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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Well well!! How did I miss it? 😆

It was really nice Pb..

But u stopped at the wrong time re..

Wanna see their reactions now...

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Well well!! How did I miss it? 😆
It was really nice Pb..
But u stopped at the wrong time re..
Wanna see their reactions now...

Thanks KP...I guess you were busy with the other KPs kaarnaame😆

Will try thn continue this re...plan nahi thaa..but now will try and write😛

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sweety_10

@sweety_10

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Amazing write up.
I generally read stories very selectively, but this one is just awesome.
The Flow of emotions, I am just imagining the KP and DT in this scene.
Only if cv's show half of what you expressed.

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sweety_10
Amazing write up.
I generally read stories very selectively, but this one is just awesome.
The Flow of emotions, I am just imagining the KP and DT in this scene.
Only if cv's show half of what you expressed.

Thanks a lot😛.

Yes I try and imagine the scene when i write, Esp KP and DT are excellent at scenes such need just raw emotions and very few dialogues..glad that came through in this scene. I just tried to verbalize their eye speak.

Cvs can do a lot with the current track and the reunion ..dunno which way they will go. Hope we get at least few good emotional scenes though.

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Brillian .

I want to read more

Plz update soon

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Awesome Pb d feelings dat changed from shock to happiness to anger it was jst awesome She has seen all those feelings changing in his eyes but didn't want to accept dat she saw love for her in his eyes as she thinks dat he hates her wonderfully written