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1Originally posted by: raghavkalpi
Stalker's here. π So you can come here but not in EMA forum can I ask why?
Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x
Res!
*Cuz I'm in need of serious wet tissues and cold water right now though its sticky hot! Andd, you need to put up a 18+ warnings cuz I don't want you to get raided by Sanskaaris!* π€ͺππ*also, I'm rereading it again! Will put up my views tasalli se!* πππJust so you know, I love you! π€
Originally posted by: raghavkalpi
Is it? No problem at all because I have all the time in the world. π I don't know the characters but for my love to your writing I'll read this ts.
Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x
Res!
*Cuz I'm in need of serious wet tissues and cold water right now though its sticky hot! Andd, you need to put up a 18+ warnings cuz I don't want you to get raided by Sanskaaris!* π€ͺππ*also, I'm rereading it again! Will put up my views tasalli se!* πππJust so you know, I love you! π€-------------------------Unres. πSo first of all, a biggest hug! I mean, I requested you to write a TS but didn't know that you would write up so damn well and let me mention, I'm already a fan of your vocabulary and writing! βοΈIt just heightens the pleasure of reading.Take a bow for that! πππ Shanaya Shanaya π€ Thank yu so much!! π this TS has been written especially for you or It would be better to say only for you and I'm so glad that it came up to your expectation. The outline you provided me with helped a lot. And trust me I'm not just saying it, I really mean it.And I Agree that you're lazy, but whose complaining when I get to read this amazingness? π I dunno how to start but still I'm gonna cuz you deserve it Rishu. fir bhi ek danda to laga hi do πThe whole ambiance and the feel of it was so so familiar and this is what I loved the most. I mean very few of them can write something on someone's work and that I've found in only two of you that's Nandini aka pcnsb and you. *Hugs* Aww! yes I've read Nandini's work and I must say kya likhti hai!! πYou know I was actually surprised when I got your first pm request regarding the TS, wondering mai to satyanaas kar dugi ZaBeer ka. I don't know why but I find my writing very clumsy and plain, I know I'm not a professional writer lekin likho to acha likho warna gabbar thode na khada hai bandook tankar ki likh basanti likh. πYou kept my babies and their feelings, feels intact! You kept my Abeer intact! βοΈ Abeer is a darling!! β€οΈShe's a female character entirely created by me and is very close to my heart so I quite don't allow everyone to write on her! β€οΈBut I trusted you with this and you wrote as she is! Nowhere I felt that I hadn't written this, felt like how I would've written her.Her Shyness, Her Sweetness, Her Beauty, Her Innocence and Her Simplicity is something very close to my heart and you won me over! β€οΈ yes. exactly all these traits are the reason behind my love for her! You've portrayed her so very wonderfully in your ff!! Otherwise I wasn't quite sure if I would like her in place of Kashaf, but I really did.Their whole Mills and Boons love was beautifully portrayed and written by you!Zaroon's eagerness to wish her birthday, his passionate love for her was dayyum.I loved how he just wanted to have her in his arms, yet let her sleep cuz she was tired. Goals!And how can I forget Huma? I Loved how you potrayed their daughter.l knew you would love her.π Waise Zaroon, Abeer ki beti asi hi hni chaiye.β€οΈTheir Creation is so so beautiful, that I feel like taking her in my arms and playing with her lifelong.She's such a copy of Abeer in her innocence and beauty yet she's mischiviously Papa Ki Beti..!! Like Me! β€οΈI thoroughly love their bond. Their laughter's, their moments during baking cake or that toothache! ππ She's such a drama queen and I loved how Abeer was panicked but Zaroon wasn't. πSuch an adorable father daughter duo.β€οΈbelieve me more than Zabber's, I enjoyed thinking up, then put down Zaroon and Huma's moments together. I don't know why but there's something desirable about men love and take care of their children especially daughters.The scene where Abeer felt nauseating symptoms and knew what it was, was beautifully penned out. I loved that shy sweet smile she had on her face, and that smiling through tears, exactly how I would've written! Naaa.!! You would've written much better, for nobody can write on them as beautiful as you do!! πZaroon Raza's Teasing! πππI love that ghoor kyun rahe ho? ππThe birthday celebrations were so beautiful, I loved that card and that handwritten note by Zaroon was so so so beautiful.. I spcly love that tumhara aur sirf aur sirf tumhara Zaroon! Abeer dhakke dekar bhi nikalegi naa tab bhi Zaroon usko nahi chodne wala!!π thats how deep is his love for his wife.Abeer's thoughts were again, beautifully penned by you! πβοΈ "Meri Rooh Ka Ek Ek Katra Aapke Aage Bicha Hai.." Ah, happy to know that you liked that! bole to pure dil se likha tha πwo.Dayyum, is there anything pure than this?Zaroon's gift was damningly sexy and foxy! I mean he intentionally gave her this so that he could use it to his advantage afterwards! ππ Zaroon miya bht zalim hai!! πHuma's gift was so thoughtful and beautiful. β€οΈ The best gift a mother could get from her offspring is nothing else than some love and appreciation for all that she does. I second you!Did I just mention that I love those ZaBeer eyelocks.. Such Khaalis, Unspoken Love! β€οΈHuma is a jalebi with all those spelling mistakes, Commado and Jamandin. πβ€οΈSpecial Mention to Zaroon's shirtless self which had me drooling! βΊοΈ Ah, those silky wet hairs, that water droplets laden hot body! *Erotic Thoughts!*Loved his cool casual avatar. β€οΈ I actually thought of your possible reactions on this scene while I wrote it for I knew how much you love Fawad. It wasn't pre planned but I added it later on for you. π³ fikar not Zaroon ki body ka to ache se x ray nikalege. πTheir flirting and SRK was damn cute. β€οΈπAnd do I need to mention something after that? *wipes myself!*So Freaking Hot! βΊοΈ I mean I was blushing staring at my screen like mad!Their Kisses, Their Undressing, Their Lovemaking though was hot but as beautiful as it should be between a man and wife!Like I've always said and will keep saying this to everyone that Rishu has an classy way of writing an erotica! ππβοΈ without giving you an eww feeling. :* What do I say now? π³ I'm blushing, not out of embarrassment but to the fact that you wrote exactly what I wanted to read.Every Single Detail was beautiful that I ended up reading it again and again still couldn't get enough and trust me, the ending is perfect. β€οΈ we are even then as I'm rereading this comment again and again. π€ͺI even asked Nandini whose in touch with me on WhatsApp these days to read it, and she did. The morning after there was a message from her that, "Gadar Machaa Diya Bandi Ne!" with a fire emoticon. β€οΈ Requesting me to make you write more. hehehe π€ Please convey my love and thanks to her! it means a lot yaar!Thank You Again, Billion Times! *Hugs*Keep Writing.PS - Check your PM and Scraps! π
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