed his stained apron, and found himself smiling anon, because it was impossible not to smile with her eyes sparkling freely, long hair that was pinned up in a bun started slipping from it as she laughed, and the cute sound of her laughter rippled toward him like music, for which he could forever be as funny as barrel of monkeys. 

He'd been bewitched by his own creation, until her small hand gestured for him to come closer, once she packed in her laughing, panting a little. And when he came before her she climbed up onto her stool and much to her disappointment could barely reach his chest, let alone his face. It triggered the corners of her mouth and they turned down naturally. Zaroon chuckled at her behaviour, "Aww baby, you're only 4 years old." He said, as he lifted her into his arms and inhaled her sweet aroma of strawberry soap and shampoo. She let out a victorious smile before she reached out to wipe away the batter from his cheek with the pad of her fingers. When she showed those brown spotted fingers to him, they chortled synchronously.

Having finished the cooking, they rushed to his bedroom. Spread a new bed sheet, changed to matching pillow covers, freshened the room with lavender freshner, Abeer's favourite and changed Huma's clothes made her wear the clothes Abeer had purchased for her. It was a cute pink rosette bodice knee length dress made of satin. It made Huma's cute feature standout as though it was made for her only. They teamed it up with pink belly shoes to complete the look and Zaroon let her hair down, for styling those long locks was surely not his cup of tea.

"Papa apko to kuch bhi nhi aata."

"Bas beta, yahi kuch mauke hote hai jo mujhe ehsaas kara jate hai ki boy cut duniya ka sabse acha hairstyle hai." 

"Papa mai kaisi lag rahi hu?" Huma asked excitedly as she twirled around.

Zaroon smiled, pulled her close and hugged her fondly, "Papa ki jaan is the loveliest girl in the world!"

Huma then sprinted to her room to put the finishing touches on Abeer's gift, while Zaroon took a quick shower, focusing his thoughts on Abeer's possible reactions to the surprise. He came out the bathroom, wearing just a towel wrapped around his waist. πŸ˜ƒ He opened his cupboard, ran a hand through his wet hair, pondering the question of what clothes to wear, while some drops of water fell to his shoulders, become one in the way to middle of his chest and finally trailed down to his navel, got disappeared into the dent. He ruffled through his shirts for a minute or two, then settled on a black and cream color full sleeve t-shirt that fitted his size and teamed it up with a faded blue jeans that complemented his height. His hair had dried by now soft and silky and appealingly disordered. He didn't comb it but shook his head, his locks of black hair swaying from side to side. Then he ran his hand through his hair from front to back. He then sprayed a little perfume at his neck and wrists, put on his watch, completed his look with a pair of black moccasins and looked handsome as always.

Abeer smiled when she returned in the evening and saw Zaroon's car already parked outside. She walked along the marbled pathway, reached the door of the house and put out her hand to ring the bell. But her arm fell back to her side as she saw that the door was not quite closed.

The door opened silently as she pushed in and she stepped in, her mind was alert to a strange feeling. As the hall was still and dark, opposed to Zaroon's habit of turning on every light in the house in the evening. She called his name but he didn't reply. "Shayad Huma ke saath upar room me hoge?" She murmered to herself as she turned to left side of her body, moved her hand to feel the switch, turn on the light and then went up to her room. She walked in pushing open the door with her right hand, unaware of the surprise waiting for her, and was astonished at the decoration of the room filled with balloons, flowers; cards and glitters scattered everywhere, prompted her to remember that it was her birthday today. She was supposed to surprise them, but got astonished by them instead. She hit herself lightly in the head at her forgetfulness. How come nobody wished you, Abeer? Hmm! Isme bhi baap beti ki hi haath hoga, she presumed. There was a small red paper back and a package on the bed waiting for her attention. She walked over to them, curiously and picked up the red bag first. It had something that seemed like a greeting card, she pulled it out and it was actually. The card was simple rectangular and folded,it had a beautiful picture on the cover: a woman kissing her baby, sitting right beside her was her husband kissing the back of her head. Just over the picture was a printed message, that read: You're my heart, You're my soul. Happy birthday to the most beautiful woman I know. The card was indeed the best she'd ever seen and those words were magical enough to spread a smile across her lips. She opened the cover and her smile grew wider for written on the right inside side of the card was a attached message by Zaroon. She knew that neat cursive handwriting. She read it, 


Abeer My love,

Words are inadequate to describe my love for you, but here I am, penning down my heart in this message, even though you know my vocabulary is not poetic. You know love is so simple and effortless. If it is extraordinary deals, like a big bunch of flowers and romantic candle-lit dinner, it also exists in more basic things, like a simple good morning kiss or a tight hug to remove tiredness. With you I found that kind of love, the love that I've fallen hopelessly in love with. 

Our life is not a fairytale, and trust me it's way more better. I love every small things you do for me, like when you bring me water if I am too tired or lazy, massage my head if I have headache, make me my favourite food whenever I ask for, just hug me close at night and when you love and respect my parents even more than I do, mai tumhare saamne jhukne lagta hu Abeer. Mera dil karta hai mai tumhe khud mei sama lu.

