New IshRa TS: The pink line | Note - Pg 11 (Aug 3)

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misavelon789

@misavelon789

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

😆 brilliant update nidoo...Raman was hilarious 😆 he has no control over his mouth 😃. I love this Raman.ishita is worrying about her condition while Raman was in his own world. If I had to highlight few lines I have to highlight the whole story. How I really wish to see something like this in yhm 😭.(not the previous pregnancy 😡, a real baby with caring,pampering Raman)
I think you should add another part in this story 'cause I wanna see how our brave puttar is going to face the family and get skin alive 😆 😆 . How'll he reveal this to their kids 😛 (I know you're really busy person so no offense 😊 )

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Thank you everyone for the kind words 🤗

I'm going to reply to each comment individually later 😊

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sandumanik

@sandumanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Wow wow wow wow what a wonderful story plz dear update soon I am dying to read the next part

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Priya

@priyadarshini.r

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Brilliant Update Nidoo. Simply loved it.👏

The way Raman reacted to the news about her pregnancy, first shocked, then overwhelmed with tears and then the tight hug. .The tears in Raman's eyes, says it all. Raman at his emotional best. I feel this is what sets him apart from the rest, the kind of extremely emotional person he is. I was thinking about the scene where Ishita disclosed about her pregnancy to Raman in the show and how crazy yet cute his reactions and subsequent actions where. 😃

Well coming back to your awesome update,I really liked the way Raman handled the situation and comforted her with his witty best. The way he makes her understand about the bliss they are about to experience in their life, the way he tried to get her out of her awkwardness was awesome. So wonderfully written.

I loved his one-liners about her brains being in her knees and he being so proud enough to teach Romi and Mihir for the kind of master he is😆😆... Besharam Puttar.😳

Can't wait to read the next part.

How I wish to see such heartwarming IshRa scenes in the show and look at what we are dished out.🥱

Update the next part Nidoo..😊

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

hey do update soon as i'm waiting for ur story becoz this topic is something I'm thinking about since the leap started and I wish it happens in the show

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

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Hi guys, I know you're all waiting for the final part of this TS - The moment when Puttar tells the entire family about their baby ☺️ There will be a little delay in posting that part because:

1. I have quite a busy schedule this week, so less time available for writing.

2. I had already started working on another OS (Don't ask me why 😆) which I want to finish first before continuing here.

3. I'm still figuring out how to shape this next part - whether it should be funny or emotional or a mix like the previous one 😳

Basically, this is not going to get updated in the next couple days 😛 😆 I'll send PMs when I do update this story (probably sometime over the weekend). If you want to be informed, let me know 😊

Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago