AsYa Story: Striking Back- Part 11- Page 61- 16th April - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

So glad to read a new story from you
Amazingly written and loved reading it to the core
It was a treat to read how zoya is making asad realise all his wrong deeds
Hopefully, he would soon understand
Loving this side of zoya
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently for the next part
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Thank u😊
We see many stories where Zoya cries a lot due to Asad for many parts
Here for a change, she is not crying but making others cry
I wish Zoya was not shown too much forgiving in d show
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lot of revelations...

for asad...

good there is more... she is going to find out

about tanveer and razia...


But Zoya will not tell Asad anything on her own as she wants him to use his brain n find himself abt all wrong things happening. She don't want to spoon-feed him anymore.
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both brothers on the hot soup...


Zoya is showing d traits of her step-mother😆
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Me too like dis Zoya but Gul will never show such a revengeful heroine
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Part 3

Zoya was talking to someone on phone in d garden.

"Thanks for sending me dat video," said Zoya.

"I will talk to u later, Farhan. My dear husband is cumn," said Zoya sarcastically seeing Asad cumn 4m far.

Zoya keeps her cell in her pocket after talking. Asad comes to her.

"Zoya, why u send me dat video?" asked Asad, "U told me to tell Tanveer to live in servants quarter & I did dat. But now why u r blackmailing me wid dis video?"

"Luks like u r not ashamed of ur act. U apologized to me for dis only wen ur mother told me dat I was innocent not cuz its wrong to hit a girl. U even threatened to kill me, manhandled me n told me dat I don't deserve a mother. Who will marry a guy like dis? But I married u only to hurt u like u hurt me for 7-8 months 4m d time I entered dis house," replied Zoya.

"U really married me to hurt me?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Yes Asad baby," replied Zoya wid a smile, "I married u only to hurt u for always hurting me. U wud have done d same to me after marriage if I did not stand up for myself. U wud have kept on hurting n insulting me like always cuz u married me only for ur ammi na. Now, I will show u how it feels to be in a loveless n hurtful marriage which u planned to put me through."

Asad was abt to leave wen Zoya came in front of him.

"Why r u leaving like dis ha? Dat means wat I said was right na?" asked Zoya.

Asad did not know wat to say.

"Zoya, I am sorry," said Asad, "U r right wat u all said."

"U told me once dat I don't deserve to be anyone's wife n daughter-in-law but its u who don't deserve to be anyone's husband or son-in-law. Don't think I will forgive u like always wid u saying sorry n even wid ur stupid puke worthy black n bitter coffee," said Zoya.

"I got it dat u married me to hurt me for wat all I did to u but why r u rude wid my sister?" asked Asad, "She has done nothing to u. She always liked u."

"Even my parents have done nothing to u but u always used them to hurt me," replied Zoya.

"Zoya," said Asad shockingly.

"But ur sister also did sumthn wrong dat is to not understand my emotions. She too was excited to see us married knowing how a big jerk u r & not thinking for once how I will live wid a jerk like u wen she is herself a woman. By d way, u sud be happy dat I am staying away 4m ur sister dat u wanted 4m so long. U did not liked us hanging out thinking I am spoiling her. U even did not liked me cutting her hair. 2day only, u assured Tanveer dat Najma will not get spoiled due to me. Dats means u still hate my dressing sense n way of living. Ur sister sud hang out wid Tanveer only & I am sure dat u will be very happy if she does dat as Tanveer will teach her how to be more traditional," said Zoya.

"Zoya plz, don't hurt my sister like dis. I can't see her cry. I saw her crying in her room wen I cumn here in d garden," said Asad in a pleading tone.

"U can't see ur sister cry. Wow! But u can make other woman cry. U can't see ur sister cry but who was there to stand for me wen u made me cry for 7-8 months n comfort me? No one. U tuk advantage of a girl being alone widout any support n always hurt her. And now, wen someone of ur own has shed just few tears u r feeling very bad. Wat abt d tears dat u made me shed all these months? Am not I a human who feels pain? Or is it only ur sister who feels pain? I am no more d old Zoya who will only cry due to others but dis Zoya will make others cry. Dis video will always remind ur of wrong n shameful act," said Zoya in a strong tone.

Zoya went inside d house leaving him shocked n ashamed of himself.

At night, Asad was lying on her bed. Zoya came 4m d washroom wearing a t-shirt n capris as her nightie.

