New Ratri SS-Kismat Konnection Part 5 updated on Page 7(26-8-16) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
awesome Anika .soo finally raghav has entered .loved his entry scene soo much. awesome story dear .it's going really awesome. do update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update anika. Loving the story sooo much
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Part 4

They share an eye-lock. They were lost in each other,when his phone starts ringing. They come out of their stupor. Trisha feeling a bit embarrassed moves slightly away. Looks at him annoyed
"Tum dehk kar nahii chal sakte kya...?"

"Maana Maine dehk kar nahii chal raha thaa lekin tum toh dehk kar chal sakti thin aa?"

Trisha stares at him amazed he had the guts to question her back..!! She knew she was wrong as well. She dint know what to say, so she decided to deviate the topic.

"Kya maine jaan sakti hoon tum kaun ho aur yahankya kar rahe ho?",looking suspiciously at him.

"Oh sorry,maine toh apna intro dena toh bhul hii gaya. Agent Raghav reporting Ma'am."

Trisha:-"What Agent Raghav "...thinking..."Oh toh tum ho woo undercover Agent..!!!"
Raghav:-"Thaa.."
Trisha:-"What..?"
Raghav:-"undercover agent thaa. Aaj se main officially CBI Agent hoon."
Trisha:-"Badi jaldi yaad aaya", looking at him sarcastically
Raghav smiles.
Trisha:-"Aise smile kyaa kar rahe ho...u were supposed to report today morning Raghav."Raghav smiles again.
Raghav:-"Sorry boss."
Trisha just nods her head in disapprovement. Rajbir and Bkiram enter.
Trisha-"Guys any news??"

Rajbir:"Ratan ke parivaar se toh kuch pata nahi chala. Unhe as such toh kisi pe shak nahii hai.
Raghav was listening attentively.
Bas itna pata chala hai kii usne kisi Roshan bhai se kuch loan liya thaa.Maine apne khabriyon ko kaam par lagaa diya hai..jaldh hii iss Roshan bhai ke baare mein pata chal jaayega.

Rajbir looks at Raghav and then at Bikram, giving him that who is this expression.
Bikram nods his head and gives a blank expression.
Trisha sees them wondering about Raghav.
Trisha-"Guys meet Raghav yeh humari team ka naya member hai.
Aur Raghav yeh..."

Raghav cuts in.."...Yeh Bikram Aur Rajbir hai."
Bikram and Rajbir surprised look at each other.
Raj-"Tumhe kaise pata..?"
Raghav-"Ab jin logon ke saath kaam karne wala hoon unke baare mein pata toh hona chaiye naa.."smiles.
"Waise boss maine aapke liye chota sa gift laya hoon"
Rajbir and Bikram look at each other with wide eyes.
Rajbir whispers to Bikram "Bechara pehle din hi fire hoga".They both try hard to control their laugh.
Trisha looks at him sternly, but before she could say anything, Raghav. "Ek min", turns to the entrance & calls someone.

That person comes and hands over to him a small cardboard box and leaves.
Raghav turns and hands it over too Trisha. Trisha looks reluctant.
Raghav-"Arey lelo sharmaao mat lelo.."with a smile.. "khol ke toh dehko, tumhe bahut pasand aayega.

Trisha was very angry at his behaviour but also curious to see what was in the box. She stares at him and keeps the box on a nearby table and takes a paper cutter and opens it.
Rajbir and Bikram enjoy the scene and wonder whats in the box.
She opens only to find another themocol box ,she reomves it and sees the label with wide eyes.."EVIDENCE BOX" ,opens it to find the missing gun.
"Oh my God.." looking at Raghav and then at Rajbir and Bikram.
"Tumhe yeh kahanse kaise mila..?"
Rajbir and Bikram stare at Raghav as though they were seeing a ghost. Raghav gives his usual smirk. Trisha gets even more annoyed seeing that smirk.

"Can you stop smiling and explain",angrily.
Raghav-"Boss,kahanii tohdi lambi hai maine sab samjaa doonga.lekin aapko nahi lagta ki pehle hamari priority iss box ko jald se jald Forensic lab pahuchaane kii hai..?"Raising his eyebrows.

Trisha realises that he was right. But dint like the fact that he was telling her what to do..!! Turning towards Rajbir-"Tum mere saath chalko hum khud issey lab pahunchaenge we cant afford to take risk.They leave.

Raghav smiles at Bikram, while the latter watches him weirdly.Raghav keeps his hand on his shoulder "Waise iss Ambassador kii love-life ke baare mein kya pata chala.." , Bikram stares at him even more weirdly now, being uncertain he just decides to deal straight with him and tells him what he knows. He tells him that he was a divorcee and that he was in relation with a girl named Mayra since an year.Raghav nods.
Bikram-"Katal Ambassador ke secretary kaa hua hain Ambassador ka nahin..Aur waise tumhe iss case ke baare mein kaise pata chala aur who box tumhe kahan se mila?"
Raghav:-"Ek baar Boss wapas aajayein sab ko sab kuch ek saath batadunga ab baar baar wahi lambi kahanii kitni baar dhoraunga..!!" Smirks.

Gauri comes to talk to Bikram but looks at Raghav with a questioned look. Bikram introduce Raghav to Gauri.She smiles and introduces herself. Raghav smiles at her formally.
Raghav-"Waise guys canteen kahan hain, bahut book lagi hai?"

Gauri smiles and gives him the directions. He leaves. Bikram looks at him leaving with a weird expression.Gauri-"Aise kyaa dehk rahe hoo?"
Bikram-"He is weird.."
Gauri-"Weird , mujhe toh nahii laga...!!"
Bikram-"Chalo batata hoon."

45 minutes later:

Raghav goes to Gauri's desk.
Raghav-"Gauri mujhe Ambassador ka biodata, crime scene ke pictures aur murder ke diin ki, ambassador ke ghar kii cctv footage chaiye..!"

Gauri looks at him suspiciously ( after all Bikram had told her), she just obeys him hands over the data to him.

"Kahte hai jiski kismat mein jo likha hota hai wo milke rehta hai...

Phir bhi yeh dil hamesha bechhen kyun rehta hai..."


P.S

Hope you all liked this part.
Had penned it before itself but typed it today. Currently working on the next part. Sorry if I kept u guys waiting. Please do like and leave behind your precious feedback.

Edited by annikaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
thanks for the update dear .off to read it .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome update anika
I just loved it a lot
Bt I have a confusion is d person Raghav or just nam d Raghav nd if it is original Raghav then why did nt Trisha know
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rr2000

Awesome update anika
I just loved it a lot
Bt I have a confusion is d person Raghav or just nam d Raghav nd if it is original Raghav then why did nt Trisha know


Its Raghav..I think I made it way too obvious by his behaviour.
And this story is slightly different from the shows track.
Here Raghav was 1st an undercover agent and now has joined CBI replacing the previous person.

I hope i have cleared you doubt.

I think You could read the chapters again to understand.

Thanks for commenting. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Then who was the one who left d job I think it isn't Raghav



Pls clear doubt last h
Edited by Rr2000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rr2000

Then who was the one who left d job I think it isn't Raghav



Pls clear doubt last h


It isnt dear..!

😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: annikaa



It isnt dear..!

😊




Ok thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Lovely update dear
I loved there first meeting
Trisha absolutely didn't like him in there in first meeting but seems like he is attracted to her
Eagerly waiting for your next update

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