New Ratri SS-Kismat Konnection Part 5 updated on Page 7(26-8-16)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi ..
I m new to this forum(not to the show 😆 )

This is my 1st atempt to write a story ..have never written 1 before..

Its going to be slightly different from the show's story...

Hope U All like it ..

P.S - My first story so please don't expect too much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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TEASER:

He was leaving CBI today.He had got appointed for a respectable post in the Defence Intelligence.
He had always been her right hand.
The team was like a family.
He was the best field agent but now he would leave.
She felt happy for him yet sad.


INDEX:
Part 1-page1

Part 2-page 3

Part 3- page 4

Part 4-page 5

Part 5-page7
Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear
awesome teaser dear .do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear, love it a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to our forum family Anni...oh can I call you Anni????
Well awsm teaser... Waiting eagerly for your 1st story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow thanks for the new story .eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely teaser Anika
So Raghav is leaving CBI
Let's see now how Kismet is going to bring Ratri together
Start soon
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PART 1
Trisha's Residence-Morning.
At the dinning table
Trisha(Tri):"Good morning mumma."
Trisha's M:"Good morning beta.Aaja beth. Maine aaj tere liye tera favourite gajar ka halwa banaya hai."
Tri: "kya baat hai aap aaj phir se koi proposl ke baare mein poochna chahti hai kya?"
Trisha's Mom:"Arey bhalai kaa toh zamana hi nahi raha.Yahan main ne kktne pyaar se tere liye gajar ka halwa banaya aur tu..."
Tri:"oho..mumma...main ...wo...mazak kar rahi thi.Ab agar aap roz mere liye rishtey leki aati rahogi toh main aur kya kahoongi."
Trisha's Mom:"Meri samajh nahi aata tera kya karoon.Achi khasi umar hai, ache looks hai,acha figure hai aur intelligent bhi hai.Kisi ache ladke se shaadi kyun nahi kar leti?
Naahi arrange marriage mein interested hai aur naa hi love mein...Waise beta ek baat sach sach bataayegi.."
Trisha biting into an apple (least bothered to listen to what her mom was saying), "hmmm.."
Mom:" Tera sach mein koi boyfriend toh nahi hai naa...??"
Trisha starts coughing hearing what her mom says and nods her head in a NO..After chewing.."Nahii maa aisa kuch nahi hai..Maine yeh shaadi-waadi ke jhamele mein nahi padna chahti...Aur ab maine late ho rahi hoon.."
Getting up from the chair.."Chalti hoon bye maa khyal rakhnaa.."
She leaves.After closing the door behind her she gives a sigh of relief and looks at her watch.

On the way she stops at a flower shop and asks the shopkeeper to make a boquet of white and yellow roses.While waiting she drifts into her thoughts.
He was leaving CBI today.He had got appointed for a respectable post in the Defence Intelligence.He had always been her right hand. The team was like a family.
He was the best field agent ,all of them at office used to call him James Bond, but now he would leave.
She felt happy for him yet sad.She wondered why she cared,she wasn't a person who would become attached to anyone.She knew she was lying to herself.She was a caring person and did care for the team members but never showed.She always wore the arrogant and stoned-heart boss mask, to never let anyone know.
She was knocked out of her toughts by the florist who extended the boquet towards her.
They were having a small farewell party for him at the office and the roses were for him.
She drove towards the office.


P.S.
Its my first ever attempt to write a story, so forgive me for errors and please do leave you feedback.
Sorry for delaying this post couldnt post cause i had crossed the newbe post limit.
Also thank you for the warm welcome that all of u hav given me.
Once again please do leave you feedback.
😆 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear. Of to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls can u edit the first post and write u have updated the first part .so that everyone comes to know u have updated

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