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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

THE HEART IS A LONELY HUNTER
The chapter was very nice!!!!
Thanks๐Ÿ˜ƒ


THE CURIOUS THINGS
queen meet her lost son & mj felt somthing for her
Yes, the love of mother was felt ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

THE SHOOTHING STARS
Mrityunjay is impressed on seeing Tara's archery skills!!!!
they always think about each other shayad yahi hai
pyaar
Yes, he was impressed by Tara
Yes, they are in love , they just need time to know it๐Ÿ˜Š


Thanks for loving it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

MJ has forbidden her to return to the forest!!!! bcozhe thinks she will be safe away from him!!!! Just like rajveer ButTara's heart wants to go to Mj after hearing guriji mj realising his mistake here Tara follows Nirmala's advice & meets Mj It is wonderful to see Tara and Queen Nirmala's bonding!!!! The sword fighting scene was awesome and stunning!!!!


Yes, MJ and Rajveer share many qualities๐Ÿ˜Š

MriAra needed some advice and Guruji and Queen did what was required๐Ÿ˜Š

Yes, Tara and Queen are a lovely bond ๐Ÿ˜Š

Glad u loved sword fighting scene๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for reading๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Great continuation ๐Ÿ‘

So tara came to console everyone ...๐Ÿ‘
She knew palace needed some friend

Good she told Rani ji abt aditya & mj...
Yes, a mother is more worried than anyone else

Guruji still figuring out problem in mj path...๐Ÿ˜•
Yup

How guru ji forget tara is mj's life now...๐Ÿ˜ณ
He has to take care of many things ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

So mystery is solved...taras life in danger...๐Ÿ˜•
Yes

After heard this mj became lifeless...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Yes, his love was in danger

Here tara moving wisely...๐Ÿ˜Š
She had learnt from MJ how to act when there is danger outside waiting

She didn't get frightened & come in action...๐Ÿ‘
She did๐Ÿ˜Š her training had made her strong to handle such situations

Mj is good archer...what a action showed by him๐Ÿ‘
He is ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara is too clever she moves wisely ...๐Ÿ‘
Yes ๐Ÿ˜Š

Now nandani gets hurt...๐Ÿ˜ก
Yes ๐Ÿ˜ก

Finally she told abt aditya & also warned tara ...
Telling about Aditya was the only thing Nandini did write in her life

It was great chapter ๐Ÿ‘

Thanks for loving it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Updating soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Thought to reply on this part first as it was your recent update.
Great๐Ÿ˜ƒ


MJ bhi na he thought he can protect Tara from all this by forbidding her entry in forest but the story must move when she will be here.
Yes, Tara kab tak MJ se dur reh Sakti hai

Queen Nirmala knows so well that only Tara can bring the news of her son MJ. MJ now went in search of the pearl and Tara is here again.
Queen and Tara share good bond ๐Ÿ˜Š

Thank god with the help of Govind MJ saved Tara and Nandini was killed. Tara fought really well as the training of MJ was so effective.
Yes, timely prediction saved her and yes MJ's training helped her a lot ๐Ÿ˜Š

They are again together and I am sure soon witch Kalavati will get the punishment for what she did to King and his family. Nandini marte marte Adi k bare me bata gayi good.
Yes, soon Kala will be punished๐Ÿ˜Š. Only good thing Nandini did in her life was giving address of Aditya

Poor Meethi she is really sad because of Adi's kidnap.
Yes she is๐Ÿ˜ญ

Continue soon dear

Thanks for reading it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Updating soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

with Tara's skill, mriara's understanding is also improving ๐Ÿ˜Š

Yes ๐Ÿ˜Š

their first Kiss ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hehe๐Ÿ˜ณ

Angry Tara torn MJ's shirt ๐Ÿ˜†
She was confused how to react๐Ÿ˜†

poor Maria!!! she pissed off ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes poor Maria๐Ÿ˜†

MJ meet his younger brother ๐Ÿ˜›They became friends
Unknowingly he made his brother his friend๐Ÿ˜Š

