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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: Khadeja
In The Name Of The Brother

WOW !!! Superb Update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Tara had come back...
What was Guruji calculating ...😕😕
Soon you will know😊

MJ was his way to finding Adi 😊 😊
He cared for Adi and his family... 😛
Really so generous 😊
MJ is down to Earth man😊

Guruji was right Nandini wouldn't kill Adi so soon.
But his rude behavior made MJ to think whats wrong with him... 😳
Guruji knows how evil is and there is something important going inside him mind making him worry more

Good Tara listened MJ word and didn't go to forest 😛
After all she was injured .
Tara assured Meethi, Adi would come back 😊
Both MriAra were so caring ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Nirmala's condition was hard as her both son were in danger
MriAra are made for each other😃
it was were difficult for Nirmala

Guruji was trying to find out MJ's future..
Good to see he would defeat the witch 😃
MJ is the witch slayer but requires some basic support of someone special😊

Tara had gone to forest 😲
And Nandini found her
Nandini was waiting for Tara

Finally Guruji found out it was wrong with Tara's condition ...
Her life was in danger So true .

As expected MJ was so tensed to hear this
He couldn't imagine life without his Tara 😵
Without waste a moment MJ was his way to his Tara...
MriAra now live for each other😊

Here Tara was cautious...
But couldn't avoid Nandini's attack
Tara could push her down and ran away...
She was not really healed and then...
MJ's training had prepared her very well 😊

Tara followed MJ's trick and did able to attack Nandini 😃
But Nandini hurt her more
MJ heard Tara's scream 😛
He shot arrow and at the right moment Tara moved 😃
Yea... Nandini was shoot 😃
Tara sensed MJ had come and telling him about Nandini 😛
But Nandini again attacked ...
This time MJ killed her... 😛
MJ is a great hunter and his skill proved it true😊

Tara was in MJ's arm ❤️
Truly he would never leave her 😳
yeah, he will never leave her 😃

Nandini threatened them but good at least she told where Adi was 😊
Nandini's chapter is finished 😛
Only thing right she did in her life😊

What an action pack update !!!! 😃
Fantastic writing Archu 👏👏👏

Glad you loved the action packed update 😃😃😃

Thanks for loving it and leaving comment 😃😃😃

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Archana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Her Handsome Hero

First of all hayee the chapter's name
yeah😉

MJ brought Tara to Guruji and left for Adi... 😛😛
Guruji was relieved to see his daughter safe 😊
He took care of his daughter ❤️
Dad had her daughter 😃

Finally MJ saved Adi... 😃
Awee.. MJ kept himself safe for his Tara 😳
Adi was confused 😆
MJ told him about Tara 😊
yeah, it was cute and funny😆

Tara was happy as their prince was safe...
MJ was concern for Tara
And forgot about all 😉😉 😆
MJ life is now around Tara 😉

What was that power !!! 😕
Adi guessed the right source of MJ's smile 😉 😛
And MJ left them outside of forest 😊
Brother's have connection 😃

Everybody was so happy their prince had come back 😛
Hearing the news Meethi forgot everything and ran to meet Adi 😃
Their meeting scene was warm and sweet ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Prince return was big event for them and Meethi was waiting for him more than anyone else

King, Queen, Princess were happy too 😛
Finally someone's attention went to wounded Tara ...
They had gone to Palace.
yeah, Tara finally got some attention

Tara was thinking about the first prince seeing the bloodline tree 😛
Only if she knows who is he 😉
lets wait for her reaction when she knows that😛

As expected Aradhana was angry ..
After all Tara is her only child.
Tara accidentally told about MJ !!! 😆😆
Ok its time to tell your mother about what is happening in life 😉
yeah, its high time for Tara to tell her Mom about MJ😉

Tara was treated and Queen asked for MJ ...
Aradhana again surprised 😛
Actually she has many surprises in future 😆
yeah, many surprises for Aradhana😆

Superb Chapter Archu ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Great writing 👏👏👏

Thanks for loving it 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#303

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Archana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: ronshaan
Saving the thread to read later on ...

Ok

All the best for your reading 😉

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Archana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Previous update on Page 40

An Untold Story

Next morning Tara was feeling better, so she and Aradhana left the palace as at her home she would be herself, Tara, there would be no King and Queen, just she and her mother. The kingdom was preparing to celebrate the return of the Prince.

