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Posted: 8 years ago

Mrityunjay first took Tara to his place where Guruji was waiting to see his daughter safe and sound. Seeing her alright, he was relieved.

"Guruji you take care of Tara and I am going to bring back the Prince." Mrityunjay left saying this.



Guruji gave water to Tara to drink and brought some medicines for her and said,

"Take this medicine Tara, it will help in your recovery and quicken the process." Then he took her inside and made her rest.



Mrityunjay was able to discover the Prince at the hideout. The Prince was lying there unconscious. Mrityunjay sprinkled some water on him. As soon as the Prince was conscious, he took his sword which was lying next to him and pointed it towards Mrityunjay. When the Prince recognized it was Mrityunjay, the man who he met in the forest, he lowered his sword and said,

"I am sorry, I thought it is the Vampire."


"It's ok Prince. The Vampire is dead, you are free to return to your people." said Mrityunjay bringing Aditya's horse which he found on his way to this place.


"Thank you Mrityunjay for saving me. You have saved not just me but many lives related to me." said Aditya hugging Mrityunjay.


"That's my duty Prince, as I too had to save myself and prove to her that nothing will happen to her Prince." said Mrityunjay climbing on Maria.


"About whom are you talking Mrityunjay?" Aditya was confused about whom Mrityunjay was talking; he wanted to know the person who asked Mrityunjay to save him as he didn't know anyone who knew Mrityunjay.

"Tara came to me Prince. She is at my place, take her back to palace with you as she is injured." said Mrityunjay setting Maria off at a canter.



Soon Mrityunjay and Aditya were at Mrityunjay's place. Tara came out of the room hearing the noise made by the horses. Seeing the Prince alright, she was relieved.


"The Palace will again sing songs of happiness with the return of the Prince." She said greeting the Prince.


Mrityunjay rushed to her.

"How are you now?" he asked making her sit on the table.


"I am fine Mrityunjay," she said hesitatingly as she noticed both Guruji and Aditya were looking at them.


To divert their attention she said, "Prince, we should leave for the palace. Everyone there is worried for you."


"Oh...yes we should leave." said the Prince.


"Mrityunjay leave Tara outside the forest, from there the Prince will take her to the palace." said Govind and moved inside.


He didn't want Mrityunjay to know that there was a power which forbids his entry in the city, so he ordered Mrityunjay's return from there. Mrityunjay didn't question his Guruji as he knew there is always something important in Guruji's instructions. He carefully made Tara sit on Maria and then mounted her himself.



The Prince came near Mrityunjay and whispered in his ear,

"Now I know the reason behind your smile."

Mrityunjay smiled at this and then they left for the palace. After reaching outside the forest, Mrityunjay made Tara sit on Aditya's horse and bid them farewell. And then he galloped back into the forest.

As soon as Aditya's horse reached near the city, some citizens who were sitting and discussing about the Prince's kidnapping saw him and started celebrating the Prince return by announcing it at the top of their voices.

"It's the Prince... He is back... He is back..."


Soon this news spread in the city like wildfire. It also reached the Palace, and as soon as Meethi heard this news she came out of her chamber. She started walking towards the gates of the palace.

Princess Vasundhara came running to her and said,

"Brother has reached near the palace."


Listening to this, Meethi started running towards the gates of the Palace forgetting that she was the Princess of a Kingdom and the Daughter-in-Law of another. At that moment she was only Meethi, wife of Aditya who had not seen him for days. She was just running towards the gates without paying attention where she was, who was next to her, who was standing there, where she was going.


The only thing she knew was that the Prince had returned and was coming back to the Palace. She bumped into a man as soon as she was at the gates of the Palace. Then she looked at the face of the man, it was Aditya, her Prince.

She hugged him tightly and started crying,

"Never leave me alone...Never...Never." she said blabbering.


The Prince caressed her hair and said,

"Never"

and kissed her forehead and wiped her tears.


By now the whole Palace along with the King, the Queen, Princess Vasundhara and Aradhana gathered there.



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Continued below 😊

Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Seeing the King, Aditya went to meet him. The King hugged him and said,
"Welcome back my son."

Then he went to meet the Queen. The Queen hugged him; tears of happiness were flowing from her eyes.


