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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: grounder

Please not about some f**ked up woman .



But the tragic ones are the most entertaining no ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Maroon5.0



She and her sister were BFF and now she is lonely, depressed , desperate. She systematically trying to hit up all of her brother in laws friends, cousins etc. To entice them to go out with her just so she can join the crew 😆😆😆 Its funny and and sad at the same time. An Im saving all the texts, voicemails, snaps and shit related to this 😉😉 For research ofcourse


U are inspired by real life event?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sanguinesal


U are inspired by real life event?



😈😈 Kind of

But some of it is kinda personal 😆😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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^Seems like it happens quite often between sisters. Ur story reminds me of 2 sisters I know who are/were very close. But there was jealousy and competitiveness between the two and now the younger one is married in the same family to the younger brother of her brother in law 😆.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Sanguinesal

^Seems like it happens quite often between sisters. Ur story reminds me of 2 sisters I know who are/were very close. But there was jealousy and competitiveness between the two and now the younger one is married in the same family to the younger brother of her brother in law 😆.



Dont scare thats not happening here. After all I know about this girl I wont go near her. I already kinda sister-zoned her 😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Maroon5.0



Dont scare thats not happening here. After all I know about this girl I wont go near her. I already kinda sister-zoned her 😆😆😆


Then it is too personal 😆

Another story...here they are twin sisters. One of them was my classmate and their sibling rivalry was legendary. But positive outcome was both were exemplary in their academics and sports just trying to outdo each other. And yes both liked the same guy too 😉.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay not a bad idea but I feel like you need a stronger reason behind why her life starts to crumble after her sister's wedding.

Like may be make them orphans or something. May be she was the only really close family she had left.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
maroon better keep the setting/place as houston if it's inspired from real life😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Maroon5.0



But the tragic ones are the most entertaining no ??


Entertaining to who? 😊
C'mon man .. tragic f**ked up people are not entertaining, they evoke sympathy/sadness/irritation/sickness/bullshit. We have enough of that in this world anyway.😆

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