At home Aradhana was thinking about Mrityunjay.
"Who is this man who Tara knows? He must be a good man as he brought the Prince back. Tara should have told me. Tara is not a little girl who needs to be told about good and bad. I was busy these days and this might be the reason behind my unawareness. I wish her father would have been here to see what his child has grown up to be, brave and beautiful."

She caressed Tara's head and said, "When can we meet your friend?"

"Which friend mom?" asked Tara, who had just woken up.

"The man who brought the Prince back." she said.
Tara got up slowly thinking what to say.

Aradhana said, "Is there anything that you want to say Tara?"

"Mom, yes there is something that you should know." Tara almost murmured.

"Tara you are my everything child, tell me." said Aradhana caressing Tara's head.

"Mom... Mrityunjay is more to me than just a friend." Tara said taking her mom's hand in hers.

Aradhana was a little confused, "What do you mean?"

Tara used all her courage to give voice to her words. "Mom we ..."

Before she could complete the sentence, there was a knock at the door. Aradhana went to attend it. It was a messenger from the palace.

"The King has called Miss Tara today, if she is able to come." he said.

Aradhana was surprised as the King had never sent any messenger before to call
Tara.

"She will be there today."
The messenger left and Aradhana closed the door.

"Tara, the King wants to meet you, he has called you today. Let's get ready." she said taking out Tara's clothes from the closest.

"Mom, we love each other." Tara said in a loud voice.

Aradhana was shocked to hear that. She went near Tara and said in a shocked tone, "You what???"

"Mom, Mrityunjay... And I love each other." Tara said.

Aradhana was listening in surprise, she was surprised to see her daughter loves someone. Had her daughter grown up and become so big that she now loves someone and Aradhana doesn't know about it?

Tara continued, "Mom he is a good man. He is a hunter. He lives in the forest with his Guruji."

Aradhana was not in a position to say anything, so she kept quiet for a moment and then said, "We will talk about this after we are back from the palace," and went away from there.

There was complete silence in the house. Tara was worried thinking what would be Aradhana's reply to this. She would not go against her will but life without Mrityunjay would be no life. Aradhana was confused what to say to her daughter?
"I wish you were here my love," she thought caressing Govind's books kept on the shelf.

They left for the palace quietly. On their way no one said anything to each other but inside, their minds were in turmoil, and they didn't know when they reached the palace.

The Palace gate was decorated with orange, red, purple and white flowers. The flower fragrance broke Aradhana's train of thought. Finest curtains where hung on the walls of the palace. The kingdom's palace was on a hill, high enough that it could be seen from the boundaries of the kingdom.

Princess Vasundhara, who had taken charge of the arrangements, was inspecting the preparations. Seeing Tara there, she came to her and hugged her.
"How are you Tara?" she asked.

"I am better. Your preparations are very impressive Princess." Tara said.

"It's nothing in front of what you did for us." Vasu said.

"It was my duty," said Tara.

Seeing the two girls mingling, Aradhana walked towards the Queen's chamber. In the Queen's chamber, a maid was trying to make an intricate bun of the Queen's hair but she was unable to do it properly. As Aradhana entered she saw this, she curtsied to the Queen and immediately reached the maid and took the brush from her hands and started doing up the Queen's hair.

"Aradhana no one can replace the precision that you have in your work." said the Queen.

Aradhana didn't reply or say anything. This was unusual as Aradhana would have at least smiled at this. The Queen thought, "What happened to her?"

"Aradhana I am very happy today and the reason for this was brought about by your daughter." She said turning towards Aradhana.

Aradhana smiled a little. The Queen sensed Aradhana was in some tension. She grabbed Aradhana's hand and said, "What's worrying you Aradhana? I had never seen you so worried. Are you worried for Tara? She will be fine soon, she is strong."

"It's not that my Queen." Aradhana said in a low tone.

"Then explain Aradhana." The Queen said.

"Tara loves the man who helped her bring the Prince back. She knows many things about him. She has even met his Guru. I don't know what I should do? If Tara's father would have been here he would have known what to do." said Aradhana in one breath.

The Queen was pleased to know Tara loves her son Mrityunjay. She understood Aradhana's situation of being a single mother. She wanted to tell her about Govind but remembered his words not to say anything until the correct time comes.