Nothing can steal my love away from you, not even death, as I always pray to God, to make you mine, forever, in the Earth and in the Heaven. I love you and I'll always love you kyunki tumhe chahe bina to ab mai apni zindagi ka tassavur bhi nahi kar sakta.

Happy Birthday Meri Jaan. Hamesha aise hi rehna hasti muskurati, ruh ko sukun dene wali meri Abeer.

With lots of love,
Tumhara aur sirf aur sirf tumhara Zaroon.

Even though abeer tried to stop, a tear leaked out of the corner of her eye. It was a hybrid tear of delight and overwhelming sense of being loved unconditionally, she had been trapped in, for she knew he meant every word. How she wanted to give him a tight hug right now and kiss him senseless.

She read the message again as she talked to herself silently, Zindagi mei bohat sari naimate hoti hai, lekin sabse badi naimat to ye khushnuma ehsaas hai jab apka shohar apko itna chahe ki jitna apko andaza bhi na ho ki kisi ko chaha bhi ja sakta hai. Zaroon, Huma, aur hamari zindagi mei ane wali nayi khushi, isse jyada to mai aur kuch mang bhi nahi sakti khuda se. Lekin pata nhi kyun jaise mujhe abhi bhi ye sab ek haseen khwaab lagta hai. Jaane kab mujhe in khusiyo par yakin aega, ya shayad aega bi ya nahi? Ya fir shayad mai yakin karna chahti hi nahi. Bas apni tamam zindagi isi koobsurat khwaab mei bita dena chahti hu. Aap kehto ho ki aap mere saamne jhukne lagte ho. Bhala ye kaise mumkin hai Zaroon ki aap ek aisi shaksiyat ke saamne jhuke jiska dil, jiski ruh ka ek ek katra aapke kadmo mei bhicha hai. Aap mujhe khud me sama lena chahte hai? kabhi gaur se mujhe dekhiye to sahi, mujhme mera hai hi kya, sab kuch to aap hi ka hai. 

She wiped underneath her eyes with gentle swipe of her fingers, put the card carefully into her handbag. With a trace of smile played across her face she untied the red bow on the package. It was a saree. As she lifted the saree up, a note fell out. She picked it up and read the note, 

Yu to tum jo bhi kuch pehno mujhe hamesha hi achi lagti ho biwi. Abeer chuckled, then read further, Lekin kaash tum meri aankho se khud ko is Saree me imagine kar pati. And believe me it is made for you only. Please wear it for me and come fast, Huma and Papa are waiting for you in the living room.

She smiled as she rubbed the soft fabric between her thumb and finger. It was a lovely plain black saree with a sequin border and she really liked it, but she couldn't say the same about the blouse. When she raised it, her eyes widened, her smile left her lips and they parted as her jaw dropped. Not that it wasn't beautiful, it was indeed a very lovely black colour blouse with golden work throughout the wide straps stretching from the back covering shoulders and meeting at the front, but it was so small, that for a moment Abeer wondered if it would fit her? 

She could feel him around, giving her the puppy eyes look that enkindled her inner warmth and made the tinge of rational thought that had begun to arise in moments just passed, to sink into oblivion for the nonce. She was going to wear it for the man she loved like crazy. 

She washed her face first, and then got into the blouse which lifted her perky bust, creating sexy feminine cleavage, since the blouse is of pushup variety and it did its job perfectly. She thought that the saree would help her, but it seemed there was no way to escape. Her blouse and her bare waist were clearly visible through the transparent material. She almost couldn't recognize herself in the mirror. The black saree made her skin glow and her eyes sparkle like never before in the yellow light in their room. It was quite irregular to think of herself as sexy, but she certainly felt more beautiful and sexy than she could ever remember. Quite soon she put the thoughts aside, wore her diamond stud earrings, loosened her hair and it fell in long untwisting waves below her waist, she brushed it until it was soft and flexible, put on moisturiser and minimal makeup. She took one last glance at herself before she made her way down to the living room.

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Happy Birthday... Huma and Zaroon shouted in unison as soon as Abeer stepped in, and that induced her to give them a smile, her dazzling wholehearted smile. They looked at her in speechless amusement as her manifest beauty started to drift in their respective cerebrations. While Huma's emotions were purely innocent as she thought how beautiful her Mumma looked today like a heroine, her Papa's were anything but innocent. He did imagine Abeer in this saree; his imagination was extremely foxy and provocative, but reality topped it withal. The saree drapped her closely, allowing for her hourglass figure to make it enthralling appearance to knock him off his feet. Gosh, those cleavage and navel! He felt the heat trickled down his back and he knew he would need another shower if he kept on staring at them for another minute. Abeer blushed at his intense gaze at her body. He gave her a slight, tight lipped smile, as if to assure her that she was safe, atleast for now. 

"Wow Mumma. Aap to snow white se bhi jyada pretty lag rahi ho!"Huma vocalized her feeling, chirping. The chime in her cute voice brought forth a warmth that enkindled a smile across Abeer cheeks, as she noticed they both were dressed in clothes she had purchased for them and looked adorable. She took a step toward them, Zaroon immediately cut a ribbon that was holding a net, and from overhead many red and white balloons began falling from the ceiling drifting onto the floor, they looked up smiling and not just Huma even Abeer raised her hands over her head, reaching for the balloons like a child. When Mumma and daughter both got engrossed in playing with the balloons for a couple of minutes, Zaroon capitalised those beautiful moments by capturing them on his phone.

Abeer lifted Huma in her arms, "Shaitaan, ab samajh aaya ache wale data ka dard. " she spoke up as she pinched her nose fondly. Huma giggled and kissed Abeer on the cheek before she spoke "Happy Birthday to you Mumma. Aapko jamandin bohat bohat Mubarak ho." Abeer laughed, so did Zaroon. "Jamandin nahi janamdin." Abeer corrected Huma, and as always it was of no avail. "Yeah that's what I said Jamandin." Huma said in her uber cute voice, with assertiveness. Abeer chuckled, shaking her head slightly, and promply planted a kiss on her forehead. "Thank you so much my princess. Ye mumma ki life ka sabse acha aur yaadgaar birthday hai."

"Mumma, Ye sab Papa aur maine milkar kiya hai apke liye, aur Papa ne apka favourite cake aur khana bh banaya hai apne hatho se!" Huma felt happier, having it all out her system at once, for she was so excited to devulge this to Abeer since morning. 

Abeer looked at Zaroon, who also wished her happy birthday once again. Abeer nodded, her beautiful emerald eyes were immediately lost in the depth of his glittering brown eyes, as they shared an affectionate eye lock that was short lived since Huma wiggled in her arms and insisted that it was time they should proceed to cake cutting. Abeer put her down on the floor and was ushered to the centre table between the sofa set and tv unit, where a beautiful, round shape chocolate cake decorated with fresh strawberries and kiwis had been waiting for her to get reformed by her lovely hand. 

The cake was beautiful and simple, not extraordinary like those fancy, highly decorated cakes by pastry chefs. However, the hands that brought it into existence made it a never to be forgotten.

She gave him a warm smile originated from her core as she bent over to the table to cut the cake, inhaling the rich smell of cocoa. She made two cuts and lifted out a solid wedge of the cake and Zaroon and Huma sang Happy Birthday. She fed Huma the first bite, who then rotated her thumb, giving Zaroon a thumbs up. Abeer raised the cake piece to his mouth, he took a bite and smiled, for the cake was much delectable than his expectation, then fed her the other half. He then brought gifts and soft drinks. Abeer opened Huma's gift first that brought her to elation. It was a photo collage of all her daily chores with cardboard backing. There was a pic of her cooking in the kitchen, running behind Huma with a towel in her hand, working in her shop, and many more with a small white paper at the centre, where it was written in Huma's rough and rugged handwriting- My Mumma is a Supar Hero. The fact that Huma'd mispelled super didn't matter at all. 

Abeer fell to her knees, pulled Huma close and hugged her tightly. "Huma, mujhe aaj tak kisi ne itna khoobsurat tohfa nahi diya. Thank you meri jaan, you made mumma so happy today." She said, a smile tugging her lips and Huma's smile mirrored hers. Even Zaroon was astonished at the creativity by his little daughter. He pulled out a small red velvet box from his pocket, he opened it a ring inside, a platinum one with a big diamond solitaire crafted in its centre. Abeer was stunned not by the beauty of the ring but by the fact that he could read her eyes. It was the same ring she saw behind a plate glass window as they passed by a jewellery store in a mall last month. Zaroon did notice a gleam in her eyes, but that immediately got replaced by incredulity when her eyes slid down to price tag at the box. Zaroon knew she being someone who believes in saving money, would never think of buying that. 

"Lekin Zaroon ye to..."Zaroon stopped her midway, "Acha ab wo apna bachto par lecture mat start kar dena please." Huma chuckled at his sentence and Abeer glared at them, laughing. Zaroon slid the ring onto her left ring finger with utmost care. When it fitted her slender finger perfectly, he smiled and said' "Happy birthday once again!" "Thank you!" She said softly before shifting her gaze from the ring to his face, staring in his eyes lovingly for a minute, she again fixed her eyes on the ring and said, "It's beautiful! Simply elegant yet wonderfully attractive!" He nodded, "Yes. Simply elegant yet wonderfully attractive , bilkul tumhari tarah." He said in a voice coated with pure love. She didn't say anything, her thick, black eyelashes lowered, her eyes still fixed on the ring but he could see the shy smile covering her lips.

They captured so many pics together. Huma who had filled her stomach to the brim with cake and soft drinks only had no space for food and was soon dozed off on the sofa. Zaroon carried her up to her room and gently laid her down on her bed. Once he was sure she was fast asleep, he came back downstairs and found Abeer near dinning table, her back facing him, as she stared in awe at the table covered with while linen. A floral centrepiece graced it. The gold trimmed bone china, gleaming silverware and long and thin glasses complemented the exquisite candlelight setting. When she was about to put some food on a plate, he stopped her from behind. "Allow me my love. I'm at your service." He whispered in her ear so huskily that for a moment Abeer wondered did he really mean food? He pulled out her chair and made sure she was comfortably seated, before he proceeded to serve her a delicious meal. Not until he was done serving her did he walk across and pull out a chair for himself.


"Mmm..." Abeer took a chicken ball into her mouth and moaned as so many flavours blended into one small ball, burst in her mouth. "Zaroon ye to bohat hi tasty hai."she spoke out before she stuffed another ball into her mouth.

"Really? Mujhe khushi hai ki tumhe pasand aya."Zaroon spoke like a perfect gentleman.

"Haan aur maine tay kar liya hai ki abse daily office se aane ke baad dinner aap hi banaege." Her voice a little puckish, a clearly visible curl of her lips that made her eyes twinkle with mischief

Oh! Biwi wanted to play? He was in. 

"Waise biwi ho to tum bohat zalim, lekin chalo I'm ready, if you promise to reward me afterwards."

"Reward? Abeer frowned for being so innocent and clueless that she was, Kaisa reward?" She added.

Zaroon smiled slowly , while looking at the food in front of him, he swallowed some rice that he'd just put into his mouth. He looked at her seductively, lengeringly, saying "Upar room me chalo fir ache se samjhata hu kis reward ki baat kar raha hu mai." A wicked smile curled up his lips, he winked at her,when Abeer looked him straight in the eye, a blush crept along her cheekbones as it dawned on her what he meant. "Aur fir aap khte ho ki mai zaalim hu." She said, so playfully that Zaroon convulsed with laughter and Abeer smiled with pleasure, for it had always been a delight to watch him laugh heartily. Zaroon could see that she was somewhat lost in him. His eyes turned soft and warm as his thumping great affection for her smoked through them, his baritine voice got a little husky, he spoke "Waise aaj tum itni khoobsurat lag rahi ho ki mera dil chah raha hai mai tumse doobara shaadi kar lu." His eyes locked on hers as if he were trying to hypnotize her, and it worked. She couldn't tear her gaze from him, as a matter of fact, she didn't even try."To bolo karogi mujhse shaadi?" He husked, but not deeply enough to rivet her in hypnosis and she was back in playful mood again. She took a sip of water from her glass, cleared her throat, and spoke "No while looking down at her plate, mashing a small piece of carrot on her plate with fork with no intention of eating it. Zaroon's lips quirked disbelievingly, since he was expecting a Abeer style reply like ji bilkul karugi, jo aap kahege wo sab karugi lekin ye actually hua kya, he wondered. 

"No? What do you mean by no?" He asked, his brows drawn together in a frown, that looked almost like a childish pout on his face.

Abeer could feel her mouth curving into a smile, as she looked at him. He was so handsome, as well as adorable at the same time, how did he manage so? She thought. "No matlab mai apse shaadi nahi kar sakti, kyunki mai kisi aur mei interested hu." 

"Oh acha... ji kya mai naam jaan sakta hu aur kismet interested ho tum?"

"Shahrukh khan." She said so smoothly and happily that Zaroon felt a momentary pang of jealousy - Shahrukh Shahrukh. Khuda ko aakhir jarurat hi kya thi is aadmi ko banane ki. He muttered under his breath. "Yes off course. How predictable." he smirked, "Lekin biwi wo teen bachcho ke baap ke saath shaadi karogi tum?" 

"To kya? Ek bachchi ke baap to aap bhi hai." Abeer spoke up teasingly. Kher se chand mahino me do ke bhi ho jaoge, she thought. "Waise bhi there's no one like Shahrukh. He is the best. Apko pata hai jab wo..."

"Acha bas bas... please ab wo apna Shahrukh ka bakhaan mat suru kar dena. Pata nahi us ka ka ka ka kiran mei kya nazar ata hai tum sab aurto ko." Zaroon cut her short and She dissolved into laughter. He also joined her as he couldn't help but laugh at his own childish behaviour.

They finished dinner amongst much chit chat and laughter Zaroon then proceeded to clean up and Abeer went up to check on Huma. With a beam of satisfaction across her face, emanated after finding Huma soundly sleeping, she went to her room for the rest of the night. She took her earrings and ring off and placed them carefully in the chest of drawers beside her bed. 
 
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She went into the bathroom, took off her saree hung it on a hanger swinging from the hook on the back of the door. As she reached behind to unhook her blouse, she felt his warm hug envelope her from the behind and startled her, a gasp slipped out of her mouth the while. "Zaroon aap yaha kya kar rahe ho, aap to dinning room mei the na?" She shouted, but her voice was muffled by excitement. "Haan lekin mujhe achanak ye ehsaas hua ki meri biwi ko meri tawajjo ki abhi jyada jarurat hai.You're so beautiful." He whispered, as he nuzzled her ear, inhaling the scent of her hair. His tender touch sent shivers down her spine, causing a shy smile to spread across her lips. He removed his hands from her waist, brought his right hand up to brush her long silk hair over her right shoulder and expose her neck. He placed a deep kiss at the nape of her neck and earned a soft moan from her that aroused his half asleep half awake sexual desire completely, while his left hand fingers circled her belly button, and then moved lower and upper many times, stroking her tummy. She closed her eyes breathing heavily, her muscles tightened as she felt so affected and aroused by his touch. Unable to stand the tickling any longer she pleaded "Zarooon...stooop!"- "Shhh," he ordered, his breath tickling her ear. He then slowly dug his finger into her belly button and she let out a soft throaty-sounding groan. She felt his grip loosening around her, as he slowly turned her around and looked at her flushed face, she clung to him, afraid that the heady sensation would make her faint. He gently disentangled her from him, placed his right hand on her left cheek, his thumb gently stroking her cheek. Abeer lifted her head, breathing heavily and looked into his melting dark eyes. She saw the depth of caring that was there, splashed with mischievous twinkles. The look said that he loved her. They were so close to each other that they could feel the warmth of each other's breathing. He kept looking into her eyes as he leaned in slightly and kissed her gently on the lips. Then he gently pulled away from her lips as their eyes locked again and he gave her a slight smile. 

Abeer had always had an honesty and candidness to her that Zaroon admired. The more he looked in her eyes the more he could see a growing passion that pulled the string of his control loose. He groaned before he caught the back of her head in one palm and crushed her mouth under his, while his other hand cupped her bottom and pulled her hips tight against his. Abeer let out a soft moan, her mouth parting slightly. Zaroon's mouth quickly take the opening. When his tongue met with hers, she felt an eruption take place somewhere in the depths of her body. Without thinking about her actions, her hand moved up and around his neck and her fingers entwined themselves in his hair. Zaroon pressed her hard against him, his eyes squizzing shut in pleasure. Suddenly, he lifted her off the floor, wrapping her legs around his waist and carried her to the bed, without breaking their erotic kiss. He groaned, toring his mouth from hers before he delicately placed her down in the middle of their bed and stood in front of the bed, taking a hard look at her body. Her chest moving up and down in soft whispers, her smooth belly uncovered for him, and the tiny dent on it, tempting him to suck the nector out of it. The fire was blazing strong, and they both were lost in sensation. 

A feeling took over Zaroon and he pulled his t shirt over his head, threw it behind, headless of where it landed, while Abeer watched him awestruck. Not that she hadn't seen him before, as always it was a pleasure to see him shirtless. She wanted, she so wanted to run her hand over his Milky fair skin, trail her fingers across the springy dark hair of his chest, drawing them down to to the tantalizing expanse of his belly. He smiled as leaned down to kiss her. The kiss was gentle but insistent and deep, her lips were moving with his, it was as if they'd become one. She wasn't sated yet but he slowed down movement of his head and his lips moved slightly off of hers, they were barely touching, his breath drifting into her mouth sweet and pleasant. She wrapped her arms around his neck, her body rose toward his, searching for more. Zaroon lifted an eyebrow and looked down at her face flushed with desire. A vague smile twisted his lips and he whispered against her ear, his voice husky "You're the most beautiful thing in my world." His words took her breath away, so to snatch some of his, she pulled his face closer, twigging the indication he captured her lips in an electrifying kiss, ravenous and flaming this time. He sat back pulling her up along without breaking the kiss. She sat up and wrapped her legs around him as he kneeled. 

Zaroon slid his hands around her back, wrapping her in his embrace.Her lips parted and she gave him back his passionate kiss, her tongue teasing his. For a long, erotic time, they explored each other's mouth, both of them half panting. Zaroon was so totally involved in the kiss that he didn't feel her hands moving along the strength of his muscles and the shape of his torso, until her fingers found the tip of his chest and massaged in slow circles. A sudden, spontaneous groan forced its way out from deep in his throat and he was coerced into ceasing the movement of his lips for an instant. When he lifted his head, she gazed at him through eyes half lidded with desire. Her lips were wet and plump from his kisses. He had lit her fire and she wanted him badly that could be read all across her face that glowed distinct from her natural one.

He held her face in between his large, gentle hands and whispered in a sexy tone, "Lets get rid of these shitty pieces of clothing." Without waiting for her reaction, he reared back and went to work on his belt and in no time he had shimmied out of his jeans, leaving his boxer briefs in place. Abeer watched him, awestruck, not that she saw his long sinewy legs first time, he was astonishingly sexy in his entirety, and he was her man.

"Your turn now." Came his husky voice followed by a killer smile. 

It wasn't long before they were both naked wrapped around each other heading for stars.

She closed her eyes while he laid her down on bed, to have full right over what belonged to him- her body and soul. He stared at her perfection for a moment; his gaze sailing over every inch of her satiny skin, and as always it was spellbinding. She was getting more beautiful everyday, every inch of her, from top to bottom. 

Abeer opened her eyes, being deprived of the warmth of his touch, only to be mesmerized by the look on his face. He stared at her beautiful body with such awe and inspiration that would always make her feel like she was the most enchanting woman in the world. 

No longer able to resist her, Zaroon bent down over her, his head buried in her shoulder, concomitantly his whole self buried in making love to her. She fisted his hair as he licked her skin as if he perceived her taste. He kissed the slender column of her throat. As he trailed kisses down her neck, sliding down to the defined edge of her collar bone, she arched her head back, giving him greater access. She felt the waves of heat crash against her body as he made his way to her chest, slowly, patiently; kissing everything that came in the way. 

She writhed under him, her fist tightened her hold in his hair while he spent some play time with his favourite part of her body; rubbing and gently kneading her there, making her squirm and moan at the same time. "Ohh! Abeer meri jaan, you're so soft." he moaned, clasping her around her rib so she couldn't move while his mouth moved down her midriff. Abeer recalled in the heat of the moment that she needed to tell him the good news, but it was neither the correct time, nor their required state of consciousness for the news to be out of her system.

Zaroon rubbed his cheek across the softness of her belly. He felt powerful. Abeer was his; all his for the taking. She loved him, wanted him as much as he loved her. She trusted him and her trust always made him feel invincible."So soft!" His tongue dipped into her belly button and swirled around it. "Zaroon!" Abeer lips parted as she moaned his name and her head rolled back on the pillow and her hands reached above her and held onto the bed upright.

She made such lovely noise and Zaroon wanted to hear her scream out his name in ecstasy, he so loved it. He lifted his head and glanced at her face. She had her bottom lip between her teeth and she watched him from beneath lowered eyelid, holding on to the bed's headboard upright. He moved over her, she stared up at him, her face flushed. "Are you okay?" he asked, forcing his body to wait. At her nod, he smiled and dipped his head, planted a sweet kiss on her lips. He finally joined their bodies in one swift motion and she wrapped her legs around his waist and her hands went around his neck. Their bodies moved as one until a mutual release rocked them into the most intense pleasure and they reached stars together.

Considering he was too heavy for her, he rolled off to her side, dragging the edge of a discarded comforter up over their shoulders that settled against their skin like a warm cocoon. With his arm around her bare waist, he embraced her, holding her tight against him, as he spooned his body behind hers and nuzzled the back of her neck. Abeer pressed herself against his touch, needing his warmth, his strength skin to skin. Once her breathing had returned to normal she said, "Zaroon?"

"Hmmm?"

"Thank you aaj mere liye itna kuch karne ke liye." She rolled over to face him and their eyes met. They looked at each other, neither one saying a word, and then she began kissing every part of his face softly. He closed his eyes and caressed his waist as she kissed him taking her time. He moaned as bolts of pleasure coursed through him at the sweet,liquid feel of her soft lips against his skin. He was precious to her and she wanted him to feel so, therefore she kissed his eyes, nose, lips; his entire face , and then lay down in the pillow.

Zaroon opened his eyes and smiled. He kissed her forehead, gently placed his arm behind her neck. "Abeer meri jaan, jo kuch bhi tum hamare liye karti ho uske saamne to wo kuch bhi nahi jo maine kiya. I love you so much." He whispered, his breath hot against her ear.

"Not more than I love you Zaroon." She spoke softly and showered him with her most adorable smile. 

Smiling into her eyes, he leaned down to kiss her lips, but she stopped him by grabbing his hand and placed it against her bare stomach. "Kuch mehsoos hua?" She asked as she was still smiling. "Kya?" He spoke, unaware of the happiness that was about to engulf him in its warmth. 

Abeer's smile grew wider, her eyes brightened and her cheeks reddened before she said in a softened tone "Abhi jab chand dino me ye kicking start karega na tab hoga."

"Kick?" and it was beginning to dawn on him. He glanced down at his hand at where it connected to the life inside of her,and nearly jumped off the bed, shouting, "Sach?"

                                         The End

I could have done better, as there's always room for improvement. But I hope I haven't disappointed you atleast Shanaya.
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Stalker's here. πŸ˜Š So you can come here but not in EMA forum can I ask why? 
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Originally posted by: raghavkalpi

Stalker's here. πŸ˜Š So you can come here but not in EMA forum can I ask why? 

Long story πŸ˜›
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Is it? No problem at all because I have all the time in the world. πŸ˜‰ I don't know the characters but for my love to your writing I'll read this ts. 
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Res! 
*Cuz I'm in need of serious wet tissues and cold water right now though its sticky hot! Andd, you need to put up a 18+ warnings cuz I don't want you to get raided by Sanskaaris!* πŸ€ͺπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


*also, I'm rereading it again! Will put up my views tasalli se!* πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Just so you know, I love you! πŸ€—

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Unres. πŸ˜ƒ
So first of all, a biggest hug! I mean, I requested you to write a TS but didn't know that you would write up so damn well and let me mention, I'm already a fan of your vocabulary and writing! β­οΈ
It just heightens the pleasure of reading.
Take a bow for that! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

And I Agree that you're lazy, but whose complaining when I get to read this amazingness? πŸ˜ƒ I dunno how to start but still I'm gonna cuz you deserve it Rishu.


The whole ambiance and the feel of it was so so familiar and this is what I loved the most. I mean very few of them can write something on someone's work and that I've found in only two of you that's Nandini aka pcnsb and you. *Hugs*
You kept my babies and their feelings, feels intact! You kept my Abeer intact! β­οΈ
She's a female character entirely created by me and is very close to my heart so I quite don't allow everyone to write on her! ❀️
But I trusted you with this and you wrote as she is! Nowhere I felt that I hadn't written this, felt like how I would've written her.
Her Shyness, Her Sweetness, Her Beauty, Her Innocence and Her Simplicity is something very close to my heart and you won me over! ❀️

Their whole Mills and Boons love was beautifully portrayed and written by you!
Zaroon's eagerness to wish her birthday, his passionate love for her was dayyum.

I loved how he just wanted to have her in his arms, yet let her sleep cuz she was tired. Goals!
And how can I forget Huma? I Loved how you potrayed their daughter.
Their Creation is so so beautiful, that I feel like taking her in my arms and playing with her lifelong.
She's such a copy of Abeer in her innocence and beauty yet she's mischiviously Papa Ki Beti..!! Like Me! ❀️

I thoroughly love their bond. Their laughter's, their moments during baking cake or that toothache! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† She's such a drama queen and I loved how Abeer was panicked but Zaroon wasn't. πŸ˜†
Such an adorable father daughter duo.❀️
The scene where Abeer felt nauseating symptoms and knew what it was, was beautifully penned out. I loved that shy sweet smile she had on her face, and that smiling through tears, exactly how I would've written! 

Zaroon Raza's Teasing! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I love that ghoor kyun rahe ho? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
The birthday celebrations were so beautiful, I loved that card and that handwritten note by Zaroon was so so so beautiful.. I spcly love that tumhara aur sirf aur sirf tumhara Zaroon!

Abeer's thoughts were again, beautifully penned by you! πŸ‘β­οΈ "Meri Rooh Ka Ek Ek Katra Aapke Aage Bicha Hai.."
Dayyum, is there anything pure than this?
Zaroon's gift was damningly sexy and foxy! I mean he intentionally gave her this so that he could use it to his advantage afterwards! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Huma's gift was so thoughtful and beautiful. ❀️ The best gift a mother could get from her offspring is nothing else than some love and appreciation for all that she does.
Did I just mention that I love those ZaBeer eyelocks.. Such Khaalis, Unspoken Love! ❀️
Huma is a jalebi with all those spelling mistakes, Commado and Jamandin. πŸ˜†β€οΈ

Special Mention to Zaroon's shirtless self which had me drooling! ☺️ Ah, those silky wet hairs, that water droplets laden hot body! *Erotic Thoughts!* 
Loved his cool casual avatar. ❀️

Their flirting and SRK was damn cute. β€οΈπŸ˜†
And do I need to mention something after that? *wipes myself!*
So Freaking Hot! ☺️ I mean I was blushing staring at my screen like mad!

Their Kisses, Their Undressing, Their Lovemaking though was hot but as beautiful as it should be between a man and wife!  
Like I've always said and will keep saying this to everyone that Rishu has an classy way of writing an erotica! πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈ without giving you an eww feeling. :*


Every Single Detail was beautiful that I ended up reading it again and again still couldn't get enough and trust me, the ending is perfect. ❀️
I even asked Nandini whose in touch with me on WhatsApp these days to read it, and she did. The morning after there was a message from her that, "Gadar Machaa Diya Bandi Ne!" with a fire emoticon. ❀️ Requesting me to make you write more.


Thank You Again, Billion Times! *Hugs*
Keep Writing.

PS - Check your PM and Scraps! πŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Res! 

*Cuz I'm in need of serious wet tissues and cold water right now though its sticky hot! Andd, you need to put up a 18+ warnings cuz I don't want you to get raided by Sanskaaris!* πŸ€ͺπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


*also, I'm rereading it again! Will put up my views tasalli se!* πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Just so you know, I love you! πŸ€—

Gee, I know. I was seriously thinking about adding mature content warning πŸ˜†but then I thought Shanaya ke siva pdhna kisne hai.πŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: raghavkalpi

Is it? No problem at all because I have all the time in the world. πŸ˜‰ I don't know the characters but for my love to your writing I'll read this ts. 

Aww I love you babe! And thnx πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Res! 

*Cuz I'm in need of serious wet tissues and cold water right now though its sticky hot! Andd, you need to put up a 18+ warnings cuz I don't want you to get raided by Sanskaaris!* πŸ€ͺπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


*also, I'm rereading it again! Will put up my views tasalli se!* πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Just so you know, I love you! πŸ€—

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Unres. πŸ˜ƒ
So first of all, a biggest hug! I mean, I requested you to write a TS but didn't know that you would write up so damn well and let me mention, I'm already a fan of your vocabulary and writing! β­οΈ
It just heightens the pleasure of reading.
Take a bow for that! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Shanaya Shanaya πŸ€— Thank yu so much!! πŸ˜ƒ this TS has been written especially for you or It would be better to say only for you and I'm so glad that it came up to your expectation. The outline you provided me with helped a lot. And trust me I'm not just saying it, I really mean it. 

And I Agree that you're lazy, but whose complaining when I get to read this amazingness? πŸ˜ƒ I dunno how to start but still I'm gonna cuz you deserve it Rishu. fir bhi ek danda to laga hi do πŸ˜†


The whole ambiance and the feel of it was so so familiar and this is what I loved the most. I mean very few of them can write something on someone's work and that I've found in only two of you that's Nandini aka pcnsb and you. *Hugs*  Aww! yes I've read Nandini's work and I must say kya likhti hai!! πŸ‘You know I was actually surprised when I got your first pm request regarding the TS, wondering mai to satyanaas kar dugi ZaBeer ka.  I don't know why but I find my writing very clumsy and plain, I know I'm not a professional writer lekin likho to acha likho warna gabbar thode na khada hai bandook tankar ki likh basanti likh. πŸ˜›
You kept my babies and their feelings, feels intact! You kept my Abeer intact! β­οΈ Abeer is a darling!! β€οΈ
She's a female character entirely created by me and is very close to my heart so I quite don't allow everyone to write on her! β€οΈ 
But I trusted you with this and you wrote as she is! Nowhere I felt that I hadn't written this, felt like how I would've written her. 
Her Shyness, Her Sweetness, Her Beauty, Her Innocence and Her Simplicity is something very close to my heart and you won me over! β€οΈ yes. exactly all these traits are the reason behind my love for her! You've portrayed her so very wonderfully in your ff!! Otherwise I wasn't quite sure if I would like her in place of Kashaf, but I really did.

