Written update Tues 4/12

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Character introduction:
Sharada Pandey - Mother/Amma
Kashinath Pandey - Father/Bauji/ Dehdahji
Jiji- Kashinath's brother's wife
Aditya - Eldest son of Kashinath and Sharada
Shankar- Younger son of Kashinath and Sharada
Vrinda - daughter of Kashinath and Sharada
Krishna - niece of Kashinath and Sharada, daughter of Jiji.
Shakti - Krishna's husband
Nimay - Krishna's son
Banupratab - enemy of Kashinath
Maya- Banu's wife
Vikram - Vrinda's boyfriend, Banu and Maya's son
Sanya- Aditya's wife
Jagat- Kashinath's friend
Abha - Jagat's daughter, Aditya's fiancee



Maya and Banupratab are arguing. He doesn't approve of hers and Sharada friendship. 14 years he was in jail but their son doesn't know that he thinks he father went overseas to earn fame and wealth. The son is none other than Vikram. (I knew it😉). He tells his father he missed him very much. Mother thinks if son knows the truth he wouldn't feel so sad.
Jiji calls Banu asking him to do something about Adi Sanya.
Vik tells mom that after 14 years meeting his father his father didn't even look at him properly. It seems to him that they are separate and with no relationship for 14 lifetimes. Vik shed tears .😭

Maya brings coat for Banu, they talk about Mandori who was Ravan's wife who carried out her patni duties. They have an argument. He is about to slap her but he stops when she tells him that their son will take revenge for mother's insult. He tells her to stay within her limits.😡.

Kashi is getting tailor to make new clothes for son's wedding. He praises himself on his good looks😆😉
Banu calls Kashi, He tells her control your wife. Sharada Maya are meeting. Kashi hangs up. He tells Sharada Banu is not able to do justice to his family. Tells her not to worry about her friendship.
Vik sees his mother sad and crying. Ask whether it is tears of sadness or happiness. Vik says to get him married, then the mother's life will be exciting because of saas-bahu drama.
She asks him how is the girl? He denies then he tells her, all poetic stuff, Mother asks her name but Vik says he will tell later when she gives him permission to utter her name on his lips,
Sharada is going out to Banu's house. Kashi overhears. He tells the guard to follow her car and protect her.
Vrinda is lost in thoughts of Vik😉😆 their meetings. Krishna di comes and disturbs her. Krishna says Vrinda is in love bec she is reading book upside down. She tells her to watch films. First love, reading book upside down. Second stage, the flowers exchange and third stage pots banging.😆. Vrinda says how can she let her mother know.
Sanya calls to say she is leaving Benares.
Krishna sends sms to Vik on Vrin hdph.
Vik is going out mother asks him where. He says he is going to ask permission from her.
Sharada comes to Banu's house. She meets with Banu. Maya panics.
He says Kashi can't say so he sends his wife to speak on his behalf.
They both argue.They insult each other.
She says she came to warn him not to hurt her friend. She takes off her bangles and throws it on his chessboard saying he needs it more.
The end.

Now I will attach the detail part for the better parts. I can't translate the last scene between sharada, banu and maya. You will have to watch the video for more of that.

In Banupratab's house.

He is scolding his wife, after picking her up from the temple saying she is crossing her patni dharma😡

M: I remember my patni dharma well. But you are forgetting that your wife has a beating heart in her chest who cannot forget her childhood friend.

B: Why don't you understand that your friendship with Sharada can create an obstacle in our target/aim/laksh.

M: Your target/laksh is creating obstacles in our friendship.

B: Really, when a member of the house becomes an enemy then problems will of course come.

The show a car coming into the house porch.

M: No, me and my son never wanted to go against you.

The show the legs of a person coming out of the car.

M: We want to go with you but the path you have chosen has become so dirty that we can't place our foot on it.

B: Keep quiet Maya.

The show the person walking towards the house.

B: The game can only be played, not withdrawn

M: For fourteen years you have been in jail and we in exile. But never once did I allow your son to realize this. He thinks that his father had gone overseas to procure fame and wealth.

The person is walking closer.

M: The day the curtain is removed from this truth, destruction will happen.

Banu turns around and looks at his wife and the man enters too and faces them. Banu looks at him. He comes forward and touches Banu's feet.

The show its Vikram😳😃

V: Pranaam Bauji.

B: Touches his head and blesses him. Vijayi bhava. Jeeto jeeto hamesha jeeto.

Vikram smiles.

B: In our every fight, the win should only be yours.

M: But see that the fight is always necessary or warranted.

They both look at Maya.

Banu sniggers a laugh.

B: How is your IS studies.

V: Only waiting for the result slip. The result is confirmed.

B: This your gurur/arrogance/attitude is what will take you to the top.

M: No not gurur, vishwas/faith.

V: Mother is saying correctly. It is this vishwas that has given us support for the last 14 years. You were overseas expanding your business but here the relationships were suffering. Bauji, we missed you a lot.

Banu just nods his head.

Maya thinks to herself, if you knew that your father spent 14 years in jail, not overseas then maybe your eyes won't have this compassion today.

Banu's phone rings. He looks at Vik. Vik wipes the tears from his eyes. He tells Vik not to cry.

B: Ha Jiji

Jiji wants him to create some more problems in Adi and Sanya's matter. He says he will do something and leaves.

Vik comes in front of the mother and says

V: I thought that after 14 years when father and I meet, tears will be I four eyes not these two. But Bauji's eyes didn't soften and neither did he look at me properly. Mama sometimes it seems to me that the two of us have not been away for 14 years but for 14 lives and there is no relationship with Bauji.

Maya comes forward to comfort her son.

M: Arrey son, what kind of talks are you talking. Don't thinks so much. Go freshen up. I will put food on the table.

He wipes his tears and goes.

Maya looks upon sadly

Next morning.

Banu tells a man " You understood everything" the man leaves and Maya enters. She places his coat on the bar stool.

B: Wah , one should learn how to carry out patni dharma from you.

He laughs.

M: Yes, you said correctly. Ravan used to be very proud of his ten faces. But to bring out the hidden arrogance in those faces was Mandodari's duty. And she did that duty till her last breath.

B: So, the colour of friendship is not only on the face but has imbibed the entire self and is talking too. Your speech is moving like a pair of scissors.

She turns to look at him angrily.

M: Why not? It's the question of my son's life. Why can't I speak the truth. Transferring Vikram to Benaras like this. Up to today, you are using Vikram to use the law. Why should my son be the hunter/hunt of your dirty ways.

B: maya, this vikram is my son too. Isn't it a son's duty to get revenge for his father's injustice. (Okay, is Vikram in the police force?)

M: That is not apmaan, (she goes to say some other things which I don't understand).

He gets angry and lifts a hand to hit her and she puts her hand up in defence.

M: Think carefully before lifting your hand on me. Your son is big now. For the past 14 years he is living in a veil and your actions will remove the veil. And the revenge for mother's insult if the son doesn't take then who will?

Banu pulls her to him.

He tells her that if she wants him to live in his confines then she too has to remain in her confines. He says that someone elses language is being spoken through you. Mix less with your friend if not Ramji won't do good. You understand. Go!

Tailor is taking Kashinath's measurement. He is not happy.

K: Sharada, what is the purpose of making new clothes? There is already so many clothes. At young time , I was handsome and now even more handsome.

S: Wah Wah , Pandey ji! So nice to see you praising yourself. Your son is getting married, there should be some preparation and celebration.

K: You didn't understand me Sharada, I was saying that being immersed in Lord Shiva bhakti, we get happy cit and happy face which will shine more than the new shiny clothes.

Kashi's phone rings. Its Banupratab.

B: listen carefully Kashi, being enemy still I give you advice. Keep your wife under control. Just like I have control on my wife. Sharada and my wife keep meeting and I can't say anything to Sharada, so I have to take out the poison on my wife.

Kashi hangs up.

Sharada asks what is the worry. He says that Banu has a worry. That old rog, threat on threat.

S: why don't you say something.

K: A lion doesn't get up when a dog barks. Anyways, Banu is covered in arrogance. He can't shake that off and he has not spared his family.

S: Will anything happen to Maya.

K: your friendship with Maya could prove to be dangerous. He knows my nature well. I will never come in between your and Maya's friendship. But don't worry. The clouds that thunder don't rain.

Sharada is worried.

Maya is sadly sitting and thinking.

Vik comes and sits next to her. He sees tears in her eyes.😕

V: I know your answer, no son I am not crying its just that the dust got in my eyes.

They laugh and he hugs her.😳

V: Mother, tell me if the tears are of happiness or sadness?

M: They are neither of happiness or sadness. I was just lost in old thoughts and didn't realize when my eyes welled up.

V: Mother, I have the perfect solution for that. You should get me married. You will get a bahu and your present life will become exciting. You won't need to go into flashback.

M: How is that?

V: like this mother, everyday the saas-bahu drama will play. Everyday you will scold your bahu and Bahu will give you smart answers. You won't even realize how your day passed.😆😉

M: Okay, tell me how is the girl?

Vik looks away and pretends there is no girl but mother knows and tell him to stop all that and tell her how the girl is.

V: Mother, the girl is very nice. She is not a girl but a showering cloud. Halka anchaal, kabhi dhoop, kabhi chaun. Kabhi hawa ka jhaunka. Kabhi teez toofan. Kabhi..😳😛

M: Okay, tell me the name of this beautiful girl.

V: I will surely tell you. But once let me get her permission to utter her name on my lips. (Oh boy this chap is so romantic, so sweet and he loves his mom a lot just like Vrinda does)😉😆

Sharada tells Chanda to take the car out as she wants to go out. Kashi calls her and asks her where she is going. She says she is going to meet her friend. Kashi asks the guards to go with Sharada.

In the room, Vrinda is lost in thoughts of Vikram. Krishna di enters. Sees her lost in her thoughts and disturbs her.

K: It is confirmed that Miss Vrinda Pandey , you are in love.😳

V: And how do you know that I am in love?

K: Realy, look at this book. Its upside down. You are reading a book upside down. And your life is no kora kagaz.

V: What are you saying Di, I can't comprehend.

K: Arrey, see movies. That is why I say, your general knowledge of films is zero. How enjoyable is film direction, upside down book means first stage of love. Girl has been smitten by first love. Next stage, the meeting of flowers. Both girl and boy are in love. And third stage is after marriage when the when pots hits each other. Boy and girl are both destroyed.

Vrinda is laughing. Krishna tells her not to laugh so much. This is your first stage. You're in love Vrinda.😳

V: I don't know if there is something there or not. And without mother's permission I don't want to see into my heart. I feel afraid , Di.

K: Shah Rukh Khan come to the limelight with this movie. Your pain will bring your love to the limelight.😆

Vrinda's phone rings. Its Sanya. She tells that she is leaving Benaras and Vrinda goes to meet her leaving her phone behind.

Krishna sends an sms with her phone to solve Vrinda's problems.😆😉

Vik is leaving on his motor bike. He tells his mother that he is going to go get permission.😳

Sharada arrives, maya sees her and rushes into her house. She is worried.

Banu asks her what is the problem she is breathless.

Is it some new drama.

Sharada: If only it was a drama, banu bhaiya.

B: At least in the drama , there will be an aantara. This is that truth which cannot be a maybe.



They continue talking. some dhaamkis etc etc.



The end.





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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the updates.
keep up the good work.
you are the best.
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Sonia darling....fantastic...dear...you are too good in this .....👏

Thanks for the lovely detailed update...😃

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