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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Look who's writing again 😆 😆

I haven't been watching for almost two weeks now, I think the show is more of a crap fest than when Ishita was kidnapped, and yet I got an idea to write on 🤪 🤪 It's like I channel IshRa in my subconscious 😆

I've been trying to dump this idea, but it wouldn't leave me alone. Once I started writing, it started taking a concrete shape and I realised I wouldn't be able to do full justice to it in one shot. So there're going to be three shots. Rejoice! 🥳 🥳

This is a story of grown-up IshRa, with adult Adi and an almost adult Ruhi. I have many good things to share about this story:

1. It is completely different from the current plot on the show.

2. No Shaggy

3. No Mani

4. No Aliya

5. No Pihu (Although I love RD, and she's adorable as Pihu, but Pihu is yet to grow on me as a character)

6. No surrogacy

7. Most importantly, light hearted 😳 😳

I know most you expect me to write intense, hard-hitting stuff, but I wanted something non emotionally draining 😛 It does include my recent way of including monologues 😊

Scroll below for the first shot.

1000 words. Not proofread.

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Shot 1: Rosy Pink
Shot 2: Blushing Red

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

I like reading ur stories
eagerly waiting for this one 😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nids 🤗 You make me so happy...

Well not just because you write such FANTASTIC stories that are so wonderful to read,you make me happy anyway. But today, I needed something like this and this came along.

The premises of this story is very interesting, because it's like the YHM we saw post surrogacy never happened. It's so exciting to just read the initial note that says this story is MINUS all those annoying factors 😆 Although Pihu isn't a problem but this show would have done a lot better for all of us if it was what you describe here.

Ishita's own thoughts, the rants to herself were so adorable omg 🤣 wish I could quote each one.

The bunny and Mrs bunny 😆 O M G

Her own thoughts ran from one end to the other at a very hilarious and unimaginable pace.

But of course one of the highlights of this update is how you've specified how their relation is, They are in love, but its not just emotional but physically also very intense and how. And one needs no proof after the description Ishita has given ☺️

I like the idea of their relation here, that 10 years down too they're just as in love and mad about each other as they were.

This One Shot could have gone either way and be emotional and intense since she finally got pregnant... but you made it light hearted and cute.

Even her fears of being embarrassed on getting pregnant now with her kids nearing adulthood and herself being 40 was comical here rather than serious..

It's a pleasant change to see a topic like this to be treated like how you have.

Wonderful read and I can't wait for the man's reaction who made one hell of an entry with his one liners at the end 😉 😆

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG Nids! This is such a relief yaar! Logged in after ages and such a pleasant surprise ... Thanks ! I'll RESERVE for the mean time 😳

But Nidoo really, I am so thankful to you ... This has to, has to be my most favourite TS !

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Damn! I was a pile of mush at the slightest mention of bathroom sex like f**k what was this girl... I'm blushing hard, hey and only these two can make me feel like that! You've captured the essence of babies perfectly ... This is SO THEM

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update and ishitas self talk is hilarious 😆 Do continue soon 😊

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is amazing! I guessed what it could be about from the title and I was right! But I wasn't expecting it to be at 40! 😆 I am loving this one and Ishita's self talk is just the cherry on top! The way their relationship is written out after 10 years of marriage is just amazing! Can't wait to read ahead especially his reaction to the news! Thank you for writing this, it's such a treat amidst everything that is on the show!

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-K.13-

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Posted: 9 years ago

omg I love this! Who needs emotional stuff, when you can read a light hearted, sweet, witty, and guttery story! 😃

This is the best study break I've had today!

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Svati12

@svati12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey nidoo...

thnx for ds piece.

I ws off frm reading for a while n i hv around 40+ pms for stories bt didnt got tym..

bt jst saw ur story on d front page n as it ws urs do cudnt stop myself frm reading...

n whn i read d intro part dn toh i had to keep aside al my work n read ds piece..n i must say i havnt done anythng wrng by keeping my work on hold for ur writeup..

it ws such a BLISSS amongst al d crap..

THANK U...🤗

Waiting eagerly n desperately for next part...

UPDATE SOON...