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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1091

Both the parts are good ,a surprise smp was also nice nk aur ak ki attraction mrng mai dono ki awkwardness baat na krna was nice and was a completely naksh type thing which was expected frm naksh... Ak convo with her parents nk ka realization was very quick type means u have written more good parts before sirf ek woh scene jo I feel aur accha tu kr skti thi in fact krti rhi hai ... dream sequence was funny now excited for their confession but our nk is angry now ...
Update soon

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1092

Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Both the parts are good ,a surprise smp was also nice nk aur ak ki attraction mrng mai dono ki awkwardness baat na krna was nice and was a completely naksh type thing which was expected frm naksh... Ak convo with her parents nk ka realization was very quick type means u have written more good parts before sirf ek woh scene jo I feel aur accha tu kr skti thi in fact krti rhi hai ... dream sequence was funny now excited for their confession but our nk is angry now ...
Update soon

Thankuuu so much nidhu for telling nd liking both parts 😊 ...haa dono sarmile the but ab nhi honge... 😃 ..aww u r ryt maine thoda jaldi hi likkhi is part mai dont worry ab i thought somthing hope woh sabko pasand aaye 😳 ..
I will fully try to update next part 😛 ..
U plzzz update ur ff na m missing badly..

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abinaksh

@abinaksh

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1093

Congratulations di for completing 150 pages!!

Coming to the story it's nice.. I thought the scene is real that naitik brought the soap and all... Then after I came to know it's a dream I was laughing a lot.. That's very funny.. And then naitik actually comes home but akshara slept.. Don't know what will happen now..? Is this become a mu & be a fight or they confess their love?? Waiting for the next part..