Ragna Shots - The Past Reveals...Our Love!!(Part 1 - Page 1)

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Hello Everyone!!!! I am really very very sorry to inform you that due to my personal reasons I am not discontinuing my stories, You have to bear with me, as you can see I am very very selfish, if I have to suffer with ragna ideas you have to bear it as well by reading my ideas...its like if I'll drown I'll take you along with me to drown. So no I'm not discontinuing my stories. Sorry for my scary pm.

It like today I'm in mood to spread terror and horror...😆😆 Today i was free so thought to give you all an update but what it came out is a new story...telling you'll its was not intentional it just came out like that...maybe because of me watching the late night horror movie yesterday which resulted out this consequences. And yes don't worry this will be really short story, that's why i kept it's title as Ragna shots so mostly it will cover 4-5 parts, not like i cannot extend it, i can if i want, I know I'm cruel to torture you. But that's how I'm 😳😳. And yes with this I realize one thing - My English Sucks!!!😡😡😡

Hopefully it looks like what it should because this genre sucks me...

Warning:- Do read at your own risk, the content contains non-sensically illogical rubbish, which is while reading you'll be laughing like me, so do read at your own risk. Don't Bash Me Afterwards or I'll punish you with my another utter rubbish idea😳😆😆😉.

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PART 1

"Okay Guyzz Lets Do it", said Raghav.

"I don't think its an good idea", said Kalpana.

"And with all due your respect may I know why?", questioned Raghav sarcastically.

"Raghav...like seriously you still ask why?...didn't you listened what that man told us...This...this place is haunted...for god sake and I don't know about you but I'm still not ready to die in the hands of some ghost", said Kalpana, gulping hard, glancing around every now and then

"Something is not right here", she thought, she can feel it in her guts.

"Raghav, she is right, and not only that man even the people around had said that this place is haunted and...and I think it will be a good decision if we all leave from here right now...we can shoot in another location for our news...who knows staying here for shooting some horror show can cost us our life", said Sammy wiping sweat from his forehead every now and then.

"This is not good, something is wrong here", thought he as chill ran down is spine.

"Like seriously guys, you all are believing what that illiterate idiots said?...like seriously", said Raghav groaning in frustration.

"Raghav don't call them that...watch your language", said Sona annoyed.

"Yeah...Yeah", said Raghav, waving his hand casually and looking around the old mansion in front of them.

The mansion was old, like 100 years old, covered with all dust and web, windows broken, nest of birds in all possible places on the mansion, a jumbo well which was like swimming pool but having no water in it, dried leafs on the floor, the colour of the mansion has drained out completely leaving it grey and black in colour, all in all he mansion was not the place where one can stay as it looks quite scary and haunted but still over the 100 years when many of the structures did not survived much, this mansion did with not much damage. There is a story behind it as the villagers says that this mansion is haunted with its owner and his family, they were cruel and who ever has gone in the mansion has not returned and no ever dared to step in the house to find out about that people who has gone missing, the mansion was surrounded by many mystical stories like lovers has been killed in the house and so, who ever goes in the house, the soul of that lovers kills them, another one is of some criminal that the ghost of one criminal has haunted the house where he kills everyone who comes in as when he was alive he was a murderer and rapist having psychotic problems and many other stories revolve around it but no one knows what's the reality. Are there actually any ghost or its a lie? And so to find the truth a group of experts who make reality based horror show has come here as they learnt about the place. Most of there series is actually not based on true haunting stories but if this story of haunted mansion is true then their channel can be the top one soon, thought Raghav.

"Okay, guys stop your drama and lets move in, we have to complete our work within 1 week, we should not waste our time", saying this Raghav caught hold of his luggage and started moving towards the mansion.

"Raghav, don't you think that for now we should move-in in our hotel and rest and come back in the morning", said Suhani.

"Ohh Come on even you are saying this Suhani, I didn't expect this from you" said Raghav, "And ya by the way guys, lets face it guys we chose to work in a place where we have to shoot real haunted places and so now we are doing our jobs, so shut up and do your job", said Raghav glancing towards Kalpana who in turn glared at him.

"And yes for your kind information, we are to stay here in this same mansion so that if the stories of the mansion is true we should not miss any single chance to capture and yes it an boss's order, dare you argue", said Raghav with finality lacing his tone as he was successful in shutting his colleague's mouth.

So finally the group of 6 - Raghav, Kalpana, Sammy, Sona, Aryan And Suhani went inside the house. The 5 of them trying to keep aside this nagging feeling that was knocking their mind very now and then - "JUST TURN AND RUN AWAY FAR FROM THIS PLACE" except Raghav. As they opened the door of the mansion, the gust of cold wind hit their face for a moment knocking them off their feet, startled they tried to steady themselves and soon the wind was followed by the bunch of bats who came to welcome them giving heart attack to most of them, except Raghav, of course, he said, "Its common" and moved inside but stopped his feet as no one dared to enter the mansion, as it was like lightning bolt has strike them as they stood still rooted on their place taking in the view of the mansion, the inside was more horrible looking then outside of the mansion - the staircase was made of wood but most of the wood stairs was broken making the "CREAKZZZ" noise every now and then as if something was constantly running over the stairs continuously but they saw none doing it, most of place was filled with dust, web with something terrible smelling atmosphere surrounding it as if many peoples dead body has been kept in the place, the floor of the mansion was made of stone, it had dark patches of something they couldn't understand, the branches of the trees where overgrown as it broke the glass of the windows and was swaying inside the mansion, the wall of the mansion as well has dark patches and it looked like blood, as the red traces covered the usual black and grey colour of the wall but even though all these was horrific for them they couldn't help but marvel that even after 100 years these mansion stands and still posses the aura of something called-"ROYAL".

"What now, should i invite you all that, please come inside and start doing your works, we don't have much time come on get in, everyone", said Raghav moving inside the house and taking a closer look of the mansion. Firmly all took a deep breath trying clam their ragging heart beat and went inside the mansion.
"Something terrible is surely going to happen here, i can feel it", said Kalpana's Mind.

"Nothing is going to happen, Raghav is here, he will not let anything happen to you", beamed Kalpana's heart as she stole a glanced at him and saw him roaming around the house inspecting objects.

"Nahhh, he will not let anything happen to anyone and everyone, I'm no special for him", thought she sadly.

Once inside everyone drifted away for doing their work from Sammy, Aryan, Sona and Suhani, setting camera in every nook and corner of the mansion and Raghav and Kalpana went to take a survey of the mansion with their camera. Everything went well for few hours though Kalpana, Sona, Suhani, Sammy and Aryan started to feel creepy, their hands getting cold, sweat beads forming on their forehead, the house started to get foggy and there was that feeling of someone watching them intensely from long time, the feeling was horrible, they just wanted to get out of this mansion as soon and the first chance they get as possible.
2'o Clock in the night

Everything seemed to work smoothly as they completed most of their works without any interference. But still most of did not ignore the nagging feeling of someone being around them even though there was none.

As they came to their last work in their work list they felt their own shivers and shudders as now the each one of them was to spend a whole night in a separate room away from each other, having a camera trying to talk with the spirit and catch the glimpse of it. This single thought was enough to send a shiver down their spine as they shuddered with the thought of it. "Something is going to happen soon", they thought gingerly except Raghav.

Soon Raghav allotted everyone their specific room where one room was actually was in first floor and another on second and another in third and that goes on which means one whole floor to a single person. Raghav was in the ground floor. "How will we run and help each other in the time of need if something bad happens here, which obviously is going to happen", they thought but who were they to argue with the director aka Raghav.

Soon everyone dispatched and went to their respective floor all the while taking all the gods name they knew.

3'o clock

Soon it was 3 and the place was as silent as a dessert occasionally the sound of the owl was wafting the surrounding. Cursing a series of curses most of them had fallen asleep except Raghav and Kalpana.

Suddenly it felt different, they both felt something around them but it was nothing around and then there was a chorus..."AHHH", "NOOO", "HEEELLPPP", "ZZZ" and at last silence, dead silence.