"Tara has grown up Aradhana. She is brave and a sensible woman. If she loves someone she would have seen something in him." Aradhana was listening.

The Queen continued, "You should not worry, and talk to Tara to bring the man to meet you. After meeting him you decide whether he is right for Tara or not."
The Queen was standing near the balcony watching the bloodline tree which was healthy again.

"You are right my Queen." said Aradhana in a happy tone.

"The King wants to know if the Queen is ready." A maid curtsied at the chamber door.

"We are coming," she said and turned smiling towards Aradhana.

The Queen and Aradhana walked towards the court where the King and the celebration were. On the way to the court, Aradhana's eyes were searching for Tara, but she was nowhere to be seen. As the Queen entered the court, all members of the court rose to curtsy to her. Soon everyone was settled. The King signaled to one of the attendants to bring something. From the main door of the court entered the Pearl which was the pride of the Kingdom. The whole throne room was glowing with the light of the Pearl.
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"My family and I thank all citizens for being with us in our hard times," the King started.
"You all tried your best to bring the Prince, and my family and I are thankful for that. But as I had promised to give the pride of the Kingdom, this Pearl to whoever brings the Prince back," he pointed towards the Pearl which was kept near the King's throne, "I am awarding this to Tara who with the help of a man named Mrityunjay brought Prince Aditya back."

Tara came in front of everyone from the place where she was standing beside Vasu's seat. Everyone rose from their seat to welcome her. Aradhana was happy to see that Tara was given the same respect as the Royal family.

"I am grateful for this honor your Majesty but forgive me for my insubordination, this Pearl is the Kingdom's pride and I can't take it for myself." Tara said.

The King smiled and looked towards Aradhana and said, "Aradhana your daughter is a blessing for this kingdom."

Then he turned towards Tara and said, "From now on you will be our pride Tara. The bravery you and your friend have shown is unmatched. I request you to accept this."

The King signaled the Queen to present the Pearl to Tara. When the Queen handed it to Tara, with the touch of the Pearl Tara was glowing like the Pearl itself. Tara looked towards her mother with teary eyes, as one does when she sees that she has achieved something impossible. The session of the court ended after that.

Tara went to her mom and hugged her. Their faces were wet with tears of joy.
"Tara if your dad would have been here he would have been so proud to see you like this." Aradhana said caressing Tara's face. After a moment, Aradhana said,
"Bring the man you love. I too need to know who was capable enough to tame you." And they both laughed.
*****

As soon as Tara was given the Pearl, Guruji, who was sitting in meditation, opened his eyes and smiled. He came out of the cottage and went near Mrityunjay who was grooming Maria. He said, "Mrityunjay you always wanted to know about your family and I always told you that I will tell you when the right time comes."

"Yes Guruji, you did." said Mrityunjay.

"The time has come. Come let's walk you through your history." said Guruji walking towards the cottage.

Mrityunjay was happy to hear that the question on his identity would soon be out. Inside Guruji was standing near a table on which an old book was kept. Mrityunjay stood next to Guruji.

Guruji opened the book and said, "This is the history of Wonderland. A kingdom whose capital is Storybrooke. A city where you were born."

Mrityunjay, like a curious kid, was listening to him.
He then turned a page and said, "This man is the present King of Wonderland, King Jayraj. He is your father."

Mrityunjay was shocked to know who his father is.

"Yes, you are the eldest son of the King and the rightful heir of the throne after him." said Guruji.

Suddenly from being nobody, Mrityunjay was the Prince of Wonderland and the rightful heir to the throne. Mrityunjay was very much confused, many thoughts were bombarding his mind.

"Why was I brought away from my family? Why did they disown me? Or do they even know I exist?" He turned towards Guruji who was waiting for Mrityunjay's questions.

"Before you ask me anything, I want to tell you something about your birth." said Guruji and made Mrityunjay sit down.
"When you were born, an evil witch named Kalavati entered the chamber where you were born and froze everyone and took you away from your family to take revenge from your family for punishing her for her evil deeds. She erased everyone's memory to forget about your kidnapping, the kingdom knows the first prince had died before birth, except your mother whose memory she didn't wipe out to make her suffer everyday that she took you. She even threatened the Queen that she will kill you if she tells about this to anyone. The woman you met that day in the forest is your mother and the Queen of Wonderland."

Mrityunjay processed all this information quite fast and got the answers for some of his questions.
"How did you find me?"
Mrityunjay asked Guruji as he wanted to know more about his past.

