Rajveer Naina-ff-If i die,will you wait for me?UPDATED CH 4 ON PG 12

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guys i'am starting a new RN ff if anyone is intrested in reading.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes...
eagerly waiting for update
please continue soon
please do pm me too
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(Guys my story starts frm the point when all the cadets rushed to rescue captain rajveer after they realized that his life is indanger..its my take about what should hv happened in the story..so hear we go)


Chapter - 1


"Guys,humne apne apne bags toh le liye hai suriji ki madad se we hv revolvers and this jeep as well, per kisine socha hai ki hum sir ko lekar jaaynge kaha?" said yudi while the jeep was going in full speed.

"ji yudibhai ap thik keh rahe hai.hamein sir ko chuda teh hi kisi mehfuz jagah ka intezam karna hoga jahan hum log sir k saath chip sake.koi aisi jagah jahan army ko shak na ho aur woh hamein dhoondte hue waha na pohche.aisi koi jagah hai kisi k dimaag mein?" asked ali to everyone sitting in jeep


Alekh looked at naina and there eyelock was such that it felt like an entire conversation is being passed..

Alekh furrowed his brows as if asking "tereko pakka bharosa hai ki apun jaise chahte hai waisa ich hoga?"

Naina glared at alekh widening her eyes as if saying " offcourse mujhe poora bharosa hai"

Alekh raised his eyebrows as if saying "apun sirf yeh janna chahta hai ki tu sure hai na?"

Naina relaxed her eyes and gave alekh a slight nod of yes

Nobody in jeep even noticed this between alekh and naina.

They were going in full speed to save there captain rajveer..
Soon they reached the forsite and saw captain rajveer surrounded by commandos firing at him.
They all took out there revolvers even before the jeep had stopped and took aim shooting the cammandos

They met there rajveer sir and moved towards a secluded spot in the fort.

"Sir ap akele nahi jaayenge.hum sab apke saath chalenge" said huda while the others all nodded.

"Bilkul nahi.ap logo ko apni jaan khatre mein dalne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..plz cadets samajne ki koshish ki jiye..meri zindagi utni imp nahi hai.jitni ap logo ki hai.Aur yeh mat bhuliye ki jis din ap ne ye uniform pehni thi apki zindagi apki nahi rahi balki ki desh ki ho gayi thi.so plz guys" said captain rajveer.

They all shared a group hug and rajveer asked them to take care and to giv him cover..

While he was moving towards the jeep when naina stopped him saying

"Per sir ap jayenge kaha?"

"Meri fikr mat karo naina.maine apna poora career intelligence mein guzara hai.Woh log mujhtak kabhi nahi pohoch paayenge"

Rajveer then grabbed naina'sshoulders and continued "per tum mujhse wada karo ki agar mujhe kuch ho gaya toh meri yeh jung tum ladogi.unhe saza dilwaogi jinhone mujhse mera sab kuch chin liya..mera dost,mera career,mera py...!"

Rajveer abruptly stopped himself and looked at naina shocked as he realized maybe now naina must hv finally understood his unsaid words,the thing he was almost abt to say a second ago.

Naina was equally shocked hearing rajveer's half said word..
both of them thinking the same thing said by captain salve earlier that day, "he wanted to prove his innocence to you,to the women he loved!"

Rajveer was about to move towards the jeep when naina took a split second decision.In that second she thought that this means what captain salve said in the court was true,that maybe her sir feels the same way about her as she does about him..that her sir was about to say just now "mera pyaar"..that maybe her love,yes her LOVE is not one sided..it was hard for her to think this or believe this but in that second she dared to belive this as true..bcoz she wanted it,needed it to be true..so she grabbed her destiny even if it was for a few minutes and thus made a decision in that second and held captain rajveer's hand while he was about to move towards the jeep..

