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A beautiful mansion is shown n as the sun rays falls inside the room we see a couple peacefully sleeping in each other embrace n girl's head were on her hubby's chest n they both were so cute n adorable in their sleep that we could see them sleeping entire day n night but unluckily the girls sleep gets disturbed because of sun rays n she tries to get up but her hubby pulls her back n told her to sleep for some more time n let him also but the girl denies n tries to get up so ones again her hubby told her that if u want to go then u can go but not before giving my mrng kiss so quickly kiss me,I'm waiting to which the girl told him close his eyes n he did the same but the girl instead of kissing him tries to run away from her hubby's grip but her hubby was over smart,before she could run away from his grip,he quickly takes up a U turn n now her hubby was on top of her n she was under him after which her hubby start giving her wet kisses n love bite all over her face n neck to which the girl slowly slaps on his shoulder n say have some shame raghav n look at ur age u r the father of two twin kids n still ur romance is not stopping...so what kalpi if I'm father of two kids,I want a whole cricket team n their is no age to romance understand n moreover if I had such a hot n se** wife then what should I do, who should I control myself u only tell me raghav replied to which kalpi reply OK fine baba u win n I loose but now plz let m go u know na that ur two devils will come here anytime n if they see us like this na then for sure we r gone so plz let me go na...if u want to go then go na who is stopping u but before that plz give me my daily dose,u knows that I wont leave u before I get my mrng kiss so why r u wasting my n urs time or if u r feeling shy to kiss me then tell me I will take my kiss by myself what say wifey raghav replied back...u r impossible raghav,I cant ever win from u saying so kalpi kissed raghav,first the kiss was sweet but later it turned into a passionate one n as they both were kissing their two devils comes inside the room by almost banging the door to which they both quickly part away n stands up with their heads down in embracement but their kids were not less then devils,they didn't leave any single chance to tease their parents n now also they start teasing their parents n say shame shame mummy papa,u both start romancing with each other in mrng itself like mrng romance n that too even without locking ur room door vaise tell us who start romancing with other one... hearing this without wasting a sec both raghav n kalpi points their finger on each other n start their silly fight on who start romancing with other one n by seeing their parents fighting like small kids both the devils karan n rohan burst into laughter,they both were laughing like mad n seeing their devils laughing both kalpi n raghav understands the situation n runs to catch them but before their parents could catch them both karan n rohan runs from their...all four of them runs in the entire house,its like run n chase is going on where parents were chasing their kids n because of this whole house gets totally messed up but all of them were still running behind each other n at last both kalpi n raghav gets tired n sits on the floor to which rohan says dada that's not fair see because of u only my gf is also getting oldie day by day,she had put on so much weight just like u n lost all her beauty n charm n soon karan too join him... hearing all this kalpi quickly caught her two devils n slight twist their ears n ask what r u saying mummy is getting oldie n put on weight n raghav too joins her whereas both karan n rohan rubs their ears n say mummy/gf plz leave na its paining us,we both r just joking but still we promise u we will never do it again to which raghav says we both will leave u but after punishing u n soon they both starts tickling their devils n in return to save themselves they both also tickles their parents n after this everyone starts throwing cushions on each other n soon both the devils n raghav rip up the covers of cushions n spread the fur of it in the entire hall for fun,kalpi tries to stop her three devils to which in return all three of them throws all the left fur on her making her look exactly like snow santa to which in return she gives three of them death glares n seeing this they makes puppy dog face but kalpi warns them by saying that she is going to take bath n when she returned she wants all the mess to be get cleared n everything should be on its place got it to which rohan very innocently ask his gf that if we don't clear the mess,if we don't follow ur orders then...smiling evilly kalpi reply to him that if u guys don't follow my orders n don't do my given work then be ready to fast today as I will not going make breakfast,lunch or dinner today...OK fine don't make it we will order the food from ourside what say champs raghav replied back n hi fi with his devils... OK do whatever u guys want to do even I too want to see that who will give u all the food without money as ur dad's wallet n all the credit cards r with my only n for sure I wont give u guys that kalpi answered back... hearing this both the devils look towards their dad n raghav just simply nods his heads in yes to which both the devils gives him death glares n he just mummers sorry to cool down their angry birds,all three of them were talking through their eyes but kalpi interrupts them n say u guys can carry on this later but first just do my work or u guys don't get any food today remember it saying so she starts going but stops in middle n again says that devils if u guys just simply sit down n let ur dad do all the work na then trust me today only ur dad will get the food,not u guys so just start ur work fast n saying so she left from their n ones she left all three of them makes weird faces but having no other option they start cleaning everything n when kalpi's come back after taking the bath all the messed was on its place just a little bit one corner is clean n raghav well he just sleeping in middle of all the mess with his two devils on his chest sleeping peacefully without any worries or tension n kalpi well she instead of getting angry on them were adoring her small yet beautiful family,who means a world to her,she thanks god for blessing her with such a cute family for whom she can even die for n soon she too join her hubby n kids n after half an hour together all four of them cleared all the mess,it was their daily routine n after clearing up the mess kalpi directly goes to the kitchen to prepare breakfast n raghav n their two devils also help her in this but instead of helping her they all increase her work even more but still kalpi didn't say anything as they all enjoy their family time a lot n after having their breakfast with lots of laughter n teasing both the devils n raghav goes to freshen up whereas in between kalpi packed up all the required things for their day out n after almost one hour later they all left the house for their day out,entire day they all visits all the famous places of Mumbai n have lots of fun n masti in short life was full of fun for all four of them,everything was going prefect,raghav loves kalpi n his children's a lot,life is a bliss for both raghav n kalpi n even though it was their arranged marriage but they complete their marriage with lots of love n trust,they both trust each other blindly n understands each other very well but one day slowly things start changing when kalpi's small sis pakhi comes to stay with them because of her studies,living in Delhi kalpi was born n bought in Delhi only but due to her marriage with raghav n as raghav had his main office in Mumbai so she shifts to Mumbai with raghav leaving everything behind just for raghav n now as her sis pakhi got admission in one of the Mumbai's clg so she comes to stay with them...for some weeks everything was going well, even pakhi too gets settled their very well but then slowly raghav starts ignoring kalpi n starts spending lots of time with pakhi, he use to drop n pick up her from her clg,they both together goes for long drives,coffees,dinners...

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Kalpi use to find it very weird but still she never questions raghav related to this but one day all her dreams,trust,love,belief,her heart, everything gets shattered,broken into pieces,its the day when she gets to know that her hubby,her best friend raghav were having extra martial affair n that too not with someone else,with her small sis pakhi only n as the result of their affair pakhi is one week pregnant with raghav's child,she was still in shock as she cant able to digest the fact that the two person whom she loved n trusted the most in her life cheats her, killed her n her soul,she wants to run away from this situation instead of facing it but she cant as she very well knows that one or another day she had to face this situation so why not today only n other side even both raghav n pakhi too excepts their mistake infront of kalpi n as normal reaction by every human being they both were excepting that kalpi will shouts on them,scolds them,taunt them,insults them or can even beat them but shockingly kalpi didn't do anything as per their exceptions infact she just silently walks inside her room n locks herself inside the room, kalpi's silence is killing both raghav n pakhi but they cant to do,they want or not but they have to give sometime to kalpi to get back to normal as it was the biggest shock of her life whereas inside the room kalpi just down on the floor with a thud but still nor she cried or utter a single word from her mouth,even god is crying in the form of by seeing her so helpless but she don't have any effect,she was just sitting like a lifeless body without its soul, everything had just stopped for her,she don't know what to do or what not but at last finally she decided what to do that is to kill herself n get rid of this pain n with this thought she even took up a knife but before she could cut her wrist n takes up her life,her eyes fell on the photo frame of her devils which was on the same table form where she had picked up the knife n within a sec only changed her,the thought of leaving her children's with pakhi n raghav,the thought of her children's becoming the same like their dad made her change her mind,she never wants her children's to do the same thing with any girl which raghav n pakhi did with her,she wont able to bear up this thing n moreover she cant leave raghav n pakhi like this also after what they both did with her so she planned something n according to her plan she called someone n ask him to meet her at some xyz place n after this firstly she just gets freshen up n changes her clothes n then she went out to meet the sane person but while she was going out of the house raghav n pakhi tries to stop her,talks to