MG SS:MILAN....HUMARI ADHURI...PART 14 @ 119 2/12 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m

Nice...
Is the voice is a man voice or somone?
Waiting foe nxt

😊 thanks yaar
Will tell in next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update. Geet is the only one who can hear this ghost. The Ghost wants some help from Geet.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Fabulous update. Geet is the only one who can hear this ghost. The Ghost wants some help from Geet.


😛 yes dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ah that's unfair you stopped at the wrong place</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So only when Geet's blood touches the diary she could hear the voice I could just imagine the way he was laughing at Geet</font>


Such a lovely laugh naa 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic updates. Nice concept. Loved Geet and Angel's conversation. Only Geet could hear his voice, so he sought her help. Precap is interesting. Will wait for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: payal.gupta177

Fantastic updates. Nice concept. Loved Geet and Angel's conversation. Only Geet could hear his voice, so he sought her help. Precap is interesting. Will wait for next.


😊 Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesum n funny update
interestng precap

waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
loads of love for your precious cmnts and likes
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 4

Part 4

Geet noticed that she was indeed getting late and ran in washroom with her clothes,she quickly took her bath and was almost ready to comeout,when she heared the window pane getting closed with a bang from outside she stilled her moment and a crazy thought creeped her mind,what if HE was in the washroom along with her,the thought brought atingle and blush on her face she smaked herself mentally and asked in a ever slow voice not to alert neha outside..

Tum yeha ho kya??

Getting no response for further few seconds ,she knew he was not there strangly she didn't doubt him,whether he didn't answer still being there,she trusted him unknowingly,the shout from neha to b quick brought her out of thoughts and she came out all red making neha wonder..

Neha:geet you r red like someone was with u in the washroom.

The line made her more red out of embrassment of her thoughts

The voice smirked seeing her going all red and he got a fair idea what she may thinking,he did get angey on her for doubting him,strangly he decided to rile her up more...

U THOUGHT I WAS THERE WATCHING U,DIDN'T U!?

Geet:yes,but...

Neha:what!?was there someone with you!?geet r u ok from morning you r behaving different..

Geet:neha...no...wo..umm...I mean there was no one,I am ok,she fumbled badly making neha worry more

Neha:geet,I think u need rest,why don't u take leave for just a day,trust me u will b good.

TRUE,TAKE REST FOR TODAY I NEED TO TALK TO YOU,IT WILL HELP IN BOTH WAYS

Geet;no,I don't want to talk anything for now...

Neha;geeet,I am asking to rest,not talk,now I just cant allow you to attend classes,surely u need rest.

Saying neha forcly made geet lie on bed tucking the sheet closer to her,as geet denied bfast,geet did made pleaded her which fell on her deaf ears,the over protective frnd of hers strictly ordered her to rest and not to worry about notes.geet couldn't deny her and lay on bed with baby face while neha made her way out.the moment door was closed geet sprang on her legs pointing finger at the wall before her,like he was standing just infront of her.

Geet:this was all just because of you,why have u entered my life,to spoil it!!?

She felt silence for few moments before she heared his voice which carried apinch of regret

I JUST NEED YOUR HELP.PLZ

She huffed hearing the sameline again and again,for once she did felt bad hearing his voice,she took a deep breath before taking a ultimate step in her life,unknown which was leading no where other than to HIM.she decided to end it once for all not knowing what exactly she had to end,he thought once she helped she can leave her and this world in peace,which was next to impossible.

Geet:ok,I am ready to help u,but what u want from me!!?

I NEED TO KNOW HOW I DIED??

Geet:WHAT!!??schoked would b an understatement hearing his words what geet felt,her legs and hands were shaking and her forehead was shining with her sweat drops ,her body almost turned cold with fear

He did felt her anxiety but he was helpless to console her,he knew what he asked was not easy for her,but to entangle himself from this world he had to find his answers,he didn't remember what exactly happened with him after the party ,he vaguely knew he was drunk and sameera who claimed was in love with him was taking him to her car,but after that he found himself beside his bloodied body which was thrown from the hill,from that day he was wandering he could not leave this world until he know WHO and WHY killed him.