Adi's advise works & MJ realised his love ๐Ÿ˜›
Yes he needed advice from friend๐Ÿ˜Š

mriara confessed their love!!! โญ๏ธ
Finally they did ๐Ÿ˜Š

nandu saw tara & adi
she attacked adi ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Yes did๐Ÿ˜ก

Thanks for reading and loving it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

just read last three parts in one go full of romance bhi & romanch bhi

You are daredevil to read 3 updates in 1go ๐Ÿ‘
Glad u loved MriAra romancing๐Ÿ˜ƒ

awesome updates
loved every part
Thanks for loving it so much๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

pyaar ko khone ka darr & apne pyaar se juda hone ke gham ko tara & meethi ke through beautifully described kiya hai
Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara is so brave bold courageous determined
& true lover
Yes , she is brave , bold and true lover๐Ÿ˜ƒ

just like rajveer,MJ is always for tara he will never leave her
just hope ki adi safe & live ho
Yes, MJ is more like Rajveer ๐Ÿ˜Š
Let's see what happens to Aditya

Thanks for reading and commenting๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

The King's Son

Kalawati seemed very dangerous this time...
She also threaten Nandini to bring Tara
And Nandini had some other plan ๐Ÿค“
She wanted to leave with Adi ๐Ÿฅฑ

Tara was eager to meet MJ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
With running, falling she finally reached ๐Ÿ˜†

MJ was no less than her ๐Ÿ˜‰
They felt complete together
MJ felt blessed to have Tara โค๏ธ

Their practice experience changed then ๐Ÿ˜‰
They need not to talk, when their heart said everything โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
Love their small happy moment โค๏ธ

Finally the news of the prince abduction came to Kingdom
Award was also announced for the prince by the king ...
Meethi's state was really bad... ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’
It was so sad to see that her hope was breaking each time when anyone came ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

Good to see Adi didn't give up in front of Nandini ๐Ÿ˜Š
He chose his love over his life ๐Ÿ‘

And here Nandini & Kalawati both were playing their own game...
Nandini was caught in her act ๐Ÿค”
Kalawati was not going to trust Nandini anymore ๐Ÿค“

Tara was lost in her world these days ๐Ÿ˜‰
She didn't know about the abduction ๐Ÿค”
As expected Tara would be worried for the royal family...
But she was confident that nothing would harm with the prince ๐Ÿ˜Š
Strength of love โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Tara couldn't imagine being separated from MJ ๐Ÿ˜Š
She could really understand Meethi's state...

Great update ... โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ
Wonderfully written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Posted: 8 years ago

Broken

Tara had gone to visit palace...
Meethi's state was really bad...
Tara tried to console her...
But she didn't really know how prince would come ๐Ÿ˜”

Tara did right thing that she told Vasundhara to become her family support ๐Ÿ˜Š
Tara also assured the Queen...
And she believed Tara fully ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara wanted to go to MJ for handling the situation ..
But at the hurry of going to MJ she was hurt ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
And when she reached, she was not ready to leave him .. โค๏ธ
Just remembering Meethi's condition she was tensed ..
If she had to be in her situation โค๏ธ

MJ was worried after seeing her bruised ...
And he took care of her lovingly ... ๐Ÿ˜Š
You wrote the whole situation beautifully Archu โญ๏ธ

Tara was lost in her thought and so concerned if MJ had to leave her
MJ was understanding, he left his questioning ..
And tried to soothe her โค๏ธ

MJ was shocked to hear the abducting of Prince !!!
Tara was so worried but MJ clam her down with a comforting kiss ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
How he took care of her was so adorable

Guruji had also come..
As expected he would be worried for his daughter... !!

