MG SS:MILAN....HUMARI ADHURI...PART 14 @ 119 2/12 - Page 48

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

wow! awesome

cont soon

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

next update mein patah chalega cd😆

And I am waiting for the same 😉

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

Super update di..geet frustrated told sshe hearing maan voice.three of them not trust Geet word..she finally proved she hearing maan voice..sam so emotional why she can't hear maan voice..geet hell jealous about Sam talk about maan..maan understood Geet feeling..but she is good for her.and her life..even Geet also confused by own behaviour.arnav father is murder omg tudra is bad person he killed own wife.arnav against father..sam talk to maan straightly ..geet irritated ..maan ordered Geet..heheeh.whose help rudra I think it is dev...thanks for pm and sry for late comment..we will wait for. Ur updates di..take care sanju di..i hate travelling but u travelling more..

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

nice update

Originally posted by: CRAZYCUTEE

superb updates

i think its dev he is the one help rudra

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_

And I am waiting for the same 😉

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! the most unexpected revelation...Arnav's father killed Maan...& Sam really loved him , was somewhat hard to accept...but looks like she really loved him...Geet's jealousy and her realization , and the way Maan understood it by looking at her once was beautifully written...I guess dev helped Arnav's dad,...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

waiting

Part 10

Geet stood at the edge of the cliff looking at the vst area ahead of her..there wasn't atinge of fear in her eyes looking at the deadly end rather she is smiling thinking about last few days how she spent with maan...she made him do all the things which she always wanted to do...sneaking out in midnight to eat a icecream,,which freaked neha how come she went alone,when she fear of dark ,least she knew she was not alone..geet just smiled at neha confusing her...be it bunking the classes and going to roam the mall..neha was almpost on the verge of nervous attack seeing geet doing things which she never imagined get will do...a day before they went to fair geet was adamant to sit alone in rides...the girl whom always neha drag to enjoy was going ahead leaving her to sulk alone...neha even questioned on her weird behavior,on their way back...

Neha:geet tuh taak hai naa..

Geet:haan neha,muje kya hua hai...

Neha:tuh kuch azeeb sab behave karrahi hai...tuh who sab karrahi hai,jo mein soch bhi nahi sakthi...tuje kuch toh hua hai..

Geet:ho ho kuch nahi hua,I am just enjoying my life..aur tuh hi kehthi thin aa geet daro math..enjoy karo..wahi karrahi hoon yaar.

Neha:enjoy!!?? Aise akele...waise tuje itni himaat aayi kaha she..kuch din pehle toh aisi nahi thi...

Geet:neha,mein bilcul teek hoon,bas yeh toda sa waqt mere sath enjoy kar,sawal nahi kya patah yeh waqt phir mile ya na mile...

Neha was confused more:kya mathlab..

Geet:uff exams aarahe hai..waqt kaha milega enjoy karne kah..

And geet efficiently dismissed the topic making neha shut...

Geet smiled remembering neha cribbing,she did all that to make maan happy,he was low, from the moment knowing who helped rudra,even though the person was tricked into this sick act ,he did bring maan there only thinking it's a prank,he too got rude schok of life when maan was found dead...he blamed himself silently,yet he didn't dare to say it loud what happened that night,sam and adi took every possible step to convince him to accept his crime,after lot of efforts,he agreed to help them...

As arnav planned the day of his father raly he displayed the other part of his father life,which made people blood boil...the final nail is when dev aceepted that rudra killed maan,how rudra made him drug maan and bring him to the hill top,dev was told rudra men will kidnap maan for few days to teach him a lesson,as at that tym dev hold grudges aginst his brother as he felt maan was controlling his life,so he helped rudra as he will get atleast few days freedom,but all he got was his brother death news,which made him hate himself,he blamed himself,he went everyday on the hill top and silently asked sry for his act,but there was none to hear him...rudra was arrested on the spot as he had nothing to prove when his own son was against him.

Maan was the most schoked one to knew his little brother angry at him and even wants him to hurt,despite knowing everything he couldn't bring himself to b angry at dev,rather he felt hurt,Maan wanted dev to b free from any punishment,its not only dev fault even his too,he felt he should have known dev insecurities and as a elder he should clear him and made him understand ,but he failed in his duty,so in no way he is ready to punish dev and arnav did what geet told ,even sam,adi and arnav were against to free dev but geet explained them patiently what aan wanted,to which they agreed reluctantly..geet even talked with dev,he was not ready to believe her words but when she told the series of events which only dev and maan knew that happened in their childhood,he too believed geet and when geet conveyed maan words to not to blame himself for everything,dev falled on his knees and cried out loud.

Geet can feel maan was low from the happenings and she started her silly acts making him distract from the happenings and she was even successful as she can feel maan was back in his ful mode as he kept on taunting her its only her who can do such insane acts and only can eat at such odd hours...

Geet closed her eyes feeling last days when his voice disturbed her...

Maan:geet.

She smiled ven without turning

Maan:geet,tum yeha ,geet pechey avo...

Geet just stood there not turning,not even replying,but just smiling..

Maan:geet,tumne mujhse vada kiya...tum aisa kuch nahi karogi..

Geet:maan aap koh mera vada yaad hai..

Maan:haan,tumne kaha tum apni zindagi Khushi she jioge...

Geet:haan,toh mein jee liye apni zindagi khusi she aap khey sath abh bas aur nahi,aap khey bina nahi..

Maan:geettt

Geet:mujse nahi hoga maan..she turned and maan saw her tears which pained him...

Maan:geet tum aisa kuch nahi karogi...tumhe meri...

She didn't let him complete his sentence...

Geet:agar aap neh kasam diya toh issi waqt khudh jaongi maan,saying she took astep back only to make his dead heart to drop

Maan:nahi geet..plz

Geet:maan mein apni poori zindagi akeli rahi hoon aur aaj aap mile toh mein aap koh nahi koh sakthi,muje phir akeli nahi rehna...

Maan:geet tum kaeli kaha ho...neha hai tumhare sath aur abh toh adi,sam arnav bhi toh..

Geet:muje bas aap chahiye..

Maan:yeh pagalpan hai geet..

Geet:haan teek hai meri pyar pagalpan hai ,maine aap she bina dheyke pyar kiya maan,aap neh toh muje khudh koh dhekne tak nahi diya ,yaad hai who din...

He clearly rmemebered the day after he told everything to geet about him,she compared his life with funny characters and when she demanded to see him,he blocked all her ways fearing to which character she will compare him...when she tried to check old record stealthily he made all the papers flew,when she cornered adi demanding his pic he made adi cell broke in pieces making her pout and adi alomost on the verge of cry...he smild and next sec he was scared seeing her standing at the edge,with closed eyes thinking ...

Geet was standing at the edge of the hill,one moment she will b all down not even getting any trace of her body,she was enjoying the beauty of the place which is too deadly in safety.she was enjoyimng the winds that carry his scent,she smiled how much he was involved in her life,even if she jumps from this place none were there for her to cry,but she knew he will blame himself for her this step,but she cant stay, she wants to touch him,feel him,to live with him,the only route left with her was to move a step ahead and engulf the darkness,he was just waiting for him,once she heared his voice she will take the ultimate step to reach him.

GEET

She heared his voice,which hold asense of protectiveness for her,only for her.

Geet:maan ;app khi jaane kah waqt aagaya hai naa

Maan:geet plz...mein...

Geet:aap aaj muje chod kar jaa rahe hai naa!

Maan;geet abh mein yeha nahi reh saktha...

Geet:toh mein bhi aathi hoon aap khey sath.

Maan was terrified with the thought of what she was going to do,he tried last,hum kabhie ek nahi hosakthey geet yeh tum jaanthi ho!!

Geet:haan,iss janam mein nahi,jab tak mein zinda hoon nahi,agar geet zinda hi nahi toh..

maan cut her between geet sochna bhi math

geet:sochna nahi maan abh bas karna hai,I LOVE YOU MAAN saying she forwaded her step into eternity

maan tried to catch her hand but he himself was air how can he hold her,he helplessly watched her body falling btn tress and rocks still he can see her smiling face...

he fall on the ground looking blankly at the place where she stood few moments ago...he didn't dare to go down and see her struggle,he didn't want to feel those helplessness again which he felt a while ago,the need to save her yet failing her...why why why he ever came in her life...if not him she could have lead her life happiy,he is the sole reason why she took this step...he is the reason to push a life to death...why why why..he was still blaming himself when her voice called him,from behind...

MAAN

It was not in himself to turn and face her...he made her the one like him...

Maan muje aap koh dhekna hai...aap nahi dheykogi meri taraf..

He made himself rock but didn't turn to face her...

Aap khi koi galathi nahi hai maan,maine apni zindagi jee lee,aur yeh faisla bhbi meri Khushi khey liye hi hai...

He closed his eyes knowing she was trying to make him guilt free...

Maan..she cried with helpless ness,making maan open his eyes only to blind by the forcing light..he tried to look at geet but couldn't with the bright light...he only heared geet desperate plea to see him...he tried to walk past the light but it only forced him to distance from geet,her shouts too slowly faded ...

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A man was driving his jeep in alomost deserted roads of hoshiyarpur,he needs to reach his site before morning,there was aprblm for which the work was stopped from morning and he cant afford another day without work,so he decided ro travel in midnight to reach the place before morning and solve the issue ,he was driving in full speed cutting the winds ,when all of a sudden his jeep cam eto halt with roaring sound,he tried to start it,but it didn't buzz,cursing something under his breath he got down to see what the prblm is...the emitting steam from engine made him aware of the lack of water with him...he closed his eyes thinking how can he miss to load water with him..he closed the bonnet and took few steps ahead insearch of water..

He was walking on lone road when his eyes fell on the figure sitting on side of road,in deserted place,at the midnight,a girl was sitting alone..looking at nothing,her hair flying occasionally with the wind made her look like an angel...he kept looking at her for few minutes until her eyes collided with his...making both startled.

She was as always walking in forest when she got fedup and sat on the tree thinking about her life when she felt a gaze on her..thinking it to b her illusion she srugged...but she had this feeling of being watched which is next to impossible...she turn her head only to drown herself in his eyes,but what startled her was him looking at her eyes directly..how can he...was this again her illusion...she is still in her thoughts when he came close to her making her more confuse ...

he cleared his throat:hello

She looked around to make confirm with whom he is talking,when she didn't find anyone..she looked at him with a frown

he:mein aap she bath karraha hoon...aap kya dhek rahi hai..

She:mujhse...she asked pointing finger at herself making him narrow his eyes at her...

he:ji haan aapse..kyun yeha koi dhik rahe hai kya aap ko...

She murmered to herself muje nahi par aap koh ...

he:kya...

She:kuch nahi...aap kuch bol rahe they..

he :haan who meri gadi karab hogayi..muje pani chahiye..yeha aas paas kahi pani milega...

she nodded and asked him to follow her ,they both started walking in silence when he asked the obvious..

he:itni rath koh aap yeha kya karrahi hai..woh bhi akeli..

she halted her steps for few sec then continued dogging his question

she:yehi bath mein pochon toh..

he:mein hoshiyarpur jaa raha hoon,waha kuch kaam hai,muje subah tak pounchna hai..waise aur kitni dhoor hai...

she:bas aagaye who rahi talab...

he:thanks.she was waiting for him until he fetched water in the can...on seeing waiting

he:aap koh kaha jana hai..

she:hoshiyarpur..

he:par aap aise akeli...he fronwed not even seeing her carry abag..she fumbled knowing his questions..

she:who meri bus miss hogayi..meri sari luggage bhi..

he got convinced and offered to drop her which she agreed with a smile before climbing his jeep he forwaded his hand for a intro...

he:hai mera naam maan hai..

she nervously folded her hands instead of giving a shake:geet...

he shrugged thinking her shy nature while she took arelief sigh

phew done.. guys plz ignore mistakes...

typed in hurry,as I am tired of travelling and office...

I know all r pretty angry at me...he he he

Thanks crystal for bugging me to update..

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