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Posted: 9 years ago
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this s the only thing i can say... and that you re an amaaazing writer! ive been waiting soo long for this part and youve written it so good! and it looks like the story is getting more romantic by part. love it!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

I hope u r fine now...Take care of ur health ruchi😊

Hmm...it was once again amazing part ...Loved Naksh kitchen masti...it was so cute😳..Naksh day out in CT &Naksh sharing their childhood memories with each other was nice...
Finally Nk Ak became one Naksh😳 ...Naksh SMP was just ❤️❤️..I'm speechless...I was in Nakshland while reading specially romantic part😳...u have written so beautifully..good job 👍🏼OMG..both r feeling shy to face each other..Hope both express their feelings to each other in coming parts😛.Eagerly waiting do update next part soon😃


Haa i m feeling gud fouzi... 😛 ..i m taling care fully..
Aww thanku thanku so much for liking this part nd gave sweet comments 😊 loved it...aww u liked whole part nd smp .itna bhut hai that u felt it fouzi...so hpy...
Haa hoga sab dont worry i will do update next part soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: trishanaksh

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this s the only thing i can say... and that you re an amaaazing writer! ive been waiting soo long for this part and youve written it so good! and it looks like the story is getting more romantic by part. love it!


Aww thanku so much trishna for ur appreciation nd liking my work.. 😊 ..so hpy that all my frds loved my work..yup i will try to write more romantic parts dont worry i will do update next part soon. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-19...
Nk finished his breakfast. .here ak got call from her house..
Ak-maa bauji ka phone..waaw kitna yad kar rahi thi mai...she had tears on her eyes..she attand d call ..hloo..maa kitna yad kiya maine apko maa ..aap kaisi hai..she starts crying. ..
Rj-mai aachi hu meri bachi tu kaisi hai ...khush toh hai na..
Ak was badlly crying because she didnt stop to her..
Rj-tu ro kyo rahi hai koi problems hai kya beta..bata na...rb was also here..
Vis-kya hua hame bataiye ak ko kya hua..
Rj-pata nhi ro rahi hai mujhe bhi nhi bata rahi aap puchiye na..
Vis-ak beta ...hloo..
Ak-wipe her tears bauji...nd starts crying aap kaise hai...woh ittne dino bad aapse bat ki na bhut din mai esse yad si aai ro di bas..
Vis-apko koi chinta toh nhi hai na beta...hame chinta ho rahi..
Ak-mai bhut khush hu bauji..bas apse milne ka man ho raha bhut jayada. .kitna aacha hota na aap yaha hote hum sab khub gumte...
Than nk sees to ak in phone..
Nk-yeh kisse bat kar rahi hai..yeh ro rahi hai kya..
Ak-mai thik hu bauji...bas apse bat ki na to thoda sa rona aa gaya..
Nk-isko rona bhi aata hai ..hmm...mujhse hi bat karne ka man nhi hota baki sabse toh dekho...
Ak-bas rakhti hu...thoda sa kam hai...bye bauji nd cut d phone...kitne din bad bat ki ..pata nhi itna rona kaise aa gaya...meri aankh she was searching handkerchief. ..suddenly nk foreword to her...she saw to nk..
Nk-amm amm...didnt say nd made face that take it..
Ak-thanku in low voice. ..nd clean her eyes..she passed smile...nk also lost on her...suddenly he was about to telling but he got a call..
Nk-hloo...ji..i dont know. .wat u want to meet from me about job ..ok..i m coming ok..yes sir ok ok...thanku ..nd cut d phone...tumhe pata hai ek company ke sath maine ek deal ki thi bhut pehle aaj unhe pata chala ki mai job chod chuka hu toh unhone mujhe job ke liye offer kiya hai..
Ak-smile waaw..yeh toh nd hug to him...comgrtss...nd both felt weired...kabse..
Nk-aaj abhi kuch bat karne ko bulaya hai mai aata hu...bye..
Ak-abhi...
Nk-hmm...nd went ...
Nk went in office nd finalised his job nd salary ...he was outside. .nk-sachi kehte hai apna work hard kqro toh kuch na kuch way nikal hi jata hai..ak ko call karke bata deta hu ki is company ko mera kam itna pasand aaya tha ki aaj inhone khud mujhe job offer ki hai...he picked d phone nd saw dimpi msges..are dimpi ne mujhe kyo bulaya hai..milke aata hu usse...nd he went in her house...
Here ak was outside. .
Ak-sam hone mai aa gai hai nk kaha hai uski meeting toh ho gai hogi na..call karti hu..nhi dekh leti hu thodi der phir karugi..suddenly she felt air ...she was smelling this air..waaw yahi baith jati hu kitni sweet si air hai..she want to take this air inside..remembering nd feeling those moments wen she was so close of nk...she hide her face with hand.
Woh ek essa pal tha jisse maine feel kiya..essa kyo hota hai hum isse feel karte hai aur yeh hamare rom rom mai bas jata hai...sirf hamari khushi thi woh...
Here nk reached in dimpi house nd sat with her..
Nk-toh aunty ne kaha woh tumhe support karegi..toh ab tum kya karogi..
Di-mai single mother baugi nk..ak ki ek bat ne mujhe bhut touch kiya .ki ek ladki nhi maa banke socho bhut socha..agar is life mai koi hai mere liye toh isi bache ke sath except kare ..aur ab mai apne career aur maa is baby pe hi dhayan dungi...
Nk-smile gud. ..ab aur kya...
Di-are congrtss...tujhe pyar ho gya bataya bhi nhi..
Nk-wat...pyar..
Di-ak se...stupid tere face pe likha hai i m in love..jaise tu sanskari ho gya..abhi tak toh mere hair pull kar dete..aur ak ki bat pe muskuraye..choti choti bat yad rakhi party mai gye..
Nk-toh pyar ho gya..
Di-daffar hai tu..uske liye tune job chod di..aur kya puchna hai..dil le gai woh tera..tujhe mehsus nhi hua..
Nk-toh woh ro kyo rahi thi..aur pata hai kal jo hua uske bad bat tak nhi ki mujhse...
Di-aur ti sad hai...sach kehte hai ladke ghade hi hote hai .kya hua rat ko..
Nk-wahi ..details mai kya batau..samaj ja na..
Di-tu samaj usko saram nhi aayegi she is a girl...tu bat karta even tune i love u bola usko..
Nk-jaruri hai kya...saram..mujhe bhi aai yr..
Dimpi laugh like mad..
Di-tu aur saram..ok ok...fix tujhe pyar hua hai aur u r vry lucky ki tera pyar tera wait kar raha..ja aur bol de plz..late mat kar..mujhe dekh kismat mai dhoka mila..esse batioo ko bol dena chahiye..usse bhut bhut pyar kar..nd yeh bhi bolna mai teri behen jaisi hu..
Nk-smile...tu bhut aachi hai..
Di-janti hu..par jo teri wali hai woh mujhese bhi aachi hai got it..
Nk-nooded yes..he stood but turn..ek problem hai..
Di-kya..
Nk-ak mujhe pyar nhi karti hogi toh..
Di-nhi karti na toh aaj tu pura khada na hota ghar se hamesha ke liye bahar hota..uska itna aage badna hi tere liye pyar karna hi hai..aur woh tera wait kar rahi..flower deke i love u bol de bhag..
Nk-going..i love u..
Di-love u too to both..all d best for new life...go. .bhag mere ghar se..
Nk-rahega bhi kon..mai ja raha apni wife ke pass...nd he adjusted on car..call karke bolta hu pehle. .he called to ak..
Here ak was seeing to phone...
Ak-smile nk...she picked up cell phone..hloo..kaha ho..
Nk-kyo..
Ak-chinta ho rahi na thabhi pucha..job..
Nk-mil gai sath mai aur kuch bhi...ek ehsas kuch hone ka..
Ak-she bluses...
Nk-abhi toh sayad bhut kuch hai..
Ak-kya..
Nk-aaj mai sab boluga ehsas dil ki bat..plz wait karna...
Ak-kaise kya kab..
nk-pata nhi sayad jab mai aau..i dont know bas wait nd watch.nd cut d phone..
Ak-smile nd blush...haye ram nk apne dil ki bat share karega..mera kya hal hoga nhi mai..uska food fav gift..kya karu ..aaj hi keh hi do jo sunna hai mujhe..
Nk-aaj mai toh boluga hi par sunuga bhi..sab pyar bhari batiee...pata nhi kar pauga ya nhi..par haa aa raha hu apke pass ak ji...nd starts drive..
More parts coming soon. ..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Nk went for shopping nd was buying things for ak...here ak was making dinner nd was preparing bedsheets nd all...she was so hpy...here nk too was vry much excited. ..nk sat on car...saw bucket...
Nk-aaj toh tum flower se bhi aachi lag rahi ho...i really love u...i want u...sach kab ghar pahuchuga...yuhuuu aa raha hu bas...here ak finished all work nd was waiting for her nk..
Ak-time toh bhut ho gya..bhut rat bhi ho gai hai kaha hai yeh nk..pasand toh aayega na mera yeh suit...mujhe pata hai tum kya kehena chahte ho par mai dekhna chahti hu kaise kahoge bas...plz jaldi se aa jao...she was waiting for him..
After that someone knocked d door...ak went near of door..
Nd opens d door ...nd saw to nk...both were seeing in each others eyes...
Nk-andar aane ko nhi bologi..
Ak-are haa...andar aao na...
He come inside...
Nk-amm...u looking so pretty. ..
Ak-smile thanku nd grabbing her hand. ..aur kuch loge mai pani lati hu phir dinner ...she turn but nk hold her hand nd her heart beat got increased. ..
Nk-nhi mujhe pani ki pyas nhi hai na khane ki bhook hai ...nd forcefully taking close to her...
Ak-kya kar rahe ho chodo na ..but smile.
Nk-chod du pakka..u dont want come close of me..
Ak-haa ..
Nk-ok...nd skipped to her...
Ak-make sad face ..chod diya..
Nk-hmm...tumne kaha na chod do...
Ak-mai toh essi hi bol rahi thi...woh jo bat tum bol rahe the...
Nk-haa...mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai ...tumne meri nind chain chura liya hai even tumne toh mera dil bhi chura liya...chor kahi ki..
Ak-aur tum toh mujhse bhi bade chor ho...tumne toh mujhe mujhse hi chura liya nd smile..
Nk-sach..she nooded yes...he hug to her...chalo bolo mujhe..
Ak-kya..
Nk-broke hug..wahi three words...bolo bolo..
Ak-mai dekhna chahti hu tum mujhe kaise propose karoge kyoki u know na boys ko pehle bolna padta hai..
nk-wat...ok ok...bolta hu...par i dont know much mujhe jitna pata hai usske hisab se toh yeh world ka best moment hoga tumhare liye..
Ak passes smile..
Nk-foreword buckets to her...i love u ..
ak-thanku..
Nk-haa...
Ak-i love u too...
Nk-yeh rose aur chocolate. ..she took...pasand aaya..
Ak-haa..thought. ..nk essa kya dega ki yeh pal special ho jayega. .mai wait kar rahi hu..
nk-are haa...yeh card..lo...she opens d card ..
ak-to ak from nk...isme toh kuch likha hi nhi hai..
Nk-likha hai see in English mujhe nhi pata kya likhte hai...ruko tumhare liye bhut sare gift hai mere pass. ..baitho..both sat on sofa..
Ak-plz dikhao na jaldi...
Nk-hmm...see...tala...tumhari soap..
Ak-kya shocked. .
Nk-haa maine dekha tha khatam ho gai thi na toh mai le aaya most useful thing...aur dekho mai brush bhi laya hu aur pest bhi..aur kitchen ka saman u loved cooking..
Ak-tum mere liye yeh sab laye ho...meri soap brush ..
Nk-mujhe pata tha tum shocked ho jaogi because sampoo nhi laya .
ak-kya..
Nk-dekha ...but laya hu u know tumhari sampoo pe ek pe ek free ka offer bhi chal raha tha toh le aaya...
Ak-bucket ke sath bhi rose aur card free mila na..
Nk-tumhe kaise pata chala..maine dekha toh chocolate bhi le li...aaj toh mujhe benefits honge bhut..
Ak-saram nhi aati koi movies nhi dekhi esse koi propose karta hai life time yad rahega...
Nk-maine toh English movie dekhi hai. .usme toh yeh bhi nhi hota direct ..
Ak-kya par thoda sa romantic tarike se toh bolte ..
nk-i love u ..aur mujhe nhi aata bolna ..
Ak-mai bhi kaha fas gai...dinner lati hu..but he hold to her..jane do na..
Nk-no..sab de diya ab ek kiss ..gave naughty smile..
Ak-bilkul nhi...chodo..
Nk-sat to her in his lap...ab toh dogi na ...ticking on her shoulder. .aaj toh bol diya na..
Ak-esse..
Nk-jaise bhi ...he come close so close of her nd put his lips on her nd starts kissing but she was pushing to him because she was not hpy with his proposal. ...ammm...he grabbed her lips but she pushed to him..
Ak-waah ji dhokebaj ..
Nk-haa...opens his eyes...
He was imagined all nd kissing to rose..
nk-yeh mera dream tha thank god ak ne mujhe hataya nhi aur dokebaj..
here ak throwed pillows. .
Ak-hato dramebaj...nd come in sence. .are nk kaha hai ...oo god it was dream...wipe her eyes...nk mujhe esse propose karta toh mai toh panjab...thank god it was dream...mujhe shop shampoo yeh gift nhi chahiye..par nk toh hindi movie dekhta hi nhi woh romantic tarike se proposal kaise karega ...


Nk-oo god mera dream bhut alg hi tha...kahi sach mai jate hi ak ke pass jauga toh bhut ajib lagega pehle thodi bat karege dinner karege than ..suddenly he got call...
Are yeh no kiska hai...hloo...tune call kyo kiya..
Nam-plz nk jaldi aa ja. .mera accident ho gaya hai ..
Nk-waah tera accident ho gaya aur tu khud call kar raha ..
Nam-haa yr plz aaja batata hu ..road no..
Nk-itni dur mujhe late ho jayegi ek toh mai itne important work pe ja raha tha aur tu saram nhi aati tujhe dekh ke gadi nhi chala sakta mujhe yeh umid nhi thi tujhse sach mai kitne careless ho ..
Na-ohoo pehle aaja phir chila lena yr. .
Nk-aata hu...he starts driving. .
Ak-late pe late kar raha atleast mujhe bata de toh kuch pata chal jaye..
Now nk reached near of naman nd sees to him..
Nk-waah waah...aache khase toh baithe ho..bike ko rest de rakhi hai..
Na-see yeh bike mere upar gir gai thi kitni muskil se nikla hu..tyjhe pata hai mera icecream khane ko man hua ..mai ja raha tha bike roki ruki hi nhi samne gadi aa rahi thi aur thedi hui aur yeh mere upar hi gir gai..
Nk-yeh ice cream kyo khate hai log waha meri biwi mera wait kar rahi mujhe usse dil ki bat bolni hai aur tum log...
Na-plz mujhe doctor ke pass dikha ke chod de ghar plz..
Nk-chal ...nk took to him near of doctor. .
Here ak was calling to him but he forgot his phone in car..
Dey came outside. .
Nk-kuch hua bhi nhi pair tuta bhi nhi..dekha jabardasti doctor. ..
Na-tu itna chid kyo raha kisi aur ko bula leta toh thik hota..tujhe toh kush hona chahiye..
Nk-hihi..see..m hpy ..nachu..yaiee mujhe late ho gai.waha ak mera wait kar rahi hogi...mera cell phone. .both sat on car..nk sees his phone upsss switched off..
Nk-la apna phone de..
Na-tut gya thabhi std call kiya..
Nk-tu kisi kam ka nhi..
Na-are yr bhabhi ko bol dena pahuch ke kon sa woh kahi bhag rahi teri hi hai..
Nk-i know par mujhe abhi bolna tha tere pass aatak gya aainda dhayan se chalana bike ..go...house aagya..
Na-thanku...ja tu warna aur kosega mujhe sare raste bhar kosta hua aaya hai..
Nk-koi problems hui na batauga tujhe ...par i know woh wait karegi subah hui toh bhi..
Na-all d best go...
Nk starts fast driving now..
Nd finally he reached in house..
He opened d door..
Nk-are khula hai ..means jag rahi...dhree jata hu...he swlly swlly entered in house ..in room..
Ak was on bed...he saw that she was in turning position.
Nk-jaldi se bol deta hu..ak..
Ak..in low voice. ..yeh..
He went near of her..nd sees to her she was in deep sleep ..
Nk-ak so gai yeh so kaise sakti hai mera wait ..ofoo..
Ab ???? 😲 ..
So guy's. .i really want to know about this part it was gud or not..
Plzzz press like button if u like thispart nd leave comments. .i m waiting. ..
Plz my all frds who r reading tell plzzz...
Precap-in morning now nk ki pyar pe hai gusse ka war issi tarike se karega apne pyar ka ijhhar...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice good and amazing part... cake scene is superb.. and their outing to visit capetown is mindblowing. .. like naitik masti 😊 naksh share their childhood memories with each other that was the best scene of part.. because of this they get to know each other more and after that smp uske bare me to maine tumhe pahle hi bata diya hai.. it was just ❤️ in mng their shyness was so sweet ... but I wants to see their confession ... how they tell each other about their feeling.. i hope you will show it.. overall nice part waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

very nice good and amazing part... cake scene is superb.. and their outing to visit capetown is mindblowing. .. like naitik masti 😊 naksh share their childhood memories with each other that was the best scene of part.. because of this they get to know each other more and after that smp uske bare me to maine tumhe pahle hi bata diya hai.. it was just ❤️ in mng their shyness was so sweet ... but I wants to see their confession ... how they tell each other about their feeling.. i hope you will show it.. overall nice part waiting for next part 😊


Aww thanku so much for liking this part nd gave sweet comments loved it 😊 ...aww u liked that masti scene 😃 ..
Aww haa i know how much u liked smp..all can i do because of my frds support. .def i will try to write sooner soon nd confress hoga thoda interesting bhi hoga i thought somthing hope u all will like 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Next part is on page 149 page ..
Read my frdss nd tell??
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice part ruchi just loved it😊...Ak calls to maa bauji was so emotional...poor Ak missing them so much😭..Nk &dimpi ki friendship is very good..loved their conv &how she made Nk realised that he is in love with Ak😳...ohh...it was a dream sequence of Naksh proposing😆..It was cute &funny shampoo soap brush haha🤣...Naman ne Sab gadbad kardiya..here Ak is waiting but bfre Nk reached home she slept...let us now see how our Nk is going to propose Ak..Hope it will be most romantic proposal❤️..Eagerly waiting do update soon😛
Thank u ruchi😃u r taking so much effort in writing this wonderful ff&making us to relieve Naksh memories which we r missing...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

Very nice part ruchi just loved it😊...Ak calls to maa bauji was so emotional...poor Ak missing them so much😭..Nk &dimpi ki friendship is very good..loved their conv &how she made Nk realised that he is in love with Ak😳...ohh...it was a dream sequence of Naksh proposing😆..It was cute &funny shampoo soap brush haha🤣...Naman ne Sab gadbad kardiya..here Ak is waiting but bfre Nk reached home she slept...let us now see how our Nk is going to propose Ak..Hope it will be most romantic proposal❤️..Eagerly waiting do update soon😛

Thank u ruchi😃u r taking so much effort in writing this wonderful ff&making us to relieve Naksh memories which we r missing...


Thankuuu so much fouzi for liking this part nd gave sach a sweet comments loved it totally 😃 ...aww u liked both frdship nd that scene...
Haa i wrote thaki thoda sa hasi aur enjoyment ho 😆 normally hamko aaj kal hasne ko nhi milta na so..
Haa it will be romantic hope sabko pasand aaye i will always try to make my ff gud .. 😊 ...aww m so hpy fouzi atleast tum log isko read karke enjoy kar rahe ho..this is big.. 😊

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