The departing part was so sorrowful ๐Ÿ˜”
But they had to be separated as MJ had to search Adi ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
MJ had gone to the place where he met Adi..
What was Guruji telling about time ๐Ÿ˜•

Wonderful chapter Archu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Love the whole update โญ๏ธ

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja


The King's Son

Kalawati seemed very dangerous this time...
She also threaten Nandini to bring Tara
And Nandini had some other plan ๐Ÿค“
She wanted to leave with Adi ๐Ÿฅฑ
Yes, as time is running out of Kaka's hand she wants her work to be done soon and Nandini is planning to kidnap Aditya


Tara was eager to meet MJ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
With running, falling she finally reached ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes, crazily in love ๐Ÿ˜†

MJ was no less than her ๐Ÿ˜‰
They felt complete together
MJ felt blessed to have Tara โค๏ธ
They make each other complete๐Ÿ˜ƒ MriAra๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Their practice experience changed then ๐Ÿ˜‰
They need not to talk, when their heart said everything โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
Love their small happy moment โค๏ธ
Yes, when heart speaks no other medium is required to express๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Finally the news of the prince abduction came to Kingdom
Award was also announced for the prince by the king ...
Meethi's state was really bad... ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’
It was so sad to see that her hope was breaking each time when anyone came ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”
Meethi was already afraid and now kidnapping news broke her ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Good to see Adi didn't give up in front of Nandini ๐Ÿ˜Š
He chose his love over his life ๐Ÿ‘
Yes, he is loyal ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

And here Nandini & Kalawati both were playing their own game...
Nandini was caught in her act ๐Ÿค”
Kalawati was not going to trust Nandini anymore ๐Ÿค“
Both are trying to fullfil their means


Tara was lost in her world these days ๐Ÿ˜‰
She didn't know about the abduction ๐Ÿค”
As expected Tara would be worried for the royal family...
But she was confident that nothing would harm with the prince ๐Ÿ˜Š
Strength of love โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
Yes, she was lost in her own world of love but this made her more strong

Tara couldn't imagine being separated from MJ ๐Ÿ˜Š
She could really understand Meethi's state...
Yes

Great update ... โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ
Wonderfully written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thanks for loving it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Broken

Tara had gone to visit palace...
Meethi's state was really bad...
Tara tried to console her...
But she didn't really know how prince would come ๐Ÿ˜”
Tara only knew that her friend wanted so one to console her


Tara did right thing that she told Vasundhara to become her family support ๐Ÿ˜Š
Tara also assured the Queen...
And she believed Tara fully ๐Ÿ˜Š
Vasu needed someone to show her way what to do and Tara did exactly same๐Ÿ˜Š
Yes, just a assurance by Tara made Queen believe that Prince will return soon๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara wanted to go to MJ for handling the situation ..
But at the hurry of going to MJ she was hurt ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
And when she reached, she was not ready to leave him .. โค๏ธ
Just remembering Meethi's condition she was tensed ..
If she had to be in her situation โค๏ธ
Tara had just seen condition of Meethi and separation thought made her forget every pain๐Ÿ˜ญ

MJ was worried after seeing her bruised ...
And he took care of her lovingly ... ๐Ÿ˜Š
You wrote the whole situation beautifully Archu โญ๏ธ
MJ love and care her๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Glad u loved it๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tara was lost in her thought and so concerned if MJ had to leave her
MJ was understanding, he left his questioning ..
And tried to soothe her โค๏ธ
A feared and worried Tara needed soothing from MJ๐Ÿ˜Š

MJ was shocked to hear the abducting of Prince !!!
Tara was so worried but MJ clam her down with a comforting kiss ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
How he took care of her was so adorable
A kiss from MJ can clam her very well๐Ÿ˜ณ

Guruji had also come..
As expected he would be worried for his daughter... !!
Yes , he was

The departing part was so sorrowful ๐Ÿ˜”
But they had to be separated as MJ had to search Adi ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
MJ had gone to the place where he met Adi..
What was Guruji telling about time ๐Ÿ˜•
Yes, they needed to separate
Soon you will know what Guruji meant
๐Ÿ˜Š

Wonderful chapter Archu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Love the whole update โญ๏ธ

Thanks for loving it
๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Updating soon

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