Captain rajveer looked in naina's eye and without further thought did what he so desperatly wanted..what they both needed.he hugged her..they hugged eachother so tightly as if trying to paas on all the unsaid emotions..as if trying to freeze time and space in that hug..they held on fo each other fiercely while there were tears in both there eyes..
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The cadets witnessed this hug between there sir and naina and realized that what salve told in the court was true..the cadets had tears looking at the loving couple because the cadets all knew that there was a good chance that captain rajveer and naina might notbe able to meet anytime soon again..that this might be the couple's final hug..that they may never meet again.but the cadets stopped that thought,determine to that this love story does complete..And so they moved there eyes away frm the couple and with reformed vigour and determination they shot at the enemies..

Just then a gun shot cracked the air and they all turned towards naina's loud gasp and saw that naina and captain rajveer's hug is broken and captain rajveer stood there holding his bleeding arm.

They all rushed towards him but captain rajveer stopped them saying
"Koyi baat nahi..bus choo kar nikal gayi hai.goodluck guys and give me cover" said captain rajveer movi.g backwards towards the jeep.His eyes never leaving naina..

Just as captain rajveer sat in the jeep naina remembered something and went to him..while the gun shots pierced the air more forcefully.she gave him a card and said only two words "use it"
Rajveer looked at her shocked taking the card and drove off..

A minute later they heard a loud blast and rushed to the scene..where they saw a heartwrenching sight of there captain rajveer's jeep fallen and engulfed in flames.
The fire was so high that its flames could be clearly scene in the eyes of all the cadets along with the tears for there captain rajveer..

Three days had passed.

Captain abhimanyu sat crouched on the floor in front of naina,who was sitting onthe floor with her face pressed to the cold stone wall and an empty look in her eyes..since the incident naina had'nt even blinked her eyes..
But captain abhimanyu's words "apke beloved mentor captain rajveer,traitor!" brought back the fire in naina's eyes along with tears but this fire was not that of enthusiam but the flames of captain rajveer's burning jeep which were forever stamped in her memory..looking at naina's tears satisfied captain abhimanyu that now naina will come out of shock

That night naina's pitieous cry shook the entire acedemy..
"Ro lene de use.aise ich woh sadme se bahar aaygi..rone de" said alekh to pooja

"Saala kuch samaj nahi aa rahela hai,naina sir ko card diya bhi tha ya nahi?agar card diya tha usne aur sir bhi jeep k saath sach mein jal..nahi aisa nahi ho sakta..pun dimaag se soche toh ho bhi sakta hai warna ab tak kuch pata kyun nahi chala?agar aisa hua hoga toh card koi faayda hi nahi..aur agar captain abhimanyu sahi keh rahe ki shayad captain rajveer neh khud jeep blast ki aur wahan se unhone kalti maari hai toh phir abhi tak toh...aur jab naina shock se bahara aaygi woh bhi card ka sach soch kar hi apna dimaag khapaaygi..woh abhi iss haalat mein bhi nahi hai ki apun usse kuch pooch sake saala apunke dimaag dahi hogaya..sir ap kaha ho?" Said alekh to himself..


(I just hope you people may atleast be faintly able to guess what was the card all about?)
Edited by tiniminy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow it's awesome
I loved it
Thnx for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Wow it's awesome

I loved it
Thnx for the pm
Continue soon



Thank you!:)
Whats ur guess about the card sahira?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update,but what does the mysterious card contains what is it,the story is fabulous continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb awesome 😛 😛 👏
just loved it😛
the best part is use of original dialouges! update is just beautifuly written!😛 👏
yaar lrl days yaad aa gaye!
thanks for the pm!😛
Continue soon 😛 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: npksk8495

superb awesome 😛 😛 👏
just loved it😛
the best part is use of original dialouges! update is just beautifuly written!😛 👏
yaar lrl days yaad aa gaye!
thanks for the pm!😛
Continue soon 😛 👏



Your most welcome yaar...aj tumhara pm dekha isliye jaldi jaldi first chapter likh diya..
So this chapter was dedicated to u vijaylaxmi :) :)
Now u also need to do the work,jaldi se guess karo ki card kis cheez ka hoga??? Common
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tr_eta

Awesome update,but what does the mysterious card contains what is it,the story is fabulous continue soon




Thanks a lot yaar..
You will hv to guess the cards mystry and ur time starts now ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ud
Eagerly waiting for next
Rajveer ke saath kya hua plz cont.soon

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