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plaksha2002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awsmmm.. Liya ne ghost dekha kya 😵... Nd thanks for the pm

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

superb update..
gradually d story has becoming more adventurous n interesting.

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: plaksha2002
Awsmmm.. Liya ne ghost dekha kya 😵... Nd thanks for the pm

Thanks dear 😃
jo bhi Liya ne dekha shayad vo second update mai pta chal jai😉

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome chptr

Thanks dear 😃

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
superb update..
gradually d story has becoming more adventurous n interesting.

Thanks Shruti 😃

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

horror story 😲
meee excitedddsss 😃
nice character sketch... bhoot oakadne walo ko b bulaya h 🤣
maza ayega!!

wohooo prologue sounds cool & interesting !!!
Doll me bhoot hoga 😈
phook 2 and conjuring ki yaad ari 😉

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: TASYAM
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againnn ansh 🤣
index banati kyu h tu jab update nai karna isko 🤣
phirse mujhe part 1 & 2 dhoondhne ki mehnat krni hogi 😵

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Part1
So confusing !! 😆
HAMILTON , JORDON AND CHAMLI 🤣
I read nibir convo twice to understand it 😆
Kabir same mistake dubara nai karta but he did it once!! Marrying nishu twice ! Haawww kabir 😲 🤣
Nisha ka gussa 🤣
Today day is so cool na? 😃
Ghar chal phir batayegi nisha tukhe kabiree 🤣
Gate me itni dust!! Haunted house 😲
Door open karte hi twz hawa chali but they ignore... 😕
They shouldn't have ignored it!! 🤔
Mr Jordon ka looks joker jaise h 🤣
And they entered the mention... Wooo ... to be continued... Going to read next chapter!! Story is interesting 😉

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Part2
Mention ka interior bahut acha lag raha h!! 😳
And that bug cross without any dust!! That's weird and entry lete hue mr Jordon ne Jesus bola!! I guess house isn't rumoured but actually haunted!!! That count of 15?? Kuch raaz h uske peeche... 😲
i m Excited to know it!! 😉
Liya ne kiska shadow dekha?? 😕
Part 2a ye hai 2b kahan h????
Wannna read more!!!

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

PART-2b
Entry Of Evil

Congratulations mr. and mrs. Kumar at last you people have your own house... someone congratulated while nibir thanked them...
there was a party organized by nibir as they buy the mansion ...
Nibir were busy with some peoples when liya come from behind and back hugged nisha...
She turn around knee down..."what happen baby she ask caressing her back...
"mom nanu aur nani ka call aya tha unhone ek letter bheja hai aur kisi ne kuch parcel bhi bheja hai" she said cutely
"oh ok toh phir hum party ke baad parcel or letter ko open krenge tab tak ap party enjoy kro ok" nisha said while she nodded and run towards her friends...
After Party------------
Nibir and liya were present in hall... Nisha read the letter loudly and look towards parcel...
So shall we open the parcel... nisha asked looking towards the excited faces...
"Yes" duo father and daughter replied while nisha smiled and open the parcel and there was a beautiful crystal doll beautified with pearls standing in belle dance position... The height of the doll was exact of their dog mincky who barked out loud and start behaving unusual...
kabir dekho iseh kya hogya achank yeh aise behave kyu krne lga... nisha said and started wondering...
Suddenly a beautiful belle music started to play making them confuse...
Mom shayad yeh song ki awaj doll seh arhi hai... liya said while nisha nodded and checked but the song was not coming from there...
Kabir i think yeh dance room seh arhi hai... nisha said thinking for a second...
I think you re right nisha kabir said trying identify the location...
Oh ok toh mai dekkh kar ati hu tab tak tum minky koh dekho kya huva hai see aiseh achanak seh ghar seh bhagya nisha said looking out and move towards room while kabir go out to check the mincky while liya followed him...
When they all were out at that time suddenly the doll started to twirl on its place...
Nisha check out the place find that the music was playing inside the cupboard present there... She open the cupboard and found an old CD player... She off the CD player and go down stairs to find doll rotating on its place ...
Nisha smile and start adoring it and got lost in her beauty when someone tap on her shoulders making her horrified... She look at the person and find kabir laughing out loud...
Where is liya... she asked angrily
while he answered that she is playing with minky to calm him down when shouted no i m here and that someone non other than liya who was smiling...Her hand were dripping a red liquid which go unnoticed by nibir...
"So hum yeh doll abhi yhi chod dete hai kal dekhenge ki ishka kya krna hai " nisha said
"OK so let's go for a deep sleep sweety" kabir said and pick up liya in his arms while she giggled and he run towards her room while nisha smiled and follow them...

TO Be Continued...

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Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago