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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
welll done our poetess.. and mine eyes searched for more imaginative gems from you taz.. and you didn't disappointment me!
The very reference to the palaquin depicts a transportation.. a change of old order towards a new one. You outline the poignant pain dhani suffered through her transition.. she survived only due to the colour of her love.. her belief that one day the truth will set her free!
The realistic meassge of the poem is the that evil resides side by side with goodness. Life minus challenges of evil is unrealstic.. and its presence in Viplav's and Dhani's Ishq, only ends up strengthining it to fight the approachIing winter of discontent.. leaving dhani and viplav hoping for the coming of spring.. the revival of their love..
thanks poetess for some immensly inspiring thoughts.. next one please ... love hammie.

everyone would love ur valuable comments,even i look forward to it whenever i post something. palanquin , idont know how i thought of this transition,sometimes i think with d pov of any ordinary girl with ordinary fate.
posted d next one,too many workload,i dont know how u managed,creative thoughts are not something u bring by restricting urself by time limit.

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Hello Joya...woah you have literally narrated the entire Ishq story in this poem...this one is fab...Its going to be my fav one...how well you have pointed out in few lines regarding the story of a widow who dreams of happiness and instead gets to face all sorts of fraud,lies, deceit.

This also shows the hopes and dreams of every new wedded bride who want to start a new life in their sausral, but few of them unfortunately have to be harassed by their in laws. There are so many of such live examples we get to see. This poem is dedicated to them I feel. The pic shows how many were behind an innocent woman who made a crime according to them is to love Viplav.

They have never once shuddered to think of their sins and the consequences they had to face. Dhani had to struggle all the way to bring justice, for she had the strength to stand up for herself. This is a beautiful poem...Thank you for your lovely contribution to Ishq...Till then take care.

Edited by pearl100 - 8 years ago

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Mishfan
Hey Joy,
Thanks again for another ride thru' our show...this time on a Palanquin...it's very emotional.
Any married girl can relate to this.
Like your dedication to all the villains of the show...lol ..they outnumber the good.
But yes, they did amazingly well in their respective characters & rightly deserve a pat.
So there' s more coming, right?...SPRING , a season of happiness.
Look forward to that...

Thanks sudha didi u have always supported me, lad kar karke sarpe rakha hain.
Will miss u a lot.
Ab aur bye k siwa aur kya bolu?
But I m still here, abhi alvida nehi.
Love u.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: pearl82
Of all the poems u had written...i loved this one more...it's an emotional poem...it clears depicts the sorrows of the poor widow and her poor mother...poor not only refers to their financial situation..as hammie had mentioned next one please...😊

Haan it shows qhat dhani wanted n what she got, n also a transition period of her life.
Thanks tulsi di, u r one of d few positive persons I have found here.
Will miss u.
Dont wont to.
How ??

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Dolly-heart
Simply superb Joya... Thank you...

I loved this poem of yours the best. Here where I live Autumn is the season for colours to change... and our dear Dhaani shed her "White" for "Red"...

Haan exactly dolly apa,
Thanks for always supporting me.
Will meet in some other place if Allah wants.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: awida
wonderful post Taz.
For me the most loathed villain of IKRS is Phool chand:

Other villains made me love them coz they are good actors..they have their own reasons to disturb Dhani. but Phoolchand's hatred for her isn't justified.

I just cant blv I forgot fulchand, foolchand I used to call him.yeah I loathed his look.did a great job.
Thanks awida di for always supporting me.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: pearl100
Hello Joya...woah you have literally narrated the entire Ishq story in this poem...this one is fab...Its going to be my fav one...how well you have pointed out in few lines regarding the story of a widow who dreams of happiness and instead gets to face all sorts of fraud,lies, deceit.

This also shows the hopes and dreams of every new wedded bride who want to start a new life in their sausral, but few of them unfortunately have to be harassed by their in laws. There are so many of such live examples we get to see. This poem is dedicated to them I feel. The pic shows how many were behind an innocent woman who made a crime according to them is to love Viplav.

They have never once shuddered to think of their sins and the consequences they had to face. Dhani had to struggle all the way to bring justice, for she had the strength to stand up for herself. This is a beautiful poem...Thank you for your lovely contribution to Ishq...Till then take care.

Exactly wise pearl.
I m very happy u finally read my work.I have feelings but I dont have words to express, not in English.this is d main problem.but I m blessed to have readers like u who very easily understands what I meant to say.
Thanks for ur support.
Take care.

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pearl82

@pearl82

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Haan it shows qhat dhani wanted n what she got, n also a transition period of her life.
Thanks tulsi di, u r one of d few positive persons I have found here.
Will miss u.
Dont wont to.
How ??

I too don't want to...but how...I too don't know...