MG SS:MILAN....HUMARI ADHURI...PART 14 @ 119 2/12

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here is another ss girls

I know already running three I started again but kya kahroon

This one is For crystal
She wants a story on re-birth

So concept is about re-birth and union
Hope u guys like this too like my previous Na ongoing works
With love
Sanju
PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 8
PART 9
PART 10
PART 11
PART 12
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE
Geet was standing at the edge of the hill,one moment she will b all down not even getting any trace of her body,she was enjoying the beauty of the place which is too deadly in safety.she was enjoyimng the winds that carry his scent,she smiled how much he was involved in her life,even if she jumps from this place none were there for her to cry,but she knew he will blame himself for her this step,but she cant stay, she wants to touch him,feel him,to live with him,the only route left with her was to move a step ahead and engulf the darkness,he was just waiting for him,once she heared his voice she will take the ultimate step to reach him.
GEET
She heared his voice,which hold asense of protectiveness for her,only for her.
Geet:maan ;app,aagaye,kaha ho aap
Maan:bilcul tumhari peechey,geet yeha kyun kadi ho,peechey aajaoo
Geet:aap aaj muje chod kar jaa rahe hai naa!

Maan;geet abh mein yeha nahi reh saktha...
Geet:toh mein bhi aathi hoon aap khey sath.
Maan was terrified with the thought of what she was thinking,hum kabhie ek nahi hosakthey geet yeh tum jaanthi ho!!
Geet:haan,iss janam mein nahi,jab tak mein zinda hoon nahi,agar geet zinda hi nahi toh..
maan cut her between geet sochna bhi math
geet:sochna nahi maan abh bas karna hai,I LOVE YOU MAAN saying she forwaded her step into eternity
maan tried to catch her hand but he himself was air how can he hold her,he helplessly watched her body falling btn tress and rocks still he can see her smiling face...
TO B CONTINUED
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome back yaar. Omg very emotional n shocking prolong...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

Welcome back yaar. Omg very emotional n shocking prolong...


Wlcm back!!!
I am here only dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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BUDDY ME FOR PM guys
Hope u like this one too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry yaar.. Typo error.. Should hv a been congrats fr new story.. I was replying quite a no of post tdy.. Human error. Humble apology . Gd nite.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations on new SS di!!👏😊
Lovely prologue
But a shocking one
Geet jumped herself from cliff as she cannot live without maan
Looks like it's either maan or geet's nightmare or daze
Looking forward to the story di!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will be waiting for the next update
Thank you for the pm di!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

Sorry yaar.. Typo error.. Should hv a been congrats fr new story.. I was replying quite a no of post tdy.. Human error. Humble apology . Gd nite.


That's fine dear
No need of sry chill
Good night
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .CookieMonster.

Interesting concept
plz cont


😊 Thanks

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