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Part 4

Next morning, during breakfast Zoya decided to indirectly bring back d topic of Dilshad faking her illness to get AsYa married. Due to dis, she don't have d same respect for her as earlier. In dis way, she can get back at Asad for always using her parents to hurt her.

"Yesterday, my colleague told me abt her distant aunt who lives in village. She told me dat in her home she annoys everyone n forces her regressive opinions on them. Wen anyone wud not listen to her, she wud always fake illness to get her way n wud reveal later she did wat she felt right. Her family was fed up of dat woman. She even got both her sons married to d girls of her choice using her fake illness wen her sons n even those girls were not ready for marriage. One day, she actually had a heart-attack but no came to help her as they thought dat she may be faking her illness like always. Wen her condition worsened, they realized dat she was not faking. She had to be in ICU for a day before she regained consciousness. 4m dat time, dat women stopped faking illness to get her way as she wud always remember how she nearly died wen her family initially thought of faking her illness like always. So d moral of d story is we sud not lie so much dat wen we actually speak d truth no one believes. Its d same like shepherd n wolf story," said Zoya.

After hearing d story, Dilshad's expression changed into as she recalled on how she faked her illness to get Asad n Zoya married. Zoya smirked seeing her expression which Asad noticed. He immediately realized dat Zoya cooked up a fake story to make his mother uneasy. Zoya then lukd at Asad n smirked at him too while he only lukd shocked.

"I forgot to tell everyone dat my childhood friend 4m New York Farhan Qureshi wants to settle in Bhopal. Till d time he arranges a house for himself, I want him to live here. We both r best friends 4m kindergarten I hope no one minds as if Tanveer can live here instead of a hotel Farhan too can live here," said Zoya wid a smile.

Dilshad n Najma smiled while Asad felt a little uneasy at Zoya calling a man to live in their house but brushed off his uneasiness as he is her friend like Tanveer is his friend.

"It's a very nice thing to meet ur friend, Zoya. He can live here as long as u want," said Dilshad wid a smile n asked, "Wen he is cumn so dat we can get a room ready for him?"

"He will come in d evening," replied Zoya wid a smile, "U know wat ammi? Wen we were kids we were inseparable. People wud think dat we wud get married on growing up."

"Really?" asked Dilshad.

"Yes," replied Zoya wid a smile, "Just like u said dat Asad n Tanveer were inseparable in childhood n people thought dat they both wud get married people thought d same for us."

Asad understood dat Zoya purposely told her all dis to get back at his mother using her same words abt him n Tanveer. Zoya snapped her fingers in front of him to bring him out of his thoughts. Zoya knew dat he may have figured out dat she targeted his mother again.

"Asad baby, wat r u thinking?" asked Zoya in a fake sweet voice, "Eat dis chicken dish. Don't worry, dis time I have not put peanuts in it so u won't get allergy attack."

All were shocked to hear Zoya calling Asad as baby while Asad too is shocked wid Zoya calling him as baby in front of others too like she wud call him sumtyms to taunt him. He was also shocked dat she so casually told him dat she did not put peanuts so dat he won't get allergy attack. He recalls insulting Zoya accusing her of trying to hurt him to stop him 4m giving statement against his father wen she did not knew abt his allergy n in fact cuz of her he was saved. In front of others too, he is not spared 4m Zoya's revenge.

"Tanveer, I hope u did not put peanuts in it like last time cuz u were around me n ammi in d kitchen while I was cooking dis dish. Even though, u knew Asad 4m childhood u forgot abt his allergy but Asad did not shouted at u like he did to me," said Asad.

Asad recalled how he did not shouted at Tanveer even though she was at fault but he shouted at Zoya n made her cry. He luks at Zoya who smirks at him.

"No Zoya, I have not put peanuts in it," said Tanveer.

"See Asad baby, its confirmed dat there is no peanut in it. U can eat it," said Zoya.

Hearing Asad baby 4m her is supposed to be romantic but its actually a taunt to him.

"Okay," said Asad n tuk a bite of d dish.

"How is it?" asked Zoya.

"Its very tasty," replied Asad honestly as he really found it tasty.

"Glad dat u found it tasty," said Zoya.

After breakfast, Asad n Zoya went to their respective offices.

At her office cabin, Zoya gives an anonymous call to d police by a private number teln them dat some goons r planning to kidnap a girl near d bus stop.

At d bus stop, Humeira is walking back back to d bus 4m d canteen 4m where she ate something. 2 men come near her. No one cud help her as other passengers were little away 4m her. As they were abt to take her in their car, 2 another men came 4m behind n knocked d men 4m behind wid rods knocking them unconscious. He along wid one more man in mask came near Humeira n tuk her in their car. Humeira tried to shout but one of d men kept a hand on her mouth while other started d car. After d car disappeared 4m there, a man in hood came there. He called someone on his cell.

Scene shifts to Zoya in her office cabin who gets a call 4m Farhan.

"Hello Faru," said Zoya.

"Work is done, Zoe," said d same man who was in d hood.

"Good. Tell ur men to keep her at a safe place," said Zoya.

"Okay Zoe," said Farhan n hung up.

Zoya is smirking after she finished talking to Farhan.

"Razia Siddiqui, u accused me of poisoning ur daughter n insulted me in front of people teln me dat I am shameless just cuz I wear modern clothes. U even slapped me n wud have slapped again if Ayaan did not stopped u. U did not told others dat Tanveer was d real culprit even after knowing d truth. Now, I will use ur daughter against u only. U don't deserve to hav a daughter like Humeira," said Zoya in a determined tone.

Scene shifts to Tanveer who was in d garden waiting for her men to call her but she did not get their call.

"Till now, their call wud have come," said Tanveer.

She got a call 4m Razia.

"Hello," said Tanveer.

"Billo Rani, did u do d work?" asked Razia.

"I did not got call 4m my men," replied Tanveer.

"How come u did not got call till now? R u playing game wid me?" asked Razia.

"No Razia Bi," replied Tanveer.

"U better don't play game wid me otherwise I will not leave u," said Razia n hung up.

"Razia Bi is thinking me wrong but why d call has not came till now?" asked Tanveer.

Just then, she gets a call 4m one of d men.

"Hello," said Tanveer.

"Mam, someone knocked us 4m behind. We became unconscious. Wen we woke up, Humeira was not there," said d man.

"Idiot, u can't do a little work," said Tanveer annoyingly n cuts d call.

"Now wat sud I tell Razia Bi?" thinks Tanveer worriedly.

In d evening, Zoya went in Tanveer's room in servant's quarter. Tanveer was sitting on her bed. D room was smaller than other rooms. There were no AC n costly furniture in d room.

"Hey Tanveer, I hope u r enjoying here in dis servant's quarter," said Zoya coolly.

Tanveer annoyingly got up 4m d bed n faced her.

"I can't believe Asad who always blindly trust me told me to live here," whined Tanveer.

"Get used to it as Asad will not trust u blindly now n even if he does I will not let him. U will be called a rakhael(keep) if u continues to trap another woman's husband," said Zoya.

"How dare u say rakhael to me?" asked Tanveer angrily.

"Cuz dats wat u are, u bloody bitch," replied Zoya angrily.

"Youuu," said Tanveer angrily n raised her hand to slap her.

Zoya caught her hand midway n twisted it behind her back while truning her around making her back face her front. Tanveer tried to free herself but Zoya only tightened her grip.

"U r slapping a woman who is letn u to live in dis house. If u ever try to do dis mistake again then I will throw u out 4m dis house," threatened Zoya n left her hand roughly.

"If u ever try to trap Asad or make plans to get Asad then it will be worse for u," threatened Zoya n left d room leaving Tanveer very shocked.

Scene shifts to Zoya standing outside an empty room. A servant came out.

"Is d room ready?" asked Zoya.

"Yes Mam," replied d servant.

"Okay, u go now," said Zoya.

Asad came to her.

"Zoya, whose room u r talking abt?" asked Asad.

"My Faru I mean Farhan is coming so I am getn his room ready," replied Zoya n asked, "How can u forgot wat I said in d morning to all? R u not happy wid my friend cumn here?"

"Its not like dis," replied Asad.

"U will like him, Asad. He is such a nice n caring guy. Weneva I was upset he wud always try to lighten my mood. He is a fun loving guy but also a hard working guy who managed to bcum a owner of construction companies n chains of hotels," said Zoya wid a smile.

Zoya went 4m there while still smiling.

"Zoya is so happy even before he came. Wonder how much she will be more happy wen he comes. I can't to wait to meet Farhan now," said Asad.

Scene shifts to everyone in d hall. D doorbell rings. A servants opens d door. A handsome guy comes inside. Ziya smiles on seeing him n runs to him

"Faru, I was waiting for u only. U can live here as long as u want. I got ur room ready," said Zoya wid a smile n hugged him.

Farhan hugged her back.

"Thanks for teln me proper directions to come here," said Farhan wid a smile.

"Lets have a ZoHan selfie," said Zoya wid a smile.

"ZoHan?" asked Najma confusingly.

"ZoHan means Zoya+Farhan," replied Zoya wid a smile

"Ohh," said Najma.

Zoya n Farhan clicked a selfie of themselves on their cell.

Asad is jealous seeing her so Zoya so cheerful wid Farhan.

"Asad, he is my childhood friend Farhan. Faru, he is my husband Asad," said Zoya.

"Hi Asad, nice to meet u," said Farhan wid a smile n extending his hand.

"Nice to meet u too, Farhan," said Asad wid a smile n shook his hands wid him.

"Faru, she is ammi, she is Najma n she is Asad's childhood friend Tanveer," said Zoya, "As for her, u already know Zeenat aapi."

"Oh yeah," said Farhan.

Farhan shook hands wid Dilshad n Najma. Wen he was shaking hands wid Tanveer, she lukd at him wid lust while shaking his hands a little longer. Tanveer thought dat since she has no chance wid Asad due to Zoya, she can try her luck on Farhan who is very rich n handsome.

"Nice to meet u, Farhan. I heard a lot abt u 4m Zoya," said Tanveer wid a shy smile.

Farhan noticed her expression which lukd shy to lust along wid shaking his hands for a longer time for someone who met him for d 1st time. He got doubt wid her.

"Nice to meet u too, Tanveer," said Farhan wid a smile.

Dilshad told a servant to bring sumthn for Farhan n them to eat.

After they finished eating, Zoya n Farhan kept talking abt their friendship in schools n colleges. Dilshad, Najma n even Tanveer who was lusting over Farhan since he is also a rich n handsome businessman listened to them while Asad was ignored. So he leaves 4m d hall n sees everything 4m behind d hall wall. Zoya n Farhan were pleased to see his state. Only they both know dat Asad is hiding behind d wall n seeing everything.

"U know at Dilshad aunty? Zoe n me learnt karate 2gthr, dancing 2gthr n even driving 2gthr. We both r best friends 4m 20 years. Many times during our college days some people thought us as a couple but we laughed it off," said Farhan wid a smile.

Asad felt a little jealousy hearing dat but he ignored it. He sadly recalls how Zoya felt ignored wen Tanveer came home n how instead of making Zoya comfortable he enjoyed her jealousy. Now he realized wat Zoya felt dat day. He recalls Zoya teln him yesterday dat she will play him like a toy till she finds her true n then leave him. He recalls watching Kya Kehna movie n Zoya teln him d story of d movie before they started watching. He fears thinking dat he may meet d same fate as Rahul in d movie just like Priya chose her childhood friend Ajay over him. Farhan who watched Asad's sad n tensed face feels bad for him. Even though he hates dis guy for hurting his Zoe he felt bad for him which he sud not do. Dis guy has to realize how much he has hurt his Zoe. Farhan then notices Tanveer lusting over him n whispers abt it to Zoya who too notices dat.

Farhan luks at Tanveer n starts singing in a flirty way.

Yeh chaand sa roshan chehra
Zulfon ka rang sunehara
Yeh jheel si neeli aankhein
Koi raaz hai inmein gehra
Tareef karoon kya uski jisne tumhein banaya

"I think he is interested in me," thinks Tanveer n blushes.

She gives some lusty stares at him making him cringe,

"Auraton Ki Ranjeet aur Shakti Kapoor," said Farhan shockingly in his mind.

"Zoe, such a beautiful girl don't suit to live in servant's quarter. Also, she is ur husband's best friend," said Farhan while signaling at Zoya to play wid him.

"U r right, Faru. I think I was too rude wid her. Tanveer, u can live back in ur previous room. I am sorry, Tanveer for being mean to u," said Zoya wid a fake apology.

"Its okay, Zoya. It was my fault only. Thanks Farhan n Zoya," said Tanveer.

"U welcome Tanveer," said ZoHan 2gthr.

Farhan n Zoya smirks at each other while lukn at Tanveer. Asad was confused on how can Zoya let Tanveer go back to her previous room. He noticed dat she listened to Farhan agreeing wid him. He recalled how he wud listen to Tanveer on wateva she wud say.

"Faru, I will give a tour of d entire house," said Zoya wid a smile.

"It will be great," said Farhan wid a smile.

Zoya n Farhan got up. Zoya started showing Farhan around. Asad cud not take it anymore n went to his room before they cud exit d hall n see him hiding there.

Asad was sitting on his bed lukd upset. He recalled a part of Zoya's rude words to him last night after he confessed his love to her.

"Ur fake confession is of no use as just confessing love is not enough but showing love, respect n trust is also necessary which u never showed to me. I can't love an abusive, judgemental n regressive jerk like u who never uses his brain wen necessary n always jumps to conclusion wen it comes to someone he hates. U r just a toy to me, Asad Ahmed Khan. I will play wid u till I get my true love n then leave u. U sud know wat it feels like to be rejected. I asked u several times whether d engagement n marriage means real to u but u refused as u were only marrying me to please ur family n helping ur mother win d d challenge. U don't anything abt love. 1st learn abt love n then talk abt it. U played me like a toy. Now, its my turn to return d favour."

"I hurt Zoya a lot. She now hates me n thinks my feelings as lust n fake. I will do anything to prove to Zoya dat I truly love her. But she won't believe me as I never trusted her wateva she said n always believed her over Tanveer," said Asad sadly.

Thinking abt Tanveer, he recalls Zoya's doubts on Tanveer many times. He then recalls dat it was a stone-eyed person who exchanged blood n tried to kill Tanveer wid chandelier n how Tanveer is also stone-eyed. He recalls dat d chandelier was falling wen Zoya was under n Tanveer was far away. He recalls live wire in Zoya's bath-tub. He recalls Asad teln during mehndi dat acid-mehndi was meant Tanveer.(I mentioned in d note on d 1st page)

"I thought dat d attacks were for Tanveer but wen d chandelier was falling on Zoya, Tanveer was not around. Also, it was Zoya whose bathtub had live wires. And how can I even think dat acid mehndi was for Tanveer wen it was bride's mehndi bowl," said Asad.

He recalls Zoya teln dat she saw Tanveer talking in d hospital n him not believing her.

"Zoya can't say lie abt dis. If she is saying dat she saw Tanveer talking in d hospital then she may have really seen dat. I did not believed her. I even got angry wid her for not passing shawl to Tanveer forgetting dat Zoya has fear of fire," said Asad.

He recalls Zoya teln him abt some factory papers she saw in Tanveer's room which shows dat her factory is running fine n showing him d fake burning skin n how she was proved wrong wen Tanveer shows him her burned hand. It then clicks his mind dat how her skin did not lukd burnt 4m days but lukd as if it is burnt on d same day wen Zoya was teln Tanveer to show her hand to everyone. He recalled how Tanveer's blood sample was exchanged wid chicken's blood n he again used her parents in insulting her.

"Zoya can't really make stories. I sud have listened to Zoya also. How can I even think dat she exchanged d blood? She is not a 5 year old child to do dat. Why will she bring fake burning skin to prove Tanveer wrong? Now wen I think abt Tanveer's hand, it luks like it was freshly burnt instead of burnt 4m days. I don't know why I feel dat Tanveer is hiding sumthn. She always said new things to me which she hid 4m me earlier. I need to find abt my doubts regarding Tanveer. I think dis will my 1st step 2wards winning back Zoya as I had to go a long way for dat since I hurt her 4m a long time," said Asad.

Precap: #At night, Razia comes in KV garden to talk to Tanveer. Tanveer tells her wat her men told her. Razia gets angry n starts pulling Tanveer's hairs teln her if sumthn happens to Humeira she will not leave her. Tanveer also pulls Razia's hairs n tells her angrily dat it was her plan which unfortunately got backfired on her only. ZoHan r recording d scene while enjoying their fight.

#Farhan cries in his room remembering his parents while Zoya consoles him teln him dat she help him get back everything which belong to him n his parents. He tells her dat he will take revenge on Imraan's parents n Imraan's (still unwed)phuphi Chand family for killing his parents n putting all his parent's property on their name by making his parents sign some papers by deception.

#Asad is shocked to learn 4m a detective dat Tanveer's factory is running fine n Tanveer was seen asking money 4m Imraan otherwise she will reveal his secret to everyone. Sad wonders why Tanveer lied abt d factory n wat is Imraan's secret she is hiding.

#Farhan tells Asad dat he don't deserves to be Zoya's husband. He then taunts him committing a crime by giving dowry to Haseena for Nikhat's happiness n calls him disgusting for thinking dat he can buy Nikhat's happiness wid dowry.


A/N: Precap revealed a Farhan's dark past. Zoya is indirectly getting back at Dilshad too. Its natural for anyone to lose respect on someone who did not seriously cared about your emotions.

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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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awesome loved the jealousy thank you for pm
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Thank u😊
Me too felt bad for them but not much for Asad cuz wat all he did wid Zoya was too bad. Zoya is regretting only for hurting Ayaan not others.



Ayaan part i understand... but Najma still not that matured to understand
the hurt emotions and the extend zoya went through...

Asad getting all went out of his mouth... is like a repeat scene...

accept tanveer getting servant quarters👏

zoya watching movie with asad...😉

sharing the bed..😉

Farhan helping zoya..👏


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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Thank u😊
I did not liked how Zoya was hurt by Asad again n again. I wanted Zoya to get back at Asad but it never happened.
Zoya is collecting evidence but not teln Asad as she wants him to use his own brain instead of simply spoon-feeding him
Asad finally started using his brain as a businessman can't be so dumb like Gul showed him




Okay .. that part fro revenge she is doing her CID work
Asad seems little soft.. in the scenes
why there is no energy in him ... even went thinking of his deeds...



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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Thank u😊
Dat Tanveer flirting plan was on d spot wen they saw her lusting over Farhan😆
Me too felt bad for them but not much for Asad as he hurt for 7-8 n may have kept on hurting her after marriage if Zoya did not stood for herself. She only regrets for hurting Ayaan.
I can't believe Asad was always spoon-fed till d end. He only used his brain wen he exposed Tanveer in d community hall by recording his phone convo wid her while other times he had to be shown proofs but he never used his brains🥱



Tanveer flirting is different... is trap
But that zoya and farhan... did make asad think...

I agree.. if zoya did not stand of her... in a way... asad high chances will not
change..like a brain dead person...

Asad is like ... some with lot of knowledgeable, and experience to confident and went
its comes matter of heart.. they are stupid... went comes to their own life
their and a idiot... (sorry my language)

That is the only think i pity him... not supporting what he did...


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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Thank u😊
I did not liked how Zoya always easily forgave Asad especially wen he dumped her 2nd time for d wedding wid Tanveer or traded her to Ayaan. It was really a wrong message for d girls who actually face such situations.
Zoya sounded like a bitch in d toy dialogue but its also true dat Asad wud have continued to hurt her after marriage while saying fake marriage dialogue. So Zoya is showing him wat a fake marriage actually means.
In d show, Asad hardly did any efforts in d relationship. Its Zoya who did most of d efforts in d relationship apart 4m all d insults, pain n tears. So its time for Asad to do efforts in their relationship.



Agree 100% the show forget it...
(zoya showing full use of fake marriage and asad should know what tanveer would have
done in zoya's place.. this is for judging her) - bad judgement

but you are going to do, is justice.. now you are talking my language..
i want to see the real men in asad...
not the soft one... or the common one .. something different👏 👏


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Nice promo ...

sad but ...

what asad said ... is real man deal... 👏 👏

( The moment you think of another person happiness...
you are far greater then anything... you put that person happiness
first... before yourself and the rest) - good humanity

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Awesome update
Loved reading it
Loved how zoya made dilshad realize her faults
Loving the jealousy track but i am loving how asad is finally realizing his surroundings more
Farhan is making asad realize what all did he ruin in the past
So wished that the serial showed something like this
It actually showed that the character of farhaan was of no use and wasted
They could actually make the character productive this way but alas!
Glad to see asad finally suing his brains and suspecting tanveer
Tanveer and her flirting was difficult to read
How more low can she fall...
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊
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Nice
And the torture continues
Farhan makes his entry
Aww asad how does it feels to rub salt in the wounds
As they say karma is a bitch
Asad it finding the taste of his medicine bitter
But at least he is getting a clearer view on life and his surrounding
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