NiBir SS - ***A SPARKLING DOLL*** [part-4a updated] [DISCONTINUE]

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Awesome update 👍🏼
Continue soon!!

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
wow a horror story!!!
interesting..
update soon

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Nikhad003
Okay this was an amazing update..Mr. Jordan? Why I feel something fishy with him..I am loving this family and the mansion hmm, bohot bara ghotala hain kiya ismein? Very much excited to read more...
Amazing!

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and be excited... age bohot sare ghotale hone wale hai ?😉😆

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

PART-2a
A VIEW OF MANSION

Mr.Jordan seated himself near Liya and Kabir again start the car and they all enter in.
After covering some distance in silence
Mr.Jordan-Mr.Kumar please stop the car its time for us to came out of the car and take a view to this beautiful mansion
Kabir-ok Mr.Jordan
Kabir stopped the car and open the lock for everyone to come out of the car.
Nisha-well Mr.Jordan can you tell me why the condition of enteranse gate is worst
Mr.Jordan-Mrs.Kumar from last 3to4 months there were no care taker found as some people spread the news that this mansion is haunted. I know that you people wont believe in ghost but other people can believe on it but I assure you that when you people pay the amount of this mansion at that time I think I will surely find out a care taker for dusting and maintaining cleanness of this mansion and also this enterase gate.
Nisha-well that will be better for you now can you please open the lock of mansion
He nodded and open the lock of the mansion. When he open the lock everybody started coughing because a thin layer of dusty air passed through them
Nisha-Mr.Jordan
Mr.Jordan-sorry madam but please
He said making a royal posture of enteranse for them to enter in. They all entered in while Mr.Jordan entered in mumbling Oh Jesus. Firstly they entered in enteranse hall. In enteranse hall there was a big cross sign of christian religion in front of them which was made of hard wood it was hanging on front wall of them and the point for them to being surprise is that there was not a pinch of dust on it. At the mid center of roof and mansion there was a big royal jhumar from which large,medium and small size of crystals were hanging which make jhumar attractive. The enteranse hall wont contain so much things at the right side there was a old royal telephone stand and the telephone on it was detached from the wires of connection. A royal print carpet was unfolded on floor covering a wide range of area. Family was little bit impressed by its simplicity and attractive nature. Everybody turned left side to face stairs in front of them. The stairs were made of mixture of materials like some special type of stones and some particles of wood on which a royal worked carpet was spread. On stair there were total 15 steps.
Mr.Jordan-Mr.Kumar can you plz tell me why the steps of this stair are 15?
Kabir-well Mr.Jordan I even wont know the number of steps this stair have So how can I tell you the reason behind it?
Mr.Jordan-well if you count the total number of steps of this stair you will find out that there are total 15 steps and if you count the number of rooms of this mansion so you will find out that there are total 15 rooms
Kabir-so Mr.Jordan what do you mean by these counting?
Mr.Jordan-Mr.Kumar by these counting I wanna tell you that the number of steps of this stair is equal to the number of rooms of this mansion.
Kabir-and what is the purpose behind this equation?
Mr.Jordan-well I wanna inform you about the total number of rooms of this mansion and the similarity
Kabir-so you can also tell us this by using simple words their was no need of an equation
Nisha-Kabir please stop asking your queries about an equation. I think this equation meant something but we will discuss about it later firstly we should visit and check every rooms and now you just start moving forward silently
Kabir nodded and everybody started to move forward. They move upstairs watching each and every thing. When they were at top watching something at that time Liya move towards bound and start looking downwards at that time she saw something like a dark shadow of someone.

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