"Make place for me. I think I told u dat we will be sleeping on d same bed," said Zoya.

"U married me to hurt me but still u want to sleep wid me," said Asad.

"Sleep wid u in normal way not wat u may be thinking," said Zoya.

"I am not thinking dat," said Asad.

"Good for us," said Zoya wid a smile n lied next to him.

"I know it may be awkward for u but don't worry I will not tell u to share d same blanket," said Zoya amusingly.

Asad just lukd at her. He can't believe dat Zoya has changed so much. He always found faults in her n insulted her no matter wat all she did for him n his family. But now, she only hates him for which he gave her lots of reasons. Now, its his turn to be hurt by her.

"Wat u r lukn at me now? Good night," said Zoya.

"Good night," said Asad.

As they covered themselves wid their blankets, they heard some noise 4m d window. They sat up n saw Ayaan cumn inside 4m d window. Asad n Zoya stared at him in surprise.

"Bhaijaan, Mona, how r both of u?" asked Ayaan excitedly.

"Ayaan, we r fine," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya lukd at Ayaan n thinks, "Sorry Rabert, I will have to insult u now. U have helped me weneva I needed n showed trust in me during ur incomplete engagement dat I can't poison Humeira even though u were my friend for just few days but I will have to be rude to u."

"Wat d hell?" shouted Zoya, "Don't u have any shame of entering a married couple's room like dis dat also at night? Wat if u get married to Humeira 2mrw n some other man enters ur room like dis? Asad does not lives alone in dis room anymore dat u can pop here anytime u want like earlier. Asad & I are married so u need to stop dis n respect our privacy."

Ayaan was shocked at her question. He felt hurt.

"Zoya, why r u reacting like dis?" asked Asad.

"Then how sud I react ha? U preach everyone abt etiquettes n manners but u need to preach them 1st to ur childish n Casanova brother who can't respect a couple's privacy n only runs after girls to flirt wid them. I myself saw him once flirting wid a girl in some park after following her scooty on his bike," replied Zoya.

Ayaan was shocked to see dis attitude of Zoya. He recalled his fight wid Zoya in d park before he was flirting wid a girl. He was controlling his tears which Asad n Zoya noticed.

"Zoya, I am sorry. Dis will not happen again. I forgot dat bhaijaan is married," apologized Ayaan while controlling his tears.

"U better don't forget again," said Zoya.

Asad is helpless to stop Zoya as he realized dat she will hurt him d same way using his family like he hurt her using her dead parents. He too is controlling his tears.

"I think I sud leave," said Ayaan.

"No, u have ur talk n then go. I will leave u both alone," said Zoya n left d room.

"Bhaijaan, wat happened to Mona?" asked Ayaan.

"Ayaan, anyone wud have reacted d same," replied Asad not knowing wat else to say.

"But dis was too much," said Ayaan.

"I know but she will be fine soon," said Asad.

Zoya went in d garden n broke down thinking how she talked rudely wid Ayaan who never hurt her. Yes he was also excited for her wedding wid Asad but unlike Najma n phuphi he does not knows anything abt how Asad always hurt her so he don't deserve dis behaviour.

"I am sorry, Rabert. I have hurt u even though u were always my best friend in Bhopal. But due to Asad, I had to hurt u like dat," said Zoya as tears flowed 4m her eyes.

Just then, Zoya saw Tanveer cumn in d garden & a man in hood cumn to meet her. Zoya hid behind a tree. D man lifted his hood to reveal himself as Imraan. Zoya quickly turns her on video recording in case she gets some information of them.

"Tanveer, take ur 2 crores n don't disturb me anymore," said Imraan.

"U r doing any favour by giving me dis money but u r doing for ur own child which is growing in my belly. If u had not come 2day then I wud have ruined ur alliance wid dat dumb Nikhat. I may need u again so u better don't try to avoid me otherwise I will tell everyone how u have slept wid many girls before n even visits brothels to smoke, drink n sleep wid girls. Then ur so-called respected family will be affected," blackmailed Tanveer.

"Okay," said Imraan n left 4m there.

"I failed in my plan on making Asad sleep wid me on his wedding night wid Zoya n make everyone especially dat dumb Asad believe dat I am pregnant wid his baby but Zoya failed my plan so I have to make use of d real baby's father Imraan," said Tanveer.

