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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice update as usual!!!

Meethi is in great pain.she is hoping for best but this tym nothing helping herπŸ˜•
Yes, she was already afraid and this is unbearable for her😭

It was nice of Tara that she consoles herπŸ‘
Yes it she. Meethi needed a friend 😊

Tara make understand vasu as well that she have to strong enough to support family...
Vasu needed someone to tell her what to do 😊

Tara always find solution in mj😳
Yes 😳

The way she goes to mj is really described by you wellπŸ‘
Thank you😳

Mj also thinking abt Tara... talking to Maria that how she changed her life😳
Yes, he do think about her and Maria is best to whom he can talk😊

Tara was so terrified by prince abduction that she doesn't loos her grip😳
Yes, she seems strong but she too is afraid😊

Mj se door kaise rah Sakti hai...bt she is stronge enough...
Yes, she will manage somehow😊

What guruji calculating ... something mysterious
Let's read next update to know moreπŸ˜‰

Thanks for wonderful updateπŸ˜›

Waiting for next...
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Thanks for loving itπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Updating soonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

really loved the way you show tara's concern and guru ji was calculating the dashas waiting for next

Thanks for loving itπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Let's read next update to know moreπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Archu dear...

Just started with your FF and found it really interesting.

Glad to know that you loved itπŸ˜ƒ

It's all about the evil witch Kalavati and good Tara and MJ. Thank god MJ is in safe hands and was brought up nicely.
Yes, it's about evil Kala and good MriAra and their fight against Kala. Guruji left his family for future of kingdom😊

Kalavati is really bad to an extent she killed that young gal just to be young. She just deserves a solid punishment.
Kala will get punishment for her act😊

They met and as usual MJ didn't like her bak bak chit chat. Hope to read more soon and give my views here.

Hahaha, typical MriAraπŸ˜‰

Waiting to know how you liked next part πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey dear just read your FF and all parts you updated till today.😊 Really a fantastic FF and I love mystery and suspense with this wonderland concept.πŸ‘ The plot is interesting but do continue soon.πŸ˜ƒ Thanks Mahak for suggesting it. 😊

Wow!!!πŸ‘
You read all parts in one goπŸ‘
Thanks for loving it😳
Updating soon😊
Thanks Mahak for suggesting it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
res 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Previous update on page 34



In The Name Of The Brother


Tara changed her clothes as soon as she reached home, because if Aradhana had seen her wounds she would have gotten more worried.


Guruji was not able to sleep the whole night. He was still trying to calculate the charts. There was something in it which he was not getting. After some unsuccessful attempts he slept thinking, "Maybe I am not thinking in the right direction." Tonight also the Kingdom was in sorrow.


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Next day with the sun's first ray, Mrityunjay wanted to leave for the search of the Prince. For him the Prince was his friend, a way to assure Tara he would not leave her, to bring a son back to his family and to bring happiness back to the kingdom.

But Guruji stopped him saying, "She loves him, she will not kill him so soon. But she will also not wait for a very long time. In a day or two you need to find her, otherwise..."


"How do you know this?" asked Mrityunjay surprised, as this information was something which was not known to anyone.


"You focus on what you need to do Mrityunjay. Your work is to find her and kill her." He said quite rudely, which was not his normal behavior.


Mrityunjay thought, "Possibly he is too stressed" and left. He started from the place where the Prince was last seen and followed the vampire's marks.



Tara, as she was not fully recovered, didn't dare to enter the forest as it was his order. Love changes people and so Tara who was rebellious by nature was obeying Mrityunjay. She left for the palace with her mom. Tara first went to see Meethi and inform her that soon her Prince would be with her.


After informing her she went to the Queen, "Your Majesty."

She entered her chamber almost running, "Queen, Mrityunjay my friend, you remember. He is searching for the Prince and I am sure he will find him." She said all this in one breath.


"Really!!!" The Queen hugged her.

"What a fate! I have my one son in danger and the other one is going to bring him back. Oh Lord!!! Bring both my sons to me safely." A mother in dilemma, she saw the bloodline tree was dull.



Tara returned home but Aradhana remained with the Queen. Tara's bruises were dry by the evening. She wanted to leave for the forest but waiting was the only option left for her as she knew the Vampire would soon find her if she went there.

Guruji was busy the whole day figuring out what he had been trying to from the last two days.

"What is so mysterious in your future Mrityunjay that I am not able to figure out? I can see you defeating the witch but something is happening before that and I am not sure what that is."




Tara left early in the morning for the Enchanted forest. The sun's orange rays had just started to appear in the sky, there was complete silence in the forest. The sound of Tara's each step on the dry leaves was clearly heard in the forest. With birds chirping, only her foot steps were audible. But she was not alone in the forest, someone else was also there. It was Nandini in the forest.

Vampires have strong hearing power, they can hear from a distance and in the silence of the morning it was easy for Nandini to hear Tara's arrival in the forest. She thought, "Today I am going to catch that girl and finish my slavery." She immediately started moving towards the direction from where the sound of Tara's footsteps was coming.

Guruji was up all night recalculating Mrityunjay's birth chart from his birth. After failing to figure out the mystery, he thought to see Tara's chart as she was the one who would help Mrityunjay in defeating the witch. While calculating, he noticed that her life was in danger, and if anything happened to her, Mrityunjay would never be able to defeat the witch and return to his family.

"So this was the mystery. It's her life that will decide his fate. I need to save my daughter and change my country's destiny."

He immediately started collecting his arms when Mrityunjay came there.


"What happened Guruji? Why are you collecting your arms? Is everything fine?"


"No Mrityunjay, nothing is fine. Tara's life is in danger and I am going to save her." said Guruji buckling his belt.


"What! Tara's life is in danger!!!" Mrrityunjay screamed. For a moment he remembered what Tara was saying about separation. For a moment he just imagined his life without her and it circulated an unknown force in him.


"You stay here Guruji, I am going to bring my Tara." Within a blink of an eye, Mrityunjay was on Maria with all the required arms and rode towards the path from which Tara comes.


Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Tara was moving forward her each step with caution and alertness. She was not the old Tara who just walked. She was now the Tara who knew being alert helps one to fight an unknown situation and person effectively. Mrityunjay was riding Maria as fast as possible, he didn't want to be late and regret it for his entire life.


Nandini saw Tara coming towards where she was standing. She hid in the nearby bushes and started waiting for Tara to arrive so that she could attack her and capture her. After two to three minutes, Tara was there where Nandini was hiding. When Tara reached there, Nandini came out of her hideout and attacked Tara from the back to make her unconscious, but Tara quickly moved away from Nandini and pushed her down and started running quickly towards the interior of the forest.



Tara's wound was still not healed and they started bleeding again. As the wounds were bleeding again, Nandini got the exact location of Tara. Tara was all ready to face her. She had blindfolded herself, remembering Mrityunjay's instructions and took her knife in her hand. Nandini was surprised to see Tara equipped to fight her. She attacked Tara to remove the blindfold so that she could hypnotize her.



But before Nandini could reach Tara's blindfold, Tara's knife left a cut on Nandni's hand. Furious, Nandini again attacked Tara, this time to get her knife. This time Nandini used her left hand to hurt Tara's bleeding wound and her right hand to grab the knife. Tara screamed in pain but was able to prevent Nandini from taking the knife. Tara's screams were heard by Mrityunjay who was now a few feet away from the spot where Nandini and Tara were fighting. He galloped Maria faster, and strung an arrow on his bow and shot in the direction from where Tara's scream came.


Tara heard the noise of the arrow coming and moved away. It hit Nandini's dress and she was pinned to a tree. Nandini was trying to remove the arrow when a second arrow pierced her hand. Meanwhile Tara was attentively listening to the sound of arrows and moving accordingly so that she did not get hit by them. By now Mrityunjay had reached the spot where Tara was. He immediately climbed down from Maria and ran towards Tara. Tara was listening to the footsteps of the person approaching her, and she recognized it to be Mrityunjay's.


"Tara..." he shouted.


"Mrityunjay beware there is a vampire here," she shouted.

Vampire Nandini was able to free herself and attacked Tara again by grabbing her by her neck. This time Tara didn't hear her coming as she was busy in conveying the news of the vampire to Mrityunjay. But she knew how to free herself from her hold.



Tara stamped on Nandini's foot and freed herself from her hold. Mrityunjay right away took the stake which was made to kill a vampire and aimed it at Nandini's heart. It went straight into her heart. Tara was about to collapse because of fatigue when Mrityunjay held her in his arms. He removed her blindfold and said,

"I told you I will never leave you." Tara smiled.


Nandini started laughing loudly,

"You think you have saved her. But that's not true. She will come for her...she wants this girl for her youth. Soon she will take this girl and drink her blood to regain her youth. Because of this girl I was not able to get the Prince. As I was not able to get Prince so shall... "


Before Nandini could complete her sentence, Tara slapped her.

"You blood sucking beast. Just say what you are asked. Where is the Prince?"


Nandini again laughed and pointed in the direction where she had kept Aditya and died.



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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guruji is right about Nandini and Mrityunjay does need to find Aditya soon!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

It is good to see Tara obey Mrityunjay and not go into the forest!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Great that she informed the Queen about Mrityunjay searching for Aditya and Nirmala hugged her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

But now Nirmala is even more worried for both her sons!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara is again going into the Enchanted Forest but Nandini knows she is here and wants to capture her today!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Guruji finally figured the mystery out by checking Tara's chart and it seems Tara's and Mrityunjay's fates are interlinked!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara's life is in danger and clearly Mrityunjay cannot defeat the witch without her!!!!

Like Tara, even Mrityunjay couldn't bear the thought of his life without her!!!!πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί

The training of Mrityunjay is really effective and now Tara knows to be alert and ready for danger!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara is very brave and courageous and fought with Nandini very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

She is very clever and gave Nandini a hard fight even though her wound had started bleeding!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Mrityunjay is a very good archer and it was great the way he pinned Nandini to the tree!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was commendable the way Tara moved to avoid getting hit by the arrows just by listening to their sound!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally Mrityunjay killed Nandini by driving the stake in her heart!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I loved it when Mrityunjay held Tara in his arms and truly he would never leave her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

The fight sequence was very well described!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Even while dying Nandini was threatening them and it was great that Tara slapped her!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Good that Nandini revealed Adi's location before dying!!!!

The chapter was fantastic!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just started reading your story & it is awesome something different storyline is superb!!!

the palace tak read kar liya hai!!! aur bilkul movies wali feeling aa rahi hai but isme songs kyon nahi use kiye?

Thanks for pm keep smiling keep writing

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Posted: 8 years ago
So Tara's life is in danger uff hope MJ saves her

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