AsYa Story: Striking Back- Part 11- Page 61- 16th April - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Promo 1: Blackmailed brothers

Asad n Zoya were watching TV in their room. Zoya touches n holds him again n again.

"Zoya, why r u touching me like dis?" asked Asad in an uncomfortable voice.

"U r getn uncomfortable ha wen ur own wife is touching u like dis. Didn't u got uncomfortable wen Tanveer wud touch u in d same way?" asked Zoya in a taunting tone.

Asad was shocked at her question. He recalled how Tanveer used to touch him again n again but he wud let her do it blinded wid d belief of her being cultured n traditional.

"Zoya, I need some fresh air. I will be back in some time," said Asad.

"U meant to say dat u can't get fresh air while being wid me. U r not going out of d room till I say. If u don't listen to me then I will send ur slapping video to all," blackmailed Zoya shocking him.

"Why r u suffocating me like dis 4m 2-3 days?" asked Asad.

"U r suffocated by me 4m just 2-3 but wat abt ur mother n sister whom u suffocated 4m so many years not letn them have their own choices on anything?" asked Zoya.

"Wat do u mean?" asked Asad.

"I mean to say dat u suffocate ur family so much dat ur meek n weak sister can't wear clothes of her choice n can't even have haircut of her choice," replied Zoya.

Asad realized wat she meant. He recalls how he always imposes his rules on his mother n sister n tried to do d same wid Zoya but was unsuccessful in doing so.

"Wat r u thinking? Pay attention on d movie not ur empty head," said Zoya rudely.

Asad was hurt by her behaviour but thinks dat wat she is doing in nothing in front of wat all he did wid her. He realized dat Zoya will give hard time to him.

Scene shifts to Ayaan's room. Razia comes in his room.

"Wen r u marrying Humeira?" asked Razia.

"I need time," replied Ayaan.

"If u take too much time then I will send ur burning car video to all," blackmailed Razia.

Ayaan got shocked. Razia left d room.

"Why is dis happening wid me?" asked Ayaan sadly to himself.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update😊
Loved the way zoya gave back to asad but felt bad for him too.. I mean poor guy wanted to confess his feelings. ..and she hurted him by her words...
I understand maybe because of their past issue...
But what she is doing is bit rude
But loved the way she shouted at his judging habits šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Interesting n lovely promo


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Originally posted by: dreamygirl26

Nice update😊

Loved the way zoya gave back to asad but felt bad for him too.. I mean poor guy wanted to confess his feelings. ..and she hurted him by her words...
I understand maybe because of their past issue...
But what she is doing is bit rude
But loved the way she shouted at his judging habits šŸ˜†


Thank u😊

Wat Zoya is doing is much less compared to wat Asad did to her. If they got married wud he respected n loved her? He wud have only called d marriage as fake which he did for his mother's sake. I too want to feel bad for him but thinking how he hurt her for so many months I can't feel bad for him. Only confessing is not enough but love, respect n trust is also important. He claimed to love her in his mind but kept on insulting her, supporting Tanveer over her n forced her to apologize to Tanveer. Any girl will be angry wid such a boy.

As for being rude, its Zoya in many stories related or not related to d show who is hurt by Asad in many ways even after marriage but she still she foolishly loves him n its only her who makes efforts in their relation or to change Asad. Here its different. I mean its not always a woman's responsibility to change a jerk man in d process of losing her self-respect.

Asad needs to stop judging her or anyone cuz he can't control everyone's lives.

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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Thank u😊

Wat Zoya is doing is much less compared to wat Asad did to her. If they got married wud he respected n loved her? He wud have only called d marriage as fake which he did for his mother's sake. I too want to feel bad for him but thinking how he hurt her for so many months I can't feel bad for him. Only confessing is not enough but love, respect n trust is also important. He claimed to love her in his mind but kept on insulting her, supporting Tanveer over her n forced her to apologize to Tanveer. Any girl will be angry wid such a boy.

As for being rude, its Zoya in many stories related or not related to d show who is hurt by Asad in many ways even after marriage but she still she foolishly loves him n its only her who makes efforts in their relation or to change Asad. Here its different. I mean its not always a woman's responsibility to change a jerk man in d process of losing her self-respect.

Asad needs to stop judging her or anyone cuz he can't control everyone's lives.

Hey chillax I didn't meant it in that way...I felt bad for him but it doesn't mean he he didn't deserve it he is the one who asked for it...yeah what she is doing I felt it's rude but that doesn't mean what he always did was right. ...I loved the concept what I said was at that point when he was all ready to confess n she spoked rudely I felt bad for him but it doesn't mean she is wrong on her side ..that's why I said I understand due to their past issues
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Originally posted by: dreamygirl26

Hey chillax I didn't meant it in that way...I felt bad for him but it doesn't mean he he didn't deserve it he is the one who asked for it...yeah what she is doing I felt it's rude but that doesn't mean what he always did was right. ...I loved the concept what I said was at that point when he was all ready to confess n she spoked rudely I felt bad for him but it doesn't mean she is wrong on her side ..that's why I said I understand due to their past issues


I get wat u said. D fact is very less people r ready to read a story wid a rude n arrogant heroine n we both r among those less people. Yaa it was rude for Zoya which was shocking for Asad but he needs to realize how it feels to be hurt by someone. Zoya realized dat she sud not marry Akram at d last moment n here its same. She was foolishly blinded by her love for Asad n needing for a so-called family who only used her in some way but in d last moment she realized dat she can't marry a man who can never love, trust n respect her. So she had 2 choices- either reject Asad publicly breaking d marriage or marry him only to hurt him wid her rudeness to make him realize dat he can't take her always for granted thinking dat innocent n naive Zoya will always forgive him. At least, she is not making him sleep on d floor or near d pool or romancing another guy while making Asad a servantšŸ˜†.
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