Zoya was shocked at wat she saw n heard. Tanveer went inside d house.

"Glad dat I have recorded dis on my cell," said Zoya.

She called someone.

"Farhan, I am sending you a video. I want more details abt it," said Zoya.

Zoya send him d video she has taken just now. She goes back inside d house. She goes back to her room. Ayaan has left 4m d window. Asad was sitting on d bed lukn sad.

"Hey, I am back," said Zoya wid a cheerful, "Lets sleep now as its too late na."

Asad was hurt at her being so insensitive to his feelings. He lied on d bed widout saying a word. Zoya lied next to him. Both slept after some time.

In d morning, Asad got up 1st. He saw Zoya still sleeping. He kept on lukn at her face. He was abt touch her face but stopped wen he recalled her saying to him dat he married her only for his mother not cuz of love. If by chance, she wakes up n she feels him touching her face she will think him wrong. Zoya opened her eyes n saw Asad already awake.

"Good morning," said Zoya.

"Good morning," said Asad.

"I hope u had a nice sleep next to ur wife," taunted Zoya, "Ooops I forgot dat u married me just for ur family so it does not matter to u abt me sleeping next to u."

"I am not going to office 2day," said Asad.

"Great, I am also not going. We will watch a movie 2gthr," said Zoya.

"Fine," said Asad.

"I hope u enjoyed ur sleep widout AC, Tanveer," said Zoya during breakfast.

"Yes," said Tanveer controlling her anger.

Asad did not dared to defend her. Tanveer was disappointed wid Asad's silence.

After breakfast, Asad n Zoya were watching movie Kya Kehna' on Zoya's suggestion in their room. Zoya purposely chose dis movie to watch wid him.

"It's a controversial but a very beautiful story of true love. Since u also watched dis movie earlier, u may know abt dis movie. D story is abt Priya who loves Rahul n they even get intimate. But Rahul who never valued her feelings was only doing timepass wid her like he did wid other girls. Wen Priya gets pregnant, he dumps her n did not agrees to marry her even after she n her family begs him to do so. Priya is heartbroken but fortunately her childhood friend Ajay who always loved Priya supports her. She falls in love wid him. Wen Priya delivers a baby girl, Rahul who realized his mistake apologizes to her n comes to meet her. Both Ajay n Rahul proposes her but Priya who had self-respect choses Ajay over Rahul as she realized dat her true love is Ajay not Rahul," said Zoya.

"Its really a very beautiful story," said Asad.

They start watching d movie. Zoya touches n holds him again n again.

"Zoya, why r u touching me like dis?" asked Asad in an embarrassing voice.

"U r getn uncomfortable ha wen ur own wife is touching u like dis. Didn't u got uncomfortable wen Tanveer wud touch u in d same way?" asked Zoya in a taunting tone.

Asad was shocked at her question. He recalled how Tanveer used to touch him again n again but he wud let her do it blinded wid d belief of her being cultured n traditional. Yesterday too, she touched him n put her hands on his shoulders but he did not reacted to dat.

"Zoya, I need some fresh air. I will be back in some time," said Asad.

"U meant to say dat u can't get fresh air while being wid me. U r not going out of d room till I say. If u don't listen to me then I will send ur slapping video to all," blackmailed Zoya shocking him n continues in a fake sweet voice, "Lets finish watching d movie."

"Why r u suffocating me like dis 4m 2-3 days?" asked Asad.

"U r suffocated by me 4m just 2-3 but wat abt ur mother n sister whom u suffocated 4m so many years not letn them have their own choices on anything?" asked Zoya.

"Wat do u mean?" asked Asad.

"I mean to say dat u suffocate ur family so much dat ur meek n weak sister can't wear clothes of her choice n can't even have haircut of her choice," replied Zoya.

Asad realized wat she meant. He recalls how he always imposes his rules on his mother n sister n tried to do d same wid Zoya but was unsuccessful in doing so.

"Wat r u thinking? Pay attention on d movie not ur empty head," said Zoya rudely.

Asad was hurt by her behaviour but thinks dat wat she is doing in nothing in front of wat all he did wid her. He realized dat Zoya will give hard time to him.

Scene shifts to Ayaan's room. Razia comes in his room.

"Wen r u marrying Humeira?" asked Razia.

"I need time," replied Ayaan.

"If u take too much time then I will send ur burning car video to all," blackmailed Razia.

Ayaan got shocked. Razia left d room.

