Autumn:seasons of safed

Dear palanquin,
Take me to the place where I belong,
Me, the newly wedded maiden,
My love waited for too long.

Dear palanquin,
Take me to the place where I belong,
My life has changed like d color of my parting,
Will miss my white heaven, will miss my mom.

Dear palanquin,
Does my dream live here?
I can see coal of fire,
I can smell lustful desire.

Dear palanquin,
Its name is Ayodhya niwas,where truth is on exile,
Ram doubts his sita,
Love is defeated by decit n guile.

Dear palanquin,
Take me back where I belong,
My golden grains r eaten by pests of doubt, in d season of autumn ,
Here I m back again, awaits my mom.


Autumn is d season of facing problems n how one deals with them,here I want all of us to remember the hindrance dhanis love faced in Ayodhya niwas.this post is dedicated to all deadly villains of IKRS, brilliant job they did, n make us loath them .
Pic credit:queen Elsa.

Ooohhh Chhootiii... I got goosebumps wen u said... ohhh Planquin take me back whr I belong..!! 😭 superb.. nobody cn say ur immature writer yarr.. it's fab yara.. Ohh yea Autumn does come to us bt doesn't last long.its a season of transition..gvng us a start to new beginning. . Autumn is symbolic of the activity..fall,,so that place gven to new things new alife..!!A time for recounting our joys n blessings..M impatiently waiting fr the happy days to come in ur series..!!😳 thnk u so much fr all the efforts u put in fr ths series. .. n thnk u fr ths unique idea to refresh us with ths beautiful tale ever on tv..!!😳

simpl

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Ooohhh Chhootiii... I got goosebumps wen u said... ohhh Planquin take me back whr I belong..!! 😭 superb.. nobody cn say ur immature writer yarr.. it's fab yara.. Ohh yea Autumn does come to us bt doesn't last long.its a season of transition..gvng us a start to new beginning. . Autumn is symbolic of the activity..fall,,so that place gven to new things new alife..!!A time for recounting our joys n blessings..M impatiently waiting fr the happy days to come in ur series..!!😳 thnk u so much fr all the efforts u put in fr ths series. .. n thnk u fr ths unique idea to refresh us with ths beautiful tale ever on tv..!!😳

Haan nuspa dhani k perspective mein sochte sochte kahi jake I became someone else.saas nanad sasur jahape itna dard deta ho... common picture , itna dramatic na hoke bhi there r a lot of girls who face it.when they first get married they had too many dreams which later on gets shattered.ye kuch likhrahi thi kuch aur ho gya.last night I had aydhya niwas in mind.but subah uthke it became palanquin n that too all on a sudden.
Thanks for ur support nuspa.

welll done our poetess.. and mine eyes searched for more imaginative gems from you taz.. and you didn't disappointment me!
The very reference to the palaquin depicts a transportation.. a change of old order towards a new one. You outline the poignant pain dhani suffered through her transition.. she survived only due to the colour of her love.. her belief that one day the truth will set her free!
The realistic meassge of the poem is the that evil resides side by side with goodness. Life minus challenges of evil is unrealstic.. and its presence in Viplav's and Dhani's Ishq, only ends up strengthining it to fight the approachIing winter of discontent.. leaving dhani and viplav hoping for the coming of spring.. the revival of their love..
thanks poetess for some immensly inspiring thoughts.. next one please ... love hammie.

Of all the poems u had written...i loved this one more...it's an emotional poem...it clears depicts the sorrows of the poor widow and her poor mother...poor not only refers to their financial situation..as hammie had mentioned next one please...😊

Hey Joy,

Originally posted by: zajedno

simpl

and they wait for a new start behind bars, I think in prison. and as for their acting every cast.

triumph of good against evil i love to see.

wonderful post Taz.