Our Rainbow (Omakara&Ishana - One Shot)

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iiROSii

@iiROSii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

How beautiful!

I could see the scene playing out in front of my eyes

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-Abhiya-

@-Abhiya-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

this is such a beautiful piece I read

it was too perfect

subah se har aadhe ghante baad pad rahi hu

uwirte with such beauty

such intensity awesome

do write more stuff

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Promises were meant to be broken!

Now that I re-read that line...I get some future premonitions. Breaking of promises is surely going to come true.

And your time comparisons; 2:00 am thoughts, 3:00 am poems, 5:00 am shots, 9:00 am memories; these were utter genius.

Very artfully and yet simplistically, they lend a subtle understanding of hos deep Ishaana's love for Om was. She may be conning him but her love is greater for he loves a facade of her; she loves him whole.

The poem was another crowning jewel, especially depicting it in rainbow hues. A round of applause for you here👏

I love the line 'She was his magic'!

Your quote😈

The way she looked back as she closed the door to their happiness was poignant and yet serene.

Loved it.

Niki

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Saumya

@Sparklle801

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

It was really magical, I can feel the emotions by just your words. Even I like anshi more but you did justice to ishkara very well.

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