"Why is dis happening wid me?" asked Ayaan sadly to himself.

In d afternoon, Razia was sitting in her room. She recalled how Ayaan told Humeira he don't love her which hurt her a lot. She decides to teach him a lesson. Razia calls Tanveer n tells her to meet her at some park. Zoya who heard talking to Razia called Farhan n told him follow Tanveer wherever she goes n send their talks to her by video-recording.

Scene shifts to d park.

"Why u called me here?" asked Tanveer.

"Humeira is going to her relative's place but she sud not reach there. D bus will stop in between n everyone will get down to have sumthn. U sud tell ur goons to kidnap Humeira n keep her safe," said Razia as a man in hood was doing video-recording of them.

"Why sud I do dis?" asked Tanveer.

"U have no choice. If u refuse then I will tell Asad dat it was u poisoned d sweets dat Humeira ate to frame Zoya," replied Razia wid an evil smile.

Tanveer was scared. She knows Asad will not blindly believe her like earlier as Zoya will not let him do dat n Asad may throw her out of d house or even in jail if Zoya tells him.

"Okay, I will do it but why u r doing dis?" asked Tanveer.

"So dat Ayaan sud realize dat he did a mistake by teln Humeira dat he don't loves her. I can do anything to get them married. I spiked my daughter's milk wid Ayaan n made it luk like they slept 2gthr. I blackmailed Ayaan using Feroz to reopen Rashid's case to make him marry Humeira. I gave him money to release Rashid in return of marrying Humeira. I even have a video of him accidentally burning Imraan who was in his car to blackmail but dats not enough. I want him to feel guilty for wat he said to Humeira," replied Razia.

"Well, I will let u know 2mrw wen work is done," said Tanveer.

Tanveer n Razia left 4m there. Farhan sends d video to Zoya. Zoya sees d video n is shocked. She can't believe Razia can stoop too low in getn wat she wants.

After dinner, Asad who was walking to n fro in d room. His mother was right dat he sud not delay in confessing his love to Zoya. He has delayed it too much which is only causing more trouble. He decides to confess his love to Zoya 2day thinking she will stop being mean to him n others little did he know dat his confession will only add to her wrath. Zoya enters d room n Asad prepares in his mind on how to confess his love to her.

"Zoya, I want to tell u sumthn," said Asad.

"Shoot," said Zoya.

"Zoya, I love u. D engagement at d airport n our marriage is not fake. I married u cuz I love u. I don't know wen I fell in love wid u. I think I fell in love wid u wen u were being buried in Mangalpur & u almost died. I realized my love but I decided to push u away cuz I feared dat I will bcum like my father n hurt u," said Asad in 1 breath.

Zoya was shocked for a moment n then let out a laugh.

"Zoya, wat r u laughing at?" asked Asad shocked wid her laughing.

"At ur fake confession," replied Zoya still laughing.

"Fake confession," said Asad shockingly.

"Yaa fake confession just like fake engagement n fake marriage," said Zoya in a rude tone, "U r now lying to me wid ur fake confession so dat I stop being mean to u & others & bcums old Zoya who always tolerated ur crap foolishly. Sorry to burst ur bubble. It will not happen. U give me stupid excuse of ur father of pushing me away so dat u don't hurt me like him. Wow! Wat a logic? But u did not realized dat u actually hurt me a lot while pushing me away. Ur father's issue is just a excuse. If d reason was ur father then how regressvie n judgemental behaviour justifies it? How ur suffocating ur mother n sister wid ur regressive views justifies it? U know wat? U actually turned out like ur father. In fact, u have turned worse than him. U surely wud not have loved me but only lusted for me. Dats why u kissed my forehead in Mangalpur after I was removed 4m d mud while I was still unconscious n trapped me into dancing wid u while we were intoxicated due to bhang. If u really loved me even 1% then u wud have never hurt me no matter wat n wud never trust another woman over me. D truth is u only love Tanveer not me otherwise u wud have never compared me wid her n supported her over me. Ur fake confession is of no use as just confessing love is not enough but showing love, respect n trust is also necessary which u never showed to me. I can't love an abusive, judgemental n regressive jerk like u who never uses his brain wen necessary n always jumps to conclusion wen it comes to someone he hates. U r just a toy to me, Asad Ahmed Khan. I will play wid u till I get my true love n then leave u. U sud know wat it feels like to be rejected. I asked u several times whether d engagement n marriage means real to u but u refused as u were only marrying me to please ur family n helping ur mother win d d challenge. U don't anything abt love. 1st learn abt love n then talk abt it. U played me like a toy. Now, its my turn to return d favour."