"I snatched you from that witch and raised you here in the forest to keep you away from her." He paused and saw Mrityunjay was processing all the words and linking everything.

"So Prince Aditya is my brother." said Mrityunjay.

"Yes he is." said Guruji patting him on his back and left Mrityunjay alone in the room with the book, which was written by Guruji himself, to know more about Wonderland.

Mrityunjay, like a curious kid, was reading the book to know about the place where he belongs. He spent the whole day reading the book. It had everything about Kala and her evil activities till now, the powers she possesses and why Guruji didn't allow Mrityunjay to enter the city.

In the evening, Mrityunjay came to Guruji and asked, "That book contained all about me and things related to me till now. You must also have had a family. You didn't mention anything about them. Where are they?"

Guruji turned towards Mrityunjay and smiled at his question.
He said "They are in the city, in the service of the kingdom."

"You never met them in all these years, don't you miss them?" Mrityunjay asked.

"I missed them every day but for some good things to happen we need to sacrifice." Guruji patted on Mrityunjay's shoulder.
After a short pause he said, "Mrityunjay now the time has come that you prepare yourself to face Kala, who is even more evil now."
He moved towards Maria and said, "Now rest Prince Mrityunjay, tomorrow is a big day."

"Guruji please call me Mrityunjay like you did before. I might be a prince for others but I am only Mrityunjay for you." said Mrityunjay walking towards Guruji.
"You are the one because of whom I am alive and capable of killing Kala. You are above all for me." said Mrityunjay. Guruji hugged Mrityunjay.
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Archana

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Here at the palace, Tara went to meet Princess Meethi and Prince Aditya. On seeing Meethi, Tara curtsied.

Meethi hugged Tara and said, "Thank you for brining my life to me. You don't know what you have done for me."

"It was my duty Princess. How is he doing now?" said Tara wiping the tears from Meethi's cheeks.

"Come, see yourself." Meethi took Tara with her to the Prince.

Tara curtsied to the Prince and said, "How are you feeling Prince?"

"I am better Tara, and all thanks to you and Mrityunjay." said the Prince trying to sit. Meethi rushed to help him.

"See Tara, look at your friend, how worried she is for me. I told her I am fine but she doesn't believe me." said the Prince wiping Meethi's tears.

"She is worried for you." said Tara.

"The way Mrityunjay is worried for you," teased the Prince.

Tara blushed and said, "I must go."

Meethi looked at her curiously and asked, "What is this Tara? Now you are gonna hide things from your friend? Tell me about Mrityunjay."

"There is nothing important Princess. You take care of the Prince. I should leave." Saying this, Tara hurriedly left the Princess' chamber.

Meethi was confused seeing the Prince and her friend Tara sharing a secret.
"What did I miss?" She asked sitting beside Aditya.

"Your friend is in love with the man who saved me." said the Prince holding Meethi's hands.

Tara went to the Queen's chamber to see her mother. The chamber was empty. She was going back when the Queen returned. Tara curtsied. The Queen caressed Tara's face, kissed on her forehead and said, "I am happy for you Tara. Always be a blessing."

By the time Aradhana and Tara left the palace it was dark. So Tara decided to meet Mrityunjay the next day as now all her injuries were healed suddenly. At home she was adoring the Pearl. Its dazzling shine filled her house. She was happy thinking her mother was ready to meet Mrityunjay and she knew Mrityunjay would never be rejected by her mom. She slept peacefully.

Mrityunjay's head was repeating everything he had heard from Guruji about himself and what he had read from the book. He wanted to share the news with Tara that he had a family, but for the moment, he was happy to know he had a family. He was excited to tell this to Tara.

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Sorry for late update😊
I know this story is moving on snail speed😊

Thanks to all those who are still reading this👏

Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃

Thanks for reading😊

Comment fast to read next update 😊

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#308

Great that Tara is now well enough to go home!!!!!

