New IshRa TS: The pink line | Note - Pg 11 (Aug 3)

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lerinim

@lerinim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Omg!!!! Pregnant at this age..??!!! Anyway mind blowing concept.continue soon..

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Hehe awesome start - ishita's inner voice is suspiciously close to raavan's ;)
Continue soon

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Priya

@priyadarshini.r

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome Nidoo...🤗.

It was so refreshing and a welcome change to read this TS, amidst the chaos the show is in nowadays.

How desperately romantic these two are?. Crazy for each other despite the growing age, Mr & Mrs.Bunny. 😆😆.

And the typical taunt from Puttar at the end "Drought outside, flood inside. Your appa does not pay the bill"...😆.

Waiting to read about Puttar's reaction and their cute romantic moments that would follow...

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Malvika

@mayraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Oh god that was fantastic I loved it

Ishita's self talk was hilarious

Eagerly waiting for Raman's monologue when he will came to know this news

I bet that will be more hilarious then ishita

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Tc_Tc

@Tc_Tc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hey please update 😭 me sad without update

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nishaani

@-Nii-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Fab!!

Ishita's self talk😆

Continue soon...

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anisha960

@anisha960

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

ohh god
its just awesome
I am just reading it with a smile on my face
continue soon

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9900

@9900

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Please update the next part soon nuh😭

Can't wait to read it

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sririt

@sririt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Update next part soon

Edited by sririt - 9 years ago

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Thank you so much for all the love 🤗

I'm sorry have not been able to reply individually, will do so soon 😳 But for now, I have managed to finish the next part 😛

Before you proceed to read, I HAVE to burst your bubble.

Although this TS started on a light-hearted funny comic note, I couldn't keep it that way despite trying very hard to retain the tone. It is still light hearted, and there might be some funny moments in the typical IshRa style, but the topic that I based this on - IshRa's pregnancy (And I say IshRa because Puttar is equally responsible for it, and is also going to experience it 😆)

This topic is very close to my heart, as I'm sure it is for all of you too, and so I had to touch some emotions here and there 😊 This part is a mix of the original tone, and some of this, overall making it a little here and there. Personally, I'm not very satisfied with it because I've never had to think really hard for a scene to play out 😆

Enough of the chatter. Here comes part 2 that everyone has been waiting for - Raman's reaction 😃 😎

Scroll below for the shot.

2200+ words. Not completely proofread.

Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago