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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786




lol I didn't know coz meine harry Potter dekhi h but Hindi me 🤣
and mate ka meaning I know!! I wanted to know why u use that?
coz India me and usually in my frnds .. hum masti masti me babaji n maate bolte hain ekdusre ko!!
like "babaji tussi great ho!" or "tere charan jahan h 'mate' " 🤣
so I wanted to ye wo wala mate to nai h 🤣


OOOH! You need to see it in English. Its sounds much better. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 You and your friends really have ways of using MATE.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

ress for chap 11

unres

Chapter k title se lagta h koi dance sequence hoga 😃
But I know pikachu Ki titles/precap ko seriously nai lete 😆
isliye ye pakka kuch aur hi niklega 🤔
Pungi 🤣
Kabir ka net over 🤣
Nisha laughed n me too 🤣
The way he said next line shoo cute
Nisha ko b cute laga 😳
Nisha baat se palti nai isbar!!
Can't deny the truth!! That is our kabir ishhh shoo cutee 😳
Kabir told her password!!
Meri sis mujhe nai batati kabi kabi 😲
How easily he told it!!
That explanation on trust ❤️😆
Papa Naam jallad baap 🤣
But father-son bond is
They both love each other 😊
LoVE 🤣
kabir said it 2nd time to her 🤣
Tire punctuated 😲
I thought uncle ne jaan bhuj k nai bheji hogi!! 😆
15 minutes se kabir ka 15 minutes yaad aya meko🤣
Badla 😈 🤣
Hihihi nisha said that!! Not actual one but she said stupid devar!! 🤣
Ek baar bolde that song "Didi tera devar deewana wala" plzz 😃
I wish sangeet function me ye ho jaye😉
U never been Here in Mumbai kya pikachu?
Sea shore k pas bench ?? The konsa wala beach h?🤣
Mujhe b Jana h yahan! 😃
Juhu me to I never seen it!! 😲
Nisha don't have girlfriends !! 🤣 🤣
But inko lene to sukku ane wala tha na then driver kyu aya? 🤔
Aww kabir hates her but still cares so much 😳
Unka chhup chhup k smile karna 😳
Loved it totally!! ❤️
Waiting for next now 😃


Ok! I will try and add Some didi tera devar dewana sequence but in MY WAY! i hope you know what i mean. And yup i have never been to Mumbai. First of all i thought that let it be some imaginary place. I mean kai log isse out of India bhi imagine kar sakte hain, though not possible. Aur ye mera Imaginar Mumbai Hai. 😉 Main ismein skyscrapers bhi laa skati hoon.😆 Isiliye meri stories mein geographically nahi sochna chahiye😉. Suku ko Kirti ne rokk diya because he is that possessive brotehr who would shout at Kabir for no reason. I did not add that line but theek hai. Chalta hai! And Nisha and Kabir hate each other way too much. Too much wala too much. like Chandra Nandini. Uske promos mein iss FF ke Nibir ko imagine karlo. Though it would look funny but still isse accha example nahi mila. Kabir ne uski care kyun ki iska reason aane wale parts mein pata chal jayega. 😉

Will be updating in a few moments.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

awweeeieee kabirrr.,...love u ...welll awesome update pikachu


Thanks mate. Glad you like it. Will be updating in a few moments. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Awesome update continue soon


Thanks Poornima! Will be updating in a few moments. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

loved it😃

i love the nibir fights in this story...so cute😆
so kabir trusts nisha...and also cares for her..aww😳
really looking forward for further updates...
i knw abhi abhi update ki hai..take ur time😊

and thanx for the pm.😃..baaki ke pms ke liye take ur time...actually meri paas kuch zyaada hi time hai so main hi dhundhne ki koshish karti hu...😆



Thanks Anju! Glad you are liking it. Trust ka reason toh bata chuki hoon but caring ka bahut jald pata lag jayega. 😉 Aur woh wale way mein nahi!😆 Will be updating soon.

and if you are a Swasan Fan tell me. I will tell you the story name you can find it. And i have also made a Vm on Nibir. you can search it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

and btw i'll call u pika...its more cute😳😆

pika pika🤣


Wow! New name! Love it! U cna Surely call me that. No Prob! And it actually sounds cute. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha0606

lovely update dear👏


Thanks Niha! Glad u liked it. Bas itni bhi taaliyan mat bajao!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

res for part 10

unres part 10

Part 10
Sukku Ki excitement 🤣
Nibir ka sync 🤣
Equal votes so they ask waiter 😲
Oh God 🤣
They have to do entertainment work together 😆 BRIDE AND GROOM'S ORDER 😈
Nisha k monologues 🤣
LOL all works given to nisha and kabir r same 🤣
So have to work together for everything!!
Sukku ne kirti n karthik ko bhaga diya n nibir n ayesha supported him!
For wedding couple! Again nibir ko sathme kaam karna 🤣
Kabir took advantage ab nisha ko mehnga padega coz sukku ko majboori me kabir ka sath dena hoga ab 🤣
Nibir ko ghar b wapas sathme ana oh God 🤣
Ye sukku Ki new frnd ne to nibir ki aur band Baja Di 🤣
Raat akeli?? Precap 🤔
I doubt isbar b Jo lagra wo nai hoga 😛
Going to read the chap now 😆


Now the wicked Kabir will come up and the possessive brother would have to suffer. 😈

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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter-12 (a)

Mata Aur Bhai Ka Prakop


Nisha's HOUSE

Su- (came running to her in anger) Pagal hai kyat u? Itni raat ko kya night walk ki chadi thi? Are you really insane? How could you even trust that Kabir?

Nisha was about to say something when Laxmi came to her.

La- Nisha, Suku bilkul theek keh raha hai. Pagal hai tu? I know Kabir would never hurt anyone but it is late night, I am not saying that he is wrong but this world is. What if someone wanted to misbehave with you and hit him in such a way that he cannot help you, then what?

Nisha was looking at Kirti and Ramesh standing at the back and giggling. Nisha understood that they are with her.

Ni- (holds Laxmi by her shoulder) Laxmi, Relax me! everything is fine. (looks at Ramesh. Ramesh makes Laxmi sit on the sofa) And the Awesome son of Laxmi, tu bhi Relax me! (she took him to the sofa) everything was okay. Kabir was me throughout. And when we were returning, Kabir asked the driver to leave me first because he wanted to make sure that I am fine. (smiled) and even if he was injured he would not let anything happen to a girl. (wide smile)

La- Nisha... Tu theek toh hai na?

Ni- Haan Maa! I told you the whole story.

La- Okay! Go and rest in your room. Its late already. After 3 days we are starting with the sagai and other functions. We only have two days to do all the things. And tomorrow in the morning Suku get the cards.

Su- (eyeing Nisha) Okay mom!

Nisha, Suku, Kirti and Ayesha (yes, Ayesha is living with them) went upstairs. Ramesh and Laxmi went away.

IN Kirti's ROOM (Their ADDA)

Su- (closes the door) What made you believe in that guy, Kabir so much Nisha?

Ki- Hey! You are talking about my devar!

Su- To hell with your Devar! He was trying to flirt with Nisha from the very first day.

Ki- He is like this only. He loves to have fun and enjoy life to the fullest. Nothing else!

Ni- And Suku I do not trust him but I would not like to roam about in the night alone on the streets of Mumbai at 12. Though it is not that unsafe but still I do not want to be the center of attraction for the variety of crimes. And he was there with me just because we could not find a cab. Moreover the battery of my mobile was empty so I took his mobile and first we made a call to his dad. Uncle told that he would send a driver but after 15 minutes we came to know that the tire of that car got punctured and the balance of Kabir's mobile was also almost gone but somehow we managed to talk to you and inform you. And when the car came he said that first the driver should take me to the house then he should be taken to his.

Su- (annoyed and cuts her in between) What??? Why did he want you to be dropped first? Oh! I get it! Might be he is indulged in some kind of smuggling business. That is the reason. Or might be something even worse if you know what I mean.

Suku was about to speak some more non-sense when Kirti came up and slapped him. Nisha, Suku and Ayesha were shocked. No, she was not angry but she thought that it was the only way to calm him down.

Ki- (calm voice) Son Of Laxmi, relax me! (made him sit) Let Nishu explain the whole thing first then give your expert comments. (looked at Nisha and gestured her to continue)

Ni- Kabir asked the driver to take me home first because he thought that it is not safe for me to get back alone. No other reason!

Su- (doubtful) Really? Because I cannot expect such sensible things from that idiot! (Kirti frowned)

Ni- even I can't Suku. Pehli baar uss gadhe ka common sense kaam kara hai. He is such a dumb person.

Su- I know. (gave a hi 5 to Nisha)

Kirti acted as if she was angry.

Ki- He is my devar. (annoyed)

Su and Ni- he is a moron!

Ki- He is the cutest guy I have ever met.

Su & Ni- He is the most idiotic guy we have ever met. (gave a hi 5 to each other)

Ki- You do this always. (stern voice) get out!

Ni- What did you just say?

Su- I thought that you said get out instead of Thankyou for making you realize the truth of your so-called CUTE devar.

Ki- (annoyed) I said get out only! Get lost!

Nisha and Suku knew that it was time for them to run away and so they ran out. Ayesha was also walking out when Kirti called her.

Ki- Ayesha!

Ay- (turns) Yes Kirti!

Ki- I will direct you to the guest room.

Ay- (smiled) Okay!

They went to the guest room and then Kirti came back and slept. Here Nisha and Suku were sitting on the bed discussing about something rather someone who is none other than KABIR!!!!!!!!!!

Ni- (irritated) Yr Suku! We have to do something for this guy! I mean he is so irritating. Moreover I have to do all the jobs except for guest arrangements with him. I cannot tolerate him even a second.

Su- I suggest, Let's kill him silently. I will find out a goon. (wicked smile)

No- Mera bas chalta toh kar deti lekin woh manhoos humari behen ke hone wale pati ki Maa ke pati ka chota beta. Warna toh main abhi tak uski funeral par jaane ke liye tayyar ho rahi hoti.

Su- Nishu, it is night time. How can get ready for someone's funeral late night? Kisika funeral raat ko nahi hota hai as much as I know.

Ni- Theek hai! Toh dress choose kar rahi hoti uske funeral ke liye. You know I have 4 white tops so to decided between them.

Su- Tu jeans top pehenti for a funeral?

Ni- Woh idiot isse zyada deserve bhi nahi karta hai.

(Guys, here Nisha is not a typical tomboy. She doesn't like too much of girly stuff but doesn't hate to wear them as well. Like she doesn't like to wear skirts and crop tops in this FF. This is too much girly for her. Kirti is more of a girly stuff but she is still that Sanskari, Agyakari Beti while Nisha is the Dhamakedar beti. Sorry thoda zyada late ho gayi batane mein par meine khud ye abhi discover kiya hai. Pata chal gaya ho toh great genius and nahi toh no need to thank me. Aisi thodi bahut cheezein beech mein likh doongi jo main khud time to time discover karoongi.)

Su- (lays down on the bed) Nisha! Main toh kaam karna jaldi shuru karna chahta hoon. (smiles widely)

Ni- haan! Haan! Tu toh apni wali ke saath time spend karega mast aur main uss gadhe ke saath rahoongi.

Su- (gets up) Waise kaisi lagi tujhe Ayesha? (blushes a bit)

Ni- (teases) Aaye haaye! Abhi se hi sharmana shuru! (Sister-type) Acchi hai! Tere type ki bhi hai. You know cute, mostly mute. Tere saath acchi lagegi. Par usse patana bahut mushkil hoga. Tayyar rehna!

Su- (Wide smile) Ever ready! (went to his room)

Ni- Iski toh nikal padi. Par mera kya hoga kaaliya! (gulped as if in fear)

Saying so Nisha also laid on the bed and thinking about the consequences of tomorrow she slept.


Precap- Mata Aur Bhai Ka Prakop (b)

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


Ok! I will try and add Some didi tera devar dewana sequence but in MY WAY! i hope you know what i mean. And yup i have never been to Mumbai. First of all i thought that let it be some imaginary place. I mean kai log isse out of India bhi imagine kar sakte hain, though not possible. Aur ye mera Imaginar Mumbai Hai. 😉 Main ismein skyscrapers bhi laa skati hoon.😆 Isiliye meri stories mein geographically nahi sochna chahiye😉. Suku ko Kirti ne rokk diya because he is that possessive brotehr who would shout at Kabir for no reason. I did not add that line but theek hai. Chalta hai! And Nisha and Kabir hate each other way too much. Too much wala too much. like Chandra Nandini. Uske promos mein iss FF ke Nibir ko imagine karlo. Though it would look funny but still isse accha example nahi mila. Kabir ne uski care kyun ki iska reason aane wale parts mein pata chal jayega. 😉

Will be updating in a few moments.



It could an imagination wala mumbai only 😆
& sukku to ab kabir pe nai chilla sakta na 😲
U forget kabir ne uska sath dene ki yahi start to rakhi thi 🤣
Chandra nandini 🤣 🤣

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