Swasan OS- Rain of Love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi...

It's a first bad attempt of writing. Actually just saw a dream so wanted to share it...still not able to do justice to what I saw but still...please avoid mistakes coz just wrote it in one go non stop.



Swasan heading back home together in a car after trying to get info about swaras little brother...swara is bit upset due to not able to get satisfied info.
She is looking outside the window. Sanskar is continuously looking towards swara, thinking how to cheer her up.

Sanskar- swara don't worry we'll figure it out.

Swara- how sanskar? How will we figure this out sanskar? Like this we are getting at no where.

Sanskar- swara just relax , by tensing yourself like this will not help us. Atleast now we know that your brother is Alive, when we had no hope of it,so we'll definitely find him some or the other way.

Swara gave him a faint smile...

Swara- I know sanskar when u r with me then I don't have to worry about anything.

Sanskar took her right hand in his left hand while driving n gave her his that smile which always melts swaras heart.

Suddenly the car gave a jerk n stops at that deserted road itself, 10 Kms away from the city.
Sanskar tried to restart the ignition but nothing happened.

Swara- kya hua Sanskar

Sanskar- Pata Nahi swara , let me just check, u wait here.

Sanskar goes towards the front of the car n open the front bonnet n try to find the fault.

Meanwhile Swara is looking out of the window, thinking about how one after the another the problems keeps on coming in there life and how short lived the happy moments are. Suddenly she saw it has started pouring rain outside covering the window with it droplets. How she wished all there problems could also be washed away with this rain. No more crying, no more worries just she and her loving husband who is always by her side no matter what may come.

Sanskar was meanwhile had figured out that due to a cross wiring the car has stopped, It has started raining n he had to start it otherwise they'll be stuck here for long.
Just by the corner of his eyes he noticed a movement n he turned towards his right to see the most beautiful site. His swara standing on the middle of the road her arm wide open n face turned upward, eyes closed and smile on her face as if welcoming and waiting for the rain with open arms.
Rain has started pouring more heavily...

Sanskar just forgot about the car n kept looking towards swara. It was a site which he had never imaged but was like a dream turning into a reality. Rain has drenched swara completely. Her saree clinging to her body, highlighting her curvious body. Making her look heavenly...

Sanskar slowly moved towards swara with dreamy eyes.
Swara was standing still lost in the rain getting all wet. She felt Sanskar very near her, she could just feel him even with her closed eyes. She slowly opened her eyes and saw Sanskar right infront of her looking at her with his dreamy eyes, the look which always makes her blush. Look full of love for his beautiful wife.
Sanskar brought his hand infront of her as if asking for her hand for dance. Swara gave him a surprised n confused look but one smile of Sanskar vanished all her confusion n simply just gave her hand to him. He brought her close to himself by placing Both his hands on her waist n pulling her closer to himself. They kept on looking each other's eyes without breaking the eye contact, swara placed both her arms ard Sanskar neck, Sanskar pulled her more closer.

He started moving his feets from one step to another n moving her along with him. Both totally drenched. Swaras saree has become quite transparent which was arising lot of desires in
Sanskar, as if he wanted the time to just stand still right there n he keeps on looking at her forever. It was like the rain was defining his wife's Beaty all over again, which he was not aware of.

He stretched one of his arm n swara swings out of his Arm n he brought her back in his arms right against his chest both of there body sticking together. Swaras hairs sticking on her face with the force of the pull. Both breathing heavily n looking at each other .

Sanskar slowly placed his lips over swaras right cheecks n kissed her there, then slowly dragged them towards her eyes as if drinking each n ever droplets coming in his way then slowed kissed her eyes. Swaras heartbeat are increasing as if she has forgotten everything n it's just she n her Sanskar what exists in this world n it's just this moment what matters the most. Both of his arms are around swara, touching her wet n exposed waist, his fingers tightening ard her as if trying to feel her within him.
Then placed a kiss down to her throat which made swara close her eyes n tilting her head upwards as if giving him better access to it. Sanskar place one of his hand behind her neck bringing her face right across to his own looking at her rose pink lips with eyes full of desires, he wants to just taste then n drink them, the most beautiful lips he has ever seen. Slowly he placed his lips over hers.
Took her upper lip between his lips n try to suck them, initial swara was just standing n was trying to feel him then she too responded from her lower lips.
The kiss which started with a slow peck just with every passing moment turned into a passionate kiss full of desires n longingness. Rain still pouring on them n both standing under the open sky savouring each other. Don't know after how long they slowly parted from each other dye to heavy breathing or more u can say to catch there breaths. Desire still intact for each other. Sanskar took swaras hand n pulled her towards the car n made her sit inside. He took the driving seat n again took hold of her hand in his, n drove back home.

Both looking at each other, still feeling each other on there lips without breaking the eye contact. This moment made them realise that no matter what the situation is how long they'll be married, but there each n every encounter will be like the first time, as if they are falling for each other all over again. This rain will always be the symbol of there love, it just gave a new meaning to there love which doesn't need any words.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice os trisha...sweet nd simple 👏 do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb...
This was one of the most beautiful Os..
Pls do r8 more loved it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: errumz

very nice os trisha...sweet nd simple 👏 do write more


Thanks but don't have that much patience ...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Superb...

This was one of the most beautiful Os..
Pls do r8 more loved it...


Thank u for reading it...have another scene in mind something on "seducing sanskar" but don't have a patience to write it down...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS...so beautifully written.. Do write more..at least u have to write 'seducing Sanskar' plzz..it's a request 😳 take your time... Bt plz...if possible.. Do write that one.. I'll be waiting 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os Trisha 😊...
It was hawwt, emotional, romantic & everything that the show is lacking right now...can only wish in our dreams for such kind of scenes 😆

Thanks for writing such a beautiful story...
Will be patiently waiting for ur nxt story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...
This OS was soo refreshing ...elated...thanks

Talia

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