Their whole Mills and Boons love was beautifully portrayed and written by you!
Zaroon's eagerness to wish her birthday, his passionate love for her was dayyum. 

I loved how he just wanted to have her in his arms, yet let her sleep cuz she was tired. Goals! 
And how can I forget Huma? I Loved how you potrayed their daughter.  
l knew you would love her.πŸ˜ƒ Waise Zaroon, Abeer ki beti asi hi hni chaiye.❀️

Their Creation is so so beautiful, that I feel like taking her in my arms and playing with her lifelong.
She's such a copy of Abeer in her innocence and beauty yet she's mischiviously Papa Ki Beti..!! Like Me! β€οΈ

I thoroughly love their bond. Their laughter's, their moments during baking cake or that toothache! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† She's such a drama queen and I loved how Abeer was panicked but Zaroon wasn't. πŸ˜†
Such an adorable father daughter duo.❀️believe me more than Zabber's, I enjoyed thinking up, then put down Zaroon and Huma's moments together. I don't know why but there's something desirable about men love and  take care of their children especially daughters.
The scene where Abeer felt nauseating symptoms and knew what it was, was beautifully penned out. I loved that shy sweet smile she had on her face, and that smiling through tears, exactly how I would've written! Naaa.!! You would've written much better, for nobody can write on them as beautiful as you do!! πŸ‘

Zaroon Raza's Teasing! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†  
I love that ghoor kyun rahe ho? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
The birthday celebrations were so beautiful, I loved that card and that handwritten note by Zaroon was so so so beautiful..  I spcly love that tumhara aur sirf aur sirf tumhara Zaroon! Abeer dhakke dekar bhi nikalegi naa tab bhi Zaroon usko nahi chodne wala!!πŸ˜† thats how deep is his love for his wife. 

Abeer's thoughts were again, beautifully penned by you! πŸ‘β­οΈ "Meri Rooh Ka Ek Ek Katra Aapke Aage Bicha Hai.."  Ah, happy to know that you liked that! bole to pure dil se likha tha πŸ˜ƒwo
Dayyum, is there anything pure than this?  
Zaroon's gift was damningly sexy and foxy! I mean he intentionally gave her this so that he could use it to his advantage afterwards! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ Zaroon miya bht zalim hai!! πŸ˜†
Huma's gift was so thoughtful and beautiful. β€οΈ The best gift a mother could get from her offspring is nothing else than some love and appreciation for all that she does. I second you!
Did I just mention that I love those ZaBeer eyelocks..  Such Khaalis, Unspoken Love! β€οΈ
Huma is a jalebi with all those spelling mistakes, Commado and Jamandin. πŸ˜†β€οΈ

Special Mention to Zaroon's shirtless self which had me drooling! β˜ΊοΈ Ah, those silky wet hairs, that water droplets laden hot body! *Erotic Thoughts!* 
Loved his cool casual avatar. β€οΈ I actually thought of your possible reactions on this scene while I wrote it for I knew how much you love Fawad. It wasn't pre planned but I added it later on for you. πŸ˜³ fikar not Zaroon ki body ka to ache se x ray nikalege. πŸ˜†

Their flirting and SRK was damn cute. β€οΈπŸ˜†
And do I need to mention something after that? *wipes myself!*
So Freaking Hot! β˜ΊοΈ I mean I was blushing staring at my screen like mad!

Their Kisses, Their Undressing, Their Lovemaking though was hot but as beautiful as it should be between a man and wife!  
Like I've always said and will keep saying this to everyone that Rishu has an classy way of writing an erotica! πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈ without giving you an eww feeling. :* What do I say now? πŸ˜³ I'm blushing, not out of embarrassment but to the fact that you wrote exactly what I wanted to read. 


Every Single Detail was beautiful that I ended up reading it again and again still couldn't get enough and trust me, the ending is perfect. β€οΈ we are even then as I'm rereading this comment again and again. πŸ€ͺ
I even asked Nandini whose in touch with me on WhatsApp these days to read it, and she did. The morning after there was a message from her that, "Gadar Machaa Diya Bandi Ne!" with a fire emoticon. β€οΈ Requesting me to make you write more. hehehe πŸ€—  Please convey my love and thanks to her! it means a lot yaar! 


Thank You Again, Billion Times! *Hugs*
Keep Writing.

PS - Check your PM and Scraps! πŸ˜‰


Can't thank you enough dear. You made me feel good about myself as well as my writing. πŸ˜³
Edited by Sexy-KamlaBai - 7 years ago