Were you pretending not to imagine Raman's reaction? đ˛ Because seriously, this was a stroke of genius. This was just like Raman playing out in front of my eyes. I could imagine him fumbling and going nuts, a scene from YHM similar to it totally flashed in front of me đł
The dialogue leading up to it was hilarious đ I wish I could quote them, but it's safe to say that I've loved every bit of it. Do you sit in Raman's head, OR better talk with KP? Those one liners are SO HIM 𤣠The whole him going crazy mental asylum guys not knowing that the real help needed was for her, her brains being in her knees.. ACEEE đ
His shock was so relatable đ And the way you've written it. Did you even have a writers block? THAT WAS AMAZING. And he cried. I swear I could imagine him getting overwhelmed. Raman and not get emotional? Impossible đ
And then he did gloat, not minding to give others a lesson or two about what he masters in 𤣠Only for Ishita to smartly give all responsibility of telling everyone on him. I think he now knows why Ishita was so out of her mind.
There's everything in this story... in your descriptions one gets a picture of just how wonderful and adorable IshRa's relation is (also just how intense and passionate đł) And their nok jhok just adds to the charm... you write is so well. You should actually script some scenes for the show.
You mastered in emotions, and intensity before... but now to comedy, light hearted and spoofs you've done it all and HOW..
I can't wait for the next part... So curious to see how Raman or Ishita tell the family and how they all react đ
Will I sound nuts if I say this is your best work? I am not buttering you, but you do get better with every part you write đ
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