Ab Ke Baras... Part 9 on page 11

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Special Note: This fan-fic Ab Ke Baras, is based on reincarnation. (If people believe in it... for myself I kind of do!)

Ab Ke Baras is the story of true love which transcends all boundaries of the physical as well as the metaphysical world. It is the story of the desperate struggle of two tormented souls, torn apart by destiny, to untie in the face of all odds. It's the story of the power of their love which forced even gods to give them a chance to reunite – a chance that they had to take, for it was the fast one – a chance that would never be offered again – a chance that said its "Now or Never".

Characters of Ab Ke Baras

Gauri's Family

Aryan Thapar: Aryan Thapar is Gauri's grandfather, who raised her after her parent's death. Aryan lives in London with his wife and his grandchild Gauri.

Meera Thapar: Meera is Aryan's wife and Gauri's grandmother.

Gauri Thapar: Gauri is sweet person, who never been to India, but never wanted to go India because she is a modern girl with Indian culture value, who can't live without parting all night long with her friends.

Shiv's Family

Mehan Kapoor: Mehan is married to Nikhila, father of three kids and best friends with Rahul Thapar, who is no more, but Mehan desires to see Rahul's daughter Gauri.

Nikhila Kapoor: Nikhila is married to Mehan, mother of three kids and best friends with Anjali Mehra.

Shiv Kapoor: Oldest son of Mehan and Nikhila; loves his parents and family members, never can tolerate any tears in his sister's eyes. Shiv doesn't believe in love anymore after Ipshita's death.

Rahul Kapoor: Rahul is second child of Mehan and Nikhila; also loves his parents and family members. Rahul is kind of sweet, loving-guy, who can see dead people meaning… … … … … Rahul is saviour of all good souls who are trapped in this world. Some people thinks Rahul is gone mad, but Rahul can understand the pains of all people who died without wanting to die.

Priya Kapoor: Priya is third child of Mehan and Nikhila Kapoor; who believes in modern life-style.

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Part One

Everyone is gathered on a huge cruise for a surprise party that only the host knows. For the first time Kapoor family has thrown a surprise party without anybody knowing for a special occasion. Entire people on the cruise has one question what is the surprise party about and why isn't on this cruise because Kapoor Family never gave a surprise party on a boat.

Ten minute later there was announcement made that this surprise party is held in the occasion of Shiv's return from American after completing his education?

Few minutes later there was announcement made, that this surprise party is held in the occasion of Shiv Kapoor's return from America after completing his MBA.

Everyone clapped for Shiv's success on the other hand there is a figure lying in bed, sleeping like an innocent angel. Shiv walks down the stairs while everyone is congratulating him; while the figure keeps on twisting and turning. Shiv bends down taking blessing from his elders while a lazy girl gets up from her bed looking around for her bed-tea. Ten second later an old lady walks in Gauri's room handing her bed-tea to her; Gauri smiled and took her bed-tea with a massive hang-over. One the other hand Shiv danced with his friends while having his favourite drink coke with ice because he knows when elders are around youngsters can't have hard-drink cause its bad manners.

"Shiv, why aren't you having any hard-drinks?" Said by his friend

Shiv answered back saying – because is family members are around them and its bad manners to drink in-front of them.

"Oh really… … … Shiv I never knew you were sweet-innocent-child-who-doesn't-drink-in-front-of-his-paren ts." Said by his other friend

Shiv smiled at his friend than said he can do whatever he wants behind his parents' back, but that would be wrong. But sometime if I really carve for a drink than I have few sip in-front of his father because his father doesn't mind, but his mother does so I respect her feelings… …. … understood Robbie and Arjun.

… … … … understood Shiv anyways let go out in the deck area and catch up for the past few years. Said by Robbie and Arjun

Shiv led the way toward the garden while the elders talked about their kids. On the other hand Gauri gets out of bed and takes a small shower than gets out dressed in her black kurta and blue jeans with matching sets of earring and a scarf.

"Hey Shiv… … lets play truth or dare" Said by Robbie

"Come' on Shiv lets play truth or dare like we use to play in childhood." Said by Arjun

"Fine… … … … lets play true or dare and I get to start first so Arjun truth or dare" Said by Shiv

Arjun: I pick dare

Shiv: I dare you to kiss anyone who enters from that room either it's a guy or a girl. (Shiv points at the room right across them)

Arjun: Are you gone nuts.

I can't kiss anyone or else your, soon to be sister-in-law is going to kill me. (Arjun looks at Robbie for help)

"Dude, don't look at me for help cause dare is a dare… … … so good luck. And nice one Shiv (gives each other high-five)" Said by Robbie

Inside the party some one asked Mahen if he is planning to get Shiv married because he has a nice proposal for Shiv's marriage.

"Sorry Mr. Garewal, but we aren't planning to get our son married now anyways thanks for your concern Mr. Garewal" Said by Mahen's wife

Mahen: Mr. Garewal, Nikhila is right we aren't planning to get Shiv married now and if we do than it's going to be my friend's daughter Gauri, who I never saw since she was a kid.

Mr. Garewal: As you wish, but witch girl I was talking about was none other than my sister's daughter Esha, who recently granulated from St. Peter's University.

Nikhila: That's nice, but as we said we aren't planning to get Shiv married and if we do than it's going to be Rahul's daughter Gauri, who is raised in London by her grandparents after Rahul and his wife's death.

Arjun was saved by his soon to be wife, who came out of the room Shiv pointed at know it was Robbie's turn who was dared to steal a girl's ring off her finger by Arjun. At first Robbie hesitated than got up and slipped off a girl's ring from her finger (who wasn't paying attention). Afterwards Robbie asked Shiv the same question "truth or dare".

Shiv: umm… … … … umm… … … umm, I go with truth.

Robbie: Than tell us witch type of life-partner you want?

Shiv closed his eyes and remembered Ipshita than said a girl, who knows how to respect elders and youngsters. (Gauri is walking down the stair and hugs her Dadi afterwards help her Dadi sever breakfast than gives her Dadu the morning newspaper) also she as to be modern-type girl with Indian culture, Indian tradition who has interest in puja-path also having her own self-respect who can answer back to others for her rights and freedom. (Before going to college Gauri prayed to Tulsi-Ma, than Ma Kali afterwards went to college with her two friends Tina and Mike. On their way to college some black guys come up to them and starts talking rudely, Gauri gets up from the driver seat and yells at them for the heck of it. Afterwards she looks at them with anger and slaps them hard across the face saying – girls aren't weak that they can tolerate bullshit from anyone… … …understood guys. All the black men gave Gauri a helpless look; Gauri even gave them a mean look.)

Is Gauri, Shiv's dream girl or image of Ipshita?

Enjoy!

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Anjali Thapar

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wooww its great keep it up

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I have to admit that this story is great..... 👏....please to continue...
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Originally posted by: dearsunil1

great story keep it up

Thank you so much and I promise not to disappoint you guys...😛

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Thank you

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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

hey itzzz awesomm continue sooonnnnnnnnnnnn 😊 😊

First of all thank you so much and how sooon do you want me to continue...😛...right now is alright.

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Originally posted by: Jiya4eijaz

wooww its great keep it up

Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much and I promise not to disappoint you.

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Originally posted by: Chor-Ki-Kashish

I have to admit that this story is great..... 👏....please to continue...

Well thank you for liking the story and how sooooooooooooooooooooooon do you want me to continue....😛...right now is okay....

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