Aradhana is wondering about who Mrityunjay is!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

She wishes Govind was with them but little does she know that Govind knows everything!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃

He has seen his brave and beautiful daughter and knows more about the guy she loves than Aradhana does!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Tara did the right thing by not delaying and confessing to Aradhana that she and Mrityunjay love each other!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

As expected, Aradhana was shocked and she has just realized her little girl has grown up!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

The palace was decorated beautifully!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

It is great to see the understanding between Nirmala and Aradhana!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nirmala sensed something was wrong with Aradhana and it is good Aradhana told her everything!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Queen Nirmala is very happy that Tara loves her son, after all she already loves Tara so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

She gave Aradhana the right advice and she seems sure that Aradhana will not dislike her son!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara is indeed lucky to have a mom like Aradhana and a would be mother-in-law like Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The celebration for the return of Prince Aditya was wonderful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

King Jayraj thanked everyone and awarded the promised Pearl to Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

It was fantastic to see Tara get honoured!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Tara was overjoyed and Aradhana was soo proud of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

It is really nice that now Aradhana wants to meet Mrityunjay!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃

Finally Guruji told Mrityunjay everything about his past and who he is!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It is so like Mrityunjay to think about Guruji's family when he found out about his own!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Why didn't Guruji tell Mrityunjay that Tara is his daughter when he told him everything else??😕 😕 😕 😕

Guruji has indeed sacrificed a lot for Mrityunjay's safety and upbringing!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Mrityunjay is so down to earth and it was soo touching when he told Guruji he is above all for him and to call him Mrityunjay like before!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Meethi is thanking Tara for bringing Aditya back and it was nice to see them together!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aditya is now teasing Tara about Mrityunjay and she blushed!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Tara doesn't tell Meethi and rushes off but Aditya did and it was cute and funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nirmala always loves and adores Tara and blessed her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

How did all of Tara's injures get healed suddenly??Is it the effect of the Pearl??😛 😛 😛 😛

But then the Pearl would have been used to heal others too!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Mrityunjay is eager to tell Tara about his family and share his happiness with her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The chapter was fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

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Khadeja Akter

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An Untold Story

Brilliant writting Archu 👏 👏 👏

Tara was well then ..😊
And Aradhana thought about who could be MJ..
She also wished if her father was with them. 😊
Little she knew her father knew everything 😃

So Aradhana asked about MJ
Tara finally confessed they are more than friend 😛

There came King's special invitation ⭐️
Tara did the right thing 👍🏼
She just didn't delay and confessed about their love
As expected Aradhana was shocked 😊

She just had realised how grown up her daughter is.
Yes, we know she is going to like MJ 😛
Again, she didn't know Govind knew everything 😉
Hopefully the tension will go very soon from between Maa-daughter 😊

The palace was decorated very beautifully .
Nirmala sensed something was wrong with Aradhana .
After listening she told her to meet MJ 😊
She knew Aradhana would not dislike her son 😉

So there was celebration of return prince Aditiya 😊
King thanked all for being there at their critical time.
And thanked Tara and her friend to bring back Aditiya 😃
He awarded the promised pearl ⭐️
Really proud moment for Aradhana 😊
Aradhana wanted to meet MJ 😃

Guruji was happy for his daughter 😊
Okk.. he decided to tell MJ his identity 😛
So Kalawati kidnapped MJ.
And erased memory from everyone except Nirmala
Now, MJ knew everything and wanted to know about his family, kingdom 😊

Guruji really did sacrifise for the safety of MJ 😊😊😊
MJ was so down to earth that nothing would change between him and Guruji 😃 😃 😃

Tara went to meet Aditiya and Meethi 😊
Aditiya teased her about MJ 😉
Tara was blushing 😳😳😳
Here Meethi didn't know whats going on 😆😆😆
Aditiya told her friend is in love 😛

Nirmala always adores Tara and loves her 😊
And of course Tara deserves these

Tara was happy and waiting to bring MJ to her Maa 😊
On the other hand MJ was eager to tell Tara about his family 😊

Archu sorry for late reply
We reader are more slow than you 😉

Superb update it was 👏👏👏
And so BIG ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks for the PM 😃

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@kumari27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#310

Aradhana is super cute mom..

She doesn't overreact but understand the feeling of Tara..

Tara is luck to have mother like Aradhana & would be sasu mom Nirmala.

Nirmala make understand Aradhana that Tara has chosen right guy .

Tara feeling happy &i on ninth cloud as she got what she deserves.

Tara & Aditya convo was cute

Aradhana wants to meet Mrityunjay is nice ...

Good that guruji told everything abt mj past

Mj wants to meet Tara so that he can share his happiness.

It was nice chapter & moved forward

Continue ...,,,

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