"Have you forgotten me?"
Princess Vasundhara said seeing Aditya. He hugged his sister.
Life returned back to the city and the Palace.




Suddenly the Queen's attention went on wounded Tara standing in the crowd. She immediately moved to her.
"What happened to you?", she said to Tara checking her wounds.



Aditya came there and said,
"She's the one who with the help of her friend brought your son back. Come Tara, you need medical assistance."

The Queen helped Tara walk into the palace, while Aradhana left for cleaning Princess Meethi's and Prince Aditya's chamber which was currently a big mess.


The royal family and Tara walked inside the Palace and the countrymen left the Palace happily. Aradhana after ordering the servants what they need to do immediately walked directly to Tara who was in the Queen's chamber along with the royal family.




"My King, the healer is here." said a servant.
The healer was immediately taken to Prince Aditya who was resting in another chamber of the palace. The King, the Queen and Princess Vasundhara left with him.



Tara was sitting in the Queen's chamber watching the bloodline trees dancing happily.
"Where could the Queen's first son be? I would like to bring him back to the palace like I brought Prince Aditya."




Tara was thinking this when Aradhana came there and hugged her. She then separated herself from Tara and made an angry face and said,
"Have you ever thought about me? How would I have lived without you?"



Tara hugged her mother and said,
"Nothing can happen to me mother when your blessings and Mrityunjay are with me."



Aradhana was confused. She asked, "Who is this Mrityunjay?"
Tara walked a step back from her mother and thought now was the right time for Aradhana to know about Mrityunjay. She narrated to her mother how she met him in the forest, how he helped her, taught her weapon skills and helped her find and bring Prince Aditya back safely. In short, one can say she said all the important things that happened between her and Mrityunjay, which were safe to say to Aradhana.
Aradhana said "You should have brought him home. I would have loved to know the man who helped you."



"Some other day I would," said Tara hugging her back.



The Queen returned to her chamber with the healer.
"Healer Vashishth, please see Tara wounds as well."



He examined her wounds and applied some medicine.
"She needs to rest for a day or two." And left the chamber.



The Queen hugged Tara and said, "Thank you Tara for bringing the Prince back."



"Queen it's not me, it's Mrityunjay who killed the vampire and freed the Prince." said Tara.



"How is he? Is he fine?" asked the Queen suddenly remembering that he would have also got hurt.



"He is alright Queen." said Tara.
Aradhana was surprised to know that the Queen knew about Mrityunjay and she, the mother of Tara didn't know this.



She asked, "Forgive my mistake my Queen, but would you mind if I ask you something?"


"Ask Aradhana." said the Queen sitting next to Tara.


"How you know about Mrityunjay?" asked Aradhana.

The Queen and Tara looked at each other, Tara was nervous thinking what would happen if Aradhana would come to know the Queen knew it all the time and she didn't.



The Queen said "Tara told me about him when the Prince was kidnapped."
She lied to Aradhana because it would have hurt her as she, the mother of Tara was unaware about it and the Queen knew everything about it.


That night Tara remained at the palace as the royal family requested her to stay there.


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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guruji was so relieved to see Tara safe and it is nice to see him take care of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara's handsome hero saved Prince Aditya and brought him back!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

So Mrityunjay had saved Aditya to prove himself to his love and it was wonderful to see him admit this to Aditya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Tara was so relieved to see Aditya back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was great to see Mrityunjay so concerned for Tara and he forgot about everything else!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I am sure Aditya and Guruji enjoyed watching that!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

So Adi guessed the reason behind Mrityunjay's smile and now he knows who Mrityunjay loves!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone was so happy that their prince is back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Hearing the news, Meethi forgot everything and ran to meet Aditya!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Their meeting scene was sweet and emotional!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

It was wonderful to see Aditya reunite with his family!!!!