her,ask her that where is going but she didn't any head to their words n just simply walks out of the house without uttering a single words n after meeting that person on their fixed place kalpi comes back home very late in night as she feels like very suffocated between pakhi n raghav,she didn't feels like going back n facing the same people as now it was not her room to which earlier she use to very proud, everything had changed with time n raghav n pakhi both had ruin all the relations which cannot be fixed again with the time or by their destiny,she want or not but she had to leave her rest of the life in the guilt of trusting someone so blindly,letting or allowing people to play with her life n late night when she returned back home raghav shots up numerous of question on her but as usually she didn't give answer to any of his questions n straightly goes to her room that too not even for ones looking at raghav n pakhi,like they both doesn't even exists for her or they both disappears for her...like this one week passed away n in this one week kalpi use to go out of the house early mrng n comes back late night,it becomes her daily routine but one day raghav notice her with one of his friend in a cafe, they both were so close to each other that whoever see them like these for distance feels like they both were kissing each other but they don't,kalpi was only helping Samar as something went inside his eyes n like this many a times raghav stops kalpi with Samar at different places n at last one fine day raghav finds out kalpi with Samar at their house n that too in their bedroom,they both were quite close with each other that anyone could misunderstand them n raghav being short temper n aggressive nature cant able to handle all this things n he in his aggression pushed away Samar from his kalpi n then he starts beating Samar black n blue...kalpi many a times tries to stop raghav from beating Samar because of which raghav gets more angry n in his angry he just pushed away kalpi because of which she losses her balance n gets hurt a bit by the sharp edge of table n her forehead starts bleeding but raghav don't care about it infact he shouts on her n told her not to come in between them,its the first time in their ten years marriage that raghav shouts on Kalpi or hurt her,earlier whenever if she gets even a small cut raghav immediately takes her to hospital but today he don't even bothers to look at her,after pakhi's arrival lots of thing had changed for worse n inspite of raghav's warning kalpi still tries to save Samar from raghav's angry n at last finally gets succeed to which raghav say now only I understands that why u stops me hurting this Samar because if he gets hurt then u too for sure will get hurt na after all u both r close to each other in the same way like me n pakhi were,till now I dieing with the guilt that I had hurt u lot but not anymore as u r also the same like me cheater.. hearing this kalpi gives a tight slap to raghav n even its also the first time in their marriage that kalpi had slapped raghav,she always use to respect him a lot,for her he is like a god but not anymore,kalpi shouts on raghav n told him to just shut up all his nonsense n she is not a cheater like him n she again says raghav if u had forgotten then let me remind u we r just only good friends nothing else n I had already told u this n u too had no problem with it then what happens now...hearing kalpi's word raghav realised that whatever kalpi is saying was actually true n he only in his angry n frustration had forgotten everything but still what was all that which he had seen from his own eyes so to clarify his doubt he ask them if it so then what was that,why u both were always so close to each other...u get hurts a lot na raghav,well that is only a drama played by both of us to hurt u,make u realise that how it feels when someone so close to u,who means a world to u cheats u,ignore or left u for someone else,today by seeing ur friend n ur wife together in the same room u get so hyper then just for ones think that what must kalpi had gone through when she had seen her husband n her sis in the same room,in the same bed n that too in a intimate position,well u would never understands her pain,u would never understands that what must she had gone through by seeing u guys like this, u wont understand anything Samar replied...if it so then why cant u slap me,insults me,shouts on me,what was the need to do all this why raghav asked...raghav their was a need to do all this because the day when I caught u n pakhi red handed u guys very sorry for ur mistake because u guys know that u were wrong n u both simply said sorry to me but what about me,about my life as still u both never realised my pain, for u guys its not a big issue which needs ur time but for me its the question of my entire life which u never cared raghav so to make u realise my side,my position at that time we did all this n trust me raghav I don't think that whatever I did was wrong in anyway nor I regret for that kalpi answered back...I'm sorry kalpi plz forgive me raghav requests...I had already forgiven u raghav because to start fresh life I need to close all my past chapters among which u r the one n now u means nothing to me kalpi replied...plz kalpi I request u plz give me one chance to rectify all my mistake,I promise u that I will not repeat this mistake nor I will make any new mistake,plz don't break my sweet home raghav requested again..
