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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

interesting teaser dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



I thought story will be on rebirth but I think Geet will try to help him and in the process she will fall for him...and knowing very well that he cannot come back again to life she will commit suicide to be with him in heaven...

good story...

I want to say one thing...I would love to read a serious story on this issue...making it funny can destroy its essence...then it will be like comedy without any soul...

rest it is all in u how u want to write it...

thanx for pm...


thanks for your advice dear..no worries...
i will try my best to remain its essence same way..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Lovely Teaser

Waiting to see what Maan will do 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Lovely teaser di!!

Looking forward to the update
Thanks for the note
Take ur time!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks a lot guys
for bearing with me..
sry for being late
and thanks a lot for pm and your patience..
love u all
sanju
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 7

It became their daily routine that maan will wake up geet who will take a lot of efforts to get up ,but slowly and gradually their comfortness was increasing maan willb with geet at evenings after her clg tym,sometyms helping her in studies,clearing her doubts either chatting on everything under sun,geet who lived a lonely through out her life was depeding on maan without her notice,she made him a necessary part of her life ,maan was like a frnd,mentor and guide to her,it was just few weeks he entered her life yet she couldn't wakeup until he hears his voice there were days she waited in her bed below the blanket with wide eyes to b awakened by him...while on other hand same was with maan,2 yrs of his abonded soul less life geet was his life she made him laugh whole heartedly ,sometimes irritates him with her crazy stories,unknowingly both waited for their tym together...geet life seems to a fairytale for her with a angel beside but unlike every fairt tale her story wasn't destinied to b ever after...unaware of the things and day which may make maan leave this world was reaching pretty soon both were enjoying their life leaving every thing behind.

It was another day while geet was chatting with maan after her work ,neha was snoring in her bed as every other day suddenly geet eyes turned to a corner and she asked maan..

geet:maan aaj mein busy hoon toh... app naa aaj rath math aana yeha kal subah muje wakey karne aana...ok.
Maan:busy!? AISA kya karne wali ho...I am the one who was helping u in studies from past few weeks..aaj achanak kis mein busy.
Geet:woh kya hai naa ...NEHA aur meri taste buds itna KAHRAb hogaye iss mess mein KHANA kahkar ..humne socha aaj hum dohno chicken banayenge...hume kuch utensils and induction kits hai ...so..we r going to cook...
Maan looked at her weirdly ofcourse he should have by now knew geet craziness about food and ff,she would rather stay without reading her course books but she will never miss ff and her food..he was amused how this crazy girl managed to tip from yrs with this craziness...but now in her this craziness she asked HIM...HIM who helped her to b out until she cooks and eats some damn chicken...
Geet: maan aap chalegaye kya...
Maan: hm..nahi geet jaa raha hoon and yes,u enjoy your chicken...well geet kya tum cooking jaanthi ho...
Geet: zyada nahi...hmm yes NEHA jaanthi hai todi bohoth toh..we will manage...geet smiled dreamily thinking about her chicken...
Maan: chicken ...here u go ,I will make sure u willb cooked delicious...he thought to himself...

geet:maan aap jaao..

maan:kyun..

his possessiveness was not felt by geet bit maan did and was himself confused

geet:kal muje cooking karni hai aur todi shopping bhi toh jaldi utna hai aur aap jao kal subah aana muje utane...

And hearing this maan was fuming for that stupid chicken she was asking him not to come,ok he will surely see the chicken willb cooked well...he bidded bye to geet and geet tossed in her bed with her chicken dreans..

Next morning as always maan came to wake geet up who was in deep sleep as yday night she kept tossing in her anxiety finally when she wokeup she didn't miss the anger in his voice..

Geet:aap gussa ho..

Maan:nahi ..kyun..tumhe aisa kyun laga..

Maan was actually schoked how come she understood his mood,yes he was angry but not on her,he was angry at hbimself,as he couldn't himself understand why he cany b away from geet just for an evening,yday when he went from here he kept on thinking why he wants to ruin that stupid thing ,just as get asked him to b away..but he had to b away from her if not today mayb in next week when she can meet sameera and arnav who can spill some beans about his death mystery so ultimately he had to b away from here...and from her..but he who waited from 2 yrs to entangle himself from this world was now not ready to leave was not even in the least liking to knew how he died..and the question why !? kept him disturbed ..he was again brought back with geet voice.

Geet:maan ,aap chalegaye kya...

Maan:jaana toh muje hai geet,par muje nahi jaana abh..

Get:huh..maan aaap kya bolrahe ho..

Maan:kuch nahi bye,have a nice day.

He lef,well she thought and geet shrugged her thoughts about his words in her hald dizzy mind they actually didn't make sense to her...she left to do her chores while maan was still in her bed fearing about his feelings,his thoughts above all his depature from this world from geet life.

Morning turned into evening still maan was in same position but a sudden giggle brought him out of his thoughts,soon he was greeted by her smiling face who entered with neha carrying few things,he kept looking at them who was busy in arranging something..soon his eyes drifted to the chicken in the bowl and he glared at it like the poor chicken was responsible for his misery,if only looks could burnt the raw chicken must have turned out to b either ck 65 r ashes..his glaring session was disturbed by geet

Geet:neha batter is ready for roti's ,u need any help with ck ,r shall I freshen up.

Neha:no geet,u did u r part now let me cook this by the tym u r ready the delicious ck will b ready...

Geet:neha,u sure..

Neha:haan geet,I am sure,see ..

Saying she went on switch on the small radio which was about to say the method to cook ck,geet eyes twinkled and she rushed near radio only to b stopped b y neha..

Neha:geet aaram she,if u change astation we will miss the method...

Geet smiled brightly and went to freshenup,while maan smirking looking at neha and radio...

Once geet left ,neha increased the volume and murmuring a song she kept on doing as directing in radio she put the ingredients and was about to put salt when suddenly the radio said

Lift the head upwards and take a deep breath

Confused she searched for ck head but on finding none,she racked her brain mayb they r talking about us,how can ck take abreath when it was dead so she lifted her head up and took a deep breath.

Now lift left leg and turn head sideways...

Now she was utterly confused leg..hoo mayb ck leg ,she lifted ck leg but turned her head sideways after contemplating that ck had no head.

Lie flat facing your back and lift two legs up

Confused neha lied the whole ck on plate and lift its two legs up but this tym she herslf turned her face..

And the instructions kept on going,neha did exactly the way she heared sometimes with her and sometimes with chicken...poor neha was panting after 20 minutes after her ways with ck.

Otherside maan was smilimg to himself seeing her struggle and when he noticed the tym,he quickly concentrated on the radio which himself turned to the before station...

Maan who was angry at ck changed the radio from cooking tuning to the other station which aired yoga instructions,and poor neha did it with ck...and when he was sure it was about to end he tuned it into previous station..which said

Now the ck is ready u can enjoy your delicious ck with roti r steaming rice..

And the look on neha face seeing the raw ck was priceless and maan couldn't control himself brusted into loud laugh which he controlled till now,mayb neha couldn't hear his laugh but geet can...and she exactly did who just stepped inside the room.

Geet who just came outside clearly heared maan laugh she looked around only to find neha who was on the verge of faint,she rushed to her only to find the ck still uncooked on questioning neha narrated what all happened following maan laugh,she couldn't ask anything with neha in the room so she sent neha to fresh up and to deal with maan..

Once neha was in geet questioned him.

Geet:yeh kyat ha maan..

Maan:ck geet.

Geet:who toh muje bhi patah hai..par aap neh aisa kyun kiya..

Maan:

Geet:maan,mein kuch poochrahi hoon.

How can he answer from yday to now he was searching the same answer...bt sadly didn't get one.

Geet:muje bhook lagi hai,aur aap...

And that brought him to earth from his thoughts,he said sry for making neha go through yoga with ck to which geet too laughed thinking how neha may looked then with maan instructions she did cookedmuch to neha surprise..once the dinner was over ,a satisfied neha went to bed leaving geet alone well with maan.

Geet:thanks maan ,agar aap nahi hothey toh patah nahi mein kaise rahoongi...

And this sentence was final nail in the coffin which compelled maan to b away from her.

Precap:maan distancing from geet

Geet meets sam

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago
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THANKS FOR YOUR LOVE
SANJU

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Res

~Unres~

U updated after so long...
But I loved it totally...
Full on Manneet...
Both have become an integral part of each other's life...
And Maan has already started questioning this...
That chicken fiasco was jyst lol
I was ROFLing all the while...
By the way this scene reminded me of movie coolie 😊
Oopsie Maan is going to distance himself...
Edited by _CrystalFlames_ - 9 years ago
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Loh babaji kabse res par hai ladki

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