Even in the happiness of getting her son back, Nirmala noticed Tara and her wounds!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She is probably the best mother-in-law in all of Wonderland and beyond!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Tara is thinking of the Queen's first son and wants to bring him back like she brought back Aditya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Little does she know who he is and that she would bring him back as well one day!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Aradhana was so worried about Tara but her daughter is brave and strong!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara accidentally took Mrityunjay's name while trying to reassure Aradhana!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Well this was surely a good time to tell Aradhana about him as Mrityunjay had just saved Aditya!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Nirmala ensured that Tara's wounds were checked by personally bringing the Healer to her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She cares for Tara so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Tara told the Queen that Mrityunjay had killed the vampire and told her he is fine!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aradhana is surprised to know the Queen knows about Mrityunjay!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

This would have definitely looked bad but thank God for Nirmala who handled it properly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The chapter was awesome!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb updates!!! πŸ‘ ❀️ πŸ˜›
tara ke handsome hero ne usse aur prince aditya ko bacha liya πŸ‘
thanks for pm πŸ˜ƒ
keep smiling keep writing ❀️ πŸ˜›
Edited by npksk8495 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tara returned to Guruji & he is taking care of her. It's great to see father daughter like this 😊

Mrityunjay saved prince Aditya to prove himself for Tara πŸ‘

He came back with Aditya & immediately goes to Tara 😳

Happy moments for all 😳

Aditya is too smart , he knows the reason of smile πŸ‘

Finally Tara & Aditya come back to palace. Every one is happy& relieved πŸ‘

It was good that everyone taking care of Aditya & Tara

Nirmala is great soul she is ensuring that Tara get proper treatment πŸ‘
Now Aradhana also knows about my. It's high time that she know everything 😊

Sorry for late comment.

It was fabulous update πŸ‘
Edited by kumari27 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
In The Name Of The Brother

WOW !!! Superb Update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Tara had come back...
What was Guruji calculating ...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

MJ was his way to finding Adi 😊 😊
He cared for Adi and his family... πŸ˜›
Really so generous 😊

Guruji was right Nandini wouldn't kill Adi so soon.
But his rude behavior made MJ to think whats wrong with him... 😳

Good Tara listened MJ word and didn't go to forest πŸ˜›
After all she was injured .
Tara assured Meethi, Adi would come back 😊
Both MriAra were so caring ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Nirmala's condition was hard as her both son were in danger

Guruji was trying to find out MJ's future..
Good to see he would defeat the witch πŸ˜ƒ

Tara had gone to forest 😲
And Nandini found her

Finally Guruji found out it was wrong with Tara's condition ...
Her life was in danger So true .

As expected MJ was so tensed to hear this
He couldn't imagine life without his Tara 😡
Without waste a moment MJ was his way to his Tara...

Here Tara was cautious...
But couldn't avoid Nandini's attack
Tara could push her down and ran away...
She was not really healed and then...

Tara followed MJ's trick and did able to attack Nandini πŸ˜ƒ
But Nandini hurt her more
MJ heard Tara's scream πŸ˜›
He shot arrow and at the right moment Tara moved πŸ˜ƒ
Yea... Nandini was shoot πŸ˜ƒ
Tara sensed MJ had come and telling him about Nandini πŸ˜›
But Nandini again attacked ...
This time MJ killed her... πŸ˜›

Tara was in MJ's arm ❀️
Truly he would never leave her 😳

Nandini threatened them but good at least she told where Adi was 😊
Nandini's chapter is finished πŸ˜›

What an action pack update !!!! πŸ˜ƒ
Fantastic writing Archu πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Edited by Khadeja - 8 years ago
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Her Handsome Hero

First of all hayee the chapter's name

MJ brought Tara to Guruji and left for Adi... πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Guruji was relieved to see his daughter safe 😊
He took care of his daughter ❀️

Finally MJ saved Adi... πŸ˜ƒ
Awee.. MJ kept himself safe for his Tara 😳
Adi was confused πŸ˜†
MJ told him about Tara 😊

Tara was happy as their prince was safe...
MJ was concern for Tara
And forgot about all πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

What was that power !!! πŸ˜•
Adi guessed the right source of MJ's smile πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
And MJ left them outside of forest 😊

Everybody was so happy their prince had come back πŸ˜›
Hearing the news Meethi forgot everything and ran to meet Adi πŸ˜ƒ
Their meeting scene was warm and sweet ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

King, Queen, Princess were happy too πŸ˜›
Finally someone's attention went to wounded Tara ...
They had gone to Palace.

