MG SS:MILAN....HUMARI ADHURI...PART 14 @ 119 2/12 - Page 26

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MGMahika

O m g prologue mein Geet mar gayi 😲


Haan ji 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_



Vo to over ho gaye...
To ab de update fir...


Hmmm how about tuh pehle update kiya jaaye...
Meri intezar toh lambi chal rahi hai...HAI NAA
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Posted: 8 years ago
sorry for the late reply I m hving my exams in d next 20 days thts y I will b replying late srry bout tht
Awesome part
Same professing her love for Maan over nd over
but Maan rejected her
Arnav is silent that is what Maan is bothered bout
Have they set a trap fr him
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167


Hmmm how about tuh pehle update kiya jaaye...
Meri intezar toh lambi chal rahi hai...HAI NAA



That's not fair... I need time... But tu to update de sakti hai naa... 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pixelflower620

sorry for the late reply I m hving my exams in d next 20 days thts y I will b replying late srry bout tht

Awesome part
Same professing her love for Maan over nd over
but Maan rejected her
Arnav is silent that is what Maan is bothered bout
Have they set a trap fr him
cont soon
thnx fr d pm

thats fine dear take your tym
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_



That's not fair... I need time... But tu to update de sakti hai naa... 😉

everything is fair in FRIENDSHIP AND WAR
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...👍🏼...Maan narrating his story to Geet......Arnav was his foe who was always after him...😡...Sam who was Arnav's love proposed Maan but he refused it...😉...but she requested him to be her friend which he agreed......Maan helped a pregnant lady after which some people were after him to support them against Arnav's father but he refused to be a part of them...👏👏👏...Dev was also frustrated by his concern towards him...😲...I think Dev and Arnav together killed Maan...😭...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

nice update...👍🏼...Maan narrating his story to Geet......Arnav was his foe who was always after him...😡...Sam who was Arnav's love proposed Maan but he refused it...😉...but she requested him to be her friend which he agreed......Maan helped a pregnant lady after which some people were after him to support them against Arnav's father but he refused to be a part of them...👏👏👏...Dev was also frustrated by his concern towards him...😲...I think Dev and Arnav together killed Maan...😭...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

wlcm dear
u r almost there in your guess😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 6

There was silence in the room after several minutes maan finished his say geet was deep in thoughts still munching on her pizza..for once maan thought whether she seriously heared him r not as she was hogging on the pizza ike her life was depend on that...unable to take her silence he uttered her name ever slowly

Maan:geet..

Geet:maan tum dik neh mein kaise they..

Maan:what!?

Geet:mera mathlab tha lamba,chota,kaala...looks u know...

After what ever he said ,this was not the question he was expecting...slightly confused on her question he asked her again to confirm why she needed to knpw about his physic..

Maan:but geet...

Geet:arey muje samaj nahi aaraha mein aapko kounsi character mein fit kahroon...

Maan:character...

Geet:arey maan maine arnav koh vampire kah character mein sameera koh hermoine mein adi koh ron mein hoo yes arnav father as voldemort characters mein imagine kiya but aap koh kis character mein imagine kahroon samaj nahi aaraha...aap koh Bollywood character mein imagine kahroon toh baaki saari koh bhi Bollywood roles dheyne padenge ...waise bhi aap harry toh nahi honge pakka...

Maan looked at her like she was an alien he wasn't sure what exactly she madeof...here he explained is life story to her and she was imagining his life in that damn characters if that was not less she was asking him which role he would fit for...with a note od disbelief he asked her..

Maan:tumne characters imagine kiya...

Geet:aap khi story itni acchi thi maan,kisi suspence thriller she kam hai kya...aur characters I mean aap khi frnds and enemies koh muje yaad rakna hai naa afterall I am the one going to solve the mystery of your life isn't it..so to remember them I gave characters..abh bolo koi vampire koh bhooltha hai kya...even Voldemort weren't they pretty amazing nams...

Maan:pretty amazing u mean vampire and Voldemort...

Geet:maan kya aap bechare unn khey peechey pade ho,bolo aap kaise dhikthey ho ...mein aap koh harry kah character toh nahi dheynewali,,,I soo like my harry toh bolo

Maan:koi character nahi,main maan hi teek hoon waise msk koh kisi aur khi character mein kabhie fit nahi hoga,so I am happy being in myself...

Geet shrugged her shoulders :waise maan aap khi story mein kitne twist and turns hai...

Maan looked at her like now what..

Geet:maan aap chale gaya kya..

Maan:Nahi yehi hoon

Geet:toh kya ek haan nahi bolsakthey,muje kaise patah hoga aap ho ya nahi..

Maan:hmm

Geet:good,ok coming to your story sameera was the one with whom u left the party,but dev offered u drink even arnav was there in the party...

Maan:geet tum dev par shak kaise karsakthi ho!?he is my

Geet:haan haan aap kah bhai hai,par ram kah Lakshman toh nahi...toh who bhi mere list mein hai.

Maan:nahi geet dev aisa nahi kahrega,u know from the day I left he was no more my old dev,he changed himself for dadi even every week he comes to hill and cries his eyes out...how much ever I try I couldn't console him...

Maan pained tone did sadden her

Geet:teek hai maan,if u feel so toh vampire,hermoiene and Voldemort ..muje inn theeno she milna hai..par kaise...

Maan:geet who sameera and arnav r engaged they r going to tie a knot in few months.

Geet:u mean vampire and hermoine...

Maan:geet plz

Geet:ok ok arnav and sameera...but she claimed to love u...and now with arnav...

Maan:mayb with me not in there... she was moving on with arnav.

Geet;hmm mayb but maan how can we meet them...

Maan:there is a reunion day in three months mayb we can talk with them there...something which can free my soul..

