NiBir SS - ***A SPARKLING DOLL*** [part-4a updated] [DISCONTINUE]

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Wohooo the update was really amazing!! I imagined it with horror effects 😈
That I don't know y? 🤣
Parcel kisne bheja hoga??
Mincky started barking... Dogs can see the evil spirits I have heard!! 😲
Suddenly that music...
Jab sab chale gye doll started dancing on its place... 😲
That was the awesomesssttt part ansh !! Ekdum horror feel aya meko 😉

liya who was smiling...Her hand were dripping a red liquid
Ye line ka matlab nai samja meko!! Uske hath se red liquid tapak raha tha?? Aisa likha h kya??

PS. Tera A/N 😆
Me puchne hi wali thi ye story kahan se Kahn ko aa gyi ji? Liya ne Lisa shadow dekha tha wahan se direct nibir ki party after buying the house?? So it is part of ur story only!!! M really excited to know more...
Loving this story... Update soon plzzz

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 9 years ago

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Snow12345654321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Superb update 👏

Scary doll it is😲

Very nice😊

Continue soon pls😃

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Part-3
A RIP

Nibir were sleeping peacefully in their room when suddenly again a beautiful belle song played and doors of rooms and windows open up and close up with a loud thud which cause a negative impact on family...
Nibir get up becoz of noises an get up from bed...
Nisha look at kabir while he assure her through eyes and gesture to move forward he will follow her...
She nodded and start moving forward with hesitation...
They entered in liya's room and find her doing same step of belle as doll did and find doll kept on coffee table rotating on its place.She was sparkling more than earlier and some redliquid was flowing from liya's hand making them horrified...
Kabir run towards liya who was in deep slumber...
He her up in his arms and placed her softly on bed...
Nisha hold her hand but there was nothing...She look at doll who stop rotating for a second and than started rotating from another side which is quite unbelievable...
Nisha try to ignore and gesture kabir to come with her...
Kabir nodded place a soft kiss on liya's forehead and come out with nisha...

Nisha hold his hands tightly and gesture him to keep calm while he nodded...
They walk down stairs and close all the doors and windows...
Kabir settle himself on couch and hold his head by his hands while nisha stand beside him and keep her hand slightly on his shoulder and squeeze it...

The music was still playing and after some seconds kabir ask nisha to go and off the music... She nodded and move towards dance room while kabir move towards balcony of his room and started looking scenery in front of him...

At dance room

Nisha open the cupboard but started to take steps backward as she find minky placed their surrounded with the pool of blood his eye balls were moving making her horrified... Suddenly she bumped into something and shout out loudly... But when she turn around she found that CD player placed their playing that belle sound...
She off the player and run down stairs but find no one but when her eyes fall on table she fell down on floor and screamed for kabir at the top of her voice and cold rip fell down from her eyes...

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

aaaiiyooo part 3 b daal diya?? 😲
I just unresd upper...
for 2b...

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

ress for part3

unres

Super se uperwala update...
Full of horror!!!
Belle music suddenly start hona! Door open close hona...
Liya dancing with doll and doll sparkling more 😕
Liya k hath se red liquid then achank gayab... Doll ka dusri side me ghumna!!!
Then cupboard me mickey.. In pool of blood.. Table me kya dekha nisha ne Jo behosh ho gyi wo??? 😵
Want to know... Continue asap plzzz

PS. Meine title ko R.I.P padi 🤣
Rest in peace wala 🤣

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 9 years ago

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Tasso rathod ko sharma bana diya...🤣

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neha_zamia500

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Omg yaar yeh kuch jada hi scary hai. Nice.. I love horror.. I guess nor scare of it..

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Part-4a
The Meeting

Nisha again look at table and find doll standing on its place without any movement while kabir came there all frightened
"Nisha kya huva are you ok" kabir asked with concern while she nodded and get up with the support of kabir...
Suddenly a cold whirl of wind pass through them while nisha look at kabir...
"kabir yeh doll toh liya ke room mai thi" she said...
"nhi nisha woh toh yhi thi tum kuch jyada hi soch rhi ho chalo hum room mai chalte hai" he said while she nodded...
When they turn around again the doll started to rotate on its place...

At Nibir's room
They lay down on bed all tensed while nisha look towards kabir thinking of something...
"kya kru kabir ko minky ke bare mai btavu ya nhi" she thought in her mind...
"nisha tumeh kuch kehna hai" he ask
"nhi kuch nhi" she and dozed off snuggling more in him...

At Morning 5:00 am
Tip...top!! a sound of water dropping wake her up...She rubbed her eyes roughly and get up from bed...
She came out of the after getting fresh up and look at kabir who was in deep slumber...
She smiled mischievously and throw a glass full of water on him without any warning present on coffee table...
He get up all shocked and look at nisha angry...
But his anger was all vanished in a thin air when they hear liya moving towards dance room in her sleep...
Kabir run towards her catch her while nisha follow them...
Liya open her eyes and laugh out loud on them while nisha took a deep breath...
"I m ok dad just joking" she said and hug him while he smiled and hold her safely in his arms...
"Waiseh dad minky kha hai" she asked innocently...
"baby mujeh toh nhi pta tumeh pta hai kya nisha" he asked looking towards her...
"nhi m...mujeh n...nhi pt...pta" she said and smiled sweetly...
"oh ok mai ready ho kr ati hu" liya said move towards her room...
"Aur mai bhi dinner ready krti hu tab tak kabir tum bhi fresh hoke neeche ajavo" nisha said and move down stairs while move towards room...

At Enterance Hall

Nisha lit up a candle and keep it in front of cross sign...
She closed her eyes when cold air pass through her...
Nisha[monologue]- see i m not a christian but this won't mean that i won't worship of Jesus Christ...Oh Jesus plz help me i don't know what is happening in this house but yes it's not good for us...I want that you protect me and my family from all bad spirits present over here...Yes this is true that i don't believe in them but may be its our mistake...
She open her eyes slowly when again a cold whirl of air pass through her soothing her all pain and problems...She smiled and leave from there...

At Garden...

They have their breakfast and duo father and daughter leave for their work while nisha move towards garden as her work starts at 1:30pm...
She was walking in her garden remembering that terrifying night when a loud sound of bark come from mansion...
She mumbled Minky and run towards mansion...

At mansion...

Nisha enter in and here there when an another sound of bark came from liya's room...
She run towards liya's and found minky there...She hug him tight and brought his breakfast in his bowl...
She was more than happy when her eyes fall on rock chair present there...
It was moving on its place...Making her lost in it when a sound of bell come enterance hall...
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