Tara was thinking about the first prince seeing the bloodline tree πŸ˜›
Only if she knows who is he πŸ˜‰

As expected Aradhana was angry ..
After all Tara is her only child.
Tara accidentally told about MJ !!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ok its time to tell your mother about what is happening in life πŸ˜‰

Tara was treated and Queen asked for MJ ...
Aradhana again surprised πŸ˜›
Actually she has many surprises in future πŸ˜†

Superb Chapter Archu ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Great writing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b


Guruji was so relieved to see Tara safe and it is nice to see him take care of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yeah, he is her father and like any father he too worries for her😊

Tara's handsome hero saved Prince Aditya and brought him back!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
He not only saved Prince but also kept Tara's wordsπŸ˜ƒ

So Mrityunjay had saved Aditya to prove himself to his love and it was wonderful to see him admit this to Aditya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
MJ is now more open about his love😊

Tara was so relieved to see Aditya back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
😊
She was😊

It was great to see Mrityunjay so concerned for Tara and he forgot about everything else!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
She is now becoming his world😊

I am sure Aditya and Guruji enjoyed watching that!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
hahahaπŸ˜†

So Adi guessed the reason behind Mrityunjay's smile and now he knows who Mrityunjay loves!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Adi is experienced man, he knows many things that MJ doesn'tπŸ˜‰

Everyone was so happy that their prince is back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
yeah, all were waiting for his return😊

Hearing the news, Meethi forgot everything and ran to meet Aditya!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
She was waiting for him badly😊

Their meeting scene was sweet and emotional!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭
Yes, it was😊

It was wonderful to see Aditya reunite with his family!!!!
Yes, one day MJ too will reunite to his family 😊

Even in the happiness of getting her son back, Nirmala noticed Tara and her wounds!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
She is taking good care of her future daughter-in-lawπŸ˜‰

She is probably the best mother-in-law in all of Wonderland and beyond!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
As the place is Wonderland so the MIL is wonderfulπŸ˜‰

Tara is thinking of the Queen's first son and wants to bring him back like she brought back Aditya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yeah, she is on Prince rescue missionπŸ˜†

Little does she know who he is and that she would bring him back as well one day!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
She will😊

Aradhana was so worried about Tara but her daughter is brave and strong!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
😊
Like any mother Aradhana was worried for Tara😊

Tara accidentally took Mrityunjay's name while trying to reassure Aradhana!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
oppps😲😲

Well this was surely a good time to tell Aradhana about him as Mrityunjay had just saved Aditya!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
yes, hiding this would increase complication 😊

Nirmala ensured that Tara's wounds were checked by personally bringing the Healer to her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
The Best MIL award goes to Nirmala😊

She cares for Tara so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
She does😊

Tara told the Queen that Mrityunjay had killed the vampire and told her he is fine!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Tara is personal and secret reporter for Queen about his sonπŸ˜†

Aradhana is surprised to know the Queen knows about Mrityunjay!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲
yeahπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

This would have definitely looked bad but thank God for Nirmala who handled it properly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Queen knows how to handle situationπŸ‘

The chapter was awesome!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒ and doing such long commentπŸ‘
Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Superb updates!!! πŸ‘ ❀️ πŸ˜›
tara ke handsome hero ne usse aur prince aditya ko bacha liya πŸ‘
thanks for pm πŸ˜ƒ
keep smiling keep writing ❀️ πŸ˜›


Thanks for loving it so muchπŸ˜ƒ
Yeah , his handsome hero did πŸ˜ƒ

Updating soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Tara returned to Guruji & he is taking care of her. It's great to see father daughter like this 😊

Mrityunjay saved prince Aditya to prove himself for Tara πŸ‘

He came back with Aditya & immediately goes to Tara 😳

Happy moments for all 😳

Aditya is too smart , he knows the reason of smile πŸ‘

Finally Tara & Aditya come back to palace. Every one is happy& relieved πŸ‘

It was good that everyone taking care of Aditya & Tara

Nirmala is great soul she is ensuring that Tara get proper treatment πŸ‘
Now Aradhana also knows about my. It's high time that she know everything 😊

Sorry for late comment.

It was fabulous update πŸ‘



Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago

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