The Night of The Wedding--FIRST PART, LINK TO NEXT - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: fallingpieces

Jeeez you're amazing. I can't really handle just how much emotion you packed into that oneshot. I never wanted it to end- probably because I knew the end would be heartwrenching. And it was! My heart feels literally like someone has reached inside and wrenched it out and then stamped all over it- probably akin to how Anika is feeling.

Would you ever maybe consider writing Shivaay's side of this? I would absolutely love to read it and I know for sure that if you're the one writing it, I'll probably actually cry. Because as much as Anika is devastated now, the way you wrote her plans for the future and her determination to get through... it speaks of hope for an even better future. Of the strength to one day look back on her love for Shivaay Singh Oberoi with just a twinge of regret because it ultimately allowed her to forge a better life for herself and Sahil...

Shivaay, on the other hand, appears much more helpless. Constantly taunting Anika, the night before his wedding. The day of his wedding. All day, he's the one following her around because while Anika is open to build whatever future she wants... he's the one who is trapped in the one he resigned himself to. The one he didn't fight to change, no matter that he clearly desperately wanted to.

WHY DO I ALWAYS SPEND SO MUCH TIME THINKING ABOUT THE SIDEMAN CHARACTER INSTEAD OF THE MAIN ONE?


This story made me so emotional and it was beautifully written. I truly hope to see you write more.





May I second this request?

Very well observed. It is the one left behind in the space they once shared, who has to live with the physical presence of the memories. And, as you said, the regret.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
OMG NAVIN!!

How are you!!?

We looked high and low for you during the IPK Reunion! #sniffle

Absolutely LOVED it - I'm just getting into the Ishqbaaz craze - tbh Anika wasn't really someone I liked for most of the episodes, she came off as too abrasive - but the last week of episodes have been steller and I can't WAIT for something like this to play out! <3

Much Love,
Nami
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
It was so heart wrenching.. I haven't even got out of bed yet but i have already cried for the day 😭 .. I felt her pain like it was my own.. Ur an amazing writer šŸ‘

Damn wedding is over 🄺
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
I did a double take when I saw your name in the posts .
It is great to see you after a very long time and I'm absolutely looking forward to your wonderful writing..

Arshi67 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Nmyra

OMG NAVIN!!

How are you!!?

We looked high and low for you during the IPK Reunion! #sniffle

Absolutely LOVED it - I'm just getting into the Ishqbaaz craze - tbh Anika wasn't really someone I liked for most of the episodes, she came off as too abrasive - but the last week of episodes have been steller and I can't WAIT for something like this to play out! <3

Much Love,
Nami


Waiting for you to write about it Nmyra! #FingersCrossed ... and toes as well just to be sure :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Amazing šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
You're such a Great Writer .
Please write more and do pm me Whenever you Write next.
Love Kriti:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
FHAT THE WUCK?!??
U R A SERIOUSLY INCREDIBLE WRITER

Pls write some romantic OS on Shivika and PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
man salute to u yaar amazingšŸ‘ you know while reading your shot I had to miss my class as I was not able to leave it halfway it was just too too perfect
the way you started with chameli and anika's strength all was portrayed so so beautifully
and i read the rudra somya shot also and it is also mind blowing so deep emotions yaar
maybe it's the first time I can feel knots in my stomach reading somethingšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
okay now i am literally dying to read shivay's point of view pls pls pls pls i beg you write it in shivay's pov and conclude what happened exactly pls continue as soon as possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
waaah šŸ‘
i cant say anything right nw , coz i am deeply touched wid ur writing
plz update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
oh wow you are back
the way you wrote anika's character, it was awesome.
looking forward to read this story

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