ONCE UPON A TIME IN WONDERLAND (SS)||Complete - Page 28

THE HEART IS A LONELY HUNTER
The chapter was very nice!!!!

THE CURIOUS THINGS
queen meet her lost son & mj felt somthing for her

THE SHOOTHING STARS
Mrityunjay is impressed on seeing Tara's archery skills!!!!
they always think about each other shayad yahi hai pyaar

MJ has forbidden her to return to the forest!!!! bcozhe thinks she will be safe away from him!!!! Just like rajveer ButTara's heart wants to go to Mj after hearing guriji mj realising his mistake here Tara follows Nirmala's advice & meets Mj It is wonderful to see Tara and Queen Nirmala's bonding!!!! The sword fighting scene was awesome and stunning!!!!

Great continuation 👏

with Tara's skill, mriara's understanding is also improving 😊
their first Kiss 😳
Angry Tara torn MJ's shirt 😆
poor Maria!!! she pissed off 😆
MJ meet his younger brother 😛They became friends
Adi's advise works & MJ realised his love 😛
mriara confessed their love!!! ⭐️
nandu saw tara & adi
she attacked adi 😲

just read last three parts in one go full of romance bhi & romanch bhi
awesome updates
loved every part
pyaar ko khone ka darr & apne pyaar se juda hone ke gham ko tara & meethi ke through beautifully described kiya hai
Tara is so brave bold courageous determined
& true lover
just like rajveer,MJ is always for tara he will never leave her
just hope ki adi safe & live ho

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Guruji is right about Nandini and Mrityunjay does need to find Aditya soon!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Guruji is experienced person , he knows how and when to act😊

It is good to see Tara obey Mrityunjay and not go into the forest!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She knows that it's for her betterment😊

Great that she informed the Queen about Mrityunjay searching for Aditya and Nirmala hugged her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Yes, Queen is the only person who knows about MJ 😊

But now Nirmala is even more worried for both her sons!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

That's fate

Tara is again going into the Enchanted Forest but Nandini knows she is here and wants to capture her today!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Nandini was waiting for this for long

Guruji finally figured the mystery out by checking Tara's chart and it seems Tara's and Mrityunjay's fates are interlinked!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Yes, she is 😊

Tara's life is in danger and clearly Mrityunjay cannot defeat the witch without her!!!!

Yes, but MJ will reach on time😊

Like Tara, even Mrityunjay couldn't bear the thought of his life without her!!!!🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺

They know life is impossible without the each other😊

The training of Mrityunjay is really effective and now Tara knows to be alert and ready for danger!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He is good teacher and Tara is a good learner 😊

Tara is very brave and courageous and fought with Nandini very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yes, she is brave 😊

She is very clever and gave Nandini a hard fight even though her wound had started bleeding!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Yes, it was the strength of love😊

Mrityunjay is a very good archer and it was great the way he pinned Nandini to the tree!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Yes, his powers and skills are unbeatable😊

It was commendable the way Tara moved to avoid getting hit by the arrows just by listening to their sound!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

It's MJ's training who made so good in such skills 😊

Finally Mrityunjay killed Nandini by driving the stake in her heart!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yes, now Kala don't have any puppet 😊

I loved it when Mrityunjay held Tara in his arms and truly he would never leave her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Thanks😳

The fight sequence was very well described!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank you😃

Even while dying Nandini was threatening them and it was great that Tara slapped her!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nandini deserved that slap😡

Good that Nandini revealed Adi's location before dying!!!!

The only good thing that she did her whole life😊

The chapter was fantastic!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reserved

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Just started reading your story & it is awesome something different storyline is superb!!!
Glad to know that you loved the storyline 😃

MJ always made me wonder him as Prince😊

the palace tak read kar liya hai!!! aur bilkul movies wali feeling aa rahi hai but isme songs kyon nahi use kiye?
This fic in ancient times, I think iss mein modern time songs ajeeb lagte😊

Warna first meeting par - pehli nazar mein

Ye song hota 😊

Thanks for pm keep smiling keep writing

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

So Tara's life is in danger uff hope MJ saves her