AsYa Story: Striking Back- Part 11- Page 61- 16th April - Page 2

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

Intersting

Keep up

Originally posted by: raspi

intresting

Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri

Interesting teaser di...
Loved it...
Plz continue soon..

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

If u don't mind, this is the reality.

I salute ur courage to show Zoya aggressive.

Yaa, in real life if a man keeps another woman in his house wen he is engaged then his fiancee will not like it n will want dat woman out of d house. Here, both of them r married n also Zoya knows how Tanveer is so she will no more pretend to be nice wid her.

I am liking it a lot.

But I would love it if zoya turns soft at last.

Hope u r getting me.

I found Zoya superficial many times in d show so cuz not modern girl will tolerate all d crap but will give back to whoever messes wid her. Its not dat everyone is physically beating her now n then so she became weak but she never stood for herself wen she cud do dat very easily. Yaa, Zoya will turn soft later wen Asad will realize his mistakes.

The expression are imaginary.

Awesome use of language

Most importantly brilliant plot.

Thank u😊

As for language, I think dis is d 1st part I wrote a part in all english words widout using a single hindi word😆. I wish Zoya was at least 50% like dis story in d show. Wen we have so much stories n shows of heroes insulting heroines for a long time even after marriage for stupidest reasons then why can't heroine do d same wen she actually has reasons to do it?

Cnt soon.

I m waiting here.

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

great update

Originally posted by: MissSparkling

nice

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good update..

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr

Wonderful update

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Nice story- Great to see a strong and gutsy woman who can show a regressive thinking hubby what it is like to be on the receiving end 👍🏼

Originally posted by: rosyposy12

Nice