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Raghav ur sweet home had already broken on the day when u cheats me with my sis n now nothing is left to be fixed,u cannot do anything kalpi replied back by giving him some papers to which raghav ask her that what r this papers off...this r our divorce papers n I had already sign this plz u also sign them n just finish off everything kalpi replied...plz kalpi don't do this to me,plz don't give such a big punishment,I will do everything to seek ur forgiveness but plz not this,plz give one chance to mend up our broken relation ones again raghav plead...trust me raghav wont able to fulfill ur words n about trusting u then I'm fool to trust u again,if u had not think ones before breaking my trust for the first time then what is the guarantee that u will never again break my trust n moreover I'm no one to punish u so plz do what I'm saying n plz don't make things don't worse kalpi replied back...plz kalpi plz ones again think about ur decision,if u left me then what will happen to our two devils,who will look after them,plz forgive me kalpi raghav again requests...so sorry raghav but I cant do anything,if I forgives u n starts a fresh life with u then also some or other point our past will keep haunting us n if I forgive u then I wont able to face myself face again in my entire life,instead of staying with u I will prefer to walk out of ur life with respect n plz don't take it as my attitude its my self respect which I think every girl should have n about our kids then don't even in our wildest dreams also thinks that I will leave my kids with u,they both will go along with mother n that's final raghav,u accept it or not I really don't care kalpi replied...kalpi I know every children needs mother the most but they needs their father too so plz not for me but at least for them change ur decision n I promise u our this past will never effect our present n future n about pakhi's baby then we will abort that baby n after that everything will be back to normal raghav said...hearing raghav's words kalpi again gives him a tight slap n say how shameless u r raghav,just to hide ur sin,for ur some selfish reason u r even ready to kill that unborn child, what was his or her mistake in all this that u r ready to punish him or her by killing him or her,why want to punish that unborn child for ur's n pakhi sin,if u want rectify for ur mistake then just go n punish yourself instead of that unborn child,raghav its very easy to kill someone but its very hard to give someone a new life so plz dont do any stupidity in your selfishness n if now also u thinks or tries to kill that unborn child then trust me raghav I won't spare u,yeah I hate u n pakhi but I don't hates pakhi's child because I now it was not his or her mistake that his or her parents did all that n if u ever loved me truly then this time be with pakhi n with your unborn child,this time they both needs u the most,don't think about me its time to think about them kalpi replied back n saying so she walked away from their as she is not in a mood to argue with raghav anymore,she is totally fed up making raghav understands everything...so this time raghav targets Samar n requests him n by saying that u r mine n kalpi's best friend na then plz make her understand,plz told her to give me another chance,plz support me as u r my only hope left plz Samar... sorry raghav but I cant do anything as being urs n kalpi's friend I can only guide u,help u, show u right path but not only u guys I cant force anyone to accept my words n moreover its kalpi's life so u n me r no one to take decision of her life,she is mature enough that she very well knows that what is right for her n what not,she can take her own decision without anyone's support n if she needs support then as a friend I will support her but final decision will gone be hers only n frankly speaking raghav this time I will go with kalpi,I think whatever she is thinking or doing is right,u cant run away like this from ur responsibility after having fun with pakhi n trust me raghav I always wanted become like u as I like ur love,ur cared,ur affection,ur sincerity,ur truthfulness towards ur wife n kids but now as I get to know about ur reality then I never want to became like u,just for some days fun n maza with pakhi u not only destory urs life but kalpi's too n I know no women can forgive her husband for this thing so sorry raghav but I cant help u Samar replied back n saying so he too left from their n ones he left raghav breaks down on the floor n cries his heart out but no one comes to support him not even his devils also n because of his one mistake he is slowly loosing up his everything because that one mistake is beyond everything n totally unforgivably but still he doesn't loose his hopes,he cant let his sweet home split up so easily,he will fight till the end so wiping up his tears he called kalpi's parents n requests them to come here as soon as possible n they both keep his words,they reached Mumbai the very night only by taking the very first flight n ones both kalpi's n pakhi's parents reached the Singhania