She goes to d washroom to change into nightie while Asad is hurt wid her not believing him for which she is not at fault. He is also hurt for her teln him dat he is a toy for n she will play wid him till she gets her true love n then will leave him.

In d washroom, Zoya is crying recalling Asad's confession to her n his stupid reasons for always hurting. She wipes her tears as she recalls calling it a fake confession.

"Ur confession is of no use, Asad. I will not let u play wid my feelings again. I regret falling for a jerk like u who don't know d meaning of love," said Zoya.

She changed into her nightie n came out. She saw Asad sleeping n lied next to him. Wen Asad felt dat Zoya is asleep, he lukd at her sleeping form wid tears in his eyes. He was pretending to sleep in front of Zoya. He saw her eyes which were a little swollen n realized dat she may have cried by remembering how he always hurt her.

"I am sorry, Zoya. I wish I cud convince u dat I truly love u," said Asad tearfully.

He cried for sometime n then dozed off.

Precap: #Zoya gives an anonymous call to police teln him dat some goons r planning to kidnap a girl near d bus stop. D police comes n saves Humeira 4m d goons n arrests them while Zoya tells some of her men to kidnap Humeira n keep her in a safe place.

#A handsome guy comes in SM.

"Farhan, I was waiting for u only. U can live here as long as u want. I got ur room ready," said Zoya n hugged him.

They clicked a selfie of themselves

Asad is jealous seeing her so Zoya so cheerful wid Farhan.

"Asad, he is my childhood friend Farhan. Farhan, he is my husband Asad," said Zoya.

Farhan shook hands wid Asad.

#Zoya n Farhan kept talking abt their friendship in schools n colleges. Dilshad, Najma, Zeenat n even Tanveer who was lusting over Farhan since he is also a rich businessman listened to them while Asad was ignored. Asad sadly recalls how Zoya felt ignored wen Tanveer came home n how instead of making Zoya comfortable he enjoyed her jealousy. He recalls watching Kya Kehna movie n Zoya teln him d story of d movie before they started watching. He fears thinking dat he may meet d same fate as Rahul in d movie just like Priya chose her childhood friend Ajay over him. Farhan who watches Asad's sad n tensed face n feels bad for him. Farhan who saw Tanveer lusting over him sings Ye Chaand Sa Roshan Chehra in a flirting way to Tanveer n she blushes thinking he is interested in her. Farhan cringes at her lusty stares n calls her 'Auraton Ki Ranjeet aur Shakti Kapoor' in his mind. Farhan tells Zoya dat such a beautiful girl don't suit to be in servant's quarter. Zoya agrees wid him n tells Tanveer dat she can live back in her previous room n pretend to apologize to her for being mean to her. Tanveer thanks Farhan n Zoya. Farhan n Zoya smirks at each other while lukn at Tanveer.

#Asad decides dat he will do anything to prove to Zoya dat he truly loves her. He recalls Zoya's doubts on Tanveer many times. He then recalls dat it was a stone-eyed person who exchanged blood n tried to kill Tanveer wid chandelier n how Tanveer is also stone-eyed. He recalls dat d chandelier was falling wen Zoya was under n Tanveer was far away. He recalls live wire in Zoya's bath-tub. He recalls Zoya teln dat she saw Tanveer talking in d hospital n him not believing her. He recalls Zoya showing him d fake burning skin n how she was proved wrong wen Tanveer shows him her burned hand. He then thinks how her skin did not lukd burnt 4m days but lukd as if it is burnt on d same day.

A/N: Someone told in this forum that Ravi was also approached for Farhan when his character was planned as Zoya's friend and Nikhat's love interest but he refused when Farhan's character sketch was changed into a negative person. Zoya is not telling anything to Asad regarding the proofs she gathered because she is fed up of spoon-feeding him everything and wants him to use his own brain.

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Amazing loving every bit of it
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Nice
Poor asad is being tortured by his wife
But they say karmq is a bitch
she is also.cllecting evidence of wrong around her
Glad she has farhan
Asad confession didng help him
So asax brains finqlly work in precap
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Amazing loving every bit of it


Thank u😊

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