Geet:maan comeon stop joking now...

Maan :what's the joke!?

Geet:maan u said we will talk with them,hiw can u talk with them..its me who had to talk..remmeber how much ever u shout like dd ,they cant hear u...

Maan:dd,who is this now...

Geet:dd is my fav8 lead character in all the stories I read...I love him..uss khi gussa hayee

Maan:u mean to say he is the only lead character in all stories...

Geet with a dreamy look:haan.

Maan:geet tum pagal toh nahi hui ho,ek hi character koh lehkar multiple stories...tum aur tumhari character imagination...😆

Geet:dheykiye muje kuch bhi kehlijiye meri dd koh nahi,khas kar meri dd khi stories koh nahi...😡

Maan:accha aisa kya hai uss stories mein..

Geet:love,romance,pain,thiller,suspence sab kuch hai..😳.

Waise saari writers toh the best hai par meri two fav8 hai priya and crystal ...😉.

Priya khi ff mein love khey sath pain hotha hai..itna khi mein har baar rothi hoon iss khi updates padkar ..

Crystal khi toh muje tnsn lagi rehthi hai itnii twists and suspence hotha hai khi poochiye math..👏

Maan:teek hai aage she kabhie nahi pochoonga..abh muje chalna chahiye..

Geet:par maan neha khi aane tak kah toh wait kahro mein bore hojaoongi.

Maan:kyun bore kyun hogi abhi toh kehrahi thi u love dd,pado abh uss khi stories..

Geet gave a thoughtful look and said ok

Geet:maan kal subah muje jaldi utna hai aap plz aakar muje utadoh..

Maan:mein!?mein kyun..

Geet:kyun nahi..aap khi waje she meri aaj khi classes miss hui,aap khi waje she aaj poora evening mera notes mein jaayega phir muje padna hai naa...mein toh aap khi kitni help karrahi hoon aap mera itna nahi kahroge...

Maan :geet itna bolne khi jaroorath nahi,kuch kam bola kahro... ok I will wake u up

Geet:thanku

But she didn't got any reply thinking he left she took a nap a small nap and by the tym she wakeup neha was back and geet caughtup with the notes and the day passed on...next morning maan did wake her up ,geet and neha had a eventual day by evening geet was in foul mood,she was cursing something under her breath while entering the room ,neha was busy with some of her frnd on the way so she left behind...

Geet was still throwing things when she heared his voice..

Maan:kya hua,aaj mood kyun kahraab hai.

Geet:

Maan:abh tum bologi nahi toh patah kaise chalega..

Geet:muje uss she ek tappad lagana chahiye tha...

Maan :kisse geet

Geet:uss she who senior jis neh muje rag kiya...

Maan :rag..

Geet:haan

Maan:kya hua uss neh kuch galath kiya kya..i mean did he misbehaved..ya

Geet:nahi mera Mazak banaya...

Maan:tumhara Mazak...

Geet told what happened in the break..she was returning from my classes a group of seniors called me,I too went

S:u r fresher..

I just nodded.

S:which branch..and where r u from!?

Maeketing ,I am scholarship student

They shared a knowing look and another one asked

S:hoo so aap studies mein topper ho..

I again just nodded ,not knowing how to reply to this question.

S:toh aap koh history mein bhi acche marks milehonge jab bhi pada ho...

Geet:ji..

S:ok I will ask few questions from history can u answer..

Geet:ji ..woh..mein..

S:arey easy questions hi honge...don't worry..hum utna toh intelligent nahi hai..saying they shared alaugh

Geet again looked at them slightly nervous

S:jodha khi pati koun hai..

Geet:ji..akbar.

S:dheyka easy hai nnaa so don't fear

Geet was a bit relaxed knowing they just asking easy ones

S:thiurd world war kab hua..

Geet:**** yr mein

S:uss war mein kitne log margaye..

Geet:3 lacs she zyada..

S:good now final question don't wry very easy one..

Geet was almost convinced its easy when he dropped a bomb mocking her.

S:abh jo log uss war mein margaye 3 lacs r something unn sab khi naam batana..😕

Geet looked at them prelexed but they laughed at her making fun of her and went from there ,she kept looking at them..but this scene spoiled her whole mood,if one makes fun of you you cant take it with ease...

Maan too laughed out loud hearng her making her more angry...

Geet:maan chup hojayeye..abh mein kaise janoongi unn kah naam.

Maan:geet comeon its just for fun..there is no harm..

Geet:harm maan,agar kal koh who phir she mila aur poocha khi naam kya hai,mein kaha ja oongi...

Maan:aisa kuch nahi hoga..

Geet:agar hua toh..uss neh poocha toh..

Maan:keh dheyna who khudh jaakar patah kahre...

Geet:frowned her eyebrows par maan who kaha jaayega...

Maan:just ask him to stand in a busstand and..

Geet:maan kounsi bus mein jaa kar uss koh unn lohgon kah naam milega

Maan:bus mein nahi..bus khi neechey jaane koh bolo khudh unn khey paas pounchjayega..😆

Geet:without thinking:haan yeh accha hai..but stopped abruptly..MAAN..

Maan was laughing his lungs out and thus sound did made her laugh a little and her sour mood turned good.

Maan:geet chillana math neha aajayegi...ok muje jaana hai

Before geet could say anything maan said:I will come to wake u up...😳

Precap:hmm mayb party😲

Ps:my ruthless cousin actually mocked me that I can read ff on same lead abh uss she koun smjaye mannet khi magic kya hai

U can curse her as I am ,reading this...the ff convo was actually happened btn us...damn her.😡

But I said was true priya_21 and crystal flames r my fav8(jitna bhi muje npareshan kahre dohno)😆,
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