mansion raghav told them everything n requests them to make kalpi understands to not to leave him... hearing everything they both were very angry on their daughter pakhi n raghav but now instead of scolding them the more important thing is to anyhow make kalpi understands to change her decision as its the question about her n her kids future n she cant take a decision in so much hurry so they both quickly goes to her room where she was packing up her things n her kids were helping her without any question so they both tells the kids to go n play n they left n after both rohan n karan left the room kalpi's tries to talk to her but she kept on avoiding them n continue soon as she very well understands that raghav must have bring them here to convince here to change her but this time she wont give up as afterall this time everything,every relation is totally messed up n she don't want to mess it even more but as she is stubborn then her parents r more stubborn then her, they kept on making her understand the things inspite of knowing that she is not talking with them but she is at least listening to their words na but when her parents told her that after divorce everyone in this society will taunt her insult her,will not let her stay in peace n being a single mother its not easy to raise two children's in this society its high time for kalpi,in her entire life for the first time she literally shouts on her parents n say do hell with u n ur so called society, when I get hurt,I was so broken,I feel so cheated at that time not u guys nor anyone from ur so called comes to console me,support me so now when I decided to take a stand for myself then why should I care about u n ur so called society who will gossip about me just for two three n then after that they will forgets everything as they will find another topic for their gossip n even as per ur saying if they taunt me,insults me or something else then I'm ready to face up everything by my own but I'm not ready to stay with raghav n about my kids then u guys don't need to worry about them,I very well knows who to handle my kids,u guys not need to force ur brain for myself n moreover why in this world everyone tries to dominant girls, why cant they allow to live their life freely just like boys,why every restrictions is on the girls only,in the country where we treats women's as goddess durga then in the same country why we thinks that girls r weak n is not capable of doing something for herself,why always women had to bend down infront of her dad,bhai or husband,why always women r only made responsible for the respect of family,why no says anything to boys,why the girl who after marriage left her parent's home,her surname,her dreams, her everything behind n goes to a complete new house with her husband in between strangers n does everything to keep her husband n her family,scarified her every happiness,becomes as free of coast servant to everyone,look after everyone's needs,keeps all family members untied doesn't she have the right that her husband should love n care her, be loyal to her...
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why everytime women's ever forced to forgive their husband even if their mistake is unforgivably one also,why no one say anything to boys when they makes any mistake but they create a blunder when the mistake was done by a girl,why women's had bear up domestic violence by her husband n in-laws, why she was even consider worst then animals,why they blamed for giving a birth to baby girl when they were not even responsible for it,why everyone loves to torture woman's,why everytime women had to give up infront of everyone,why still today in this 21st century at some places girls were not allowed to go to school or even study at home,why girls were assumed as burden by their family,why still somewhere girls were forced to get married when they don't even know the meaning of marriage,why woman's were not allowed to make their identity, why everytime women had to bear up everything did u guys have any answer no na so plz if u guys cant support me then plz at least for god sake don't even try to stop me as this time I wont listen to anyone n raghav who had called u guys to come here tell him that don't try to stop me,I wont change my decision n plz don't even think of separating me from my kids because if he dares to that then god swear I will tell everything to my kids which I don't want to do n after that he very wells knows what Will gone happen,his devils will hate him to the core which I really don't want because I know its very easy to hate a person n sometimes in our hatred for that person we end up crossing all our limits just to destroy that but in destroying that person we end up destroying ourselves too n I don't want the same to happen here so its better if he stays in his limits n don't comes in my way otherwise I will forget everything in meantime pakhi too comes their n seeing her their parents angrily left from their as whatever is happening is somewhere because of her only but ignoring everything pakhi told to kalpi that di it was all my fault,I was