AarYa OS: Dominating Girlfriend

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Posted: 9 years ago
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No wonder the poor guy wants to get away. That Aarti is a a crazy over possessive stalker chick. Wanting to break peoples faces and what not She was just up in everyone's face, forcing herself onto him. He really had no choice in the matter and that is why he felt trapped.

Arpita was his way of exploring his feelings outside of this relationship that he has been forced in since their youth. And his stifling fiancee. Obviously as the marriage came nearer he began to get more anxious.

I suppose that was her way to love. She didn't know any other way. She never had any doubts. She was always ready to marry him and always loved him. Their was no other choice for her. And she loved him so much that nothing mattered but his happiness. Even if his happiness meant that she had to give him his freedom. That is true and unconditional love.

And that was the best thing she could have done for them. Once she gave him space, he realised that he didn't want to be separated from her. When she gave him his freedom, he was finally free to choose what he really wanted. His one true love. The one that was always there for the taking.

The separation not only made him realise his love but also how to handle her, To step up and not only be the follower but the leader in the relationship. The man so to speak. Not allowing all the decision makin up to her but being firm with this hot head.

The say absence makes the heart grow fonder and in this case it definitely did.

Loved it Beany⭐️
Edited by B-onesie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wowww beautiful 😊👏story Jhillu thank u
Edited by Catty24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jhilly Jhu did I tell you that I loved this story? it was hilarious, emotional, and romantic!

I can understand how Yash would be stifled by her dominating character! the poor guy never knew any different. she never allowed him any room to breathe and the notion of marrying her and being subjected to that kind of relationship must have felt like a noose being tightened around his neck. Arpita was a breath of fresh air. she made him feel like a man and represented normalcy. how could he not want to explore that?


yet Aarti is the one who broke my heart! her hard exterior hid the mush she was on the inside. she had to grow this shell to mask all of her insecurities caused by her father's desertion. she was afraid to suffer the same fate as her mother and she acted crazily as a result.


yet her love had always been pure and true. she let him go because deep down she only wanted his happiness, even if it meant it did not include her.


he is surprised when she releases him. it's so out of character and it baffles him. soon bafflement turns to realization. what he thought as stifling is what he begins to miss. she made his life interesting, she made his heart dance. "if yo love something set it free, if it comes back it was yours" he had always been hers but he had to realize it. when he does he goes to claim her back and now they can live happily ever after, well I will rephrase that to dominating ever after 😆


but I am sure they would not have it any other way!

it was hilarious how Aarti threatened him and Arpita. her drunken pity party was hilarious too! poor girl thought she was dreaming when her prince came back to her and I loved how he took care of her in that state!


superbly done Chumchum! I loved every minute of it. welcome back! the writer in you did not fail you at all! 🤗
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS Jhillu baby 👏 👍🏼
Loved it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS
Awe aarti was really possessive abt yash
What happened to her mom she didn't want that happen to her
Uff yash was so ignorant toward aarti
But when aarti ignore him he realized how much he love her
Poor aarti was heartbroken after her break up with yash
Finally yash confess his love to aarti & stop her going UK

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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all

Beautiful edits by Catty ⭐️ 👏


Jhil thanks you for this sweet OS...

When she was a child, her father left her mother for another woman. One can't even imagine what a child goes through when he or she watches their father leaving, what they thought was as a beautiful family.

Her father broke that beautiful family for her. She became insecure and fearful that what if she too faces what her mother faced when her father left them?

Her insecurities made her Dominating and commanding. For she feared that if she let him lose, Yash too might leave her just like her father did. But her love was stronger than her dominance. She saw her dominance was stifling Yash so she decided to let him go. Set him free, before she herself ended up forcing him to leave like her father.


Yes her dominance and commanding nature stifled him. Due to which he couldn't see and feel that he too was in love with her.


When she set him free, he was hit hard. He missed her. He missed her everything. But mostly he missed his Commanding and Dominating Girlfriend. The things that he hated about her, tuned out to be the very things that made him fall in love with her.

He was so right when he said that He would rather spend the rest of his life under her command and dominance, than spend it after getting freedom from her. This one line said it all ❤️


Once again Thanks Jhil, for such a sweet and beautiful OS 🤗





Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful os . ...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my gosh Jhil, I laugh so hard at the strong, nonsense Aarti and how she caught them. 😆😆. He got lucky she only threatened him, he was so not, on the up and up with Arpita and his feeling.😕

Oh Aarti, she so love Yash that she freed him from her. She understand him better than he did himself and her attitude was actually a defense mechanism. There is this saying about pasture being greener across the border than under your feet (something to that effect). That's the thing about loosing someone of something you didn't know you really want, one's its gone then come regret and that what Yash felt. He is such a follower and that's not a bad thing but he took him time to realize he love his life as is, want it like that and went to find it again when he fought for Aarti. Not so clueless after all, Yash. 😃

And how sweet, Yash realizing that he has also neglected her and that he does love his bossy and take charge kind of girlfriend, fiance or soon to be wife.

Loved it.👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS. Loved that Yash was able to realise what he wanted when Aarti was no longer around. Often people don't realise what they have until it is late but I was glad he caught her before she left and made her see just how much she means to him and how important she is. Great job as always.

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