LISTEN,I KNOW U R AFRAID,BUT THIS IS THE ONLY THING WHICH WILL MAKE ME FREE

Geet:u don't know,how u died?how can that b...

Wait I heared if a person dies with some wish his soul will wander to fulfill his/her wish u know they r termed as PRETATMA'(an evil soul),u r similar to that right.

I AM REPEATING MYSELF AGAIN I AM NOT ATMA AND ALL he spoke in greeting his teeth

Geet:ok,then what r u!?

I AM MAAN,MAAN KHURANA ,,,,MK

Geet:mk,I heared thus name and like a lightening the notice board incident flashed infront of her eyes,u r the topper of this untersity ,I mean before 2 yrs and u r missing the following two yrs...that means ...

Mk:yes, I am the one,I was killed before two yrs,but why and who I don't know.

Geet:felt the helpless in his voive nonetheless it pained her,from the moment she heared his voice,it was either order r laugh but now she can feel both sad and helplessness in his voice,even though she decided to help him,but the question is,will she able to ...she knew nothing about him,not even his appearance ,just his voice ...the words came out of her mouth unknowingly...

Geet:how can I help u!?

Mk:to help me, u have to know about my life,my frnds about me...

Geet:hmm,ok wait let me bring a pack of chips and coke

Mk:I am not telling u a movie story that u enjoy with chips and coke...

Geet:ohh,come on mister,it's a story and above all I am hungry.

Before he could speak,she rushed out like a wind and with in few minutes she was back with four packet of chips a pizza and a coke,he looked incrediosly at her looking at her figure she was not so fat nor skinny she was perfect in her way,unlike others who were fitness freak she eats what she likes,but take a break four chip packets with a pizza was too much,he was still in thoughts when geet placed herself comfortable on bed and opened her packet while munching on it,she asked him to continue

Mk:mk

Geet:what

Mk: mk,,u can call me mk,to avoid confusions whether u r speaking to me r your frnd.

Geet:hmm,but I will prefer to call u maan.

Mk:why,whats wrong in mk!!?

Geet:attitude,nothing wrong see most of them knows u as mk not as maan,so for safer side I prefer maan,morethan that I am special right!?

Mk:special!?and u...why so!!?

Geet:she plooped two of chips in her mouth and took sweet tym to chew it making him groan,she giggled abit on her victory:I am special because,only I can hear u ..not all.. so now come to the point and start your story.

Maan :I am maan khurana from Mumbai,we have a textile business and I came here to do my management course,I along with my brother dev was studying in this clg,dev was junior to me, well my pampering and being younger son of the family he was pampered most but not spoiled,he lacked in studies so as a brother with tym I became strict with him,my only frnd was adi and my only competitor was arnav and the girl who claimed to love me was sameera.

Geet: maan u have agirlfrnd.wow

Maan:did I say so...

Geet:u just said u loved her..

Maan:geet,instead of eating plz concentrate on my words...

Geet:what do u mean by eating,I just had chips nothing more..

Maan:just four packets

Geet;don't keep your eyes on my food,I will get stomach ache...

Maan laughed that you will get anyway as any normal human cant digest four large pack of chips with a pizza ...

Geet:listen I am hungry...so just some snacks..

Maan:if this were snacks then what u name in form of food.

Geet:dal makhni,butter chicken,ek shahi panner lacche parathey,pyaz kaatkhey with lassi(courtesy:GHSP)

Maan :bas,itna saaa

Geet:haan muje khana waste karna accha nahi lagtha iss liye,pehle katam karke phir jo chahe woh dubara khavoongi...

For sometym there was no sound in the room and geet seriously thought he left but no he suddenly said

Maan:dhikne mein toh acchi hi ho...

Geet:kya mathlab hai aap kah...she was slightly angry hearing his words

Maan:mera mathlab tum over weight nahi ho,par khathi bohoth zyada ho...

Geet:dheykiye,,meri khane par math jaayiye,apni sameera khi bath khijiye...

Maan:phir,wahi bath yeh sameera meri kab hui..

Geet:mathlab app khi hone seh pehle hi app chal gaye...hoo maan.

Now this was limit of his patience he almost barked his name

Maan:geeet

Precap:maan talking about himself

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
maan telling geet about himself
waiting for next

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