Both sprinted on their feet and they tried to ran in their colleague's room but before Kalpana could reach to the door to open it and come out, she was flung back and she hit the adjacent wall of that room, her head bleeding, her back aching and she blacked out. For Raghav, he couldn't even reach to the staircase to go upward as he felt an tug around his arms as he went flying to the stone-hard floor hitting his jaw hard resulting in bleeding, he tried to look at the person who did it but there was none. Suddenly, he was flying in the air as someone hold his neck in a death grip, he choked hard, he tried to reach out to hold that person but all he could feel was air in his hand as his head was banged with the wall continuously till he was bleeding and suddenly he felt he was thrown in the air, flying he ended up on a sofa lying there and for a moment everything went still, he was groaning in pain as fear shot through him and he regretted that he didn't listened to his friends. FRIENDS...KALPANA... she is alone upstairs i have to go, she needs me, he thought. As he tried to sit up, his eyes closed groaning in pain, he became still as fear, terror, horror shot through him giving him shivers down his spine, as he felt himself going cold, sweating profusely he couldn't dare to open his eyes as he felt someone's breath fanned in front of his face so close, someone's breath tickling his neck as he got goosebumps all over his body, the hair at the back of his neck stood up as he felt that, an arm slide around him from the back of his shoulder and then suddenly he felt nothing.
He was still shaking with the fear, he wanted to get himself out of here, the door was few feets away from him but he couldn't, he will not leave his friends here to die because of him, specially his Kalpana, he will save her, determined he opened his eyes and stood up and ran up the stairs continuously without looking back and as he reached the top of the stairs and moved forward towards Kalpana's room, he felt his legs got stuck in something or someone has hold it, gulping he looked down which resulted in his eyes getting wide as his legs started to tremble as he saw two pair of hands holding each of his legs as the pale white flesh came in front of his view, two head came in front of his eyes from either side of his legs - pale white skin, extremely cold hands, their body having scratches and bruises but no blood was coming out of the wound as if they didn't have a ounce of blood in their body, looking up at him the two girls smiled blood, hairs dishevelled covering half of their faces but the gust of wind passed by, made their hair flew back as their lips came into view - dark black lips having cracks, they grinned evilly showing their red teeth soaked in blood, their eyes was black, suddenly their expression changed as they scowled at him, their skin getting more and more white, from their lips traces of blood was coming out. Raghav trembled, he wanted to screamed, but his voice...his voice was not coming out...he lost his voice. The girl suddenly vanished, he gulped "KALPANA...KALPANA...KALPANA..."he chanted continuously gaining strength from it and as he moved forward he felt a push from his front and a pull from his back as he went down the stairs rolling, he hit the cold floor as blood steamed out of his already injured head and he thought that "he has broken his one or two bone", and he was knocked out.
Up the stairs, in the room, Kalpana slowly gained her consciousness as she felt world spin around her, she tried to sit up but her body was aching too badly to do any activity, she tried to remember what happened to her, but with her body, her mind was also numb. It took her few moments to adjust to her surrounding as tried to look around laying in the same positon. Her eyes widened as she saw the royal posh room with everything royally decorated for a special from flowers to food, from accessories to clothes everything was laying there but what took her breath away was the horrifying scenario in front of her on the bed. There was she, herself , Kalpana lying there screaming for help as many mans gather around her brutally molesting her tossing her around to each other and laughing at her miserableness, her clothes torned from many places, she screaming for help taking someone's name continuously but she couldn't recognize it...it sounded familiar but distinct as well. Kalpana was shocked, she herself getting brutally molested and raped, but she was here, " How can I be there when I am here", she thought painfully as another bolt of pain shot through her body, she tried to reach for herself, trying help herself but she was not able to move an inch. The Kalpana in front of her was crying, mans hovering over her, and she lost her consciousness while crying, while the mans continued to molest her. Kalpana tried to gain strength as she stood with heavy breath, she went towards them to help herself but she couldn't touch them, she went past them as fell over the same bed and screamed. She opened her eyes but there was nothing, she was sitting on the same bed but it the room was not what she saw earlier, it was dull and scary, haunted feeling surrounding it. She desperately caressed the bedspread but all she got was dust and the next she remember was she was flying in the air as someone pulled her hair harshly, she shrieked and cried but none came to help her, someone tore her clothes from the exact place which she saw few moments before, she scratched her arms making it bleed profusely, she was crying shouting for help, then she was flung back to the same bed on her front as someone torned her shirt from the back and slashed her back, wounding her , blood coming out of her body.

"RAGHAV...RAGHAV...HELP", Kalpana shouted for him but he never came.

She was forced to lay on her back as there was a series of slaps that resonated in the room, she got and tried to run as she reached for the knob she was flung back and thrown on the ground and the door opened and there was laughing sound all around her, she yelled, screamed, flung her arms around trying to protect herself but she was dragged out of the room and was dragged from the stairs to the ground and everything stand still, only sound coming was of her crying, her pain, she saw her Raghav lying few meters away from her, unconscious, bleeding, she tried to reach for him, but as she was about to reach him, someone again hold her legs and she was dragged away from again.

"RAGHAVVV"...

And she was out of the mansion, she was dragged behind the mansion, in the backyard as she tried to free herself, screaming for help, she was thrown into the well. The well was suddenly filled with water...no not water, it was red...it was BLOOD, she was drowning, she tried to reach out for something to hold but nothing came into her hand, there was still the sounds of many mans and now women's as well laughing at her, she tried to swim but someone caught her shoulder and she was pulled inside the well...THE WELL OF BLOOD...And She Was Gone.

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If not this update, The pm should have surely scarred you atleast a tiny-miny bit...YEAH???

Okay!!! So now as I'm writing stories, I thought to try my end in every possible genre which I never thought that it will be my cup of coffee, But still i'll every genre, from angst - horror-comedy everything, though I'm doubtful about comedy because as you can see in my writings that I'm a bit emotional person, so comedy is not my cup of coffee and that is why I will try my hand on comedy as well...Well maybe after one of my story is completed.

And don't worry torture is not over so soon...I will complete every story of mine even if it takes me months and years to complete it...you see I'm lazy..but if I'll write...I'll surely torture you all with my writings as well.

Okay so much i have talked, I'm tired...see ya all later...

Bye😳😳😳

P.S. Don't Curse Me!!!! Sorry For The Joke😉😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update dear. And your prank too but please don't do this again. And thanks for PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh god that was some real horror
Nd plzz do not give heart attack with such dangerous title stating DISCONTINUING your work girl u do that we will for sure haunt you.
PS thanks for the pm😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Bhagwaan
Khooda pahaad aur nikla prank 😆
Well nice part Vishakha
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You really scared me nice story update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OH GOD ! I am feeling embarrassed after my reply to your pm !! You are extremely mischievous! Good , keep it up ! I am the happiest person that you will be with us. Thanks. Your imaginative story has really taken us back to spirits and ghosts !!! Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U vl pay my bill just got heart stroke don't yaar don't do this to us
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh god di aapne to dara hi diya... Pls continue all ur stories ...
Loved the update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What i can' t bear my ragna in so much pain
Plz update soon
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U scared us with ur muschevious pm dear... Nice story.. plz do continue soon. Thank yoy for pm

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