attracted towards jiju,I was attracted towards his style,his body,his personality,his attitude,I forced her to come near me plz don't punish him for my mistakes, plz forgive him plz di for the most wonderful time u both had spend with each other plz...can we clap with our one hand no na then how can only u responsible for all this, if u were responsible for this mess then raghav too is equally responsible for all this,if u were attracted to him then he must have been also attracted towards u because if it not then he must have never comes near u nor had allowed u to come near him so stop blaming yourself for everything n just look after yourself n your baby n leave all of the tension,streets for us,u just relax saying so kalpi was about to go from the room but stops in middle n again says to her that pakhi I will pray to god that whatever u did with ur sister,with me will never happens with u because I know u will never able to bear that n saying so she left from their...next mrng though everyone tries one last time to stop her but she didnt listen to anyone n left raghav n his house for forever with her kids rohan n karan n like this whole one year passed away but kalpi never return's back nor anyone finds any information about her well being whereas raghav totally wents into depression n somewhere becomes mad after loosing his kalpi n his kids n pakhi well after her miscarriage her parents forcefully gets her married with anyone of their friends son though first pakhi was not happy with this relation but slowly she accepts its but this time its pakhi's turn to get the taste of her own medicine as pakhi's husband cheats her n that too with one of her best friend n not like when she confronts them instead of accepting their mistake they both just open up her past n reminds her that may be today her best friends had cheated her but in the past she too had did the same thing n that too with one n her only sister kalpi,if she didn't get any shame while doing that then why they will have shame,if shame can cheat her own sis then they r no one to her so they free to do anything which actually made pakhi realised his mistake n in the night of the same day she talks with her di photos n apologize to her for everything,today she understands that why her di reacts like that on that day for the thing which she thinks is very small,what her di must have gone that time,today she understands everything but now she can't change the past but at least she can pray for di well being which she did...whereas on the other side somewhere in the Ooty kalpi starts a fresh life without raghav n were trying her best to give a better present n future to her kids n even both rohan n karan too knows the reason that why their mummy gets separated from their dad n even separates them too but they never tell kalpi about it n by time they both become gets more mature then their age,they both maximize their pranks,their masti to which sometime kalpi feels very happy n proud on her sons but sometime gets worried for them too as know they both were 8 years old n they have all their life but in short kalpi was living happily with the supports of her two son's as its said na that may be we do good or bad deeds we had to pay for them in this birth only so raghav n pakhi r paying for their sin in Mumbai whereas kalpi was enjoying a complete new life with her kids in Ooty because of her always selfless n humble nature... -------------------THE END-----------------
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great job Jiya...
Nice os & happy that kalpi didnt forgive raghav & living with selfrespect...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You wrote a fantastic OS Jiya👏...explains the feelings of a woman so well "but one day all her dreams,trust,love,belief,her heart, everything gets shattered,broken into pieces"
is really how it is but as usual the guilty party only think of it as something small

Loving this Lioness Kalpi...gawd she just stuck to her decision👍🏼

"trust me raghav wont able to fulfill ur words n about trusting u then I'm fool to trust u again,if u had not think ones before breaking my trust for the first time then what is the guarantee that u will never again break my trust"...and herein lies the real question.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome & thoughtful OS
Beautifully written 😊
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Awesome update
Very well written
Didn'T LIKE RAGNA SEPERATION
BUT the story line was meant t be like that
Very beautifully written
Awesome
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wow amazing os loved it thank you for pm.
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Brilliant OS ! This is what I like in a girl, maintain your SELF_RESPECT !!! { Unlike our serial Heroines who seem to think there is no life without their Husbands ] Kalpi was wise in not trusting Rags a second time . Trust once broken can never be regained, is a simple lesson about Life , which many fail to understand! Thanks a mil for giving such wonderful story.

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