Galib - A narrative in context of Sharaman's love Part 2 (Pg2) - Page 2

Amazing wic ...u always do something different

Phir kuchch is dil ko beqaraari hain - Mirza Galib

Sharavan after marriage ... Inner turmoil ...

Phir kuchch is dil ko beqaraari hain
Phir kuchch is dil ko beqaraari hain
Seena zoya-e-zakhm-e-kaari hain
Phir kuchch is dil ko beqaraari hain

Phir jigar khodane laga naakhun
Aamad-e-fasl-e-laala qaari hain
Phir kuchch is dil

Phir usi bewafaa pe marte hain
Phir usi bewafaa pe marte hain
Phir wohi zindagi hamaari hain
Phir kuchch is dil

Bekhudi besabab nahin ghalib
Kuchch to hain jiski pardaadaari hain
Phir kuchch is dil.

Why my heart is fluttering in anticipation.. .. why I am so restless ,so oblivious of my state

My heart is wounded and this anguish is making me restless

Again same restlessness...

Again I am hurting myself

I am again hurting myself ... see these self-inflicted wound .. here comes the season of blood red flowers ... season of hurt ...

What an irony... dying for my betrayer again ... for my faithless friend ... it's my old life again ... all over.

But this restlessness is not without reason something is making me feel this way ... something I am not aware off ...

But I am restless ...

Sharavan _ Maine etna pareshan kyon hoon, sab maine apne maan ka kia... Tumse badla bhe lia par mera dil etna baichain kyo hai... main khud ko hee nahi samaj paa raha hoon. Bahut dard hai seene main... ye kaise khalish hai jo jatte nahi ... Tumko bhoolne ke liye main apne ko dard deta hoon tumko dard deta hoon ... Sab bhool jane ke baad bhe tum yaad hoo ... jhoothi ... Bevafa tujh par hee marta hoon aaj bhe ,,, tujhe hee pyar karta hoon ... ab fir vahi dard bhari jindagi gujarni hai ... tum pass bhe aur door bhe... tumko dard dekar main apne ko dard doonga ... Lekin fir bhe mera dil kahta hai ke kuch hai jo muhje pata nahi... koe sach hai jo kahin dafn hai... Kya esi liye tum par aaj bhe mera dil yakin karna chahta hai...

Joyaa - Search

Aamad - here comes

Fasl - Season

Laala_ red flowers

Bekhudi - detachment for self

Besabab - without any reason

Pardadari - Act of veiling ... or something curtained

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UL5HcI8s7vk

Note _ check this beautiful gazal ...

Tibbs _ for you

Okay I suck at comprehending Urdu but jo bhi apne likha padhne mei bohut accha laga( even though zyaada samjha nahi *me makes puppy faces*)

Shravan's soliliquoy was soulful.
And it so resonates with the reprise version of Bin tere Song from IHLS.

Kuch bacha hi nahi darmiyaan
Saasei leti hai ab ye duriyaa...
Dil nahi jaanta raah mei
Haath se haath chute the kaha...
Kyu nazar ke kinare, tute hai khwab sare, tu bata...
Suna Suna sama hai, khali khali jaha hai, ab mera...
Bin tere... Bin tere... Bin tere...
Koi khalish hai hawao mei bin tere...

wic the shayari showing shravu's inner turmoil was really amazing..really fitted in...
n the dialogs u used u show his pain, dilemma, doubt, love ...everything was perfct ..
waiting fr nxt pm thanks :)

This is one of the most amazing posts i have ever read on this forum! Maybe because you used 2 of my most favourite works by my most favourite urdu poet. Absolutely stunning, wic!

Thanks Flibb,

Beautiful 👏

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Thanks Flibb,

thinking of Bazicha-a- atfal hai dunia mere aage ... Mirza Galib and jagjeet jee ... behtareen combination ... koe me sher ... koe bhe makta uta lo ... bas aah ya aha he aata hai juban par ...

bazicha-a- atfal bhe Sharavan ke liye likhoongi ...

hazaron khwhishe aaise for both of these fools 😊

Love you for writing this Wicca ... Absolutely fabulous..I am so touched Hugs

For you Tibs ... HUGS ... and for the city we left behind